Clear Blue Waters

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Hi! New fic. I promise to make this one good!
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Over the next few years after CD got shot, things had gotten different around the station. Magda and Jinny weren’t as close as they used to be. Ever since Jonah, things haven’t been the same between them. After CD got shot and she recovered, her and Nate decided to take things slow. She stayed at The Division, of course. Kate also came back and Louis broke up with her. Ever since CD’s accident, she and Jinny became close. Jinny was also dating a man named Hank Rhiley. He wasn’t her idea of the perfect man, but he was good to her, or so she thought. About a week earlier, Jinny found out she was pregnant. She didn’t know how it was possible because they had used protection every time. It was possible apparently. After keeping this to herself for a week, she couldn’t keep it to herself anymore. That night, she asked CD to come over so they could talk. CD came over that night around 8.

CD- How could this have happened Jin? You were safe weren’t you?
Jinny- Of course we were.
CD- Well maybe the test was wrong.
Jinny- That’s what I thought, so I took another. And another.
CD- How many did you take?
Jinny- About eight.
CD- Have you told Hank?
Jinny- No, not yet. You’re the first person I have told.
CD- Should I feel lucky? *Giggles*
Jinny- *Smiles* Very...
CD- What are you going to do?
Jinny- Sorry you’ve reached your question limit for the day.
CD- Very funny Seriously.
Jinny- Well I think I’ll tell Hank tonight.
CD- So you’re going to keep it?
Jinny- Yeah I think I am.
CD- Well I am going. Nate’s coming over to cook dinner.
Jinny- Doesn’t he trust your cooking?
CD- No. *They both laugh*

CD left and Jinny made a special dinner. When Hank got there, he smiled at the dinner but then frowned. This made his announcement much more difficult. Jinny heard him come through the door, so she came out of the kitchen to greet him.

Jinny- Hi Hank. *Kissed him* How was your day?
Hank- Fine. Jin, we have to talk.
Jinny- Yeah we do. You go first.
Hank- No you.
Jinny- Please. My news will be easier when I know what you have to say.
Hank- Ok. Jinny, I’m in love..
Jinny- *Smiled but then frowned when she saw his face*
Hank- ..with someone else.
Jinny- What? *Paused* I’m not good enough for you?
Hank- No that’s not it. We’re just not right for each other. You know that.
Jinny- I can’t believe this. We live together for two years and you are just dumping me? *Long pause* Fine, leave me, but what about the baby?
Hank- What?
Jinny- That’s my news. I’m pregnant.
Hank- I..I don’t know what to say.
Jinny- That’s it?
Hank- Jinny I cant be in love with one woman and have another woman pregnant.
Jinny- You already do What are you saying?
Hank- I’m saying I cant deal with this right now. I’m sorry.
Jinny- You should be. Get out. Pack your things and leave

Hank gathered up all of his things and left. He made it clear that he didn’t want her or their baby. She fell asleep crying that night. The next day she went to work. Everyone could clearly see that she had been crying. CD walked up to her desk to find out what was wrong.

CD- He doesn’t want it does he?
Jinny- I thought we were happy. I really did.
CD- Forget him. You don’t need him. You can do this on your own. And I’ll be here.
Jinny- Thanks. I appreciate all your help.
Kate- Ok cases..

Months passed and still no word from Hank. She just couldn’t understand how a man would want nothing to do with his child. Since Jinny was 6 months pregnant, she had to work from her desk. One day, she wasn’t even working. She was just staring into the wall, thinking. CD and Magda saw this and went up to her.

Magda- Hello...earth to Jinny.
Jinny- *Came out of it* What?
CD- What are you doing?
Jinny- Nothing. Just thinking.
CD- Don’t tell me you’re thinking about that loser again.
Jinny- Well I..
Magda- Jin, you have to forget him
Jinny- He’s the father of my baby. I can’t just forget him.
CD- I know it’s hard. But just remember what he did. What else can you do?
Jinny- I know I know. I am just so confused. How could a father not want his own kid? That’s so inhuman.
CD- He’s a creep. We all know. Maybe down the road he will want to see him or her, but for right now. That doesn’t look possible.
Jinny- I know.
Magda- You’ve got to be mother and father now and you will do a great job.
Jinny- Yeah. Yes I will *Smiles*
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Well votes! Go on, or stop?

[Swimgirl587]

OMG!!! Jinny should really stop thinking about him. He left her..he doesn't care about the baby..never did. Anyway, it's a great story love it


Keep up the good work!!!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Originally Posted by Swimgirl587

OMG!!! Jinny should really stop thinking about him. He left her..he doesn't care about the baby..never did. Anyway, it's a great story love it


Keep up the good work!!!

Aww ty! A reply yay! I'm glad you liked it. I had a lot written so here's some more!
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6 years later, Jinny was living in a beautiful house with her daughter, Jennifer Candace. They haven’t heard a word from Hank and Jinny never mentioned it. They did pass him on the street a couple times but Jennifer didn’t know who he was and at least Jinny knows Hank saw her, even if it was for a few seconds. Jinny was getting ready for work one morning and Jennifer was getting for school.

Jinny- Jennifer Candace Exstead, you have got five minutes to come down here or I’m coming up to get you.
Jennifer- Okay mommy I’m coming.
Jinny- You have all your stuff?
Jennifer- Yes. Do you?
Jinny- Yes I do. Let’s hit the road.
Jennifer- Okay.

Jinny dropped her off at school and she went to work. She had to stop the car a few times because she kept getting dizzy. She’s had a headache for a while but just thought it was stress. She finally got to work and went up to the Division and sat at her desk.

Magda- Hey Jin, you okay?
Jinny- Yeah just a headache.
CD- Again? You should go and see someone about that.
Jinny- I will but when you are at work till five and have a daughter in kindergarten, the last thing you need to do is go to the doctor.
CD- No that should be the most important thing. Make an appointment.
Jinny- Okay sheesh. I’ll make one tomorrow morning okay?
Magda- Good.

After a long day of work, Jinny got in her car to pick up Jennifer. She always went to John Sr.’s house after school. Jinny was driving there when she got a really bad pain in her head. She didn’t feel comfortable driving so she tried to pull over but lost consciousness. Her car smashed into a telephone pole and someone called 911. Jinny was quickly rushed to the hospital. The police who arrived at the scene called Kate immediately.

Kate- McCafferty.
Officer- Captain McCafferty, this is Officer Lang. We responded to a car accident on Scott Street. We called you immediately when we discovered it was someone in Felony Division.
Kate- Who?

Meanwhile, CD, Magda, Nate, and Raina were all still there. They were chatting and laughing. Kate heard that and hated to have to break it up but she knew CD and Magda would want to know.

Kate- Guys I just got a call. We need to get down to the hospital.
Raina- Why Captain what’s wrong?
CD- Jinny..
Kate- She was in a car accident. They took her to County.
Magda- Let’s go

They all took their cars down there. In the car, Magda called John Sr. She knew he, Casey and Jennifer would want to be there. When they all got there they waited for a doctor to come out to talk to them. They were waiting for an hour and a half when someone finally came out to talk to them.

Doctor- Exstead.
John Sr.- I’m her father.
Doctor- As you know your daughter was in a car accident. She has a couple scrapes and bruises but that part will heal.
Kate- What do you mean that part?
Doctor- Well we had to run some tests to figure out what might have caused the accident. She wasn’t drunk or under the influence so we ran a CT Scan and an MRI. I’m afraid she has a brain tumor. I’m sorry.

They were all in shock. CD needed to sit down.

John Sr.- Well this isn’t the 1950s. It’s treatable right?
Doctor- Tomorrow morning, we’ve scheduled your daughter for emergency brain surgery. We’ll know more then.
Kate- Can we see her?
Doctor- She is still unconscious. Three people may wait in her room for her to awake.
John Sr.- Well I’m going in.
Kate- Me too.
Magda- You go in CD. I can watch Jennifer for the night.
CD- Are you sure?
Magda- Yeah go.
CD- Thanks.

Raina, Casey, Magda, and Jennifer went home while John Sr., CD, and Kate went into Jinny’s room. Her cuts weren’t that bad but they knew her bruises would show up tomorrow. They couldn’t help but think the whole night long how could Jinny Exstead, a great person who has always been healthy, have a brain tumor. They all fell asleep in their chairs and CD was holding Jinny’s hand as she was sleeping. CD felt a tiny squeeze and woke up. She looked over and saw Jinny open her eyes.

Jinny- CD?
CD- Hey Jin.
Jinny- What happened?
CD- You were in a car accident.
Jinny- Jennifer..
CD- She wasn’t in the car. You were and you’re okay.
Jinny- I tried to stop.
CD- I know it wasn’t your fault.
Jinny- So I’m okay?
CD- Sort of.
Jinny- What do you mean?
CD- Jinny, I’m sorry but they did tests and…you have a brain tumor.
Jinny- What?
CD- I am so sorry.
Jinny- I should’ve listened to you CD. I should’ve went to the doctors.
CD- It wouldn’t have made any difference Jin. It’s not your fault.
Jinny- Jen..
CD- She doesn’t know. Magda took her home.
Jinny- Tell her thank you. How long do I have to be here?
CD- A little while yet. You’re having surgery tomorrow.
Jinny- Listen, if anything happens..
CD- No Jinny don’t. Don’t do that. You’re going to be fine, do you hear me?

Next day, everyone was in the waiting room. They were sitting there for hours, waiting to hear some news. Finally a surgeon came out to talk to them.

Doctor- Are you here for Miss Exstead?
John Sr.- Yes. I’m her father. How is she?
Doctor- It’s not good.
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Little cliffhanger for everyone! Enjoy!

[corinnem959]

Great story, Keep it comin'!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

More!
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Doctor- Are you here for Miss Exstead?
John Sr.- Yes. I’m her father. How is she?
Doctor- It’s not good.
Magda- *Grabbed Jennifer* We’re going to check out the candy machine.
Jennifer- Yay!
John Sr.- Okay now we were told that she would have the tumor removed.
Doctor- When we got in there, we got most of it out.
CD- Most of it?
Doctor- There’s still some of the tumor on her brain. If we removed it, she would be braindead.
Kate- But wait, how can she live with a tumor in her head?
Doctor- *Paused* She can’t. *Paused again* We’ll keep her overnight. She can go home tomorrow afternoon if she is up to it. We’ll try to make her as comfortable as possible. I am so sorry. I wish there was more I can do.
John Sr.- Me too!!
CD- How long does she have?
Doctor- About three months.
John Sr.- Oh my God..
Doctor- I’m sorry. I’ll talk to you more later. *Left*
Kate- Thank you Doctor.
Casey- Oh God. Who’s going to tell her?
John Sr.- I will. I just can’t believe this.

CD left to go sit in Jinny’s room. Jinny wasn’t awake yet but she just had to sit in there with her. She stayed there the whole night. Jinny was fully conscious the next day.

Jinny- What?
John Sr.- Oh Jin, I’m so sorry.
Jinny- So what you’re telling me...is that I’m going to die?
John Sr.- *Stayed silent*
Jinny- How long?
John Sr.- The Doctor said around three months.
Jinny- That’s it? Oh my God.
John Sr.- I wish I could make this all better for you, like when you were a little girl.
Jinny- When can I go home?
John Sr.- He said if you felt up to it, this afternoon.
Jinny- I’m up to it.
John Sr.- Okay I’ll go talk to him.

He kissed Jinny’s forehead and left the room. Jinny picked up the phone to make a call. Little while later, she went home. She was so quiet. Magda and CD came along to make sure she was settled okay.

Magda- Jin, do you want me to keep Jennifer for a few more days while you rest?
Jinny- No I want her here.
Magda- Okay.
Jinny- School is out for her in a week. I think we’re going to go somewhere.
CD- Go where Jin?
Jinny- I don’t know. Maybe the beach.
Magda- Well you’re going to need some help. Why don’t CD and I go with you?
Jinny- That’s ok..
CD- No Magda’s right. With Jennifer, you’re going to need help.
Magda- Yeah. Jen and Benjamin have been getting a long really well, so he can come to.
Jinny- Thank you guys.

About a week later, everyone was getting packed up. Nate didn’t really like the idea of CD going away, but he understood. If something were to happen to Jinny there, Jennifer would be horrified and wouldn’t know what to do. Everyone got packed in the car and they were on their way. Jennifer was so excited. This was her first trip to the beach. After three hours of driving, they were finally there. Jennifer and Ben quickly got out of the car to go play in the sand. Helping Jinny, CD and Magda took her to the deck, where she can sit and watch them. She looked so happy. What they didn’t know was that she would sit there, day after day. They tried to get her active, but all she wanted to do was watch Jennifer play.

CD- Come on Jin, we’re going to take a ride to get dinner. Want to come?
Jinny- No thanks.
CD- It’ll be a really nice ride. Jennifer is coming with us.
Jinny- I’m comfortable here, thanks.
CD- Come on, you’ve been sitting there for a week. You need to move around.
Jinny- What I need is to be left alone.
CD- I’m sorry I am constantly on your back. I know you’re having a difficult time adjusting, but you can’t live your life this way.
Jinny- No, I’ll just live the rest of it, walking around, pretending nothing is wrong.
CD- It’s got to be better than feeling sorry for yourself all day, everyday. I know you want—
Jinny- You have no idea what I want. What I want to do is see my daughter grow up, I want to work long enough to make Captain someday, I want to meet a wonderful man and get married and have more kids. Those were my plans. Guess they were too good enough.
CD- Jin..
Jinny- Please just leave me alone. Please CD.

CD just decided not to make her madder. She just left. Jinny started crying. After sitting there for a few more hours, she got up and got dressed. As CD, Magda, Jennifer, and Ben were leaving, she came out.

Jinny- Hey, you’re not going to leave without me are ya?
CD- *Laughs* Of course not. Come on!

Throughout the night, CD was making a list. She knew this would cheer Jinny up for sure. The next morning, after getting only 3 hours of sleep, CD went to find Jinny. She was sitting on the couch watching TV.

CD- Jinny, I was up all night. This is for you. *Handed Jinny an envelope*
Jinny- What is it?
CD- It’s a list.
Jinny- I don’t understand.
CD- Over the next 2 months, we’re going to try to accomplish everything on that list.
Jinny- Wow CD. This is amazing.
CD- You can add your own stuff of course, but those were the things I could think of.
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[Swimgirl587]

Wow this is really good. I wish Jinny could see Jennifer grow up. And the list, I hope they accomplish everything. Well as long as they do it within three months.

Anyway, love the story, and keep it up (the good work I mean )

[corinnem959]

this story is awesome! Keep up the great work

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Ty a new reader! Here's more!
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CD- Jinny, I was up all night. This is for you. *Handed Jinny an envelope*
Jinny- What is it?
CD- It’s a list.
Jinny- I don’t understand.
CD- Over the next 2 months, we’re going to try to accomplish everything on that list.
Jinny- Wow CD. This is amazing.
CD- You can add your own stuff of course, but those were the things I could think of.
Jinny- Thank you CD.
CD- You’re welcome. Now let’s get to work!

CD took Jinny outside. She looked so happy. They brought over a horse, since Jinny had never ridden one.

Jinny- I can’t believe I am doing this.
CD- Come on, it’s easy. I used to ride them all the time. Stand on this stool, bring one leg over him, then just hop on.
Jinny- You make it sound so simple.
CD- *Laughs* Come on, you can do it.
Jinny, kind of scared, finally got on the horse.
Jinny- Oh my god, I’m on!
CD- Good, now you have to ride him.
Jinny- Do I have to? Can’t you just take the picture and let me off.
CD- Jin..
Jinny- Okay okay.
CD- Now when you want him to go left, you just pull left towards you. Same thing with the right.
Jinny- Oh god okay.
CD- Now give him a slight kick in the side, to get him going.

Jinny did as she was told, but kicked a little too hard. The horse went running and Jinny was screaming.

CD- PULL!!!
Jinny- I DON’T KNOW HOW!

CD couldn’t help but laugh. Jinny after a while, started laughed. She looked so pretty riding along the beach. CD took plenty of pictures.

CD- Well you did it. You rode a horse along the beach.
Jinny- And I didn’t do half bad.
CD- Well not many people threaten to kill the horse if he didn’t stop when you said to.
Jinny- What else was I supposed to do?
CD- *Laughs* Okay well what’s next?
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Hope everyone liked it!

[Swimgirl587]

Hey that was great. HAHA! I think that is how I would be on a horse. I like horses a lot, it's just, well, you know. I'm just afraid of falling off.

Anyway, just wanted to say that this is a great story. LOVE IT!!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Originally Posted by Swimgirl587

Hey that was great. HAHA! I think that is how I would be on a horse. I like horses a lot, it's just, well, you know. I'm just afraid of falling off.

Anyway, just wanted to say that this is a great story. LOVE IT!!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

TYVM! Now that I have readers, I still have hopes for this board! Here's more!
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CD- *Laughs* Okay well what’s next?

CD was helping Jinny into the house to get ready for her next event on the list.

Jinny- You have got to be kidding me.
CD- You’re the one that said you wanted to do it.
Magda- Do what?
CD- I’m taking Jinny to go sky diving.
Magda- What!?
Jinny- I’m only agreeing to do it if someone comes with me.

CD and Magda step back.

Jinny- Come on, if I’m doing it, someone else is too.
CD- Eh, why not. I’ll do it with you.
Magda- Are you out of your mind?
Jinny- I think we both are. *They laugh*
Jennifer- *Runs in from her room* Mommy, where are you going?
Jinny- We’re taking a little ride. Do you want to come?
Jennifer- Yeah!
Magda- We’ll all go but my feet are staying on the ground!

CD and Jinny are now talking, well screaming, from inside the plane.

Jinny- I CAN’T BELIEVE WE’RE DOING THIS!
CD- YEAH NATE’S GOING TO KILL ME.
Jinny- YOU TOLD HIM YOU WERE DOING THIS?
CD- OF COURSE NOT. I’M TELLING HIM LATER SO IT WILL BE TOO LATE TO TALK ME OUT OF IT.
Jinny- GOOD IDEA.
Instructor- ARE YOU READY LADIES?
Jinny- AS READY AS WE’LL EVER BE.
CD- YEAH LET’S DO IT!

Magda, Jennifer, and Benjamin were watching from the ground. Ben and Jennifer didn’t really understand what was going on, so Magda tried to keep them distracted. She knew if Jennifer knew what she was doing, she would worry.

Ben- Mom, I have to go to the bathroom.
Jennifer- Me too.
Magda- Don’t you two want to see Jinny? She should be coming soon.
Jennifer- LOOK! *Points to the sky* Mommy and Aunt CD are flying! Like angels..
Magda- ..yeah.
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Hope ya liked it! More to come soon!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Okay no replies but again, I'm a nice person I am gonna post more only because a lot more came to me in history class today hehe
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After that eventful day, Jinny grew very tired. CD and Magda helped her home and she sat looking at the beach for the evening. CD came out to join her. CD knew she was getting weaker, which is why she wanted to get all of the major things on the list done before she wasn't strong enough to do them.

Jinny- Thank you CD.
CD- For what?
Jinny- For making this the best week of my life! You've really helped me.
CD- I enjoyed myself. I'm glad you had a good time.
Jinny- I need you to do me one more favor.
CD- Anything.
Jinny- I need you to help me write some letters.
CD- Sure. To who?
Jinny- Jen. I'm not going to be around on her first day of highschool, hefirst date, her wedding day, or when she has a little girl of her own.
CD- No Jin..
Jinny- Yes CD. My mother never left me anything. I would like to leave letters for her to open on certain days. You will give them to her. Please.
CD- You know I will Jin.
Jinny- Thank you. I'm going to go to my room. I have to make a phone call.
CD- You need any help?
Jinny- I got it. Thanks.

CD watched as her best friend walked towards her room. She couldn't believe this was happening, or how strong Jinny was being about the whole thing. Meanwhile, Jinny got to her room and picked up the phone. She was calling a law office.

Jinny- Yes Mrs. Barlett..Hi..Did you get the papers arranged..Yes I'm sure..I think I picked the right guardian for her..I don't care about the other things..I only care about where Jennifer was going to live..Thanks..Bye.

CD knocked on Jinny's door. She turned around to see someone she thought she would never see again.

CD- Jin, he stopped here to see you.
Man- Can I come in?
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HAPPY HALLOWEEN EVERYONE!

[corinnem959]

this is awesome, add more PLEASE

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Yay, I'm loved hehe Here's more.
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CD knocked on Jinny's door. She turned around to see someone she thought she would never see again.

CD- Jin, he stopped here to see you.
Man- Can I come in?
Jinny- Yeah sure.
Man- How are you?
Jinny- Come on Teddy. It’s been years since I’ve heard from you. You know, ever since that night you walked out.
Teddy- I just wanted to explain that. When we…were together that night, I felt safer than I had in a while. I was afraid of hurting you again. God knows it wouldn’t be the first time. So I just wanted to give you your space.
Jinny- Why are you telling me this now?
Teddy- I anted to make things right. I’ve been thinking about you lately.
Jinny- You mean you’ve been feeling sorry for me.
Teddy- What? No. I mean, I know what happened to you and…it’s killing me inside. I love you Jinny. I always have.
Jennifer- *Runs into the room* Mommy! I’m hungry.
Jinny- I’ll be out in a few minutes okay?
Jennifer- Okay. *Leaves*
Teddy- Mommy?
Jinny- Yeah. I got bored one day and thought, what the hell, have a kid.
Teddy- Jin, I didn’t know. I’m just surprised.
Jinny- Well…she’s--
Teddy- No, you don’t have to. Of course you would get married after us. I’m sorry, I should go.
Jinny- I thought lawyers want to hear all the facts.
Teddy- What?
Jinny- Yes, she is my daughter, but I’m not married. He left me when he found out about her.
Teddy- Oh, Jinny. I’m so stupid. I’m sorry.
Jinny- It’s okay really. Now’s not the best time to start holding grudges.
Teddy- Well, if you don’t mind, I took some time off for a while. I’d like to be here with you.
Jinny- You would?
Teddy- Yeah. CD and Magda probably have their hands full with the kids and everything else. I’d like to be here with you.
Jinny- I’d like that. Thanks
Teddy- No Jinny. Thank you.

CD had gone out while Teddy was there. She wanted to go get something for Jinny but she mainly just wanted to cry. This was happening a lot quicker than she thought. She didn’t know how she could handle this. When s he came back, Magda Jinny Teddy, Jennifer, and Benjamin were all sitting at the kitchen table eating sandwiches. They were all laughing which is something CD definitely like to see Jinny do.

Jinny- CD where have you been?
CD- Well I got you something to help with that little project you wanted to do.
Jinny- Yeah?
CD- Here’s a laptop. And if you need me to go print something out, just let me know.
Jinny- *Smiles* Thanks CD. This will help me a lot.
CD- You’re welcome. So Teddy, how long will you be staying with us?
Jennifer- Your name is Teddy like the bear?
Teddy- Yes it is. I love teddy bears.
Jennifer- Me too! I’ve got a whole bunch of them!
Teddy- You know what I like more than teddy bears? Dolls!
Jennifer- Oh me too, me too! Come on, I’ll show you mine!

As Jennifer is dragging Teddy from the table into her room, everyone laughed. Jinny just smiled. She didn’t want to express it too much, but she was so glad to have him back in her life, even if it was only for a short while.
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[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Hey guys! I wanted to get a vote here. Should I let the fic go when Jinny is no longer in it or would you guys like to see what happens after that? Let me know. Here's more!
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They stayed at the beach house for three more weeks. They had a fabulous time, which everyone wanted for Jinny. CD and Magda had to get back to work and the kids back to school soon. John was going to stay at Jinny's house to help take care of her and Jennifer. Jinny had all of her letters written. One of them addressed to a special person. Over those three weeks, Jinny and Teddy had become very close, possibly closer than they were before. They were very happy together. Everyone could tell Jinny was getting weaker. She had lost all of her color, she was sitting down most of the time, and her hands were very shaky. The only thing Jinny cared about anymore was her friends, her family, and especially Jennifer. Jinny remembered all the questions she had when she was growing up without her mother. She did the best she could. Jennifer didn’t really understand what was happening. How do you explain to your child that you’re going to disappear forever? On a Tuesday night, John Sr. had to go pick Jennifer up from dance class. With Jinny not looking too good, that day he was afraid to have her alone.

John Sr.- I could ask one of your co-workers to pick her up.
Jinny- Dad, I’ll be fine for 20 minutes.
John Sr.- Maybe you should come with me.
Jinny- That would just be a bigger hassle. Go.
John Sr.- Oh okay.
Jinny- I have some things to do anyway.
John Sr.- You are not to get out of that chair. You need to rest.
Jinny- You are a control freak you know that?
John Sr.- Better safe than sorry.
Jinny- Fiine. *Rolls eyes* You treat me like I’m in kindergarten.
John Sr.- Bye. *Shuts door* If only you were..

John Sr. tried to keep calm the whole time, but he had to admit he was worried. He got Jennifer on time but on the way home, there was an accident which held everybody up. He was sitting there already forty five minutes. He knew Jinny couldn’t sit still that long. He started to worry. Jinny of course couldn’t sit still. She wasn’t strong enough to walk on her own. She always held onto someone. She had waited as long as she could but she had to go to the bathroom and when she got up to do it, she took a small step. She didn’t fall. So she tried a few more, slowly of course and she didn’t fall. Feeling confident, she can do it on her own, she tried more steps, a little faster and fell. She fell on her face and she tried to get up but she couldn’t. She was suddenly in a lot of pain and fell unconscious. A half an hour after that happened, John Sr. and Jennifer were pulling up in the parking lot. Jennifer ran out of the car and up to the apartment.

Jennifer- Mommy! Mrs. Fontenella said I life my leg higher than anyone in the class! Mommy? Grandpa!
John Sr.- What?
Jennifer- Mommy’s sleeping on the floor.
John Sr.- What?? *Realizes what she meant* Oh god. Uh, Jennifer, I need you to go in your room. I need to get some people here to help get your Mommy up okay?
Jennifer- Okay.

Jennifer went into her room and John called 911. CD was on her way over to Jinny place to bring her some pies she had made. When she got there, she saw an ambulance. She knew it was Jinny. She got out of the car as Jinny was being rolled out on a gurney. CD ran up to John.

CD- What happened?? Is she..
John Sr.- No, she’s very sick though. Me and Jennifer are going in my car. Do you want to come with us?
CD- No I will take mine. I’m sure Nate will want me to pick him up. Thanks John.

On her way back to her house, she knew she had to call everyone else. She knww they’d want to be there. Raina couldn’t make it but she would go tomorrow. Kate and Magda were on their way. She called Teddy next.

Teddy- *Picked up cell phone* Hello?
CD- Teddy, it’s me. Look, Jinny’s in the hospital. She’s not doing well.
Teddy- Well I’m a little busy right now. I will get there as soon as I can.
CD- What could be more important than this?
Teddy- Look I’ll get there! *Hung up*

CD can’t believe he acted like that. Teddy got off the couch, grabbed his jacket and headed to the Anchorside. CD grabbed Nate and they rushed over. John Sr., Jennifer, and Casey were the only ones there.

CD- Have you heard anything?
John Sr.- Nothing. They’ve been in there for an hour now.
Jennifer- What’s wrong with my mommy?
Casey- She had a little boo-boo and now the doctors are trying to make it better.
Jennifer- A big boo-boo?
Casey- Yes, a very big one.
Jennifer- I hope they can fix her.

CD was ready to burst into tears.

Nate- Hey Jen, look at this big puzzle book. Wanna help me find Waldo?
Jennifer- Yeah!

Kate and Magda came in.

Kate- How is she?
CD- No one is telling us a damn thing!
Kate- *Giggled*
CD- What?
Kate- Nothing.
Magda- I can’t believe this is happening. It’s too soon.
Kate- Unfortunately, we don’t control that.

John Sr. saw Jinny’s doctor walking their way. He got up but noticed the look on his face.
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K there's a lot more. Now come on replies ppl so I can post more lol

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I would love to see the story go on. I mean it would be sad to not have Jinny in it, but it's still a great story. So keep it coming.

And I want to see who get's Jennifer.