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TheCursedRedBaron · 05-29-2005, 10:21 PM

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KissMyGrits · 05-30-2005, 08:19 AM

I love it!! You have done a good job of keeping the characters in character!! Can't wait to read more!!

Michelle

CyBr · 05-30-2005, 12:15 PM

It's very good! Makes me want to read more too!

Dutchie · 05-30-2005, 12:22 PM

You're good! Good story already, can't wait to read more!

TheCursedRedBaron · 05-30-2005, 03:01 PM

Ah, thanks guys

I will post the next bit here when it's written (next week prob'ly)

MulberryGal · 05-31-2005, 03:46 AM

I may be too late to comment, but I agree with the others, it makes me want to read on! Excellent stuff.

You've really 'got' David and Maddie too - it sounds like them speaking and reacting and thinking. Whilst I read, I'm actually imagining them acting it out!

I look forward to the next installment!!

Mul

TheCursedRedBaron · 05-31-2005, 02:45 PM

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gypsygem81 · 05-31-2005, 03:18 PM

It's great! I look forward to reading the next installment!

Love Gem

MonaCK · 06-14-2005, 12:56 PM

Excellent job on this! You have definitely captured the spirit of the two of them, and this could have been torn out of an episode.

I can't wait to see where you go with this.

05-29-2005, 10:21 PM	#1
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05-30-2005, 12:22 PM	#4
Dutchie I <3 Moonlighting! Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 09, 2004 Location: the Netherlands Posts: 815	You're good! Good story already, can't wait to read more!
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05-31-2005, 03:46 AM	#6
MulberryGal Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 04, 2004 Location: England Posts: 333	I may be too late to comment, but I agree with the others, it makes me want to read on! Excellent stuff. You've really 'got' David and Maddie too - it sounds like them speaking and reacting and thinking. Whilst I read, I'm actually imagining them acting it out! I look forward to the next installment!! Mul
	__________________ You can lead a horse to water but that doesn't make him a duck Maddie Hayes: I wouldn't want you losing any more sleep over me. David Addison : Believe me, if and when I ever find myself over you, the last thing I'll be thinking about is sleeping.

05-31-2005, 02:45 PM	#7
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05-30-2005, 08:19 AM	#2
KissMyGrits HEGM! Senior Member Join Date: Jul 01, 2004 Location: Las Vegas Baby! Posts: 2,135	I love it!! You have done a good job of keeping the characters in character!! Can't wait to read more!! Michelle

05-30-2005, 12:15 PM	#3
CyBr Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 17, 2004 Posts: 515	It's very good! Makes me want to read more too!

05-30-2005, 03:01 PM	#5
TheCursedRedBaron Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 27, 2005 Posts: 18	Ah, thanks guys I will post the next bit here when it's written (next week prob'ly)

05-31-2005, 03:18 PM	#8
gypsygem81 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2005 Posts: 427	It's great! I look forward to reading the next installment! Love Gem

06-14-2005, 12:56 PM	#9
MonaCK Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jun 21, 2004 Posts: 21	Excellent job on this! You have definitely captured the spirit of the two of them, and this could have been torn out of an episode. I can't wait to see where you go with this.