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Courtnee · 04-30-2005, 12:09 AM

You've gotten to me
I think your crazy sometimes
You don't mind my suicidal fits of anger
I love your guitar
and it may seem bizarre
but I love you too

All the tears we cried,sayin' "Everything's gonna be alright",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arrived,saying "I love you" into the night,These little things on which I strive are my feelings of the heart

Your the one I mive
The one I wanna spend forever with
You love me for me
I love you for you
You say I'm pretty
That I just can't see

All the tears we cried,saying "Every things gonna be all right",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arrive, saying "I love you" into the night,These little things on which I strive,are my feelings of the heart.

You welcome me with open arms
I know you mean no harm
One day we'll leave
All you have to do is belive

All the tears that we cried,sayin' "Everything's gonna be all right",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arive,sayin' "I love you" into the night,these little things on which I strive are my feelings of the heart

Now that this love song is ending
I hope you won't be forgeting
That I love you,
That I miss you,
and that I adore you
and I know you love me,too

Courtnee · 04-30-2005, 12:16 AM

Courtnee · 04-30-2005, 12:19 AM

DAMN PEOPLE RATE THE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Georgia's on my Mind · 04-30-2005, 12:53 AM

I liken it to dirt.

Hollow · 04-30-2005, 12:56 AM

pretty creative.

Max Whittaker · 04-30-2005, 01:04 AM

Mmm... I'm really not a fan of poetry, exept Haiku... You got any Haiku hiding in your creative mind?

phoebe7165 · 04-30-2005, 02:04 AM

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Originally Posted by I Love Kevin

DAMN PEOPLE RATE THE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You've got to give people time to respond. Not just 10 minutes.

Courtnee · 04-30-2005, 08:26 AM

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Originally Posted by phoebe7165

You've got to give people time to respond. Not just 10 minutes.

sorry I was just really excited about it.

MissZero · 04-30-2005, 08:27 AM

I like it

Courtnee · 04-30-2005, 08:42 AM

THANKS!

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Originally Posted by MissZero

I like it

Courtnee · 04-30-2005, 08:51 AM

BUMP

Belair · 04-30-2005, 08:57 AM

That was good,well done

Courtnee · 04-30-2005, 10:46 AM

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Originally Posted by Belair

That was good,well done

thank you!

Courtnee · 04-30-2005, 04:14 PM

Henry727 · 04-30-2005, 04:24 PM

04-30-2005, 12:09 AM	#1
Courtnee MAN VS SAMMICH. Forum Star Join Date: Mar 23, 2005 Location: Louisiana Posts: 16,413	Poem I wrote, please tell me what you think...even if you don't like it!!!! You've gotten to me I think your crazy sometimes You don't mind my suicidal fits of anger I love your guitar and it may seem bizarre but I love you too All the tears we cried,sayin' "Everything's gonna be alright",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arrived,saying "I love you" into the night,These little things on which I strive are my feelings of the heart Your the one I mive The one I wanna spend forever with You love me for me I love you for you You say I'm pretty That I just can't see All the tears we cried,saying "Every things gonna be all right",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arrive, saying "I love you" into the night,These little things on which I strive,are my feelings of the heart. You welcome me with open arms I know you mean no harm One day we'll leave All you have to do is belive All the tears that we cried,sayin' "Everything's gonna be all right",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arive,sayin' "I love you" into the night,these little things on which I strive are my feelings of the heart Now that this love song is ending I hope you won't be forgeting That I love you, That I miss you, and that I adore you and I know you love me,too
	__________________ Whether I'm the rose of sheer perfection A freckle on the nose of life's complexion The Cinderella or the shine apple of its eye I gotta fly once, I gotta try once, Only can die once, right, sir? Ooh, life is juicy, juicy and you see, I gotta have my bite, sir. Get ready for me love, 'cause I'm a "comer" I simply gotta march, my heart's a drummer Don't bring around the cloud to rain on my parade Last edited by Courtnee; 04-30-2005 at 11:33 PM.

04-30-2005, 01:04 AM	#6
Max Whittaker I want Serenity back Forum Veteran Join Date: Apr 30, 2001 Posts: 6,180	Mmm... I'm really not a fan of poetry, exept Haiku... You got any Haiku hiding in your creative mind?
	__________________ I will get things done for America – to make our people safer, smarter, & healthier. I will bring Americans together to strengthen our communities. Faced with apathy, I will take action. Faced with conflict, I will seek common ground. Faced with adversity, I will persevere. I will carry this commitment with me this year and beyond. I am an AmeriCorps member, and I will get things done.

04-30-2005, 08:27 AM	#9
MissZero serve it up baby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 12, 2004 Location: Pa (Blah) Posts: 1,901	I like it
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04-30-2005, 08:57 AM	#12
Belair Back@SO&Loveit! Forum Veteran Join Date: Dec 13, 2004 Location: New York City Posts: 5,925	That was good,well done
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04-30-2005, 12:16 AM	#2
Courtnee MAN VS SAMMICH. Forum Star Join Date: Mar 23, 2005 Location: Louisiana Posts: 16,413

04-30-2005, 12:19 AM	#3
Courtnee MAN VS SAMMICH. Forum Star Join Date: Mar 23, 2005 Location: Louisiana Posts: 16,413	DAMN PEOPLE RATE THE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

04-30-2005, 12:53 AM	#4
Georgia's on my Mind Senior Member Forum Superstar Join Date: Aug 19, 2001 Posts: 25,054	I liken it to dirt.

04-30-2005, 12:56 AM	#5
Hollow Member Forum Superstar Join Date: Dec 16, 2001 Posts: 30,406	pretty creative.

04-30-2005, 08:51 AM	#11
Courtnee MAN VS SAMMICH. Forum Star Join Date: Mar 23, 2005 Location: Louisiana Posts: 16,413	BUMP

04-30-2005, 04:14 PM	#14
Courtnee MAN VS SAMMICH. Forum Star Join Date: Mar 23, 2005 Location: Louisiana Posts: 16,413

04-30-2005, 04:24 PM	#15
Henry727 Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Dec 24, 2003 Location: Nebraska Posts: 65