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Old 10-23-2004, 01:59 PM   #1
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Exclamation New Fanfiction! We Wish You a Maddie Christmas

We Wish You a Maddie Christmas


December 22nd 8.00PM
In Maddie's bathroom

Maddie's taking a shower and while the hot water runs down her body she looks down at her swolen belly.
Thinking: "Boy I have grown the last month! I can't believe it's only another two weeks!"
She is bending over to get the showergel and then she hears the showerdoor open en in comes David.

David: "Hey gorgeous, want me to do your back?"

Maddie:"David! You scared me! Yes but do it quickly and then I'm getting out of here, its too small in here for the both ...ehm I mean the three of us..." She looks at him and smiles.

David: " He, it's warm and cozy and we don't have to go anywhere so why not stay?"

Maddie: " Are you done? I want to go downstairs .... I feel like a whale and I don't like it when you look at me right now"

David:" What? Why do you say that? You look beautiful, you shine like a star!"

Maddie: "Yeah I shine allright, my hair is greasy! Yuck."

Maddie steps out of the shower and starts to dry her body, it's getting more difficult every day.
She never thought she would become so big. She really wishes that the baby comes sooner....
She's bitching at David all the time while he has been so sweet to her and she hates herself for it. But she just can't help these moodswings and as she looks at her weddingring (solid gold with one small diamond) she remembers their wedding in Hawaii with her parents ......
It was so beautiful, her belly wasn't very big yet so the dress fitted perfectly, this dress was made just for her and she looked like a princess from the Far East.
Everywhere they walked that day people stopped and watched her like she was some kind of miracle.
Cars stopped and caused traffic jams and everywhere you looked there were men almost drewling.
David was all she ever wanted him to be that day, beautiful tux and he had a smile on his face all day which made her melt.
It was all romance for 3 whole days and while they were walking barefooted on the beach at the last evening before they went home she said things to David she never said to any guy before.
"You know David, I have never met anyone who can make me feel like you do, you make me feel important, it's comfortable being with you, you make things so easy for me. Everytime when I see tigers and bears on the road ahead, you come and comfort me and put my mind at ease by showing me that they aren't there. I really love you with all my heart and I'm proud to have your baby...." Then she put her arms around his waist and kissed him passionately as the sun set and when they stopped and looked into eachothers eyes she could see the tears in David's eyes.
David was never this happy and he WOULD have cried if she didn't stop talking to kiss him.
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Old 10-23-2004, 02:07 PM   #2
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Great title: We Wish You a Maddie Christmas

Ya know, we are doing everything real tv-shows would have avoided. Let two peeps getting married, having a baby...stuff like that

Okay I'm next, gotta think of it tho. BBL
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Old 10-23-2004, 04:36 PM   #3
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Old 10-24-2004, 05:15 AM   #4
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Okay, here I go:

Maddie: Oooohh

Maddies daydream is interrupted by a pain in her belly.

David: Is everything okay???

Maddie looks at him with a huge smile on her face.

Maddie: David! The baby just kicked!

Maddie takes Davids hand in hers and places it on her belly. They waited. The baby kicked again.

David: Oh wow! This bambino is going to be a soccerplayer!

Maddie smiles: It could be a bambina.

David: I know.

David puts his arm around her waist and leads her to the mirror.

David: Do you have any idea how beautiful this baby is going to be? I mean, look at you...

Maddie: Look at US.

David: Yeah...us. It's probably going to have your nose.

He touches her nose while saying that.

Maddie: Your eyes.

She turns around and smiles at David.

David: Your smile.

Maddie: Your lips...

She looks him in the eyes and then they share a short but sweet kiss.

Maddie: MY hair!

Maddie sticks out her tongue to David and smiles again.

David: Hey blondy, there is nothing wrong with my hair! He throws a wet sponge her way.

Maddie: HEY!

She throws it back at him. And the sponge fight begins.

To be continued...
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Old 10-25-2004, 11:28 AM   #5
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What WOULD this baby look like?

I'm getting thrown off a little because Scout and Tallulah look so much like Bruce -- and Clem looks so much like Cybill.

Her eyes, her lips, his smile (he's got a great bottom lip though) -- this is hard!

Great job on the fanfic -- keep it coming -- I can't wait to see what is going to happen.

PINK OR BLUE? Inquiring minds want to know.
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Old 10-25-2004, 12:22 PM   #6
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Quote:
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PINK OR BLUE? Inquiring minds want to know.
I'm still wondering myself actually

So, who is going to continue?
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Old 10-25-2004, 03:06 PM   #7
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I will..

After the spongefight Maddie's really tired and crawls into bed.
David is brushing his teeth and walks over to the bed.
Maddie's eyes are closed and she's drifting away already while David looks at her with a dreamy look.
David thinking:* God why did she choose me? Do I really deserve such a great and beautiful woman? Please God don't let anything happen to her and let the baby be born safely...*

Maddie opens her eyes: "David are you allright?"

David: "huh? Oh sure I was just thinking"

Maddie: " 'bout what?"

David: "YOU"

Maddie: "What were you thinking?"

David: "Oh stuff"

Maddie: "David! What stuff?"

David: "That's private, my thoughts are private.... at least I hope so, one never knows with your magic brainreading sessions!"

Maddie:" Oh ok, so you're not telling me?"

David:" Nope"

Maddie: "Ok fine"

David: "Ok fine"

Maddie:" Good"

David: "Good"

Maddie: "Goodnight"

David: "G'niiiiight"

David moves over to Maddie's side of the bed and curls up against her with his arm around her belly.
He's gently rubbing her belly and whispers: "Goodnight bambino or bambina"

Maddie smiles and pushes her body against his and they fall asleep quickly.

December 23rd , 7.00 AM Alarm Clock
(playing Ooh baby baby by Smokey Robinson)

Maddie opens her eyes and watches David who is fully embrasing her.
She tries carefully to lift his arm up so she can sneak out of bed to make breakfast for the both of them.
David is running the agency with Viola while she is waiting at home all day for the baby to come.
So the least she can do is make breakfast.
She had a fight with David about the fact that she wants to go to the ofiice for paperwork but David doesn't want to hear it.
He says he doesn't want anymore risks to be taken with the baby.
He's still a little traumatised by losing the other baby and if she's honest .... so is she.

7.30 AM in Maddie's bedroom

Maddie kisses David on his lips to wake him up and David opens his eyes.
He starts to grin and sits up in the bed looking at Maddie.

David:"I can't believe you're doing this! Why make breakfast?
I should be pampering you!"

Maddie: "David, I don't wanna have this discussion anymore, you work all day so let me at least make you breakfast, I feel fine, really"

Maddie: "Like it? There's croissants, OJ, coffee, jam....."

David takes the tray of his lap and places it on the nighstand.
He moves over gently to the side of the bed where Maddie's sitting and puts his arms around her body and starts to hug her and nuzzle her neck.
Maddie's heartbeat is going faster now and she closes her eyes, he gently lays her on her side and kisses her on the lips gently, softly.
Maddie's temperature is rising and she kisses him back.
Then David stops and looks at her.
David: "Are you sure you still want to do this .... I mean with the baby and everything...."
Maddie: "David...... the baby is safe, don't worry, and I feel FINE"
Maddie pulls David towards her and they make love, softly, carefully but very intimate.

To be continued.....
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Old 10-25-2004, 04:25 PM   #9
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And here we go again LOL

Still loving it
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Old 10-26-2004, 10:38 AM   #10
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Lovin' it.
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A LOT of lovin' going 'round!
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Old 10-27-2004, 07:50 AM   #12
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A bit later we see Maddie walking down the stairs. David already left to the Blue Moon office and left her all by herself. She sighs and walks into the livingroom. We see a giant Christmas tree standing there. It's not completely decorated yet. She gets a box with old X-mas balls. Each one carrying there own memory.

Nat King Coles "The Christmas Song" starts to fill the room.

She gets one out of the box and looks at it. It's a beautiful light-blue ball. It shines like it's new. It was given as a present by her grandmother when she was still a little girl. Then she sees another ball in the box. It's not really a ball, it's more like a little snowman. She made it when she was little. She smiles about the thought that she gets her own little girl....or little boy (GOT YA) now.

Maddie hangs the balls in the tree and sits down on the ground with her hands on her belly and starts to talk to it.

Maddie: "Sweet little baby, I wonder if you can hear me. This is our first Christmas together and you can't even see it yet. It's my favorite holliday. Maybe we have that in common.....
I would love to see your face when you open your first present. Oh little baby, I can't wait to meet you, to look into your eyes, feel your little hands. You have a wonderful father. I am sure you are going to love him as much as I do. I love you."

The phone starts to ring and Maddie picks it up.

Maddie: Hello? Oh hi mom!

Virginia Hayes: Hi Maddie! How are you?

Maddie: I'm fine mom. How are you? How's dad?

Virginia Hayes: We are fine Maddie, we packed our bags and are leaving by plane tomorrow morning.

Maddie: Okay, I'll ask David to pick you up from the airport.

Virginia Hayes: Aren't you coming with him?

Maddie: I don't know. We'll see. Otherwise you will see me at home.

Virginia Hayes: Okay, let it be a surprise.

Maddie: Thanks mom.

Virginia Hayes: For what?

Maddie: For being my mother.

Virginia Hayes: Oh Maddie, you know I love you.

Maddie: I love you too mom.

Virginia Hayes: We will see you tomorrow.

Maddie: See you tomorrow.

Virginia Hayes: Bye sweety.

Maddie: Bye mom.

In the meantime at Blue Moon...

(to be continued...)

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Old 10-27-2004, 12:56 PM   #13
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hmmm a lot of Maddies in the first part. I'm going to change that
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No leave it! David is up next,......
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I already changed it. When I read it before I changed it, it was awfull. Now it looks much better and it actually looks like I can write
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