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10-03-2004, 11:28 AM
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Girl Crazy (part 1)
Ok this is my new fanfic, all based on something really happening right now. And if I dont have anyone for certain characters, then tell me here if you want to take them. I put certain people for certain characters for time being.
Cast: Ryan- Avril's Sk8er Boi (me!)  Chris- Joseph (RurryMicelli) Jon- Jack Sami- Rebecca (Janet McFarland) Sarah- Ashlee (*A TV People*) Katie- Mackenzie (*CamdenGirl89*) Characters not taken yet: Leah Loretta Kyle Dan Karli Chelsea It starts with me and my friend walking to school. Chris: Ryan, I have something I need to ask you. Ryan: yeah? Chris: well I know this girl I want to ask out but I think she will turn me down. (all of a sudden Sami comes up and taps Chris on the back, startling him) Sami: Hi guys! Chris: Sami, what the heck did you do that for? Sami: To scare you. Chris: You'll have to do better than that. Sami: Hey guys what do you think of my hair? I died it orange. Ryan: I can't even see a difference. Chris: I can. It looks messier today than normal. (sami kicks chris) Sami: For your information it was.... Ryan: We know Sami, why do you always have to show us your hair? Sami: Because you guys know absolutely nothing about fashion, and when you get married your wives will do this to you all the time. Chris: At this rate I won't be married. Sami: Oh shut up! Ryan: Yeah Chris, you don't want to be kicked again, do you? (now they're at school) Sami: Oh great, we're late again. One more time and we get detention. Chris: Maybe if you didn't waste time arguing with us about your hair, we would have gotten here faster! Ryan: You're asking for her to kick you. (a girl named leah walks up to them. she comes over to talk to ryan) Leah: Hey, I want to talk to you for a minute. Sami: So we have to go away right? Leah: Yes. (Sami and Chris walk away) Leah: I was just wondering, do you have a girlfriend? Ryan: Not right now. Leah: Thats good because I am kind of asking you out. Ryan: Well I guess its ok with me. Leah: Thats good. Do you want to sit with me at lunch? Ryan: ok  Leah: ok, I have to go now. bye  Ryan: ok bye. Sami: What was that all about? Chris: let me guess, that girl just asked you out right? Ryan: Yeah. Chris: Why does it always have to be you? Everyone hates me. Sami: No they don't. Just make your hair longer and stick it up like Clay Aiken's. Then girls will be after you, trust me. Chris: Shut up Sami  Sami: Hey dont tell me to shut up! (she kicks him again) Chris: Sami, stop. Seriously! Sami: Oh fine. Kicking you is so much fun! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (its now lunch time. Ryan is sitting with Sami, his friend Jon, and Chris) to be continued...... |
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10-03-2004, 01:22 PM
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its good!
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10-03-2004, 05:56 PM
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thanks
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10-03-2004, 06:44 PM
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Yayy I play Sami
Great job!
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10-03-2004, 06:50 PM
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 yeah you'll sure like her later on even better based on that are you like her in real life?
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10-03-2004, 07:14 PM
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ok heres more...
the scene changes to lunch. ryan is sitting with chris, his friend jon, sami, and their friend sarah. Leah: Hey guys. Is anyone sitting here? Ryan: no. anyway here's my friend chris, who looks like clay aiken, my friend jon, and my friends sami and sarah. Leah: Just promise me you won't cheat on me for her (pointing to Sami) Sami: I'll kick you Leah Leah: Just try. I sent an 8th grade boy to the hospital by pushing him onto the street for trying to make out with me. Chris: I dont blame him for wanting to make out with you. You look like Alyssa Milano from Who's the Boss? Leah: What? Sami: oh nothing (sami kicks him again) Chris: Sami what the heck Ryan: I hope you dont feel uncomfortable with all of my friends. Leah: Oh its nothing. I'm used to being around boys. Sami: Did you just call me a boy?  Leah: No but you certainly act like one Sami: oh shut up Leah: I was just kidding. Ryan: Oh I hope. You should see her always asking me, Chris, and Jon if her hair is exactly perfect. "Ryan, how do you like my hair?" "Chris is my hair pretty?" Sami: What the heck, that was lame  But yeah I love my hair its so prettyfulJon: There she goes again Sami: What? Don't all girls obsess over their hair? I mean I want to impress the guys. Chris: Well you've done a bad job impressing us. Sami: That was like so totally rude Ryan: Oh come on Sami, if you really thought your hair was pretty, which it is, you would stop bothering us about it Jon: You know guys, you're leaving Leah completely out of this. Come on, you're giving Ryan a bad impression. Leah: Ah its ok. I'm so used to this. Especially with my brother. Ryan: You have an annoying little brother too? Leah: Yeah I smacked him right across the face yesterday. Sami: Well that was mean! Leah: If you knew him you wouldn't think so (a teacher, Miss Henessey, walks over Miss Henessey: Guys, tone it down. I can hear you from all the way over there. Leah: Whatever Miss Henessey: You're asking for detention. Leah: Ok sorry Miss Henessey: Remember what I said guys.... Leah: OMG we werent even doing anything. Why did she do that? Sami: I dont know. Leah: Hey its time to get snack. Ryan want 50 cents for snack? Ryan: ok thanks (they walked up to get snack) Leah: I don't think your friend Sami likes me much. Ryan: Oh you'll get used to her, believe me. I did but it took 3 months (Meanwhile at the lunch table....) Sami: I dont care much for Ryan's taste. Leah is such a bitch  Chris: I dont know. Shes kinda hot Sami: No she isn't she's an ugly redneck Jon: Just because you're a cheerleader doesn't mean you have to insult rednecks Sami: I dont have a problem with rednecks, its Leah I have a problem with. She insulted my hair! Chris: Oh stop it about your hair (Sami playfully punches him on the arm) Sami: Oh shut up (Ryan and Leah get back) Leah: So what have you guys been talking about since we were gone? Sami: Oh nothing of any interest to you...... Miss Henessey walks over again. Miss Henessey: You guys can me dismissed. Just walk silently down the halls to your homerooms. Leah: Ok lets go now. Ryan: I think my friend Chris likes you. Leah: I hope not. Ryan: Well bye Leah. Leah: Bye, talk to you tomorrow. And dont let Sami sit with us. She's a stupid prep. Ryan: Oh shut up Bye....Sami: Ryan, why do you like her? Ryan: She's nice, and hot  Sami: You'll hate her at the end of this week, trust me. Ryan: We'll see..... TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!! |
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10-03-2004, 07:41 PM
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In the words of Alan Jackson: "It's alright to be a redneck"  BTW, awesome fic. |
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10-03-2004, 07:43 PM
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10-03-2004, 08:19 PM
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Thats awesome!
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10-03-2004, 08:26 PM
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 i'll add more tomorrow
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10-03-2004, 08:50 PM
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Great job, I loved it!
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10-03-2004, 08:53 PM
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Great job! And to your question, I'm in a way like Sami, I obsess over my hair but I don't kick people
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10-03-2004, 08:54 PM
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10-03-2004, 08:55 PM
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she kicked my friend nick all the time last year. she never kicked me once though
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