Paradise Hotel

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Hey guys!! This fic I am going to be very on top of. Unfortunately, I need to end some of my old fics. I will write this one and keep one of my old ones so if you have any preferences to what one I should keep, let me know. This fic is based on a TV show I watched last night. I'm not gonna say what one because it will give all the surprises away but I hope you like it.

This may take a couple times of reading for some readers. To make it easier to understand, I'll list the important characters.

Kate McCafferty- Bonnie Bedelia
Nate Basso- Jon Hamm
Raina Washington- Taraji P Henson
Jinny Exstead- Nancy McKeon
CD DeLorenzo- Tracey Needham
Magda Ramirez- Lisa Vidal
Stepmother- Kate McCafferty
Prince Charming- Nate Basso
Stepsister 1- Raina Washington
Fairy Godmother- Jinny Exstead
Cinderella- CD DeLorenzo
Stepsister 2- Magda Ramirez
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It was just a regular day at the San Francisco Police Department. CD DeLorenzo had woken up on a bright Monday morning. However, she had a really bad headache. She just didn't feel herself. Anyway, she got dressed and went on with her day. She walked in and no one was in the bull pen. She had never seen it so empty and quiet before. Then she felt asomeone grab her shoulders from behind. It was a woman with red hair in a fluffy victorian dress. CD then looked down at herself, wearing rags. She was thinking to herself that she look a lot like Cinderella. The woman in front of her was screaming in her face.

Stepmother- Cinderella, what are you doing standing around like that? This place is a mess! Do those dishes! Mop the floor! Do the laundry! NOW!

Once CD heard and saw that, she turned around to find Kate standing there not wearing a dress. She looked down at herself and found herself back in her own clothes.

CD- What?
Kate- I said you and Nate should get down to the crime scene now. Are you feeling okay?
CD- Yeah I'm fine..I think.
Kate- Ok well there's Nate now. Here's the addres. Get going.

CD took the piece of paper with the adress and turned around to walk out the door and saw Nate standing in the doorway, wearing a white prince outfit. Magda and Raina weren't far behind him. They were wearing fluffy victorian dresses too. She looked back at Kate who was back in her dress. CD looked down to see her in rags again.

Prince- Are you coming my love? *Held his hand out for her*

CD looked at him, then the stepmother, then the step sisters, then back at herself.

CD- AHHHHH!!! WHAT'S GOING ON!?!?!

She screamed and ran into the locker room.
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Well, let me know what you think. Also, don't forget to tell me which fics go and stay

[candace~n~nathan]

bump

[Snowfall]

OMG, Kelly, I LOOOOOOVE this fic and the premise for it!!!! I totally get it!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAHOOO!!!!!!!!!!Post more right away!

As for you other fics....just PLEASE keep Don't Call Me? Thanks!

[NancyMarcAurora]

LOL omg so cute! Cool so far keep going please!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Tahnks you three for reading. I hope I get more. I need some more opinions about which fics to end. Some help is appreciated. Anyway, I went into the hospital today so I didn't write a whole lot more but here it is..
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She ran into the locker room. Jinny, who was just walking in, heard the whole thing.

Jinny- What happened?
Nate- I don't know. I asked her if she wanted to drive and I tried to hand her the car keys and she flipped!
Jinny- Let me go talk to her.

Jinny walked into the locker room to find CD in a bathroom stall.

Jinny- CD?
CD- Yeah?

CD opened the door and looked at her wearing a bright blue sparlking dress.

CD- Jinny what are you wearing??
Fairy- I'm not Jinny. You think I am but I'm not.
CD- Who are you? What is going on?
Fairy- I'm your fairy godmother. You are sick CD. The working too hard is catching up with you. You need to be prepared of what is going to happen while you're gone.
CD- Gone where? I don't understand.
Fairy- You will. I'll see you soon. Close your eyes.

CD closed her eyes and opened them to find Jinny standing there.

Jinny- Hello?? Anyone home?
CD- What?
Jinny- Are you coming out of here anytime soon? Nate's waiting to go.
CD- Oh ok let's go.
Jinny- Are you ok?
CD- Yeah. I just haven't been feeling myself today.
Jinny- Apparently. Go to the doctors.
CD- I think I'm going to have to. Thanks Jin. *Leaves*
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Well, how was it?

[NancyMarcAurora]

Yay! Good job it gets better! Please most more! Mores!!

[Snowfall]

Awwww, wow, Kelly, that was SOOOOOO great! I'm loving this fic! Please post more soon!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Thanks guys. Again, tell people to read this. It's gonna get good! lol Ok here ya go.
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So CD, taking Jinny's advice, went to a neurologist to try and find out why she was having these hallucinations of Cinderella.

Doctor Sid- So Candance, what seems to be the problem?
CD- Well I have been having a little bit of headaches and I haven't been sleeping to good. I am a little feverish and um..I keep seeing the characters from Cinderella.
Doctor- Cinderella? Well that's a new one for me. *Giggles*
CD- *Not amused*
Doctor Sid- Ok well most likely it is the flu or it could be stress or a combination of both! What do you do?
CD- I am an inspector at the San Francisco Police Department.
Doctor Sid- Then my guess is a combination. Ok I am going to give you some antibiotics and I want you to get right to bed as soon as you leave here.
CD- Well that's not possible because I have a ball to go to..
Doctor Sid- *Gives weird look*
CD- *Realizes what she said* I mean I have a witness to go see.
Doctor Sid- Ok then..

He turned to write down a prescription and when he did, CD turned and saw him turn into a pumpkin. She couldn't believe what she was seeing! CD's eyes popped out of her head.

Doctor Sid- Ok now here's some--

He turned back to CD and all he heard was the door shutting and CD gone! CD decided to take a little walk in the park and sat on a bench. She buried her head in her hands. She didn't know what was wrong with her. She kept going over and over in her head about what the fairy godmother had said. Then there was a tap on her shoulder.

Fairy- You look lost.
CD- I am lost. I don't know where to go or what to do. I keep seeing you people and I don't know what's real and what's not.
Fairy- The truth is between the silences.
CD- What does that mean? I don't understand.
Fairy- I think it means you just need some rest.
CD- Some sleep..yeah that could be good. Sleep..

She laid her head down on the fairy godmother's lap and began her long and painful journey.
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[NancyMarcAurora]

LOL that was good..mores please! So0 excited what will happen next!

[Snowfall]

Kelly, this fic is so great! It's so different. You are so creative to put "that show" into TD....post more soon!

[Georgiakj]

It's Great! I love it!
Please write more!

Oh and I'm so proud of myself! I recognized which 'show' you are talking about! *pats herself on shoulder* That's one of my other favs.

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Sorry guys but I can't post anymore tonight. My bird, Teddy, (that I only had for 2 days!!) died while I was at school. As you can imagine, I am extremely upset and not able to write tonight. I will tomorrow though. Thanks.

[Snowfall]

Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Sorry guys but I can't post anymore tonight. My bird, Teddy, (that I only had for 2 days!!) died while I was at school. As you can imagine, I am extremely upset and not able to write tonight. I will tomorrow though. Thanks.

Awww, Kelly baby, I'm so sorry!!!! That's so sad! I feel so bad for you....

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Originally posted by Snowfall
Awww, Kelly baby, I'm so sorry!!!! That's so sad! I feel so bad for you....

Thanks Tara. I'm feeling a little bit better today. Here's some more.
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A woman passed by a bench in the park to find a woman lying down. She didn't look homeless so the woman tried to shake her awake. She wouldn't wake up or move. The woman took out her cell phone.

Operator- This is 9-1-1. What is your emergency?
Woman- *Panicing* I found a woman on a park bench. She isn't moving or waking up.

After the paramedics got there, they rushed CD right to the hospital. While the doctors were working on her, the nurse found her police badge and called the emergency contact number. Kate was sitting at her desk and looked out to see that CD wasn't there. So she walked out to ask Nate.

Kate- Nate, where's your partner at?
Nate- She said she wasn't feeling well. She has been acting very strange the last few days.
Magda- Well do you blame her? If I went with you for two weeks on vacation, I'd act strange too.
Nate- *Glares* No I mean REALLY strange.
Jinny- I think she's gone to the doctors. I told her to.
Raina- Maybe she's pregnant!
Nate- *Eyes widen*
Magda- Raina!
Raina- Well think about it. Two weeks on vacation with Nate. Now acting strange and going to the doctors. It all fits.
Jinny- Unlike your head!
Raina- Hey!

Kate's office phone starting to ring. She shook her head and went into her office.

Nate- Jinny, you don't think..
Jinny- No I don't so don't even think it.
Magda- Hey, is Captain ok? She looks so pale and upset in there.

Kate walked out of her office.

Kate- Nate, in my office.
Raina- Ooh you're in trouble!
Jinny & Magda- SHUT UP RAINA!

In Kate's office..

Nate- Yes Captain?
Kate- I'm so sorry Nate.
Nate- What?
Kate- It's CD. She's in the hospital.
Nate- What? Is she alright?
Kate- She was found unconsious in the park. They called me because I am on her emergency contact card. The doctor's are working on her now. Go over there. They are expecting you.

Nate didn't say anymore. He ran out the doors and to his car.

Jinny- Cap'n, what happened?
Kate- I don't know. CD's in the hospital. Jinny, go with him. I don't think he should be alone.
Jinny- Ok. I'll keep you guys updated.
Kate- Thanks. I'll be over there as soon as I can.

Nate and Jinny showed up at the hospital. It seemed like the ride took 2 days when it was really 20 minutes.

Nate- I'm Inspector Basso. Can you tell me where Candace DeLorenzo is?
Nurse- Let me take you to Doctor Sid first.
Nate- I want to see CD!
Jinny- Nate, talk to the doctor first.
Nate- Alright Jin. Let me see Doctor Sid.
Doctor Sid- I'm Doctor Sid. Who are you?
Nate- Im Inspector DeLorenzo's partner.
Doctor Sid- Oh yes. I am Candace's neurologist. I'm so sorry. She arrived here in a coma.
Nate- Wait..a coma? How can that be? She's perfectly healthy. PERFECTLY HEALTHY!!!
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More to come later.

[NancyMarcAurora]

OHH NO CD! aHH! PooR gIrL! Mores Please! Good job!