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07-13-2004, 07:34 PM
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nEW FAN FIC..A MAYBE!
TheDivision..ItS like one of the 5th season episodes)
(Jinny's online) (Just entered her chat room she always goes in while her baby boy John Jr. is sleeping and her husband Hank is working late while she is off tonight) Jinny: (Logs onto the computer) JiNNyGerl: Hi guys MagDaCopMomma: Jin! I haven't seen ya in here for like almost 3 weeks! JiNNyGerl: Yeah, hows Ben..asleep? MagDaCopMomma: Yes, thank god! how's John? JiNNyGerl: Same! asleep. MagDaCopMomma: Doesn't John turn 2 months today? JiNNyGerl: Yep. his hair is starting to grow in darker and he has Hank's smile but my eyes. MagDaCopMomma: Ohh I wish Benjamin was a little tiny baby again. He always slept for me and it was much easier than now lol JiNNyGerl: lol well John use to sleep great! Now he sleeps in the daytime and wakes up in the night. Its horrible anymore. Anyway I took him to his pediatrician and he said he might have a sleeping disorder because there were other side affects beside the sleeping.. MagDaCopMomma: He'll be fine Jin just relax and everything will probably be fine. CanDyDeeTasteMee: Hey everybody!! I have some great news! (CD and Nate are together again) Mores later itll get betterr |
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~N a n c y~ L i d d l e J i n n y! T h e D i v i s i o n r 0 x! R I P T h e D i v i s i o n <3 T h a F a c t s o f L i f e f o r e v e r! ~J e s s i e G e r l~ 80's c h I L d My new screen name is JEthestrange I got rid of my old one..DiVizionBabe900 Last edited by NancyMarcAurora; 07-13-2004 at 08:43 PM. |
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07-14-2004, 12:19 AM
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CD and Nate Forever
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This looks great! Post more soon!
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07-14-2004, 10:41 AM
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To new beginnings..and to change.
CanDyDeeTasteMee: Me and Nate are planning out our wedding..GUYS WERE GETTING MARRIED! I'M SO GLAD I HAD THE SENSE TO COME BACK TO HIM..I'M JUST SO HAPPY! I'VE ALSO DECIDED TO WORK WITH THIS POLICE STATION BUT..INSTEAD OF WORKING IN HERE I WANT TO WORK WITH THE DARE PROGRAM AT THE MIDDLE SCHOOL CLOSEST TO HERE AND THE OTHER ONES SOON AS WELL. HOW DOES THAT SOUND?
JiNNyGerl: Alright, CD! thats great! hopefully we are all invited to your wedding... MagDaCopMomma: Oh CD! I always knew you and Nate would have a relationship someday and now you're getting married! RainaRainOnMe: Hey guys I read the convo and I am just so happy for Nate..my partner!! God this is so great! I have some ideas for the wedding and all!! I was fighting StaCe for the bag of chips so thats why i didn't come in the chat sooner. CanDyDeeTasteMee: Of course! all of yous are invited! Im so happy that you all are happy for me! We arent sure what kind of wedding we will have..we'll need a little time to think that overr. JiNNyGerl: Eh sorry guys I gotta go..John woke up crying and I really think he needs to be changed! ByE..congrads CD! * JiNNyGerl has just logged off* Mores later..sry its shorter. Oh the title Jinnys stalker was a mistake so thats not what its called |
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07-14-2004, 11:47 AM
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Awwww, that was so cute! I'm glad that CD had the sense to go back to Nate, too.
 And what's the title supposed to be? 
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07-14-2004, 12:06 PM
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To new beginnings and to change.
(Jinny just logged off her computer) Jinny: Johnny John John I'm coming. (she said slowly walking into John Jr's room) (John Jr was beat red screaming and spitting up all over his mint green bunny blanket.) Jinny: Oh my..are you sick my baby bunny boy? (She asked John in a sweet voice) Jinny: (placed her hand against his cheek) Jesus, you're..youre burning up! (Jinny said shocked as she felt how hott he felt) Jinny: John, please stop crying..please you're really freaking me out here. Oh..gotta call Hank. Jinny: (runs down the hallway becoming a nervous wreck) (She dials the phone as she snatches it and trys to reach Hank) Hi, this is Jinny..Hank Rileys wife..yeah Jinny Exstead..right. Can I please speak with him..this is kind of an emergency. (As she was onhold for a moment she was rubbing her head making her hair flip back feeling scared because John Jr had never been sick before.) Hank: Jin? What's up? Jinny: Uh, Hank..the baby's sick. I ..I really need you to come home..can you leave now? Hank: Jin, calm down. Babies get sick..does he have a fever? Jinny: I think so, I..uh felt his forehead and hes red and spitting up mucus. I'm gonna take his temperature in a minute. Hank: Well in that case I'll be there as soon as I can. I'm just wrapping up a few things and I'll be right there. I promise. Jinny: Thanks, bye. John Jr then was silent. Jinny: (Goes down the hall to his room in concern) Jinny: (Enters John's room and looks over the crib and stares at the color he turned and opens her mouth and gasps) Jinny:Oh my god! John! (Jinny gasps as she covers her hand over her mouth and shrieks) Mores Laters* |
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07-14-2004, 12:52 PM
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Great post MOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!
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Amor, no es amor (Si no es amor) es una ilusion (es una ilusion) tan llena de dolor Amor, no es amor (Si no es amor) es una obcesion (es una obcesion) dentro mi corazon Amor, no es amor (if this aint love) Then what am I feeling (what am I doing wrong) Amor, no es amor (if this aint love) Is this an illusion that I have in my heart? |
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07-14-2004, 01:47 PM
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07-14-2004, 01:59 PM
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Jinny: (Grabs John Jr. and charges down the hallway with him very pale turning blue in her arms)
Jinny: Oh my god..oh my god. This can't just can't be happening! (She paniced to herself) Jinny  Slaps her coat on and John jr's as well)Jinny: (Darts out the door and runs into Hank as he comes up to the doorstep)Hank! John..look..Johns turning blue..hes not breathing right and hes burning up! Hank, please! Help him! Drive me to the hospital!(Jinny screamed being very paranoid) Hank: Oh my..get in the car come on! (He said quickly getting in the car helping jinny put John Jr in his carseat) (CD's at Nate's apartment) Nate: Hey CD, if you're still not use to this place that's ok. We can always move into your's. CD: Listen Nate, im comfortable but..I have alot of money saved up from last year and the year before and you said you have savings too. Let's use them to buy a house. Nate: Good idea. (He said smoothly) CD: Here's some ad's in the paper for houses for sale. Nate: Are you ever gonna get off that computer? Damn you people can chat for days on that thing. CD: Oh shut up, Nate. (She said chuckling a little) Nate: Why don't you do something else. Like..go soak your head. CD: (Started cracking up) That was my line I said to you before. You remembered.. Nate: I could never forget the lines you say to me. CD: (Gazes into his eyes and goes over and hugs him) Nate: (Hugs back) I missed you so much when you were gone. CD: I bet I missed you more. Nate: That..that's not possible. CD: Oh Raina told me she has some wedding ideas for us. (She mentioned as she went over to tell everyone she has to be going) Nate: Raina!? (He siad laughing a bit) CD: Yes, why not? Nate: I don't know it seems kinda weird. CD: How? Nate: Well it's my partner thats trying to plan our wedding. CD:Yeah well maybe she'll have great ideas. Nate: Let's not spend too much though. CD: Oh I want this wedding to me very modern and in my own way I want to with maybe some other ideas tossed in. It won't be really expensive. Nate: Tomorrow, I kinda told everyone I'd get you to come back to the station for old time sake. CD: Ok..tomorrow I'll go. I just felt a little nervous seeing everyone again, I have no clue why. Nate: What, you think theyre going to look at you differently now? CD theyre not like that, so just don;t worry about it. Be yourself..act like your coming into work again. CD: I know, Im being weird. Thanks for the advice.(She said sighing) Mores soon |
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07-15-2004, 01:05 AM
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That was really good! I like this fic. Post more soon!
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07-15-2004, 01:56 PM
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07-16-2004, 01:15 AM
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M0res ppls
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Jinny and Hank are at the hospital)Jinny Paces around the room folding her hands that are pressed against her lips in the waiting room w/ Hank as he sits down on the bench in the waiting room waiting for news on their son.)Jinny:I haven't heard anything in the last 28 minutes. (muttered to herself) Hank with his head facing the floor) Jin, what do you want me to do? (He asked gently)Jinny:God, now I know how Magda felt when her son was diagnosed with Leukimia. Hank: Jinny, honey..please just stop..your going to get histerical. Hank: Well, what do you want me to do Hank!? I can't go in there and you don't want me to bother anyone about it and let them do their work! This is killing me! I need to know something..hes just a month old! Thi..this poor innocent baby! (she bellowed in a shaky voice) Hank: Jin..I feel that way too I'm scared to death and petrified out of my frigen mind! He's my son too..we just have to stay cool and think positive in this situation. Can you do that? Not just for me and you, but for John Jr as well. Jinny Shoots him a pitiful look) He..he doesnt deserve this, Hank. If its anyone that deserves something like that it's me. (She said as she sat on the bench next to hank)Hank: How..how can you say that? You may of had past problems..but you dont deserve anything like this. I beleive you are a good person. A caring and loving..sincere..loyal__ Jinny: Hank, I've lost my mother when I was young. Then my big brother, my partner Magda almost died from a shooting not that long ago..and _ Hank: Ohh Jin.._ Jinny: All that time I had problems and I was so desperate for love and being so lonely, out of all the things I've been through.._it just isnt as bad as what they went through. Like it didnt hit me hard enough. Magda is a good person and John deep down never wants to hurt me and my mother.. Jinny:You get the point. Hank Gives her a sorry look) Jinny, your'e special. You probably never realized it but..you have this gift. You are gifted..Jinny. Jinny: (Shows a half smile) If you say so, than Ill take your word on it.__Thank you(She said softly beginning to lean against his shoulder with her eyes getting teary) Hank Looks same as he holds her in his arms)Mores Later*
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07-16-2004, 01:25 AM
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Awwww, that's so sad and sweet.....
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07-16-2004, 01:21 PM
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07-16-2004, 05:28 PM
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CD and Nate at work at their desks)CD Sits at her desk tapping her pencil searching for a file)God damnit! Ever since I started working at the desk just for extra money..Ive been too frustrated! Nate: Well, on Monday were going to sign up for that DARE program teaching job, ok. CD: Alright, I guess I shouldnt be whining while I'm working. I only have 2 days left to work desk sop what am I bitching about? Nate: Well, you know women... CD: Whats that supposed to mean? Nate: Maybe.. CD: I have my monthly? Is that all you..men think about when a woman is frustrated? Let me tell you something_ Captain: Guys, Jinny won't be in today. John Jr..is in the hospital and their getting the results in about 10 minutes so..(she cut in) CD Gives Nate a look) Oh my god is he going to be ok? Nate: Let us know Cap. Captain:I will, uh what was that ..Nate? About women? Nate Laughs a little) Hehe..yeah, I was just kiddi..n..really I meant_Captain: Thats what I thought. CD:Ha! (She said like a miss know it all) Mores Later sry its short |
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07-16-2004, 06:44 PM
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