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Okay, so I finally got the will to write again!
idk how long it will last , but here's what I have so far!! kinda confusing in the beginning,but that's how it's supposed to be . tell me what you think, and maybe i'll post more someday. ![]() _______________________________ “Kate, do you really think I can handle this?” CD nervously asked as she gathered up her new clothes. Kate smiled. “You’re more than ready, CD. You’ve been around for awhile, and you’re skilled enough to do this case.” She nodded. “Thanks for the reassurance. I’m close to getting a break in it, actually.” “I had no doubts.” CD smirked. “Alright, well, I have to tie up some loose ends before I go, so I better…..” Kate acknowledged the fact that she was being dismissed. “Good luck, Inspector,” she replied prior to giving her a tight squeeze. CD watched her leave the room as she put another miniskirt into her suitcase. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Nate Basso sniffed the last of his supply. “Dammit, I’m all out,” he muttered to the man sitting next to him. “I’ll get ya some more. You got the cash?” the man questioned. Nate nodded. “Yeah, I got it. I’ll go with you.” The man shook his head. “No, you’ll stay here with Ralph,” he nodded his head toward a black, three hundred pound man who looked as if he could snap Nate into two without breaking a sweat. “Don’t want you getting any ideas.” Nate agreed. “Fine, just as long as I get my stuff.” “Oh, you’ll get it alright. Plenty of it.” ~~~~~~~~~ “Baby, that was so amazing,” he murmured against her throat. “Of course it was,” she purred back. “I was doing it to you, wasn’t I?” she grinned. He smiled. “You’ve always had a way to get to me.” “How about we do it again?” CD suggested as she slipped her leg across the top of his. “Damn, woman, you drive me mad.” “That’s my job,” she giggled. He played with her hair for a little bit before kissing her lips firmly. “Candy, move in with me. I want you by my side at all times.” CD sighed. “I don’t know……” The man slid his hands down her body. “How can I convince you then?” he asked, smiling. She giggled. “Continue that, and you got yourself a deal.” He laughed, before making love to her again, and he fell asleep with her pulled tightly to him. CD stayed awake for another hour, devising a plan. It had worked so far, she decided. She was in. She wanted this to be short and sweet, if she could manage it. The quicker it was over, the quicker she could go back to her life. The quicker she could sign her divorce papers, if they ever came in the mail like they were supposed to, and she could start dating again. She looked over at the man snoozing against her. “They better not all be like this one out there,” she muttered before pulling away from him a little, to give her some breathing room, so she could join the peaceful world of slumber. |
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That's sooo good!!! I hope Nate isn't getting drugs though..Post more soon.
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OMG, LISA, YOU POSTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't believe it----- a new FIC BY YOU!!!!!!!! LOL. This is so great! Yeah, it is a little confusing, but that just makes it more interesting! Post more soon!
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OKAY, thank u for the replies, it was one more than expected!!!
![]() LOL, anyway, idk when i'll get to post again; hopefully soon, but we'll see! enjoy for now! ![]() ~~~~~~~~ CD moved into Jim’s tiny apartment the next day. Short skirts, sleazy tops, and tall stilettos now filled one half of his closet. He grinned as she folded her last pair of underwear into her new drawer. “You didn’t need that many pairs of panties, Candy. I don’t plan on you wearing them for very long.” She grinned as she joined him on the bed. “So you want me going without any when I meet your friends in a little bit?” He frowned. “Hell no! You better have some on! They better not touch you, Candy. You’re MINE.” She kissed him. “Honey, I was just kidding. I’m yours, and yours only.” “You better be,” he muttered as he looked at his watch. “Damn, baby, it’s almost 4. I told them we’d be at the playhouse at 4!” “So let’s go,” she suggested as she stood up and readjusted her skirt. “I can’t wait to see inside!” “Candy, I don’t know if they’ll let you in. I mean, you are relatively new to me, and they’ve never met you. It’s dangerous, sweetie.” She nodded. “I know that, but I’m with you, and you’ll protect me, right?” she purred into his ear. “Damn, Candy, you know how to do it to me…” he muttered as he drug her back to the bed. “We’re not going to make it by 4, are we?” she teased as she saddled up on top of him. “Depends on quick you can go,” he joked right back. “Oh baby, then we’ll probably be early,” she chuckled as she began to let him go inside of her. On the inside, however, CD was grimacing, imagining another person, ANYONE, but this guy. ~~~~ The guys paced back and forth at the playhouse. “Where the **** is he?!” one of them muttered. Nate rolled his eyes. “Probably screwing that ho that he’s always talking about. What’s her name? Tootsie Roll? Chocolate cake?” The other guy laughed. “You’re close. Her name’s Candy. Jim says she’s really special,” he rolled his eyes. “But aren’t all hookers special in some way?” They all laughed as Jim and Candy pulled up. “Speaking of which,” another guy mumbled as they all stood up to meet this new woman of Jim’s. CD slid out of the passenger seat, wearing a pink V neck spaghetti strap shirt, a black skirt that barely covered her backside, and heels that made her tall figure stand way over 6 feet tall. “Damn,” Nate muttered under his breath as she walked up to them. |
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Woweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! 2 posts in 2 days!!! I'm in heaven!!!
That was soooooooooooooooo great, Lisa, and don't worry about last night. My computer has problems, too. OMG, don't leave us hanging there! Post more soon! |
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Yaaaaaaaaayyy!!!!!!!!! A new fic! That was great!Post more!
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alrighty everyone, i'm back!!
![]() thanks for reading; here's more! ![]() ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ CD slid out of the passenger seat, wearing a pink V neck spaghetti strap shirt, a black skirt that barely covered her backside, and heels that made her tall figure stand way over 6 feet tall. “Damn,” Nate muttered under his breath as she walked up to them. “Hi, I’m Candy, it’s great to meet you all of you,” she stuck her hand out to Nate. “And you are?” “Available,” Nate replied as the rest of the guys laughed. CD smirked as she checked him out. “I can see why,” she retorted. The rest of the guys hooped and hollered and patted Nate on the back. “She shut you down, buddy!” “Aww, she hit you where it hurt, didn’t she?!” CD grinned as the guys shook her hand. “So do I get to go into the playhouse, or do I have to stay out here, all by my lonesome?” “Honey, you might’ve started out on a good note with us, but we’ve just met you. You don’t need to be snooping around our business. Not yet anyway.” Another guy nodded. “Yeah, sweetie, but you don’t have to stay out here by your lonesome.” “I don’t? Well, who’s going to stay here with me then?” she asked. They laughed as one of them shoved Nate out. “Hey, way to volunteer, Nate!” they laughed as Nate muttered and frowned as the rest of them walked into the house. Jim kissed CD firmly on the lips. “I’ll be out in about an hour, gorgeous. Don’t be screwin around,” he spat towards Nate. Nate rolled his eyes and watched Jim go into the house with the others. Nate shuffled his feet and walked to the curb of the sidewalk, sitting down. CD joined him but didn’t sit too close. She noticed how attractive he was and how he seemed so different than the rest of them. “How’d you fall for HIM?” Nate asked as he picked at the grass growing around the curb. CD smiled. “What do you mean? Jim’s a good guy.” “Yeah, he’s alright, but you don’t seem to be the type of person he is.” “And what type is that?” Nate shrugged. “I don’t know-- druggy? Alcoholic?” “What makes you think I’m not either one? Or both, for that matter?” Nate chuckled. “I can see right through you, lady. Sure, on the outside you’re slutty and you’re wearing too much make up, but on the inside, you’re a pure hearted woman. You’re not a prostitute, are you?” “Well, no, I’m not anymore. Jim’s taking care of me.” “But you never were, were ya, Candy?” “What the hell’s your problem, Mister? You’ve met me for, what, five minutes, and now you think you know everything about me?!” Nate laughed. “Not everything. Not yet anyway,” he replied as he gently touched her shoulder with his hand. CD found it feel very relaxing and fitting for his hand to be there, so she didn’t ask him to remove it. “Well, I don’t know everything about you either. Actually, I don’t know anything about you, besides your first name’s Nate, and you try to act like a hard ass in front of your friends, but you’re obviously a softy when the shades are drawn.” “You saying you might draw the shades with me sometime?” he teased. |
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OMG, Lisa, this is so freakin FABULOUS! Even though it's still really confusing, I love this fic, and it's so different! It's great! Now post more really soon!
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well, since the replies are just rolling in--HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-- here's more!!
![]() “You saying you might draw the shades with me sometime?” he teased. “Shut up,” she muttered. He laughed. “I was just kidding,” he picked at the grass some more. “But yeah, my first name’s Nate. Last name’s Basso. What else do you want to know?” CD shrugged. “Where did you come from before this? How did you get involved with them? What’s in that house they call ‘the playhouse?’” Nate sighed, answering very carefully, cautious not to blow his cover. “I was a messenger and deliverer before this. Your buddy, Jimmy, was my dealer, and I got good enough to be included with their buys and stuff. And if you don’t know what’s in the playhouse, then you’re not as smart as what I took you for.” “Drugs?” Nate grunted. “What else?” She nodded. “So why’d they make you stay out here with me?” “I’m the last one on the totem pole, Candy. I’m the gopher. Whatever they say, I do. Whatever I’m supposed to take, I take. Whatever they need tested, I test it. Get it?” She nodded. “Sounds like a ****ty job.” He nodded. “It is. It’s terrible, but one day it’ll get me higher. I’m supposed to go along on my first job in about a month. I get to buy with them, if I can continue to prove myself.” She nodded and let what he’d just informed her sink in. She, too, started playing with the grass. He looked over at her. Her long, slender fingers gently playing with each blade, her eyes had a look of concentration, and her feet had tiny sores, he could see, from her uncomfortable shoes. “So what about you? You got to ask me questions. Is it my turn yet?” She smiled. “Sure. It’s only fair.” He grinned. He loved the way she smiled, he noticed. “Um, what did you do before Jim? And don’t try and pull off that BS about the hooker. You might have been one for him, but you sure as hell weren’t one long before you met him. You’re not hooker material.” “What IS hooker material?” CD asked him. “Candy, come on, I’m a little smarter than what you’re giving me credit. I should’ve been a detective, I’m telling ya!” he pointed at her feet. “You’re feet are swelling and have blisters from your shoes. Hookers wear shoes like that all the time, so their feet adapt and don’t swell after awhile.” He pointed at her uncrossed legs. “And look at that! You’re giving the next person that walks up to us a free show!! Any experienced hooker would know how to sit in that little skirt and not flash anyone until they saw the dough!” CD didn’t know what to do. Panic was the first emotion that stuck her. She decided to go with the flow. She burst out laughing. “Okay, so you caught me,” she chuckled as she carefully invented a story that wouldn’t blow her cover. “I was a waitress at a rundown restaurant. Jim came in one day, and I noticed him. I wasn’t his waitress, and he doesn’t know this, mind you, but I watched him leave and noticed what he walked up to.” “A hooker or a dealer?” She smiled. “A hooker.” “So you decided to dress up as a little ho and hope to get him?!” Nate asked in disbelief before laughing hysterically after she nodded yes. “It was the only way to get his attention!” He continued to chuckle. “So what does that tell you, Candy?!” She shrugged. “I don’t know, he likes a good time?” He laughed some more. “Well, that, and he likes his sex to be paid for! Why the hell would you want him?!” She shrugged. “That’s none of your business,” she muttered defensively. He looked at her strangely and saw that she wasn’t laughing. “Hey, Candy, I was just kidding!” “Yeah, whatever,” she murmured. “Look, I’m sorry, I just thought that you should be doing better than what you’ve got.” “Oh yeah?!” CD exclaimed, thinking about her own life and not ‘Candy’s.’ “How the hell would you know?! How do you know I can do better?! What if I can’t?! What if every guy I’ve ever known has treated me like ****?!” |
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WAHOO!!!! That was so great, Lisa! Now I know what's going on---they're BOTH undercover, and no one told them about the other! Well, I'M replying, so post more soon!
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I'll
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