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HEy- I posted awhile back saying I had a new fan fic. Bear with me, I am not too sure how much I can type, but here goes!
CD sat down on the couch, looking at the mess surrounding her. She hated moving, but it was nice to be getting settled in her own apartment again. She went out to the deck and watched the city lights.She had really missed San Francisco, and couldn't believe she was back. The last year had been difficult to say the least, especially the way she'd had to leave, but it had been necessary. She hated hurting people, and knowing she had hurt Nate most of all was very painful. Nate had never been far from her mind the whole time she'd been gone. Would he understand? Probably not. She turned back into her apartment, surveying the boxes once more. The boxes were definitely winning the war, she thought. There was a knock at the door, and CD went to answer it,curious. Not too many people knew she was back. It was Kate. "Kate-hi,come on in." Kate walked in, and gave CD a hug. "Just had to say hi to one of my best Inspectors." Kate said with a smile. "Well, it's good to see you, CD said. I was going to call you,but it's been hectic here." "Well, I hope you don't mind me dropping by, but I have been worried about you, and couldn't wait to see you," Kate said. CD looked down at her hands. "Kate, I hope you know I didn't want to leave like that,but-" Kate stopped her. "No explanations are necessary,kiddo. I know what happened, and you made the right decision." Kate smiled. "I am just glad you are back, and that you are okay." Let me know if you want more................. Wendi |
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Nate:"What did he say?" CD: "No go" Nate: "So when do we leave?" CD: "Now." |
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If course we want more
. Bring it on!!!!
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Amor, no es amor (Si no es amor) es una ilusion (es una ilusion) tan llena de dolor Amor, no es amor (Si no es amor) es una obcesion (es una obcesion) dentro mi corazon Amor, no es amor (if this aint love) Then what am I feeling (what am I doing wrong) Amor, no es amor (if this aint love) Is this an illusion that I have in my heart? |
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awww, that was such a great beginning!!!!!! I want more now!!
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Drunk guy: What's her name? Is it Jennifer? It's usually Jennifer. Is it Heather? Sometimes it's Heather. Nate- It's Candace. But we, uh, call her CD. |
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Well, you will have to wait until naptime....
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okay, here is more:
"So, how is everybody?" CD asked. Kate sat down. "Everyone is good. Magda and Gabe are doing well, and Ben is growing like crazy. The biggest news is that Jinny had a baby, and is getting married." CD was dumbfounded.Amazing how things can change,she thought. "Raina is Raina," Kate continued. "I also have a new officer, Stacy, who needs to switch to decaf in my opinion, but there may be hope. Magda is just really glad Jinny is back from maternity leave. Going on calls with the Captain can be exhausting." Kate grinned, and CD also had to laugh. Kate didn't say anything for a moment, and CD looked at her, waiting. "C'mon Kate, tell me. How is Nate?" Kate took a deep breath and sat forward a bit. "Truthfully, he has not been the same since you left. He hates being partnered with Raina, and it seems he has just lost a part of himself that he can't get back."Kate took CD's hand. "He won't admit it to anyone, but he misses you. He is angry, he thinks with good reason, but he misses you all the same. He doesn't know why you left, but I think he will understand once you talk to him." CD could feel the tears coming. She hated knowing that Nate was in so much pain. " I don't know if I can talk to him, if I can face him." Kate gave her a hug. "I think you will know what to say when the time is right. I will let you get back to unpacking, and call if you need anything,okay?" CD nodded. "Thanks for stopping by, Kate. It means alot. It's nice to have at least one friend here." Kate hugged CD. "Once they know you are back, you will have all the friends you need." With that, Kate left, and CD headed to bed, deciding to tackle the boxes in the morning. Two days later, CD was getting dressed for work. She was incredibly nervous. Today of all days, she wanted to make a good impression. With a new position in a different division, she wanted to goet off on the right foot. It was early. CD wanted to get to work early, and settle herself at her desk before anyone arrived. She also wanted to try to avoid her former division mates at least for today. SHe headed out to the kitchen for one last cup of coffee. Finishing that, CD glanced at the clock on the wall. Time to go. She picked up her gun holster, and her new badge, and left. More later............ Wendi |
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awwwwwwwwwwww, so, SO great!!!!!!!!!!
![]() that was awesome, so i'm expecting more...............VERY soon!!!!!
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A new CD/Nate fic! This looks really great. The freaky thing is, I'd gotten an idea for a new fic myself, and so far we have the same idea! LOL. Can't wait for more! Post more soon!
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This is so sweet! I love the CD/Kate relationship. Post more!
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Whohoo!!! A new CD/Nate fic!!! It's really great so far! Post more!
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sorry it has been a few days, but I will definitely post more tonight! (sigh) I have to go pick my charge up now......oh well, Mom is working late tonight, I get to take the kid to Mickey D's, which means I don't have to cook!!!!! I will be good and order a salad, don't want to undo my weight loss!
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Okay, I have bonus time off! Here goes:
CD waked into her new office. She was now Captain of the Missing Persons Division. She was one floor lower than her old division, which was nice. CD knew that her former co-workers knew she was back, as she had asked the Chief to keep it quiet. SHe also knew Kate would never say anything either, which was the way CD wanted it. After she talked to Nate, she would call her old friends. Nate. CD knew she had to call him;she did not want to run into him accidentally,or have hime learn some other way of her return. It would make what she had to say that much harder. CD did not know what the chances would be of them getting back together, since from what Kate said, Nate was still understandably angry. CD sighed. No one else was there yet. "Time to get this over with"< she said to herself, and picked up the phone. Nate woke up in a foul mood, just as he every day for the past year. Every morning he replayed that last day in his mind. He and CD had woken up late. It was their day off, and they had no plans whatsoever. They had made love,then eaten a lazy breakfast.It had been four months since the shooting, and the one thing they had learned was to not take life for granted. Nate had wanted to make this permanent and that evening proposed after a romantic dinner. CD said yes, and then they went to CD's and made love. The next morning, they had gone to work. As far as Nate could tell, things had changed when CD got a phone call. She told Nate she had to go to an appointment that she had forgotten about, and was gone. He went home later and found the note with the ring. Her stuff that she kept there was gone. What had happened? Nate was destroyed. He had taken some time off, tried to find CD, only to come back and find that he was partnered with Raina. As if things weren't bad enough....Raina constantly asked him if he ever heard from CD, why she left, etc. It was all so frustrating. Back in the present, Nate got up,showered, and ate breakfast, if one could call chocolate doughnuts breakfast. CD had always tried to get him to eat eggs,but he'd stubbornly held his ground. He had almost reached his car when his phone rang. How is that????
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Oh, this is SO ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!! This is getting SO GREAT! Good job writing, Wendi---I'm hooked!
Post more soon!
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That was great post more soon!!!
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Yes, that was so great. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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That was great! And i want MORE! and SOON!!!!!
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