Song I made up

[Bea]

If you think "Weird Jack" Wilso-Vic was a parody writer, I'm doing some parody songs too starting with this song I wrote just yesterday afternoon.

"Jennifer and Me"

When I'm feeling lonely,
Sad as I can be,
All by myself
With another woman
In the deep blue sea

She makes me happy
Fills me up with glee,
My eyes go galore
And my girl's no flaw,
My Jennifer and me

Her big brown eyes, they twinkle
just like the stars in space
Her love for me, it sparkles
And adds beauty to my face,
Her shiny teeth, they glisten
just like a Christmas tree,
You know I'd run a mile
Just to see her smile,
My Jennifer and me
(Jennifer, Jennifer)

Yeah, she's really perfect
And sweet as a bee,
That dark brown hair
Makes my heart sure care,
My Jennifer and me

My Jennifer, she's awesome
(Jennifer, Jennifer)
just like our favorite song
(Jennifer, Jennifer)
And when I hold Jennifer,
(Jennifer, Jennifer)
She says that I'm really strong,
(Boy, Potsie loves Jennifer)
My Jennifer, I love her
(Jennifer, Jennifer)
And that girl loves me
But should I talk to you
when I ain't feelin' blue,
My Jennifer and me
(Jennifer, Jennifer)
My Jennifer and me
(Jennifer, Jennifer)

Her big brown eyes, they twinkle
(Jennifer, Jennifer)
just like the stars in space
(Jennifer, Jennifer)
Her love for me, it sparkles
(Jennifer, Jennifer)
And adds beauty to my face,
(Boy, Potsie loves Jennifer)
Her shiny teeth, they glisten
(Jennifer, Jennifer)
just like a Christmas tree,
You know I'd run a mile
Just to see her smile,
My Jennifer and me
(Jennifer, Jennifer)
My Jennifer and me
(Jennifer, Jennifer)
My Jennifer and me
(Jennifer, Jennifer)

See what you think and send me any comments about the song.

[Bea]

Will anyone please look at my Song I made up post and tell me what they think of "Jennifer and Me"?