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mmsg · 06-09-2004, 08:27 AM

One Year Earlier....... Live News Bulletin:

Jonathan Smith was arrested on the charges of rape and murder. After a short trial in which DNA evidence was presented along with Captain Kate McCafferty testimony, Jonathan Smith was sentenced for life without the possibility of parole due to the violent nature of his crimes. Upon exiting the court room, Jonathan Smith swore his innocence and publicly announced his intent to get even with Captain McCafferty.

MovieHuntress17 · 06-09-2004, 08:48 PM

Ooooooooo!! Post more soon!

mmsg · 06-10-2004, 06:22 PM

Present......

Monday 8 a.m.

Stacey was heading into the Division after a fun filled weekend with a large smile plastered across her face. Life was definately looking good from her perspective. More case files were being filtered in her direction, the captain wasen't pissed for any reasons, and a new love interest was just blossoming. Yep, life was good!!!!! Too bad the criminals couldn't take a break.
But as Stacey sat down to begin working on paperwork, her mind drifted towards her new love interest. It was chance that had brought her and David together. They both had been at the same coffee shop exactly 2 weeks ago. David had been walking past Stacey, when he slipped on something. The result: two lost coffees and a budding new relationship. Stacey was called out of her musing by the captain's voice.

Captain: Stacey! Stacey! Come back to Earth.

Stacey: Sorry Captain, my mind must have wandered off for a minute.

Captain: It sure must have headed in one hell of great direction. I have been trying to get your attention for severeal minutes now.

Stacey (Cheeks burning): I'm sorry Captain. What can I do for you?

Captain (grinning): Can you please file these and make sure that you don't drift off again.

O.K. so things at the division could have run more smoothly for Stacey this morning. Focusing on the task at hand, Stacey went to file the reports and the Captain went back into her office. Little did either of them know, that the greatest challenge was yet to come. One of the hardest cases was just about to land in their laps.

MovieHuntress17 · 06-11-2004, 02:57 PM

Post more soon! I wanna know what the case is!! lol

mmsg · 06-12-2004, 08:58 PM

Tuesday 8:45 a.m.

Magda and Jinny were busy investigating an arson case. Nate was busy looking into a potential homicide, while Stacey and Rena were performing an interview with a key witness. Everything seemed to be running smoothly. Alone in her office, Kate McCafferty was sorting through paperwork when her phone began to ring. “McCafferty here”. There was no answer on the other end. Kate thought that to be rather strange but chalked it up to a wrong number. When it occurred for the second time within a 30 min period, she began to wonder. Usually police chiefs don’t get crank phone calls. With a shrug of her shoulders, Kate headed to a scheduled meeting with Hasbert, another irritation.

Tuesday 1:00 P.M.

Kate just returned from her meeting with Hasbert. As she entered her office, she noticed a bouquet of beautiful red roses. With uncertainty, she looked around for a card to gather a clue as to who sent them. Finding none, Kate walked out of her office and called out to the inspectors.

Kate: Hey guys do you know who sent the flowers in my office?

Rena: Cap, we just assumed that you had a new love interest and were holding out on us.

Kate: Very funny, Rena. Seriously, when I do get one, I’ll let you know. Till then can you please find out who delivered them and who accepted the delivery.

Rena: Sure Captain, I’ll get right on that.

Kate went back into her office, still puzzled over the flowers. As she sat down, she began reviewing her messages. Several pertained to cases and three others were hang-ups. Kate was not sure yet what to make of those and instead focused on the mounting pile of files. Meanwhile, Rena was having difficulties trying to find the origin of the Captain’s flowers. Better yet, she couldn’t find a single person who had accepted the delivery. All of the inspectors had eaten lunch at their desks, and Stacey had gone out for food with her new man, David. All of the inspectors had gotten a chance to meet David earlier today, as he surprised Stacey with a lunch offer. Rena knocked on the Captain’s door.

Kate: Come in.

Rena: Sorry Captain, I haven’t had any luck tracking down the flower order, but I’ll keep trying.

Kate (looking rather perplexed): Thanks Rena. I just can’t think of anyone who would send them and not give a card too.

Tuesday 4:35

Mystery figure (starring at a picture of the Captain): I wonder how much you enjoyed those flowers today Kate? That is only the beginning of what I have planned for you. Soon you will wish that you could just die instead of living through the upcoming hell.

So what do you think???????

MovieHuntress17 · 06-13-2004, 11:21 AM

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! lol gonna post more soon??

Irish_Rose_Kate · 06-14-2004, 10:51 AM

I think this is awsome, and that you should post more soon...I do have a question though...Is rena...Raina??

candace~n~nathan · 06-14-2004, 12:50 PM

i really like this fic! it's a lot different from the others, so YAY!!

post more soon!

bananasplit · 06-14-2004, 05:01 PM

This is really good!!! Like candace~n~nathan said it isn't like any other ones out there. Post more soon!!!

gonedark · 06-14-2004, 06:33 PM

Wow! that is really good.Much better than mine!lol.
Post more soon, please!
Samantha*

mmsg · 06-16-2004, 08:55 AM

After a long day at work, Captain Kate McCafferty was looking forward to a peaceful and quiet evening at home. As she pulled into her driveway, she noticed a package propped up against her door. Grabbing her suit jacket, she locked the car and proceeded up the steps. Upon further inspection, the package was a long white box, the kind roses usually came in. Carefully, Kate grabbed the box and unlatched her front door. Dropping her suit jacket on the sofa, she went into the kitchen with the foreign box. Again, she looked for a note of some kind and found none. An uneasy feeling began in the pit of her stomach and traveled upwards.

Not knowing what to expect, Kate gingerly began opening the box. As she began to lift the lid off, confetti shot into the air and directly in her face with a loud pop! A letter was carefully placed on the inside of the box. It read: YOU ARE MINE….

Thanks for all the great replies. Keep 'em coming and I'll write more! Also, I have to apologize I did mean Raina but wrote Rena....sorry but thanks for pointing that out.

MovieHuntress17 · 06-16-2004, 11:43 AM

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! lol, Post more SOON!

bananasplit · 06-16-2004, 02:49 PM

Post more soon!!!

gonedark · 06-16-2004, 03:27 PM

Really good! only problem, to short, post more soon!!please.
Samantha*

candace~n~nathan · 06-16-2004, 05:54 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by gonedark
Really good! only problem, to short, post more soon!!please.
Samantha*

yep, i'm agreeing w/ that!!!!!!!

06-09-2004, 08:27 AM	#1
mmsg Member Occasional Poster Join Date: May 26, 2004 Posts: 42	Revenge One Year Earlier....... Live News Bulletin: Jonathan Smith was arrested on the charges of rape and murder. After a short trial in which DNA evidence was presented along with Captain Kate McCafferty testimony, Jonathan Smith was sentenced for life without the possibility of parole due to the violent nature of his crimes. Upon exiting the court room, Jonathan Smith swore his innocence and publicly announced his intent to get even with Captain McCafferty.

06-09-2004, 08:48 PM	#2
MovieHuntress17 #1 Actress ever Forum Regular Join Date: Oct 28, 2002 Location: "Over yonder" Posts: 886	Ooooooooo!! Post more soon!
	__________________ Howdy! :-D Stacy:Sorry to bother you. Cap:You've still got time to reconsider. Crazy is normal,and Normal is crazy! Optimism can be a real b!t(h sometimes. "I've discovered the hardest discovery to make is who you are."-Bonnie Bedelia. "It's Not reaching your dreams that counts. It's going towards them."-Cher Somebody once said(I don't remember who) "I know that God won't give me more then I can handle...I just wish he didn't trust me so much." <- - I liked that. God Bless EVERYONE ~Emma~

06-10-2004, 06:22 PM	#3
mmsg Member Occasional Poster Join Date: May 26, 2004 Posts: 42	Present...... Monday 8 a.m. Stacey was heading into the Division after a fun filled weekend with a large smile plastered across her face. Life was definately looking good from her perspective. More case files were being filtered in her direction, the captain wasen't pissed for any reasons, and a new love interest was just blossoming. Yep, life was good!!!!! Too bad the criminals couldn't take a break. But as Stacey sat down to begin working on paperwork, her mind drifted towards her new love interest. It was chance that had brought her and David together. They both had been at the same coffee shop exactly 2 weeks ago. David had been walking past Stacey, when he slipped on something. The result: two lost coffees and a budding new relationship. Stacey was called out of her musing by the captain's voice. Captain: Stacey! Stacey! Come back to Earth. Stacey: Sorry Captain, my mind must have wandered off for a minute. Captain: It sure must have headed in one hell of great direction. I have been trying to get your attention for severeal minutes now. Stacey (Cheeks burning): I'm sorry Captain. What can I do for you? Captain (grinning): Can you please file these and make sure that you don't drift off again. O.K. so things at the division could have run more smoothly for Stacey this morning. Focusing on the task at hand, Stacey went to file the reports and the Captain went back into her office. Little did either of them know, that the greatest challenge was yet to come. One of the hardest cases was just about to land in their laps.
	Last edited by mmsg; 06-12-2004 at 08:59 PM.

06-14-2004, 10:51 AM	#7
Irish_Rose_Kate Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 23, 2004 Location: Lost? I was looking for my way, but took a wrong turn, and will be forever lost. Posts: 248	I think this is awsome, and that you should post more soon...I do have a question though...Is rena...Raina??
	__________________ Val: Hey Karen, Guess who’s pregnant? Karen: (smiles): NOT ME! Val: Kate is! (that’s Brian’s fiancé. Val looks at Brian and Kate). Their getting married. Both Mac and Karen: Congratulations ( they both hug Brian and Kate.) Karen: (looks at Brian).: So I take it your mother doesn’t know? Brain: No. Val: (smiles excitedly). : Ohhhhh, let me tell her!! (everyone starts cracking up). Then Karen’s son and Mac’s stepson Michael and his wife pull up, and get out of the car. Karen: Michael what a surprise. What are you doing here? (Abby walks out side from Karen’s house, and she sees her nephew and. Michael: Aunt Abby. (He waits a beat then says) we’re going to have a baby! (Karen and Mac just stand there stunned for a minute. Abby: (Hugs Michael) Congratulations. A baby. (She starts walking past Karen.) Karen: (Still in shock) A baby? Abby: (does a double take). And... Karen....that means your going to be a...(starts laughing but trying to stop herself...but she just keeps laughing. Kate: Abby I don’t think you want to be laughing right now. Abby: (still trying to keep herself from laughing, but can’t help herself from laughing). : I can’t help it....(laughs) It’s just kind of struck me funny. (still laughing). Karen: Brian, why don’t you share your wonder full news with your mother. Brian: (trying to keep a striate face as well Gary, and Val give each other a high five. And everyone is laughing at this point. Brian clears his throat ) Ahemmm... ( the camera goes back to Karen and Abby. Abby realizes what’s going on now, and isn’t happy at all while Karen and everyone else is cracking up! Gary: (Camera shot back really quick to Gary, Val, Brain, and Kate. Jokingly Gary says) Grandma!(camera goes back to Karen and Abby, and once again everyone is laughing, and the picture freeze on the two of them and end of show).

06-14-2004, 12:50 PM	#8
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	i really like this fic! it's a lot different from the others, so YAY!! post more soon!
	__________________ Drunk guy: What's her name? Is it Jennifer? It's usually Jennifer. Is it Heather? Sometimes it's Heather. Nate- It's Candace. But we, uh, call her CD.

06-11-2004, 02:57 PM	#4
MovieHuntress17 #1 Actress ever Forum Regular Join Date: Oct 28, 2002 Location: "Over yonder" Posts: 886	Post more soon! I wanna know what the case is!! lol

06-12-2004, 08:58 PM	#5
mmsg Member Occasional Poster Join Date: May 26, 2004 Posts: 42	Tuesday 8:45 a.m. Magda and Jinny were busy investigating an arson case. Nate was busy looking into a potential homicide, while Stacey and Rena were performing an interview with a key witness. Everything seemed to be running smoothly. Alone in her office, Kate McCafferty was sorting through paperwork when her phone began to ring. “McCafferty here”. There was no answer on the other end. Kate thought that to be rather strange but chalked it up to a wrong number. When it occurred for the second time within a 30 min period, she began to wonder. Usually police chiefs don’t get crank phone calls. With a shrug of her shoulders, Kate headed to a scheduled meeting with Hasbert, another irritation. Tuesday 1:00 P.M. Kate just returned from her meeting with Hasbert. As she entered her office, she noticed a bouquet of beautiful red roses. With uncertainty, she looked around for a card to gather a clue as to who sent them. Finding none, Kate walked out of her office and called out to the inspectors. Kate: Hey guys do you know who sent the flowers in my office? Rena: Cap, we just assumed that you had a new love interest and were holding out on us. Kate: Very funny, Rena. Seriously, when I do get one, I’ll let you know. Till then can you please find out who delivered them and who accepted the delivery. Rena: Sure Captain, I’ll get right on that. Kate went back into her office, still puzzled over the flowers. As she sat down, she began reviewing her messages. Several pertained to cases and three others were hang-ups. Kate was not sure yet what to make of those and instead focused on the mounting pile of files. Meanwhile, Rena was having difficulties trying to find the origin of the Captain’s flowers. Better yet, she couldn’t find a single person who had accepted the delivery. All of the inspectors had eaten lunch at their desks, and Stacey had gone out for food with her new man, David. All of the inspectors had gotten a chance to meet David earlier today, as he surprised Stacey with a lunch offer. Rena knocked on the Captain’s door. Kate: Come in. Rena: Sorry Captain, I haven’t had any luck tracking down the flower order, but I’ll keep trying. Kate (looking rather perplexed): Thanks Rena. I just can’t think of anyone who would send them and not give a card too. Tuesday 4:35 Mystery figure (starring at a picture of the Captain): I wonder how much you enjoyed those flowers today Kate? That is only the beginning of what I have planned for you. Soon you will wish that you could just die instead of living through the upcoming hell. So what do you think???????

06-13-2004, 11:21 AM	#6
MovieHuntress17 #1 Actress ever Forum Regular Join Date: Oct 28, 2002 Location: "Over yonder" Posts: 886	Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! lol gonna post more soon??

06-14-2004, 05:01 PM	#9
bananasplit 'Whatsoever' Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 04, 2003 Location: Chi-Town Posts: 786	This is really good!!! Like candace~n~nathan said it isn't like any other ones out there. Post more soon!!!
	__________________ She's a rebel She's a saint She's salt of the earth And she's dangerous "People who are very beautiful make up their own laws."

06-14-2004, 06:33 PM	#10
gonedark Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2004 Posts: 114	Wow! Wow! that is really good.Much better than mine!lol. Post more soon, please! Samantha*

06-16-2004, 08:55 AM	#11
mmsg Member Occasional Poster Join Date: May 26, 2004 Posts: 42	After a long day at work, Captain Kate McCafferty was looking forward to a peaceful and quiet evening at home. As she pulled into her driveway, she noticed a package propped up against her door. Grabbing her suit jacket, she locked the car and proceeded up the steps. Upon further inspection, the package was a long white box, the kind roses usually came in. Carefully, Kate grabbed the box and unlatched her front door. Dropping her suit jacket on the sofa, she went into the kitchen with the foreign box. Again, she looked for a note of some kind and found none. An uneasy feeling began in the pit of her stomach and traveled upwards. Not knowing what to expect, Kate gingerly began opening the box. As she began to lift the lid off, confetti shot into the air and directly in her face with a loud pop! A letter was carefully placed on the inside of the box. It read: YOU ARE MINE…. Thanks for all the great replies. Keep 'em coming and I'll write more! Also, I have to apologize I did mean Raina but wrote Rena....sorry but thanks for pointing that out.

06-16-2004, 11:43 AM	#12
MovieHuntress17 #1 Actress ever Forum Regular Join Date: Oct 28, 2002 Location: "Over yonder" Posts: 886	Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! lol, Post more SOON!

06-16-2004, 02:49 PM	#13
bananasplit 'Whatsoever' Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 04, 2003 Location: Chi-Town Posts: 786	Post more soon!!!

06-16-2004, 03:27 PM	#14
gonedark Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2004 Posts: 114	Wow, Again!! Really good! only problem, to short, post more soon!!please. Samantha*