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Shortcake31 · 05-15-2004, 12:28 PM

One Day at the division CD was found in the bathroom, she was throwing up. She felt sick all day. She thought to her self, 'Why am I sick know I didn't eat anything bad.

Jinny walks into the bathroom and sees CD washing her face.
Thinking to herself, 'she doesn't look to good.'

Jinny: CD are you okay?

CD: *startled because of Jinny* Yeah I'm fine. *sees that Jinny is giving her a look that says "yeah right tell me the truth."*
What?

Jinny: Come on CD, tell me the truth.

CD: Okay, I have been feeling sick all day and I have no idea why.

Jinny: Did you eat or drink anything that could have made you feel this way?

CD: No. I am late though *sees yet another look from Jinny* DON'T GO THERE!!!

Jinny: Oh come on, I have to.

CD: I can't afford a baby and-

Jinny: Oh please, besides you won't be alone. And you don't for sure that you are pregnant yet. I will go pick up a test. *leaves*

***********

A few minutes later Jinny comes back with the test and CD follows the instructions and does her business.

Finally it was time to find out

Jinny: *seeing CD hesitate to look* Want me to do it? CD nodds

Jinny:*makes a smile as she sees what the test says:

CD: What?

Jinny: You're pregnant!

That is it for today............ so tell me what you think. And I better get some replies. I don't just mean one or two, a lot

CandyBasso · 05-15-2004, 12:32 PM

Yaayyy!!!! New fic!!! It was a great start!Please continue!

Snowfall · 05-16-2004, 12:41 AM

That was really great! Keep going!

But don't plan on getting lots of replies. There's nothing wrong at all with your fic----there just aren't a lot of replies going on around here lately. I usually only get one or two replies, sometimes three.

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 05-16-2004, 01:26 PM

Very true Tara. I haven't been replying myself. *Slaps hand* Bad me!!! I like this fic. Post more soon.

MinnIeMcKeOn · 05-16-2004, 04:54 PM

Keep going!! I ThiNk im goNNa like ThiS oNe!! x0x0Jessie

Shortcake31 · 05-16-2004, 04:56 PM

Here you go............more..I know about the replies I was just tryin to motivate everyone!!!
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CD: What!!!

Jinny: YOU'RE PREGNANT!!!

CD: OMG, that's great

Jinny: Wait a second I thought *getting cut off by CD*

CD: I changed my mind. I mean I was scared about it at first, but when you said all of you would be there for me I changed my mind. I want this baby.

Jinny: That's great CD. And you don't have to worry we will. So when are you going to tell everyone?

CD: When ever I feel the time is right.

Jinny: Whose the father?

CD: Nate. *saying that without hesitation*

Jinny Wow, well I kind of has a feeling. Are you going to tell him?

CD: Probably the first person I tell

Jinny: Really, you are not nervous at all?

CD: Well at first, but when I realized how much he wants kids. I thought it wouldn't be so bad. I mean he would talk about wanting kids everytime we were on a stakeout or just talking in the car. Jinny, think about it I am giving him what he has dreamed of having.

Jinny: That's great, so when are you going to tell him?

CD: Tonight over dinner.

*As they are walking back to the bullpen*

Jinny: Well CD I am glad you are not to afraid to tell him

CD: Me too!

*scene fades*
*********************
That's all for right now.........more?

Snowfall · 05-17-2004, 01:13 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Shortcake31
Here you go............more..I know about the replies I was just tryin to motivate everyone!!!
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Jinny: Whose the father?

CD: Nate. *saying that without hesitation*

Jinny Wow, well I kind of has a feeling. Are you going to tell him?

CD: Probably the first person I tell

LOL, OK, I gotcha. And I LOVED that part so much! I can so see CD saying that!

Here's your first reply---post more soon!

CandyBasso · 05-17-2004, 01:35 PM

Awww.........I'm so glad CD's happy about the baby! Post more! She has to tell Nate!!!!

Shortcake31 · 05-20-2004, 02:50 PM

Here you go guys ............MORE!!
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It was later that night and CD and Nate were at dinner

CD: Nate.

Nate: Yeah?

CD: I have something to tell you.

Nate: Okay, what is it?

CD: I'm pregnant and you're the father. But if you don't want it I acn have an abortion.

Nate: OMG!! CD that's amazing! And as far as an abortion, are you crazy, of course I want it.

CD: Oh god Nate, I love you so much, and I am glad that you are my baby's father.

Nate: I love you just as much, and I am glad that I am your baby's father too! *they move in a kiss like there is no tomorrow*

Both of them ate dinner and left to go to CD's place for the rest of the night*

Sorry guys that's all for now. I have Graduation today and I am so busy. I will get back and post as soon as I can.

and sorry for it being so short.

Snowfall · 05-21-2004, 12:38 AM

Awww, that was so sweet! This is such a great fic! And happy graduation!

Post more soon.

CandyBasso · 05-23-2004, 11:34 AM

Awwwww that was so sweet! I'm glad Nate's happy about the baby! Post more!

Swimgirl587 · 05-24-2004, 01:13 PM

I just wanted to let you know that yet again my f***ing computer kicked me off the boards again so I had to yet again create another SN. I am sorry for having so many, but my computer is the one you should be mad at.

Thanks for your cooperation guys

Swimgirl587 · 05-28-2004, 07:22 PM

okay where did my readers go. Oh yeah, it's a CD and Nate fanfic so they don't like it. So it's okay if I stop posting.

Snowfall · 05-29-2004, 01:20 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Swimgirl587
okay where did my readers go. Oh yeah, it's a CD and Nate fanfic so they don't like it. So it's okay if I stop posting.

I'm here, I'm here! I didn't reply because you didn't post any new fic last time. And, eh, about the CD/Nate haters, forget them!!!! Haha. They're missing out on some of the best storylines ever.

I'm always up for some CD/Nate fic, so post soon!

CandyBasso · 05-29-2004, 01:22 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Swimgirl587
okay where did my readers go. Oh yeah, it's a CD and Nate fanfic so they don't like it. So it's okay if I stop posting.

NO, it is NOT ok if you stop posting!!!! I love CD/Nate fics!!!! So get your butt back here and post more!!!!!!!!

05-15-2004, 12:28 PM	#1
Shortcake31 TN rocks the house. Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 08, 2004 Location: Tracey Needham Posts: 35	A Precious Gift- CD/Nate One Day at the division CD was found in the bathroom, she was throwing up. She felt sick all day. She thought to her self, 'Why am I sick know I didn't eat anything bad. Jinny walks into the bathroom and sees CD washing her face. Thinking to herself, 'she doesn't look to good.' Jinny: CD are you okay? CD: startled because of Jinny Yeah I'm fine. sees that Jinny is giving her a look that says "yeah right tell me the truth." What? Jinny: Come on CD, tell me the truth. CD: Okay, I have been feeling sick all day and I have no idea why. Jinny: Did you eat or drink anything that could have made you feel this way? CD: No. I am late though sees yet another look from Jinny DON'T GO THERE!!! Jinny: Oh come on, I have to. CD: I can't afford a baby and- Jinny: Oh please, besides you won't be alone. And you don't for sure that you are pregnant yet. I will go pick up a test. leaves *********** A few minutes later Jinny comes back with the test and CD follows the instructions and does her business. Finally it was time to find out Jinny: seeing CD hesitate to look Want me to do it? CD nodds Jinny:*makes a smile as she sees what the test says: CD: What? Jinny: You're pregnant! That is it for today............ so tell me what you think. And I better get some replies. I don't just mean one or two, a lot
	__________________ "I like to punch people. People who ask questions." CD DeLorenzo Last edited by Shortcake31; 05-15-2004 at 04:09 PM.

05-15-2004, 12:32 PM	#2
CandyBasso Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 09, 2004 Location: Drooling over Jay picture Posts: 120	Yaayyy!!!! New fic!!! It was a great start!Please continue!
	__________________ Rasa I used to be Planet_stella, but my SN doesn't work anymore...

05-16-2004, 12:41 AM	#3
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	That was really great! Keep going! But don't plan on getting lots of replies. There's nothing wrong at all with your fic----there just aren't a lot of replies going on around here lately. I usually only get one or two replies, sometimes three.
	__________________ Nate: When somebody asks for the salt, you hand them the pepper, too, even if they didn't ask for both. You never separate the salt and the pepper. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Luke: Will you marry me? Lorelai: What? Luke: Anything to shut you up.

05-16-2004, 04:54 PM	#5
MinnIeMcKeOn NMKMarCAurora* Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 13, 2004 Location: Levittown, Pa..wish HollyWooD though! Posts: 64	Go! Keep going!! I ThiNk im goNNa like ThiS oNe!! x0x0Jessie
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05-24-2004, 01:13 PM	#12
Swimgirl587 Tracey is the bomb! Occasional Poster Join Date: May 24, 2004 Location: Tracey Needham Posts: 66	I just wanted to let you know that yet again my f***ing computer kicked me off the boards again so I had to yet again create another SN. I am sorry for having so many, but my computer is the one you should be mad at. Thanks for your cooperation guys
	__________________ Amor, no es amor (Si no es amor) es una ilusion (es una ilusion) tan llena de dolor Amor, no es amor (Si no es amor) es una obcesion (es una obcesion) dentro mi corazon Amor, no es amor (if this aint love) Then what am I feeling (what am I doing wrong) Amor, no es amor (if this aint love) Is this an illusion that I have in my heart?

05-16-2004, 01:26 PM	#4
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Very true Tara. I haven't been replying myself. Slaps hand Bad me!!! I like this fic. Post more soon.

05-16-2004, 04:56 PM	#6
Shortcake31 TN rocks the house. Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 08, 2004 Location: Tracey Needham Posts: 35	Here you go............more..I know about the replies I was just tryin to motivate everyone!!! **************************************************** CD: What!!! Jinny: YOU'RE PREGNANT!!! CD: OMG, that's great Jinny: Wait a second I thought getting cut off by CD CD: I changed my mind. I mean I was scared about it at first, but when you said all of you would be there for me I changed my mind. I want this baby. Jinny: That's great CD. And you don't have to worry we will. So when are you going to tell everyone? CD: When ever I feel the time is right. Jinny: Whose the father? CD: Nate. saying that without hesitation Jinny Wow, well I kind of has a feeling. Are you going to tell him? CD: Probably the first person I tell Jinny: Really, you are not nervous at all? CD: Well at first, but when I realized how much he wants kids. I thought it wouldn't be so bad. I mean he would talk about wanting kids everytime we were on a stakeout or just talking in the car. Jinny, think about it I am giving him what he has dreamed of having. Jinny: That's great, so when are you going to tell him? CD: Tonight over dinner. As they are walking back to the bullpen Jinny: Well CD I am glad you are not to afraid to tell him CD: Me too! scene fades ********************* That's all for right now.........more?

05-17-2004, 01:35 PM	#8
CandyBasso Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 09, 2004 Location: Drooling over Jay picture Posts: 120	Awww.........I'm so glad CD's happy about the baby! Post more! She has to tell Nate!!!!

05-20-2004, 02:50 PM	#9
Shortcake31 TN rocks the house. Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 08, 2004 Location: Tracey Needham Posts: 35	Here you go guys ............MORE!! **************************************************** It was later that night and CD and Nate were at dinner CD: Nate. Nate: Yeah? CD: I have something to tell you. Nate: Okay, what is it? CD: I'm pregnant and you're the father. But if you don't want it I acn have an abortion. Nate: OMG!! CD that's amazing! And as far as an abortion, are you crazy, of course I want it. CD: Oh god Nate, I love you so much, and I am glad that you are my baby's father. Nate: I love you just as much, and I am glad that I am your baby's father too! they move in a kiss like there is no tomorrow Both of them ate dinner and left to go to CD's place for the rest of the night* Sorry guys that's all for now. I have Graduation today and I am so busy. I will get back and post as soon as I can. and sorry for it being so short.

05-21-2004, 12:38 AM	#10
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	Awww, that was so sweet! This is such a great fic! And happy graduation! Post more soon.

05-23-2004, 11:34 AM	#11
CandyBasso Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 09, 2004 Location: Drooling over Jay picture Posts: 120	Awwwww that was so sweet! I'm glad Nate's happy about the baby! Post more!

05-28-2004, 07:22 PM	#13
Swimgirl587 Tracey is the bomb! Occasional Poster Join Date: May 24, 2004 Location: Tracey Needham Posts: 66	okay where did my readers go. Oh yeah, it's a CD and Nate fanfic so they don't like it. So it's okay if I stop posting.