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Shortcake31 · 05-12-2004, 10:20 PM

I have an I idea for a CD and Nate fanfic. They are married and are expecting a baby. And Nate of course is being over protective and driving Cd crazy. ]

And also if you have any ideas to make it better, please to hesitate to tell me. I am open for any new ideas.

THANKS!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 05-12-2004, 11:12 PM

uhm, no offense but isn't that in about every fanfic here in some variation? I mean I haven't been around much and I still have LOADS to catch up on when it comes to reading fic... (which is why I haven't been posting feedback... sorry) but yeah well, I think you need a little more than that. Maybe something like CD is feeling sick, she goes to the doc, the doc makes tests and so on, then later the doc calls while she isn't home, and tells Nate that she's pregnant. Since Nate knows that she doesn't want kids, he is scared she'd get an abortion and tells her it was just the flu and then gets overprotective with her because he knows she's pregnant and tries to keep her from finding out, for now at least. That'd be new. LOL I like that idea, maybe I'ma write it myself.

Snowfall · 05-13-2004, 12:38 AM

Eh, yeah, that's what most of the CD/Nate fics are around here, but that's only because we LOVE that so much!!!!!!!!!

I, for one, am very glad to read any happy CD/Nate fic. Cat's suggestion sounds good, too. Can't wait for it!

Shortcake31 · 05-13-2004, 05:02 PM

I know that almost every fic has this as a topic. So that is why I asked for your ideas to juice it up. And CD DeLorenzo I like your idea. I won't steal it though so I am asking you if I could use it, but write it in my own way (okay that didn't make sense) I hope you got that. So can I? I am asking for permission.

Irish_Rose_Kate · 05-14-2004, 12:27 PM

Hmmm it's a good idea, but with every good story there has to be Darma/comedy. And for me, as most people who know me know that I don't like a that love and mushy stuff, but sometimes I can take it. my Adivise to you would be add drama. Something I just thought about that I don't think anyway anyone has posted about is maybe a birth defect. Or something along those lines, cause if, ya do that then no matter what you could have CD, and nate there for each other, and there love grow each time there is a problem with the baby..and have problems and stuff...Like maybe CD has post Tramatick sp stress disordor, so even though the baby has help problmes CD Can't bring herself to see the baby. And Nate gets up set with her, and says, "This happend becuase you didn't want to have a baby...but then in the end you know everything works out, and they live happily ever after... all this is up to you, but it's just antoher idea that I have that you could use, that I don't think has been used. LOL anyway good luck with your fic!!!

*Nancy Mckeon* · 05-28-2004, 05:11 PM

no. i hate it. if you add Jin and Teddy i might read it though

Snowfall · 05-29-2004, 01:24 AM

Shortcake, I don't hate it. Write what you want to write, because writing your fic is supposed to be fun for you . Can't wait for it!

05-12-2004, 10:20 PM	#1
Shortcake31 TN rocks the house. Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 08, 2004 Location: Tracey Needham Posts: 35	Idea for New fanfic.........Do you like it? I have an I idea for a CD and Nate fanfic. They are married and are expecting a baby. And Nate of course is being over protective and driving Cd crazy. ] And also if you have any ideas to make it better, please to hesitate to tell me. I am open for any new ideas. THANKS!!!
	__________________ "I like to punch people. People who ask questions." CD DeLorenzo

05-12-2004, 11:12 PM	#2
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	uhm, no offense but isn't that in about every fanfic here in some variation? I mean I haven't been around much and I still have LOADS to catch up on when it comes to reading fic... (which is why I haven't been posting feedback... sorry) but yeah well, I think you need a little more than that. Maybe something like CD is feeling sick, she goes to the doc, the doc makes tests and so on, then later the doc calls while she isn't home, and tells Nate that she's pregnant. Since Nate knows that she doesn't want kids, he is scared she'd get an abortion and tells her it was just the flu and then gets overprotective with her because he knows she's pregnant and tries to keep her from finding out, for now at least. That'd be new. LOL I like that idea, maybe I'ma write it myself.
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05-13-2004, 12:38 AM	#3
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	Eh, yeah, that's what most of the CD/Nate fics are around here, but that's only because we LOVE that so much!!!!!!!!! I, for one, am very glad to read any happy CD/Nate fic. Cat's suggestion sounds good, too. Can't wait for it!
	__________________ Nate: When somebody asks for the salt, you hand them the pepper, too, even if they didn't ask for both. You never separate the salt and the pepper. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Luke: Will you marry me? Lorelai: What? Luke: Anything to shut you up.

05-14-2004, 12:27 PM	#5
Irish_Rose_Kate Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 23, 2004 Location: Lost? I was looking for my way, but took a wrong turn, and will be forever lost. Posts: 248	Hmmm it's a good idea, but with every good story there has to be Darma/comedy. And for me, as most people who know me know that I don't like a that love and mushy stuff, but sometimes I can take it. my Adivise to you would be add drama. Something I just thought about that I don't think anyway anyone has posted about is maybe a birth defect. Or something along those lines, cause if, ya do that then no matter what you could have CD, and nate there for each other, and there love grow each time there is a problem with the baby..and have problems and stuff...Like maybe CD has post Tramatick sp stress disordor, so even though the baby has help problmes CD Can't bring herself to see the baby. And Nate gets up set with her, and says, "This happend becuase you didn't want to have a baby...but then in the end you know everything works out, and they live happily ever after... all this is up to you, but it's just antoher idea that I have that you could use, that I don't think has been used. LOL anyway good luck with your fic!!!
	__________________ Val: Hey Karen, Guess who’s pregnant? Karen: (smiles): NOT ME! Val: Kate is! (that’s Brian’s fiancé. Val looks at Brian and Kate). Their getting married. Both Mac and Karen: Congratulations ( they both hug Brian and Kate.) Karen: (looks at Brian).: So I take it your mother doesn’t know? Brain: No. Val: (smiles excitedly). : Ohhhhh, let me tell her!! (everyone starts cracking up). Then Karen’s son and Mac’s stepson Michael and his wife pull up, and get out of the car. Karen: Michael what a surprise. What are you doing here? (Abby walks out side from Karen’s house, and she sees her nephew and. Michael: Aunt Abby. (He waits a beat then says) we’re going to have a baby! (Karen and Mac just stand there stunned for a minute. Abby: (Hugs Michael) Congratulations. A baby. (She starts walking past Karen.) Karen: (Still in shock) A baby? Abby: (does a double take). And... Karen....that means your going to be a...(starts laughing but trying to stop herself...but she just keeps laughing. Kate: Abby I don’t think you want to be laughing right now. Abby: (still trying to keep herself from laughing, but can’t help herself from laughing). : I can’t help it....(laughs) It’s just kind of struck me funny. (still laughing). Karen: Brian, why don’t you share your wonder full news with your mother. Brian: (trying to keep a striate face as well Gary, and Val give each other a high five. And everyone is laughing at this point. Brian clears his throat ) Ahemmm... ( the camera goes back to Karen and Abby. Abby realizes what’s going on now, and isn’t happy at all while Karen and everyone else is cracking up! Gary: (Camera shot back really quick to Gary, Val, Brain, and Kate. Jokingly Gary says) Grandma!(camera goes back to Karen and Abby, and once again everyone is laughing, and the picture freeze on the two of them and end of show).

05-28-2004, 05:11 PM	#6
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	no. i hate it. if you add Jin and Teddy i might read it though
	__________________ Jenn Goodnight, Sleep tight, No more tears. In the morning, Ill be here, And when we say goodnight Dry your eyes. Because we said goodnight, not goodbye We said goodnight, not goodbye ~ Evanescence~

05-13-2004, 05:02 PM	#4
Shortcake31 TN rocks the house. Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 08, 2004 Location: Tracey Needham Posts: 35	I know that almost every fic has this as a topic. So that is why I asked for your ideas to juice it up. And CD DeLorenzo I like your idea. I won't steal it though so I am asking you if I could use it, but write it in my own way (okay that didn't make sense) I hope you got that. So can I? I am asking for permission.

05-29-2004, 01:24 AM	#7
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	Shortcake, I don't hate it. Write what you want to write, because writing your fic is supposed to be fun for you . Can't wait for it!