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04-26-2004, 09:08 PM
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New fan fiction..called...Jinnys road to death
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 In bed when Magda and Jack woke her up and she was in bed after she had that dream about the Captain and her dead mother..its a part to "Baby its cold outside".)Magda: (Looks at Jack and goes to hug him) Jack Hugs Magda back)Magda: We did it.. Jack: Yeah..guess so huh? Magda: Mhmm..but shes.. Jack: Got a long way to go... Magda: So we made it the worst 72 hours right..so when will the next bad cravings hit again?.. Jack: I think this is the worst shes going to feel for about 2 weeks and then itll come back for a short time again and then go away and get less harsh on her. Magda: Im going to go uh fix Jinny a plate... Jack: Yeah..yeah how about roast beef..on a sandwhich? Magda: Uh..no I think we should give her something light like Zesta crackers with a drink and then ya know what..we can get her some takeout I mean treat her and make her feel good that she did something good these past 72 hours. Jack: Your right! Magda: You know, I was so scared when I saw Jinny like this. This really takes me back..to Jinnys intervention not that long ago. Jack you werent there so you didnt see how emotional it was... Jack: (Gives her a look like theres more than meets the eye) Magda: I know my partner...and the way she is..but sometimes its just easy to see through her when you look at her and teh way she acts and all. It is hard seeing her like that all the time at work when she means alot to you as a best friend, a person, and a partner. Im just glad shes okay..bottom line. x0x0Jessie..more later to more drama lol bye |
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04-26-2004, 09:12 PM
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04-28-2004, 08:26 PM
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good to know someone knows that Jinny still exists.. CD and Nate suck!
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04-28-2004, 09:02 PM
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Mores
Tya JinnY heres more*
Starts In Jinny&Jacks bedroom)Jinny: (lays there looking around and feels like shes refreshed and good as new) Jack: (Comes in) Hey, uh Jin..me and Mag fixed ya up some crackers and juice. Jinny: (Sits up a little and grabs it still looking confused) Jack: Something light for your stomach ...for now I mean. Jinny: (Sighs) Umm..thank..thank you. Jack: No problem..Look Jin anything you need you just holler..okay? Jinny: Yeah..I know. Jack Leaves the room slowly)Magda Walks in apartment)Jack: Hey Mag you got her favorite Chinese. Magda: Well I picked out the stuff that would be not too harsh on her stomach. Jack: Thanks, Mag..I really love you for this..Jinny is really lucky. Magda: Ya know what dont mention it I love Jinny and I want her to live and for her to be well. Jack: God she doesnt know how special she is..god really has Jinny in a special place. She just doesnt know it. (In Jinnys room) Magda: (Knocks lightly) Jinny: (Is in a daze and then jumps up) Uh who is it.. Magda: Its Magda can I talk to you? Jinny: Ohh sure Mag come in ..come in. Magda: (Comes in looking relieved) H..i Jinny. Jinny: Hi Mag umm..sit..sit. Magda: Jinny you know, I am so glad..that.....your okay and proud of you that you did this. Jinny: Yeah..and.... Magda: (stops looking down and looks up) Jinny: I want to thank you so much that you did this for me..I mean you really didnt have to go through this for me.. or Jack. I mean..(getting a little worked up) I am so scared..and... you stuck by me. All the way. You could of told the Captain and all. I could of lost my job already. God..I didnt tell you this..yet in front of Jack but I guess I drifted off to sleep and I had this..vision. Ya know..and it was the captain and she was telling me how I am needed so much back at the station and all this stuff. (She said looking down) I was a bit confused. But it really scared the **** out of me when she found teh drugs I imagined I had hid in the back of the portrait ..hanging...ohh..(sighs) Magda: Jin.. Jinny: (she looked up again) Then I looked up after Captain had left..and I realized I was staring at my mom..(she said worked up with her eyes watering and a tear running down her cheek) Magda: (Stares in sadness and begins to feel for her and put herslef in her place for a moment)..(then she realizes something) Ohh..my gosh... Jinny: (Tips over and begins to hallusinate) Magda: Jinny..Jin..touches her face and body and she was cold) Jinny: (Looks paler than before) Magda: (Gasps and places her ahnd over her mouth..Jack!) (She yells as she runs out of the room and looks for him and didnt hear an answer) Magda: Oh my..where is he (she said to herself getting panicy) Magda: Jack! Jack! Jack! (She yelled as her voice gets shakier) Magda: (Turns corner and checks in bathroom because she stops noticing the door is shut) Magda: (Looks mysterious and slowly goes to reach for it and then opens quickly)!! (Noone appears in there) Jinny: (Stumbles behind Magda in a blurry backround) Magda: (Hears something and slowly turns around) Jinny: (Half holding on to the wall and half up) Magda: Jinny!.. Jinny: (Stumbles up to Mag slowly like a zombie) Magda: Jin..(she looks at her weirdly) wha..__ Jinny: (Stares at Mag as her eyes are teary and a little bloodshot) (she has her hand behins her back) Magda: (Breathes heavily looking around as shes up against the bathroom door) Umm..Jinny please your..scaring me. Please talk to me. Jinny: (Smirks a little as she takes her hand from behind her back and_________ x0x0Jessie more soon* byez x0x0Jess 
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04-28-2004, 09:20 PM
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mooooorrrrreeeee!!! the end was creepy...but creepy's good! i like creepy!
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04-28-2004, 09:43 PM
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Re: Mores
[QUOTE]Originally posted by MinnIeMcKeOn
[B]Tya JinnY heres more* Starts In Jinny&Jacks bedroom)Jinny: (lays there looking around and feels like shes refreshed and good as new) Jack: (Comes in) Hey, uh Jin..me and Mag fixed ya up some crackers and juice. Jinny: (Sits up a little and grabs it still looking confused) Jack: Something light for your stomach ...for now I mean. Jinny: (Sighs) Umm..thank..thank you. Jack: No problem..Look Jin anything you need you just holler..okay? Jinny: Yeah..I know. Jack Leaves the room slowly)Magda Walks in apartment)Jack: Hey Mag you got her favorite Chinese. Magda: Well I picked out the stuff that would be not too harsh on her stomach. Jack: Thanks, Mag..I really love you for this..Jinny is really lucky. Magda: Ya know what dont mention it I love Jinny and I want her to live and for her to be well. Jack: God she doesnt know how special she is..god really has Jinny in a special place. She just doesnt know it. (In Jinnys room) Magda: (Knocks lightly) Jinny: (Is in a daze and then jumps up) Uh who is it.. Magda: Its Magda can I talk to you? Jinny: Ohh sure Mag come in ..come in. Magda: (Comes in looking relieved) H..i Jinny. Jinny: Hi Mag umm..sit..sit. Magda: Jinny you know, I am so glad..that.....your okay and proud of you that you did this. Jinny: Yeah..and.... Magda: (stops looking down and looks up) Jinny: I want to thank you so much that you did this for me..I mean you really didnt have to go through this for me.. or Jack. I mean..(getting a little worked up) I am so scared..and... you stuck by me. All the way. You could of told the Captain and all. I could of lost my job already. God..I didnt tell you this..yet in front of Jack but I guess I drifted off to sleep and I had this..vision. Ya know..and it was the captain and she was telling me how I am needed so much back at the station and all this stuff. (She said looking down) I was a bit confused. But it really scared the **** out of me when she found teh drugs I imagined I had hid in the back of the portrait ..hanging...ohh..(sighs) Magda: Jin.. Jinny: (she looked up again) Then I looked up after Captain had left..and I realized I was staring at my mom..(she said worked up with her eyes watering and a tear running down her cheek) Magda: (Stares in sadness and begins to feel for her and put herslef in her place for a moment)..(then she realizes something) Ohh..my gosh... Jinny: (Tips over and begins to hallusinate) Magda: Jinny..Jin..touches her face and body and she was cold) Jinny: (Looks paler than before) Magda: (Gasps and places her ahnd over her mouth..Jack!) (She yells as she runs out of the room and looks for him and didnt hear an answer) Magda: Oh my..where is he (she said to herself getting panicy) Magda: Jack! Jack! Jack! (She yelled as her voice gets shakier) Magda: (Turns corner and checks in bathroom because she stops noticing the door is shut) Magda: (Looks mysterious and slowly goes to reach for it and then opens quickly)!! (Noone appears in there) Jinny: (Stumbles behind Magda in a blurry backround) Magda: (Hears something and slowly turns around) Jinny: (Half holding on to the wall and half up) Magda: Jinny!.. Jinny: (Stumbles up to Mag slowly like a zombie) Magda: Jin..(she looks at her weirdly) wha..__ Jinny: (Stares at Mag as her eyes are teary and a little bloodshot) (she has her hand behins her back) Magda: (Breathes heavily looking around as shes up against the bathroom door) Umm..Jinny please your..scaring me. Please talk to me. Jinny: (Smirks a little as she takes her hand from behind her back and_________ x0x0Jessie more soon* byez x0x0Jess Jinny: (Smirks a little as she takes her hand from behind her back and slips out her police gun) Magda: (Looks down with eyes bulged out) Oh..Jinny please! (Slow motion as she panics) Jinny: (In slow motion a bit) (Points it at her)(Tears stream down her face and pour under her eyes) Magda: Jinny..please (she begged shaking) Jinny: (Stared in a crazy matter) (Her head tipped over) (Froze quiet) Jinny: (Suddenly screams hysterically) (With gun vibrating in her hand) Magda Takes deep breath and walks over and grabs gun)Jinny: (Drops to ground and screams hysterically) Go aw..ay. Pl..please just ....(breathes heavily and begins to hallusinate again)(Begins to moan and cough) Magda: (Stars to sweat and walks over as her legs are shaking in fear and feeling partially numb)(Rubs her back and then Jinny starts to vomit and a little bit of blood squirts out) Jinny: (Wipes her mouth and then looks at Magda and is silent for a moment and so is Magda)(Drops back on ground and moans and then crys a little) Magda: (Gets up uneasily and then rushes to the phone) Magda: (As she dials she is thinking that she is not going to take a chance of having to take Jinny into her own hands at this stage shes in.) x0x0jessie more soons!! |
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04-28-2004, 09:45 PM
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mmmmooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeee!!!!!!!! k, now i gotta go READ what you wrote.......i just know ill want more
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04-28-2004, 09:48 PM
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k, i read it! the puking part was kinda gross though...did she puke ON Magda?? i hope so..i don't like Magda. LOL mmooooorrrrrrreeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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04-28-2004, 09:49 PM
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I know I definitly want more
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04-28-2004, 10:06 PM
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Reply
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Kitchen where the phone is)Magda: (Dials 911) (She was also thinking about Captain getting this information somehow but for now its kept secret still) (After she was done they had the people from the mental help center come over just in case she got out of hand) Magda Goes back to hallway to find Jinny and as she does she thinks of Jack and gets clueless for a moment)Magda: Looks around hallway* What..uh..Jin..ny.. (Shes missing) Magda: (Heart beats faster and starts to feel panicy again and freaked because she doesnt know what is goign to happen next) (Then a thought had just zoomed through her mind..I still havent found Jack and thats all shes thinking about as she quietly goes through apartment) Magda: (Turns to the guest room) Magda: Remembers that she had placed her purse on teh nightstand and her cop things so she stepped in there and shut door so quietly) (Pulls out her cell and calls Gabe and tells him to come over now and that she has Jinnys address on teh fridge) Relax Magda...(Breathes lightly)(She says to herself) Magda: (Pulls out her gun and loads it just in case but hates to do it) (Opens door slowly again and peeks out and then steps out to the hallway holding her gun like she was at a criminals home) Magda: (Starts to cry a little) (She looks up and then down and spots a little half way trail of blood leading somewhere..) Magda: (Moans and shakes a little more panicy) x0x0Jessie more laters |
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04-28-2004, 10:13 PM
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holy crap!! this is like the movie Halloween!! lol whatever ya'll do,DON'T look out the window!! LOL mmmooorrrrreeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
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04-29-2004, 04:04 PM
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Re: Reply
[QUOTE]Originally posted by MinnIeMcKeOn
[B]Starts Kitchen where the phone is)Magda: (Dials 911) (She was also thinking about Captain getting this information somehow but for now its kept secret still) (After she was done they had the people from the mental help center come over just in case she got out of hand) Magda Goes back to hallway to find Jinny and as she does she thinks of Jack and gets clueless for a moment)Magda: Looks around hallway* What..uh..Jin..ny.. (Shes missing) Magda: (Heart beats faster and starts to feel panicy again and freaked because she doesnt know what is goign to happen next) (Then a thought had just zoomed through her mind..I still havent found Jack and thats all shes thinking about as she quietly goes through apartment) Magda: (Turns to the guest room) Magda: Remembers that she had placed her purse on teh nightstand and her cop things so she stepped in there and shut door so quietly) (Pulls out her cell and calls Gabe and tells him to come over now and that she has Jinnys address on teh fridge) Relax Magda...(Breathes lightly)(She says to herself) Magda: (Pulls out her gun and loads it just in case but hates to do it) (Opens door slowly again and peeks out and then steps out to the hallway holding her gun like she was at a criminals home) Magda: (Starts to cry a little) (She looks up and then down and spots a little half way trail of blood leading somewhere..) Magda: (Moans and shakes a little more panicy) More: >Magda: (Starts to cry a little) (She looks up and then down and spots a little half way trail of blood leading somewhere..) Magda: (Moans and shakes a little more panicy) >Magda: (Follows trail of blood and it keeps going) Magda: Jinny..(she says quietly) Pleas..e honey come on come here I want to help you..I wont tell anyone just please let me know that your alright! (she hollers louder) Magda: God! Jinny! Jin! Answer me! (Blood trail gets more thicker) (Then she hears ice crackle in a glass) Magda Slowly spins around) (gasps)(her voice gets shaky) Jinny! Oh my god! (She shrieks)Jinny: (Sitting at other side of kitchen table sipping a glass of water as drops of blood drip from her paleish lips)(Then after another sip she puts her glass down and breathes deeply) Magda: (Froze and stares at her horrified) Jin..please let me take you to the..___ Jinny: (Makes Magda pause when she coughs and squirts out more blood and a bit of mucus) Magda: Jesus christ! Jinny! ....were going to the hospital! Jinny: (Hears ambulance and looks around for moment a little freakishly and lifts her head up and stares straight at Magda) Magda: Ohh..thank god! Magda: (Goes around Jinny carefully and peeks out the window) (Gabe pulls up and rushes out of his car as Mag opens the door and they hug real tight) Gabe: Magda! Magda: Ohh Gabe!! (Ambulance comes up to house with mental health program group) Magda: (Goes to turn around and calm Jinny down but Jinny isnt to be found) Gabe: Where is she!? Magda: Shes gone..again. Jinny: (Walks downstairs and up other ones) (Quietly she stepped onto the fire escape above apartment) (Ambulance is searching the house) Magda: Did you find Jack??Or Jinny???? Paramedic: God..im sorry Mrs Rameriz..we cant seem to find anyone. Gabe: Well How would Jinny of gotten out of here then__?.. Magda: Ohh my..The Fire escape! Thats it..its it..s probably her only way out of here. Paramedics: Theres no windows broken or anything.. Magda: The police are here now so well have them check fire escape. Paramedics: This is crazy..was there any drugs..involved with this case?? Magda: Yess..there is but this is kept to us and only us got it? Only for right now but if it gets too out of hand and its like a life or death situation and we cant fix it then okay... Jinny After just sitting up there feeling so lost she noticed that she could get away.) (There was the ladder to down below) (It was broken though)(Its been 2 hours) Magda: (Pacing around) (Suddenly screams) Where the hell is Jack????????????????????????????????????????????? Gabe: (Gets up and calms her) Magda Magda please sit..down. x0x0Jessie more laters |
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04-30-2004, 06:58 PM
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04-30-2004, 07:39 PM
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Starts(JinnyandJacksApartment with Magda and Gabe and Paramedics & Police there)
Gabe: Magda, you should not of been put through all this. This was a dangerous situation you put yourself in..she could have killed you and the thing you should of done was gotten out of the house and called me there..or went to the neighbors and dialed 911. Magda: (Sighs frustrated) Ya know what Gabe..you werent there it was too bad.. of a situation to think about what I was going to do. I just knew I had to do something..and fast! Gabe: Im just so glad your alright. (35 minutes later Gabe and Magda sit on the couch) Magda: Never in my wildest dreams did I think something like this would..happen. Especially to my best friend... Gabe: I know, Mag. Magda: God (Rubs head) This is really confusing. Police: (Walk in) Magda-Gabe: Stands up as Gabe is ready to) Policeman: Well I am very sorry Mrs Rameriz, but we think we found a dark haired woman..caucasion..and greenish hazel eyes.. Magda: (Looks shocked) Cuts them off* Ohh..Jinny..! Ohh my gosh! (She said in a upset panicy way) Gabe: Well ....??(He said wanting to know) x0x0Jessie more laters 
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