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Old 04-19-2004, 09:38 AM   #1
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Title: Unexpected Angel

Disclaimer: These characters aren't mine. I'm just borrowing them for a while!

Rating: PG-13

Summary: CD gets the surprise of her life


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CD walked into the doors of the law firm. She decided she had to tell him today and there was no way in getting out of it.

"Hey Julie is Brian in?" CD asked the secretary nervously running her fingers through her hair.

"Yeah he's in his office with a client. You want me to tell him you’re here? " Julie replied curious to what CD wanted Brian for since knew they broke up a month ago.

"No I‘ll wait" she said and turned and walked towards the couch. Five minuets passed then he finally came out. She wait until his left the room to speck "Brian can I talk too you for a minute?" CD asked in a low voice hoping it was enough to get his attention.

"Yeah sure?" He said looking up to see CD standing near the couch in his waiting room. "I‘m on my way out, we can talk on the way." He said and motioned for here to lead the way. "So what did you want to talk me about?" He asked as they were walking out the building. 'Candace get it over with' her mind pleaded with her.

"I'm pregnant." She whispered looking at the ground.

"What! How, you told me you had your tubes tie." he said stopping mid step

"I do. I'm three weeks late so I called a doctor to see what could be wrong she said that even with my tubes tie there was still a eight percent chance.” her voice quivered

“Have you taken a test yet?”

“I took two test this morning both of them were positive." She said not taking her eyes off the spot on the ground..

"Is it mine." He asked in a low voice rubbing the back of his neck.

"Of course it's yours you're the only person I had sex with sense my divorce." She shouted angrily finally looking up at him.

"What are you going to do…are you keeping it?" he leaned against the wall ran his hand over his face. She looked up at him and nodded.

"Yeah I am can't have abortion and can see myself just giving up my baby." She explained her reasons for keeping the baby. He understood where she was coming from but he really didn't want another kid.

"I'm sorry CD I can't..." He said and trailed off hoping she knew what he meant.

"You can't what?" he didn't say anything at first he just stared at her

“I’m not ready to handle another kid right now. I just got on good terms with my son.” he sighed

"I expected more from you." She shouted and turned and quickly walked away half of her hoping he would come after her. When she reached her car her face was completely cover in tears. 'What am I going to do?' she thought as her cell phone started to ring. She really didn’t want to answer it but something told her to pick up the phone. "Hello?" she answered in a weary voice.

"Hey CD is everything okay? " Magda asked concerned, she’s worked with CD for a long time and never seen her miss a day of work.

"Yeah why?" she asked trying to get her emotions in check.

"I called your place and didn’t get a answer I just wanted to make sure you were okay?" She said still concerned

"Magda can I come over for awhile?" she asked when her emotion got the best of her. She really didn't have anybody else to turn to. Well there was Nate but she thought Magda would probably understand how she was feeling better since she went thought the same thing when she was pregnant with Ben.

"Of course, what's wrong?" She asked worried because it sounded like she was crying and CD never cried.

"I just need somebody to talk to right now." She said in almost a sob.

"Okay see you in a little while."

"Okay bye."

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To be continued…
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Old 04-19-2004, 02:15 PM   #2
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Thsi s really good! post more soon!
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yikes!! cd must be desperate if she's turning to HER!!!!! JJ JJ JJ!!! That's a GREAT start, so get back here with more!!!!
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yikes!! cd must be desperate if she's turning to HER!!!!! JJ JJ JJ!!! That's a GREAT start, so get back here with more!!!!
LOL! This is great! It's sad, but still great. I can't wait for more!
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Here we go:
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CD arrived at Magda apartment twenty minutes later. She didn't hesitate to knock when she reached her door. Even though they weren’t that close she had no doubt in her mind that Magda would be there for her. A few seconds after she knocked Magda opened the door and immediately pulled CD into a hug when she saw the tears streaming down her face.

"What's wrong CD?" she asked rubbing her back as she led her over to the couch. She was crying so hard she couldn't answer she just held on to her tighter. That scared Magda a little she never known CD to be the over emotional type of person so she figure whatever was wrong had to be big.

"He doesn't want it" CD sobbed when she got a little control over her emotion.

"Who doesn't want what CD?" she asked softy and completely confused as to what she was talking about.

"I'm pregnant and said he didn't... " she trailed off and put her face back on Magda’s shoulder.

"Who was it ?" she asked still rubbing her back. CD didn’t answer she just started to sob softly. “Was it Brian?” she asked hoping to get a response out of her this time. CD nodded.

"I told him right before you called. He said he just got on good terms with his son and he couldn’t deal with another kid right now " She whispered angrily.

“CD if he’s going to acted like that you don’t need him.” Magda said still trying to sooth her.

"I know I don’t need him, but this isn’t about me, it‘s about this baby. Brian did exactly what I thought Paul would have done that’s why I got my tubes tied in the first place. Magda I can’t raise a baby by myself.”

“You got you tubes tied? Then how are you…”

“I called a doctor they said that having your tubes tied doesn’t mean your one hundred percent safe . There still a eight percent chance you can get pregnant. So I took a two test and they both were positive.” She explained. “God I don‘t know what I going to do.”

“Well do you want this baby?”

“I don’t know. I mean at first I was scared to even think I might be pregnant. Then when I found out I was, I was so happy until I told Brian. I really did want this baby but I‘m not sure I can handle it by myself.”

“CD if you really want this baby, have it. You don’t need Brian you have a lot of people that will help you, you won’t be alone.”

“I don’t want to be everybody’s charity case.” she said taking her head off Magda shoulder. Sitting up straight for the first time.

“Just because people help you doesn’t mean your there charity case. Even if Brian stuck around you would have people around trying to help you.” CD didn’t say anything she just nodded her head in agreement knowing that what Magda said was true. She had friends that would be there for her even if she didn’t want them to, Magda being on top of the list. Magda had a mothering quality about her, she always need to take care of somebody. That was the main reason CD came there, she need to know somebody cared about her and so far she wasn’t disappointed.

“I want this baby but I’m…” she trail off

“Your scared?” she finshed for her

“Yeah I’m scared.” she admitted

“Well that just shows you already are prepared for motherhood. Because that’s most of the job worrying and being scared but it’s worth it in the end.” She said giving her a soft smile.

To Be Continued…

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Awww I loved it. You don't see many fics on here where it is Magda and CD together talking. Post more soon
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aww that was really sweet of magda!!! More!!!!!
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It was three years to the day that CD showed up at Magda's door step crying. A lot has happen since that day. CD gave birth to a beautiful little boy named Brandon Nathaniel DeLorenzo. Three weeks after that he was baptize announcing Nate and Magda as his god parents. Everything was going great in CD’s life until now.
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“Mommy.” the toddler whispered in his mother’s ear.

“umm?” CD mumbled trying to wake herself up. It was only nine thirty but she already was in a deep sleep. This was the first time in a long time she got to sleep before ten, she should have known it wouldn’t last.

“Mommy, scared.” he whimpered trying to climb into bed with his mother

“Of what?” she asked pulling him up the rest of the way.

“Monster.” he whimpered

“Baby there’s nothing to be afraid of.” she said rubbing her hand through his dark curly hair.

“un huh.” he respond, his innocent hazel blues looking up at her.

“There no such things as monsters but if you want you can sleep with me for the rest of the night okay?”

“kay.”

“I love you Brandon.” she whispered and kiss the top of his head

“I love you too mommy.” he cuddled into her embrace and fell right to sleep. CD wasn’t so fortuned she couldn’t fall back to sleep. As soon as she was sure Brandon wasn’t going to wake up she got out of bed and went into the living room to see if she could make any process on the case she and Nate was working on. She was working a good half hour when she heard a knock on the door.

She put down the file she was working on and walked to the door. “Who is it?” she didn’t receive a answer so she looked into peep hole of the door. “Oh my god Brian” she whispered in shock

To Be Continued…

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omg u better be posting again asap b/c that ending was MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





so post more soon!!
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I was going to wait a little longer but i felt sorry for candace~n~nathan lol. So without farther delay:
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“What do you want?” She asked angrily getting over her shock as she open the door.

“Look CD I know I’m probably the last person you want to see…”

“Probably?” she chuckled sarcastically

“I deserve that .”

“Yeah ya did. Look it’s almost midnight what do you want?”

“I was hoping we could talk.”

“Talk? Talk about what? It’s funny the last time I had anything to talk about with you was when I told you I was pregnant with your kid and you didn’t have anything to say then. Now you have something to say I’m really not in the mood to listen.” she shouted and started to shut the door.

“CD I made a mistake...” he said and put his hand in the way of the doorso she wounldn't shut it

“ A mistake?! No a mistake is locking your self out your house. A mistake is switching your coat with your friend. When you walk out on your unborn child it’s not a mistake it’s ignorant .” she growled and open the door all the way.

“Your right and I’m sorry.”

“Sorry? Sorry?! You think sorry is going to make up for the three years you missed in your son’s life?”

“Son? I have another son? What’s his name?” he asked in awe.

“Why do you care? You didn’t care about him at all three years ago?” she screeched pure anger visible on her face.

“I did. I just couldn’t do it at the time.” he tried to explain but she soon cut him off.

“Well I’m sure what ever that was going on in your life was more important then taking care of your own child.”

“CD things were difficult for me then.”

“Difficult for you?! Have you ever thought what I was going through. I had to raise our son no forget that MY for last three years by myself.”

“I know and I said I was sorry.”

“Sorry doesn’t help me when he asked about his father. Sorry doesn’t help me when he asks me why his mommy is lighter then he is. Sorry is not there when he cries at night because he’s scared of the tree out side of his window. So I’m SORRY but sorry just doesn’t cut it for me Brian.” she practically screamed at him

“CD I know your angry and you have every right to be.” he said trying to calm her down.

“Damn right I do. I don’t hear form you in over three years and then you show up out of the blue wanting to ‘talk’ you have to out of your damn…” She was cut off when she heard…

“Mommy?” Brandon cried walking out of hall way from CD’s room.

To Be Continued…

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Awww, poor CD! That was so sad! Thanks for posting so quickly. This fic is great! Post more soon.
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Again poor CD. Kick him out! lol Post more soon. I love thsi fic.
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Hey, can u feel sorry for me again???
THAT WAS GRRRREAT!! Poor CD!!!!! so give us more!!!!!


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This part is short but i promise the next will be much longer:
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“Here I come baby stay right there.” She said not wanting to Brandon to see Brian.

“Can I see him?” he asked in a pleading tone.

“You can’t be serious, he’s 2 ˝ years old and you expect me to introduce him too his father that didn’t even want him in his life in the first place?” She asked angrily

"He's my son I have a right to see him." Brian said matching her anger

"What! he is not your son. He is my son. You gave up your right a long time ago." She shouted at him.

"CD I made a mistake when I said I didn’t want to be in his life.” He said softly.” Look all I’m asking for is to see MY son. Please that's all I want I just want to see him." He pleaded with her softly. CD look at him then back to the face of her son that was waiting patiently for her near the hall

"No." She said shaking her head as she started to close the door. "Brain you miss you chance." She said shutting the door all the away.

“Mommy, you kay?” CD turn around to see her little boy with a concerned look on his face. Even as a baby Brandon always tried to be ‘the man of the house’ always trying to protect CD and watch out for her. It always made CD smile when he acted grown up when he thought she was in trouble.

“Yeah I’m okay baby.” she smiled “You ready to go back to bed?” he nodded.

“You stay this time?” he asked and lifted up his hands for CD to pick him up.

“Yeah I’ll stay this time.” she smiled and picked him up.


To be continued…

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