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babyexstead · 03-28-2004, 11:40 PM

This was written with JinnyGirl88.......ENJOY!!!

Jinny was working one day and she was really having a bad day. She didn't know that her life was going to be so bad after Jack left her, because of the whole drinking thing, but he would never speak to her again if he knew that after she promised that she would go to rehab, didn't and is still on drugs. Synthetic Heroin to be exact. She wasn't sure about it anymore.
Jinny-Magda, I think that I need to talk to you about something. Do you have a minute?
Magda-Sure Jin, what's up?
Jinny-Well I haven't been doing so well after Jack left me. I mean we are still married, and I still love him, but I don't know what to do.
Magda-Well what do you mean Jin? What happened? You're not drinking again are you?
Jinny-Well I'm not drinking...
Magda-What are you doing then if its not alcohol?
Jinny-You won't understand Mag. You haven't lived my life before.
Magda-Try me!

JINNY-WELL ITS JUST THAT I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE I CANT EVEN TELL MYSELF IF I LOVE JACK I USED TO WAKE UP EVERY MORNING LOOKIN FOWARD TO C HIM NEXT TO ME BUT NOW HES NOT THERE AND I JUST DON'T WANT TO EVEN OPEN MY EYES BUT I KNOW I HAVE A JOB AND I LOVE MY JOB I JUST DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO AND IF I GO BACK TO DRINKING I'LL THINK OF JACK AND WHO KNOWS WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN I DO THAT!
MAGDA- WOW THAT WAS TOUCHING. ILL TELL U WHAT EVERY TIME U THINK OF HIM OR ANYTHING U NEED HELP WIT JUST CALL ANYTIME, ANYPLACE OK JUST DONT START TO DRINK!
JINNY- OK
BACK AT WORK:

JINNY SEES JACK IN THE HALLWAY AT HER JOB

JINNY-MAG MAYBE NOW WILL BE A GOOD TIME TO TALK
MAGDA-OK LETS GO I'LL TELL CAPTIN
MAGDA -HEY CAP' IM GONNA LEAVE NOW WITH JINNY IS THAT OK?
CAPTIN-SURE JUST BE CAREFUL I DONT WANNA LOSE U AND EXPECIALLY JINNY LIKE THE SHE IS JUST HELP HER OUT YOU HAVE BEEN HER PARTNER 4 MANY YEARS AND SHE HAS DEPENDED ON U AND I THINK UR THE BEST THING THAT IS IN HER LIFE! AND IM GLAD I HAVE SOME1 LIKE U AS A INSPECTOR TO HELP AND PROTECT
MAGDA- WELL THANKS CAP', I'LL C U TOMORROW
CAPTIN-OK BIE
MAGDA- OK JINNY LETS GO

IN THE ELEVATOR

JINNY- THANKS MAG
MAGDA -WHAT DO U MEAN?
JINNY -4 EVERYTHING
MAGDA- YOUR VERY WELCOME
JINNY- ITS JUST THAT.............
MAGDA - I KNOW WHAT U MEAN, THAT’S WHAT PARTNERS ARE 4!

JINNY GIVES MAG A BIG HUG.

MAGDA - OK COME ON LETS GO TALK

At Jinny's apartment...

Mag-So Jinny tell me what is bothering you.
Jinny-I don't think that I can tell you. You just wont get it.
Mag-Try me...
Jinny-Well, you know that I'm not drinking.
Mag- Yeah I know that. You went to rehab.
Jinny- Well the reason that Jack left me, wasn't because of the whole marrying an alcoholic....It's not alcohol.
Mag- Then what is it Jin?
Jinny- I will tell you....but you can't tell anyone. You have to promise me.
Mag- I don't think that I can do that. But if you tell me, I can get you help.
Jinny- Fine. This is what I'm on. This is the reason Jack won't talk to me. I promised him I would stop and go to rehab, but I can't do it. I will end up like my mom, I know I will.
*pulls out bag and shows Magda*
Mag-OMG Jin, no wonder. You need help. I am going to call the captain.
Jinny-No Mag, I told you this in total confidence. You can't tell anyone. I will get help, which is why I told you. You can help me with anything. Please Mag?
Mag- Fine, I guess we should go and pack your things.
Jinny- Why would we need to do that? I'm not going to rehab.
Mag- I know that, you're going to my house. Since you won't go there, you are coming to my apartment.
Jinny- Fine. I guess I don't have a choice do I?
Mag- Nope!
Jinny- Whatever. Just do me a favor, and don't tell Jack. I have another problem.
Mag- What is your other problem?
Jinny- I missed a period...
Mag- OMG Jin, I think that you need to test yourself?
Jinny- Mag I'm afraid. I have been on this stuff for a while. What if I am? What if I hurt it?
Mag- That's why you need to quit!
Jinny- Mag, I don't feel well.....*faints*
Mag- OMG Jinny.....*calls for help* I have an Inspector down.....I need an ambulance......Magda's apartment.....hurry!
About 15 minutes later, the paramedics showed up.
Paramedic- Ma'am what happened?
Magda- I don't know we were talking and she just passed out. She might be pregnant though.
Paramedic- Ok let's get her some oxygen and get her to a hospital.
Magda- May I come too?
Paramedic- Of course. Come with us.

They arrived at the hospital 20 minutes later. Magda had to wait in the waiting room. While she was there, she called Kate at the station.
Kate- McCafferty..
Magda- Hi Captain it's Magda.
Kate- Hi Magda. What's wrong?
Magda- Well I am in the ER. Jinny fainted in her aprtment so I brought her here.
Kate- I am on my way over.
Magda- Okay. *Hung up*
In that matter of minutes Captain came. She told Magda that she was racing over to the hospital, because she was really worried about Jinny.
Captain- Mag, what happened? What happened to Jinny?
Magda- I don't know. We were talking and she fainted. I don't know what to do.
Captain- Mag, how long have you worked for me?
Magda- I don't know 5 years?
Captain- Something like that. And in that time, how many times have you lied to me.
Magda- Why?
Captain- Because you are lieing to me right now, and I want to know what is going on.
Magda- I don't want to say anything unless Jinny says its ok. I think that thats what brough on this. She told me something in confidence, and I told her that I was going to tell you, and she had a fit.
Cap- Calm down Mag. I just wanted to know what is going on. Tell me after you talk to Jinny.
Mag- OK.

Just as they were finishing up their conversation, the doctor came out.

Doc- Exstead?
Mag and Cap- Yeah that's us....what's wrong with her??
Doc- Well I'm sorry to inform you but Jinny isn't looking like she is going to make it.....
Mag- NO THAT IS NOT TRUE!!! SHE IS NOT GOING TO DIE!!!
Doctor-Miss you didn't let me finish....Miss Exstead is not going to make it any longer without a transplant. Her kidney is failing because of all the drugs in her system.
Mag- Oh, well test me! I will donate my kidney if I am a match.
Captain-Test me too, we will get everyone from the station to get tested.

~15 minutes later~

Doctor-Ms. Rameriz, you are a match and your kidneys are well enough that you can donate a kidney to Miss Exstead.
Mag- That is great. Can I talk to her before I go into surgery?
Doctor-Sure, she is room 5A
Magda went into Jinny's room. Jinny was half asleep.

Mag- Jinny?
Jinny-M..a..g...d...a?
Mag-Jinny, I just came in here to tell you what is going on. You need a kidney transplant. But there is good news....
Jinny-W...h...a...t?
Mag-I'm going to donate one of mine to you. But you have to promise me that you are not going to be on any drugs. Promise me!
Jinny-I....p...r...o....m...i...s...e......
Magda- I am serious. Did he say if you were pregnant?
Jinny- I..a...m..
Magda- You need to stay healthy for your baby. Please Jin.
Jinny- *Nodded*

Magda went out to the room and talked to the doctor

Magda- When could we do the durgery?
Doctor- Well she is pretty tired so we will do it tomorrow morning. Let her get some rest..
Magda- Yeah. What time?

The doctor looked into his chart to see when he was available.

Doctor- I am open tomorrow at 9AM.
Magda- Ok I will be here. Doctor..
Doctor- Yes?
Magda- How is the baby?
Doctor- It should be fine but we wont know until after the operation.
Magda- Thank you.
Magda went back out into the waiting room.

Kate- What did he say?
Magda- He said that he could do the operation tomorrow morning.
Kate- Will she be okay?
Magda- Yeah. She should be fine.
Kate- So you two were just talking when it happened?
Magda- One minute she was saying something and the next she was on the floor unconsious.
Kate- I am sure everything wil be fine.
Magda- Me too.
Kate- Uh Magda?
Magda- Yeah?
Kate- What did the doctor mean by drugs?
Magda- Um..Well..I .. uh..
Kate- Magda...
Magda- Ok but dont tell her I told you.
Kate- Ok.
Magda- The reason her kidney is shut down is because she was on drugs.
Kate- I kinda figured.
Magda- What do you mean?
Kate- She looked like she was. She was so pale and had circles under her eyes.
Magda- I should have seen those signs before this.
Kate- It isn't our fault. She will be fine.

That morning Magda and Jinny went through surgery. CD, Nate, Raina, and Kate were all there. Everything came through fine. They were both ok. Now the question was to see if the baby was ok. 2 hours after the surgery, a nurse came out to the waiting room.

Nurse- Ms. McCafferty?
Kate- Yes?
Nurse- The Doctor would like to see you in Jinny's room.
Kate- Is everything ok?
Nurse- He will talk to you.
Kate- Ok.

Knowing she didn't say everything was fine worried her so she went to Jinny's room very quickly.

Kate- Yes?
Doctor- *Motioned for them to talk out in the hallway*
Kate- What's wrong?
Doctor- Well I thought you should tell her the news. Her baby is fine.
Kate- Oh my God that's great!

9 months later, Jinny gave birth to twins. A boy and a girl. Magda was the godmother and Nate was the godfather. They lived happily ever after.

OjiNmagnatebonnO · 03-31-2004, 10:12 PM

LOVED IT BUT IT WAS TOO QUICK AND ALL..AND JINNY SHOULD OF HAD MORE STRUGGLE W/ PREGNANCY AND ALL..AND THERE SHOULD BE A SEQUAL BUT SKIP THE PART WHERE SHE HAD THE BABIES AND TWINS LOL KEEP GOING GOOD JOB SO FAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!X0X0JESSIE

babyexstead · 04-17-2004, 11:43 PM

should i write mroe.....or does it suck?

MinnIeMcKeOn · 04-17-2004, 11:50 PM

No it doesnt suck its good but you should scratch the part of Jinny having twins 9 months later..I mean that was too quick..you should write more and put the suggestion i said last time if ya want..i think itll make it interesting ass it continuesx0x0Jessie

bananasplit · 04-18-2004, 10:38 PM

that was good.

zwalane · 04-18-2004, 11:47 PM

its good so post more

03-28-2004, 11:40 PM	#1
babyexstead Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 04, 2004 Location: PA Posts: 32	Wake Up Call This was written with JinnyGirl88.......ENJOY!!! Jinny was working one day and she was really having a bad day. She didn't know that her life was going to be so bad after Jack left her, because of the whole drinking thing, but he would never speak to her again if he knew that after she promised that she would go to rehab, didn't and is still on drugs. Synthetic Heroin to be exact. She wasn't sure about it anymore. Jinny-Magda, I think that I need to talk to you about something. Do you have a minute? Magda-Sure Jin, what's up? Jinny-Well I haven't been doing so well after Jack left me. I mean we are still married, and I still love him, but I don't know what to do. Magda-Well what do you mean Jin? What happened? You're not drinking again are you? Jinny-Well I'm not drinking... Magda-What are you doing then if its not alcohol? Jinny-You won't understand Mag. You haven't lived my life before. Magda-Try me! JINNY-WELL ITS JUST THAT I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE I CANT EVEN TELL MYSELF IF I LOVE JACK I USED TO WAKE UP EVERY MORNING LOOKIN FOWARD TO C HIM NEXT TO ME BUT NOW HES NOT THERE AND I JUST DON'T WANT TO EVEN OPEN MY EYES BUT I KNOW I HAVE A JOB AND I LOVE MY JOB I JUST DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO AND IF I GO BACK TO DRINKING I'LL THINK OF JACK AND WHO KNOWS WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN I DO THAT! MAGDA- WOW THAT WAS TOUCHING. ILL TELL U WHAT EVERY TIME U THINK OF HIM OR ANYTHING U NEED HELP WIT JUST CALL ANYTIME, ANYPLACE OK JUST DONT START TO DRINK! JINNY- OK BACK AT WORK: JINNY SEES JACK IN THE HALLWAY AT HER JOB JINNY-MAG MAYBE NOW WILL BE A GOOD TIME TO TALK MAGDA-OK LETS GO I'LL TELL CAPTIN MAGDA -HEY CAP' IM GONNA LEAVE NOW WITH JINNY IS THAT OK? CAPTIN-SURE JUST BE CAREFUL I DONT WANNA LOSE U AND EXPECIALLY JINNY LIKE THE SHE IS JUST HELP HER OUT YOU HAVE BEEN HER PARTNER 4 MANY YEARS AND SHE HAS DEPENDED ON U AND I THINK UR THE BEST THING THAT IS IN HER LIFE! AND IM GLAD I HAVE SOME1 LIKE U AS A INSPECTOR TO HELP AND PROTECT MAGDA- WELL THANKS CAP', I'LL C U TOMORROW CAPTIN-OK BIE MAGDA- OK JINNY LETS GO IN THE ELEVATOR JINNY- THANKS MAG MAGDA -WHAT DO U MEAN? JINNY -4 EVERYTHING MAGDA- YOUR VERY WELCOME JINNY- ITS JUST THAT............. MAGDA - I KNOW WHAT U MEAN, THAT’S WHAT PARTNERS ARE 4! JINNY GIVES MAG A BIG HUG. MAGDA - OK COME ON LETS GO TALK At Jinny's apartment... Mag-So Jinny tell me what is bothering you. Jinny-I don't think that I can tell you. You just wont get it. Mag-Try me... Jinny-Well, you know that I'm not drinking. Mag- Yeah I know that. You went to rehab. Jinny- Well the reason that Jack left me, wasn't because of the whole marrying an alcoholic....It's not alcohol. Mag- Then what is it Jin? Jinny- I will tell you....but you can't tell anyone. You have to promise me. Mag- I don't think that I can do that. But if you tell me, I can get you help. Jinny- Fine. This is what I'm on. This is the reason Jack won't talk to me. I promised him I would stop and go to rehab, but I can't do it. I will end up like my mom, I know I will. pulls out bag and shows Magda Mag-OMG Jin, no wonder. You need help. I am going to call the captain. Jinny-No Mag, I told you this in total confidence. You can't tell anyone. I will get help, which is why I told you. You can help me with anything. Please Mag? Mag- Fine, I guess we should go and pack your things. Jinny- Why would we need to do that? I'm not going to rehab. Mag- I know that, you're going to my house. Since you won't go there, you are coming to my apartment. Jinny- Fine. I guess I don't have a choice do I? Mag- Nope! Jinny- Whatever. Just do me a favor, and don't tell Jack. I have another problem. Mag- What is your other problem? Jinny- I missed a period... Mag- OMG Jin, I think that you need to test yourself? Jinny- Mag I'm afraid. I have been on this stuff for a while. What if I am? What if I hurt it? Mag- That's why you need to quit! Jinny- Mag, I don't feel well.....faints Mag- OMG Jinny.....calls for help I have an Inspector down.....I need an ambulance......Magda's apartment.....hurry! About 15 minutes later, the paramedics showed up. Paramedic- Ma'am what happened? Magda- I don't know we were talking and she just passed out. She might be pregnant though. Paramedic- Ok let's get her some oxygen and get her to a hospital. Magda- May I come too? Paramedic- Of course. Come with us. They arrived at the hospital 20 minutes later. Magda had to wait in the waiting room. While she was there, she called Kate at the station. Kate- McCafferty.. Magda- Hi Captain it's Magda. Kate- Hi Magda. What's wrong? Magda- Well I am in the ER. Jinny fainted in her aprtment so I brought her here. Kate- I am on my way over. Magda- Okay. Hung up In that matter of minutes Captain came. She told Magda that she was racing over to the hospital, because she was really worried about Jinny. Captain- Mag, what happened? What happened to Jinny? Magda- I don't know. We were talking and she fainted. I don't know what to do. Captain- Mag, how long have you worked for me? Magda- I don't know 5 years? Captain- Something like that. And in that time, how many times have you lied to me. Magda- Why? Captain- Because you are lieing to me right now, and I want to know what is going on. Magda- I don't want to say anything unless Jinny says its ok. I think that thats what brough on this. She told me something in confidence, and I told her that I was going to tell you, and she had a fit. Cap- Calm down Mag. I just wanted to know what is going on. Tell me after you talk to Jinny. Mag- OK. Just as they were finishing up their conversation, the doctor came out. Doc- Exstead? Mag and Cap- Yeah that's us....what's wrong with her?? Doc- Well I'm sorry to inform you but Jinny isn't looking like she is going to make it..... Mag- NO THAT IS NOT TRUE!!! SHE IS NOT GOING TO DIE!!! Doctor-Miss you didn't let me finish....Miss Exstead is not going to make it any longer without a transplant. Her kidney is failing because of all the drugs in her system. Mag- Oh, well test me! I will donate my kidney if I am a match. Captain-Test me too, we will get everyone from the station to get tested. ~15 minutes later~ Doctor-Ms. Rameriz, you are a match and your kidneys are well enough that you can donate a kidney to Miss Exstead. Mag- That is great. Can I talk to her before I go into surgery? Doctor-Sure, she is room 5A Magda went into Jinny's room. Jinny was half asleep. Mag- Jinny? Jinny-M..a..g...d...a? Mag-Jinny, I just came in here to tell you what is going on. You need a kidney transplant. But there is good news.... Jinny-W...h...a...t? Mag-I'm going to donate one of mine to you. But you have to promise me that you are not going to be on any drugs. Promise me! Jinny-I....p...r...o....m...i...s...e...... Magda- I am serious. Did he say if you were pregnant? Jinny- I..a...m.. Magda- You need to stay healthy for your baby. Please Jin. Jinny- Nodded Magda went out to the room and talked to the doctor Magda- When could we do the durgery? Doctor- Well she is pretty tired so we will do it tomorrow morning. Let her get some rest.. Magda- Yeah. What time? The doctor looked into his chart to see when he was available. Doctor- I am open tomorrow at 9AM. Magda- Ok I will be here. Doctor.. Doctor- Yes? Magda- How is the baby? Doctor- It should be fine but we wont know until after the operation. Magda- Thank you. Magda went back out into the waiting room. Kate- What did he say? Magda- He said that he could do the operation tomorrow morning. Kate- Will she be okay? Magda- Yeah. She should be fine. Kate- So you two were just talking when it happened? Magda- One minute she was saying something and the next she was on the floor unconsious. Kate- I am sure everything wil be fine. Magda- Me too. Kate- Uh Magda? Magda- Yeah? Kate- What did the doctor mean by drugs? Magda- Um..Well..I .. uh.. Kate- Magda... Magda- Ok but dont tell her I told you. Kate- Ok. Magda- The reason her kidney is shut down is because she was on drugs. Kate- I kinda figured. Magda- What do you mean? Kate- She looked like she was. She was so pale and had circles under her eyes. Magda- I should have seen those signs before this. Kate- It isn't our fault. She will be fine. That morning Magda and Jinny went through surgery. CD, Nate, Raina, and Kate were all there. Everything came through fine. They were both ok. Now the question was to see if the baby was ok. 2 hours after the surgery, a nurse came out to the waiting room. Nurse- Ms. McCafferty? Kate- Yes? Nurse- The Doctor would like to see you in Jinny's room. Kate- Is everything ok? Nurse- He will talk to you. Kate- Ok. Knowing she didn't say everything was fine worried her so she went to Jinny's room very quickly. Kate- Yes? Doctor- Motioned for them to talk out in the hallway Kate- What's wrong? Doctor- Well I thought you should tell her the news. Her baby is fine. Kate- Oh my God that's great! 9 months later, Jinny gave birth to twins. A boy and a girl. Magda was the godmother and Nate was the godfather. They lived happily ever after.
	__________________ People are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just..window dressing. ~Jinny~

03-31-2004, 10:12 PM	#2
OjiNmagnatebonnO Jessica NMK FlaVa Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 08, 2004 Location: Levittown, Pa..wish Hollywood though!! Posts: 147	LOVED IT LOVED IT BUT IT WAS TOO QUICK AND ALL..AND JINNY SHOULD OF HAD MORE STRUGGLE W/ PREGNANCY AND ALL..AND THERE SHOULD BE A SEQUAL BUT SKIP THE PART WHERE SHE HAD THE BABIES AND TWINS LOL KEEP GOING GOOD JOB SO FAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!X0X0JESSIE
	__________________ x0x0Jessie aka Div gerl or NMK Name: Jessica Remix: JessIe Hair: Dark copper brown Eyes: Hazel Nationalities: Spanish, Italian, Turkish, Czech, French, Irish Hobbies: NMK, TD, Lifetime tv, writing, reading, friends, online..ect. Middle name: ElizaBeth Foods: ALOT Music: Pop/rock School: BCTHS Age: 14 B-day: May 22, 1989 Love: Nate..Jon Hamm Which division gal do I take after?: JINNY totally! Shoe size: 8 Makeup: Eyeliner Sport: Ping pong, tennis, and pool. Season: Spring.summer Drink: Lemonade Waterice: Lemon/lemonlime Allergic to: Mascara and certain eye shadows. Best feature about me: My eyelashes, (hair color and face..cause of Jinny) Weight: 115-116 Height: 5 ft 3 ANY ThiNg elSe YouS aLL waNNa knOw??? OkaY TheN..ByE x0x0 Funfact: Look like Michelle branch and NMK Proud Nancy McKeon lookalike!! L0ve The Division Foreva!**~

04-17-2004, 11:43 PM	#3
babyexstead Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 04, 2004 Location: PA Posts: 32	more? should i write mroe.....or does it suck?

04-17-2004, 11:50 PM	#4
MinnIeMcKeOn NMKMarCAurora* Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 13, 2004 Location: Levittown, Pa..wish HollyWooD though! Posts: 64	No it doesnt suck its good but you should scratch the part of Jinny having twins 9 months later..I mean that was too quick..you should write more and put the suggestion i said last time if ya want..i think itll make it interesting ass it continuesx0x0Jessie
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04-18-2004, 10:38 PM	#5
bananasplit 'Whatsoever' Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 04, 2003 Location: Chi-Town Posts: 786	that was good.
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04-18-2004, 11:47 PM	#6
zwalane Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 08, 2003 Location: Southeastern Louisiana Posts: 228	its good so post more