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This is a Sequel to Call Someone. Hope you like it.
____________________________________________________ It is 7 months later and CD is now almost 8 months pregnant with Nates baby of course but they did not get married. CD didn't want to get married because of the baby. Magda got a new partner. Her name was Stacy and she was very annoying. Magda has been moody ever since she was partnered with her. Nate was bugging CD because he was always on her all the time. He wanted to make sure she wasn't hurting the baby in the least bit. CD thought it was sweet but it was begining to annoy her. Kate and Raina were the same. Raina was studying to take the Inspector's test. No one sat in Jinny's desk. They left the desk just as it was in memory of her. They didn't remove anything from it. Magda and Kate sometimes just gaze at it but they learned to control their feelings. It is now 7:50 and people are just arriving at work. Magda and Kate were all ready there and they were talking when CD and Nate walked in. Kate- Hi Nate. Nate- Hello. Nate was holding CD's hand as she is walking in. Kate- Oh my God CD! What's wrong?? CD- Nothing why? Kate- Why is Nate guiding you in? CD- Because he is a guard dog. He was afraid walking would hurt the baby. *Rolled her eyes* Magda- *Laughs* Nate what is wrong with you? Nate- Am I the only one that cares? It said in all the baby books that extreme exercise can make you go into labor. CD- I wouldn't call getting on an elevator exercise. Nate- Well I would now come on you need to sit down. ____________________________________________________ How do u like it so far? |
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I LOVE IT!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!
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People are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just..window dressing. ~Jinny~ |
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Jinny Exstead Riley
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more please it was great!!!!!!!
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WHEN U R A COP,WOMEN,MOTHER,FRIEND,LOVER.. STRIKING THE RITE BALANCE IS EVERYTHING!! EVERY LITTLE DETAIL CAN TELL ONE BIG STORY!! WATCH JINNY,MAGDA,RAINA,NATE,CAPITN, AND,STACY ON THE DIVISION ONLY ON LIFETIME!!
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Aww thanks guys! Here's more..
____________________________________________________ CD just rolled her eyes and sat down. Then Raina came in. CD- Hi Raina. Raina- Hi CD how are you? And how is our little darling here? *Pats her belly* CD- The baby is good. I have an appoitnment to see the doctor this afternoon--if that is ok with Cap'n. Kate- Of course. Take all the time you need. CD- Thanks. Kate- Ok assignments. Magda where is your partner? Magda- Well the person I am working with isn't here yet. She isn't my partner. Kate- *Noded* Ok there is a murder at a McDonald's. Who wants that? CD was about to raise her hand but Nate put it down for her and spoke up. Nate- Is there anything else? CD- *Pouted* Kate- There is another murder in Chinatown. CD was again about to raise her hand but Nate put it down again. Nate- Next.. Kate- Well I only have one left. That is bringing people in for questioning on that robbery. Nate- We will do that. CD- *Gets out of her chair* Nate, come with me. *Pulled Nate out of the chair and dragged him over to the locker room door* Nate- What's the matter with you?? CD- You are being a *****. Why won't you let me do any cases?? Nate- I did! We are doing the robbery. CD- That's not a case. I want to do a murder or something. Nate you are making it to obvious. Nate- Making what too obvious? CD- That this is your kid!! ____________________________________________________ Ya like?
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awwww, that nate is too cute!!!! Poor CD, tho, I'd kill him!
loland yeah, we liked, so post more!
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Drunk guy: What's her name? Is it Jennifer? It's usually Jennifer. Is it Heather? Sometimes it's Heather. Nate- It's Candace. But we, uh, call her CD. |
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This is great! WRITE MORE SOON!!!! YOU GO KELLY!
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CD and Nate Forever
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That was sooooooo great! I'm really glad you wrote a sequel. That's so funny that no one knows that it's Nate's kid!
Something tells me that they do, though..... Post more soon!
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I never expected this many replies. I am glad you like it. Here's more..
____________________________________________________ Nate- What's the matter with you?? CD- You are being a *****. Why won't you let me do any cases?? Nate- I did! We are doing the robbery. CD- That's not a case. I want to do a murder or something. Nate you are making it to obvious. Nate- Making what too obvious? CD- That this is your kid!! Nate- I'm sorry but I don't know why we just don't tell them. CD- Because then we cant be partners. I want to be your partner. Nate- But I would rather you be my wife. CD- Nate.. Nate- Alright. Could we discuss it later? CD- *Grins* Ok. How about we go out for dinner? Nate- *Looks at CD's belly and pats it* Are you sure? You know what the book says. It said eating spicy or-- CD- NATE! SHUT UP!! Kate and Magda heard that and started laughing. Magda- Seems like CD is givin him hell in there. Kate- Sure does. Just then Stacy walked in. Stacy- Hi sorry I am late! I saw this sale on this absolutely gorgeous hat and I fell in love. I had to have it. Kate- A hat? I see. Stacy- Well ya look at it.. *Pulled a pink hat with tulips at the top out of a bag* Isn't it? Kate- I--I would wear it everyday. Stacy- Really?? *Excited* Kate rolled her eyes and went into her office. Magda- Stacy, if we are going to be partners, I can't have you being late all the time. Stacy- I'm not that late. Magda- Late enough to disrupt our work. Stacy- Geez, did you treat your last partner like this? Magda- Leave her out of this. Stacy- Did you treat her like a little kid?? Magda- Stacy... Stacy-..like your own personal slave? HUH?? CD- So please stop treating me differently ok? Nate- Ok. Here let me help you-- CD- *Glared* Nate- Ok. We can do a murder case. CD- Thank you. We need to stop by the store on the way. Nate- Why? CD- I need more cheese. Nate- *Laughs remembering that is all she will eat during her pregnancy* Of course. CD- Thanks. Let's go tell Captain. Magda couldn't help herslef and punched her right in the nose. Stacy got right up and tackled Magda to the floor. They were hitting and kicking each other. CD was coming around the cornor and didn't see them. She got caught right in the middle of it. They were rolling on the floor and as Stacy was trying to get up, she accidentally pushed her elbow into CD's stomach and CD fell down. ____________________________________________________ |
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Jaecen AKA Elvis!
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OK LOOK I'm READING........SCROLLING............READING.............SCROLLING and then it stops! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh where's more of that I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A Few Good Quotes from Can't Hurry Love: DiDi: Annie, how do you expect anyone to take you with all those buttons? Annie: Take me?!?!-Fish Called Greg Episode DiDi: What's his butt like? Annie: Didi! DiDi: Come on Annie, you know my motto. No ass gotta pass.-Fish Called Greg Episode DiDi: Annie. Annie: Yeah? DiDi: Quack, quack!-Fish Called Greg Episode DiDi: Bye Cleopatra. Annie: Bye Anushka...hello puddle.-St. Elgin's Chicks Episode ****************************** Angie, and I'm this sn.......for now, until I get hassled signing in. lol |
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so we have a sequel, kool. r u gonna tell us what happened to that SOB. where is Teddy?
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I like it please keep going!!!
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i always knew i wanted stacey to get ran over.......or choke on her hairclip after I shoved it down her throat......
![]() hehe, uhhh post more???
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That was great, Kelly! Please let CD and that baby be OK! Post more soon. |
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J/k Rasa. Love ya! ____________________________________________________ They were rolling on the floor and as Stacy was trying to get up, she accidentally pushed her elbow into CD's stomach and CD fell down. Kate came out to see what all the comotion was. Kate- What is going on here? Nate- Oh my God CD! Are you ok?? CD- *Tyring to get up* I'm fine. Nate- *Helping her up* I had better take you to a doctor. CD- I told you I was fine. Just sore now! *Glared at Stacy* Stacy- Look, CD I am sorry. CD- Sure you are. You could have killed my baby!! Nate got freaked out by that comment and quickly took CD's hand. Nate- Come on CD. CD- What where am I going?! Nate- I am taking you to the doctor's. CD- What? Why? Nate- Because that bitch may have hurt the baby!! Stacy- HEY! Nate- *Rolled his eyes* Come on! He said that and dragged CD to the elevator while Kate was dealing with those two. Kate- Ramirez, Newland, in my office..NOW! CD- What is the matter with you?? Nate- She may have hurt the baby. I am not taking any chances and you shouldn't either. CD- Nate-- Nate- Just do it! For me. CD- *Pouts* Fine..*grumbles* ..as long as I can get some cheese on the way. Nate- *Grins* Ok. Kate- What the hell was that? Magda- I'm sorry. It won't happen again. Kate- Your damned right it won't. Obviously you two can't be partners. Stacy- Thank God. Kate- What was that Officer? Stacy- Nothing. Kate- Well maybe you can think about this over your suspension. Stacy- What? What about her?? Kate- She will be dealt with but SHE wasn't the one who hurt a pregnant inspector. Thank goodness she went to the doctor. Do you realize what you could have done. You could have damaged the baby. We don't even know if you didn't. Stacy- I apologized! Damnit what does a person have to do around here to prove they are sorry? Kate- Turn in your badge and gun now please. ____________________________________________________ More to come later..
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Very Dramatic!! More please!!
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