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I'm Westie and this is my first fan-fic for The Division.
![]() um, this has no CD/Nate love stuff right now. I mean, I wish they were still together on the show, but there are alot of CD/Nate love fan fics and I want to do something unqiueish. Even though they aren't together, I hope you'll still enough this. Some background info: We have Kate McCafferty still as the Captain, Jinny and Magda are still partners, CD is Raina's partner, and Nate is partnered with Carli (made her up). Jinny is with Jack, Magda is alone right now, CD is dating Brian again (I don't particularlly care for their relationship, but you'll see what happens), Raina is dating, and Nate is trying to rekindle his relationship with an old girlfriend. About Carli- she's married to a man named Ethan and they have a happy marriage. They have 3 kids, Troy, 17, McKenzie, 15, and Dakota, 10. Anyway, the fic....it gets better later, just read ![]() “Nate, there’s a Mr. James Chensworth here to see you,” Captain McCafferty yelled to the young inspector, a look of confusion drawn from her face. Nate nodded with a grin on his face. Mr. Chensworth had called him last night about Nate’s ex-girlfriend, Kayla Hunter. They’d broken up eight months earlier and the past week, Nate had been trying to contact her, to try their relationship again because he would always love her. James was Kayla’s uncle and after a week of calling, James finally contacted him to talk. Nate straightened out his shirt and began walking towards the waiting room. Moments after leaving his desk, Nate arrived and an officer directed him to the man he needed to see. James face showed no sign of feeling and Nate wasn’t sure how to approach him. “Mr. Chensworth?” Nate stammered in the form of a question, “You called to talk about Kayla?” The older man slowly looked up at the boyish face. In contrast to Nate, his gray hair was slicked back and parted off to the right. His blue eyes were misty and looked lost. “Mr. Basso I presume?” his deep, steady voice asked after a moment. Nate nodded slowly, the smile vanishing from his face when he looked at the man. “Let’s go to a quieter place. My driver can take us to the park.” James got up and Nate followed him to the limo waiting in front of his office. He called Kate McCafferty on his cell to tell her he was leaving and then he climbed in the car. In five minutes, they were at the park, and James led him to a bench. “You loved Kayla, didn’t you?” James asked as soon as Nate was settled. Nate held his head down. “Yeah,” he whispered, “I loved her. Why? What’s wrong?” Nate stared him James eyes. “Kayla died three days ago,” he stated slowly looking up into the sunny sky. Nate sat there, his mouth open, and his eyes, expressionless. His eyes misted up, but he couldn’t cry in front of the man sitting next to him. “How?” Nate asked, his emotions, choking his voice. James, again, looked uncomfortable. His voice was suddenly stern and recollected. “She lost too much blood,” he whispered looked down at his polished shoes. Nate still felt incomplete. “How, was she shot? What made her loose the blood?” he demanded, trying to catch Mr. Chensworth’s eyes. “Giving birth to her baby- you’re daughter,” he replied sternly. Nate looked shocked. Please tell me what you think. |
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Interesting..keep going! Did you say ur new? Whats ur s/n? I love talking to The Division fans lol..MORE!! Im Jessie and If you are new..welcome! ByE x0x0Jessie>s/n is: DiVizionbabe900..and Jessakanmk
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x0x0Jessie aka Div gerl or NMK Name: Jessica Remix: JessIe Hair: Dark copper brown Eyes: Hazel Nationalities: Spanish, Italian, Turkish, Czech, French, Irish Hobbies: NMK, TD, Lifetime tv, writing, reading, friends, online..ect. Middle name: ElizaBeth Foods: ALOT Music: Pop/rock School: BCTHS Age: 14 B-day: May 22, 1989 Love: Nate..Jon Hamm Which division gal do I take after?: JINNY totally! Shoe size: 8 Makeup: Eyeliner Sport: Ping pong, tennis, and pool. Season: Spring.summer Drink: Lemonade Waterice: Lemon/lemonlime Allergic to: Mascara and certain eye shadows. Best feature about me: My eyelashes, (hair color and face..cause of Jinny) Weight: 115-116 Height: 5 ft 3 ANY ThiNg elSe YouS aLL waNNa knOw??? OkaY TheN..ByE x0x0 Funfact: Look like Michelle branch and NMK Proud Nancy McKeon lookalike!! L0ve The Division Foreva!**~ |
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even tho i'm a HUGE CD/Nate love shipper, I must say this has caught my interest, and I'd really like to know what happens next!!
![]() Btw, I'm Lisa, and welcome!
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Drunk guy: What's her name? Is it Jennifer? It's usually Jennifer. Is it Heather? Sometimes it's Heather. Nate- It's Candace. But we, uh, call her CD. |
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CD and Nate Forever
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Hey, I can hope, right? Btw, I'm Tara, and welcome to the boards!
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Here's some more. My s/n is SkiingParadise
Thanks for the replies! And yep, i have something planned for CD/Nate- couldn't resist. I haven't written it yet, but I have it planned out- won't happen for a bit, but i think you guys will like what will happen.More fic- “Wha-What?” Nate stammered; his heart racing. “She didn’t tell you she was pregnant?” James asked in disgust. “N-No. Where’s m-the baby?” Nate asked, still trying to grasp what happened. “At the Grace Trellis hospital. No-one wants her. If you don’t want her, she’ll go into foster care,” James stated matter-of-factly. “Kayla was your niece! You guys were so close? Don’t you want her?” Nate suddenly yelled feeling helpless. “That little rat took my girl away. Why would I take the devil who took Kayla from me?” he growled, his eyes fierce, glaring at Nate. “It’s a baby. I can’t take her, I have my job to think about,” Nate retorted, looking into James’ eyes in disbelief. “Then she’ll GO into foster care,” James replied angrily, “Good day Mr. Basso. To think, if she had aborted, she’d still be here! I’ll tell the hospital your decision.” He got up and headed back to his car, but Nate remained on the bench, looking towards sky, trying to grasp what had just happened. Meanwhile, back at work… “Where’s Nate?” Magda asked the Captain after she and Jinny returned from question a witness in a homicide they were investigating. “A Mr. Chensworth came to see him. He called to tell me that they were going to the park to talk,” Captain called back from her office. “Who’s Mr. Chensworth?” Jinny asked, her brow wrinkling slightly with confusion. “Kayla- his ex-girlfriends uncle,” CD responded from her desk, lifting her head briefly from the paperwork she’d been finishing. “Oh,” Jinny merely stated, “Raina, where are you going?” Her fellow inspector had been gathering her work bag and spring coat. “To visit Gabriella (Jinny gave her a puzzled look). She’s the sister of the boy on Fitzgerald Street, the one who committed suicide. It’s a case CD and I caught,” Raina responded and headed out the door. More? This part was a bit sad- at least i thought so lol, but keep reading, it'll get better!
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YES more!!!! I'm really liking this right now, even if it IS sad, so post more soon!!!
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CD and Nate Forever
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That was sooo great! It was a little sad, but that's OK. I'm liking this fic!
And I can't TELL you how happy I am that you have a little something else in the works... Post more soon!
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Here's some more
Yea, i'm setting CD and Nate's storyline up to cross and i think you guys will really like. it won't be for a little while though....but keep reading ![]() In Anchorside. “Jinny, you’ve hardly touched you food,” Magda stated looked at her friend. “I’m saving my appetite for dinner, Jack’s cooking,” Jinny replied looking quickly at Magda. “Sounds like fun,” Magda told her, a grin on her face, “Oh look, there’s Raina, Carli, and CD.” Magda waved them over. “How was visiting Gabriella?” Jinny asked Raina as soon as she, Carli, and CD sat down. “Good, she’s really torn up about her brother’s death, poor thing,” Raina told the group. “Wow. If something happened to Troy or Dakota, I don’t think McKenzie would be concerned much,” Carli joked. “Oh, and Carli, have you heard from Nate?” Magda asked, “He’s been gone a while and I figured, since you’re his partner...” Carli shook her head. “Well, I better be going,” CD took the girls, “I need to get home and cook a romantic Japanese dinner for Brian.” Raina gave them all looks. “Seems like you and Brian are doing well…” Jinny remarked with a teasing grin. CD laughed. “Good-bye!” CD stated for the last time and made her way out of Anchorside. “What can we say, woman’s in love!” Carli joked and then seriously, “I remember when Ethan and I were like that. Last time I cooked Japanese for Ethan, we were blessed with Dakota nine months later.” “Oh,” Magda, Raina, and Jinny all said in unison teasingly. Carli just laughed and the inspectors finished their drinks. More? |
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That was great. Love this fic. Post more soooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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uh YES more!!!!!!! i looooooooooooooooooooooove cd and nate,if u didn't know that, so i'm VERY excited about the future!!
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Here's some more:
After about fifteen minutes of sitting on the bench, Nate got up and waved down a taxi. “Where to sir?” a middle age man with a balding hairline and missing teeth asked as Nate opened the back door. “Grace Trellis hospital,” Nate replied shutting the door after him. For the remainder of the twenty minute trip, he remained silent. “Here,” Nate said handing the driver a creased bill, “I won’t need a ride anywhere else. Thank you.” With that, Nate shut the door and ran up the steps. He pushed through the swinging doors and up to the receptionist desk. “I’m looking for a baby,” he clearly stated. “You’re looking for A baby?” The woman asked slowly looking at him oddly, “An adoption agency is right down the street. I’m sure you’ll find A baby down there.” She had a small smile on her tanned face. “No, no, that’s not what I mean,” Nate replied, “My gir- ex-girlfriend gave birth to a baby three days ago. Kayla, Kayla Hunter. She had a baby girl, but she…died during the delivery. Where is her baby?” “I’m sorry, I can’t show her to you unless your family,” the girl replied carefully, “I do remember that baby though, pretty little girl. She’s going into foster care you know, such a shame.” “I think I am family,” Nate rebutted- the girl gave him an odd look, “I think-I’m pretty sure, that I’m her father. May I please see her?” “Oh!” she replied puzzled, “Mr. Chensworth told us that he couldn’t find anyone who wanted her, so she could go into foster care. I thought he told me the father couldn’t take her?” “Yea, he did talk to me,” Nate whispered, brushing some of his brown hair out of his eyes, “I’d just like to see her. I can’t keep her.” “Okay sir, Natalie here will take you back to the nursery. Good luck,” the woman told him with a smile on her face. “Right this way sir,” Natalie, dressed in her white uniform, replied having him follow her down the left hall. She led him to a huge window overlooking several newborn babies covered in blankets. “Ask Mindy for assistance.” Natalie pointed to a thin woman with shoulder length brown hair and a warm smile who approached him. Immediately after, Natalie continued down the hall to check on patients. “Which baby are you looking for?” Mindy asked politely. “Kayla Hunter’s baby girl,” Nate told her. Mindy entered the lit room and went near the back. She scooped up a tiny bundle wrapped in a pink blanket. She slowly returned with the child. “Are you her uncle?” Mindy asked, handing the baby to him. The baby’s blue eyes looked up at Nate and she seemed to smile and let out a tiny whimper. “I’m her father,” Nate whispered, looking up at Mindy. What do you guys think? I have like 11 pages written I'm also thinking of starting another fanfic- a CD/Nate one
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awwwwwwwwww, that was cute, so get back here so we see what nate does!!!
and DUH start a CD/Nate fic too! what a GREAT idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I decided to post 2 more parts because i have nothing better to do. haha, j/k
“Hey Jack!” Jinny announced brightly walking into the door. “Hey honey, how was Anchorside. Was dinner good?” Jack asked with a smile on her face. Jinny hesitated for a moment. “It was great,” she sighed, “What’d you have to eat?” Jack shrugged with a smile and Jinny laughed. She knew it was probably unhealthy. “Want to take a walk after the game?” Jack asked her, settling on the couch with a beer. “Sure, honey. Sounds great,” Jinny replied with a half smile. She climbed on the couch next to him and he laid her arm around her and she rested her head on his chest. “Hey Magda, long time no see!” Doctor Isabelle Sagemyer told her friend as Magda, dressed in a white hospital gown, sat on the examining table. “Yea, since Ben was born,” Magda replied brightly. “And how is he?” Doctor Sagemyer asked, listening to Magda’s heart with her stethoscope. “He’s good. He, uh, had leukemia last year, but he’s in remission. My sister Lilly’s bone marrow was a match, so he got a bone marrow transplant,” Magda responded cheerfully. Dr. Sagemyer nodded distractedly. “So what brings you to the doctor, Magda?” she asked after several moments. “I’ve been light headed several times this past week and I’ve had severe nausea. I figured I should see you,” Magda told her. “And your periods?” the doctor inquired. “What!?” Magda stated confused, “Doc, I can’t be pregnant; I’m on the pill and Gabriel left me over a month ago.” “Magda, have you been regular?” Isabelle asked firmly and with a twinkle in her eye. “Well, no. But it’s probably just stress,” Magda meekly answered. “Let’s just have a look, anyway,” Isabelle told her, nodding. Magda sided and lay down. Isabelle collected some blood and immediately sent it away for testing. I’ll call you tonight and tell you the results. Meanwhile, get some rest and no alcohol.” “Yea, yea, yea,” Magda mumbled. She smiled at the doctor and thanked her, and then went to the bathroom to change. After emerging, she headed home to 12 year old Ben. “Hey baby, I’m glad you’re home. I’m starving!” Brian shouted from the living room. “You won’t be for long,” CD flirted and went to the kitchen to begin whipping up their dinner. *** Nate sat in one of the four rocking chairs inside the nursery until 5 pm- 3 hours later. He’d fed her a bottle. He was still in shock. “Mr. Basso?” Mindy gently interrupted, “Visiting hours are over. You need to leave now.” Nate looked at his daughter, then back at Mindy. “Can I just have five more minutes?” Nate pleaded. “I’m sorry sir, but I’m not supposed to break the rules,” Mindy told him kindly. “When is she…er…going into foster care?” Nate whispered looking into the baby’s eyes. “She leaves early tomorrow morning,” Mindy answered checking her file, “Before you go, would you like to name her. Her- mother died before she could give her a name. Kayla was such a sweet woman- hardly screamed at all.” Nate suddenly looked interested. “You- you knew Kayla? Did you see her? What did she look like before she died? Did she see the baby?” Nate asked anxiously. “Yes, I helped in the delivery. No one would have expected those complications. After the baby was delivered, she looked so peaceful. But, she didn’t see the baby. Doctors took the baby away because she wouldn’t stop bleeding. Before she went unconscious, she kept asking to see her daughter. You could tell, she loved her so much. She would have been the perfect mother- she was glowing with love,” Mindy told him, placing her hand on his shoulder, “I’m sorry this had to happen. I really need you to leave though, I hope you find peace.” “I don’t ever want to leave her,” Nate replied suddenly. He couldn’t stop staring at his little girl. “Is it too late to change my mind?” I'll start the other fic tomorrow probably night' everybody
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awwwwwwwww, that was soooo sweet!!!! post more of this great fic SOON!!
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