Fanfic: Help Me

[JinnyExstead897]

My first Division fanfic!!! Please respond!!!

"Bartender another beer please," Jinny requested
"I think you've had enough miss," the bartender said.
"I'll tell you when I have had enough," Jinny said. "Another beer please."
Hesitantly the bartender handed her another beer and Jinny downed it in one gulp. She paid her bill and then got up to leave. Climbing into ther car she turned on the ignition and began driving down the winding road towards her appartment. Suddenly Jinny started to feel tired she was struggling to stay awake and she could barely see the road in front of her. Seeing a blinding light in the distance Jinny swerved and hit a tree in the road. She didn't have her cellphone with her and she couldn't call for help so she got out of the car and started walking towards her apartment. Soon Jinny couldn't see anything and she fell on down onto a pile of snow and let the rest of the snow come down on top of her as she lost consiousness.
***
Kate McCafferty was sitting at her desk getting ready to close up for the night when the phone rang.
"McCafferty," Kate said as she listened to the person on the other line. "Okay I'll be right there."
Kate hung up the phone and began calling Nate, CD, Magda, and Raina to meet with her.

That is all for now if you want to know what happens reply to this post!!!!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

I REALLY NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! Oh please post more on this tonight PLEASE??? It's a GREAT start!!

[JinnyExstead897]

Kate called the Inspectors into the Division and none of them looked happy to be there. Magda looked around the room to see that Jinny wasn't there.
"Captain?" Magda asked. "Why isn't Jinny here?"
"It concerns Jinny," Magda said. "The neighorhood watch found Jinny's car abondoned on the side of the road it looks like she may have hit a tree."
"Oh my god did they find her?" CD asked.
"No they want us to go look for her," Kate said. "Anyone have any idea where to start?"
"Well Jinny usually goes to a bar after work she may have been driving drunk so I'm not exactly sure where she went but I say we start at the crash sight and head towards her apartment," Magda said.
"Sounds like a plan Magda," Kate said. "Nate CD you take the center of town. Check all the bars incase she had gone back to one. Magda myself and Raina will take the road that will lead to Jinny's apartment. "Okay now that we know where we are going good luck and lets hope that we find her while she is alive."
"She will be," CD said. "She has to be."
***
"How could Jinny have been this irresponible," CD said as she and Nate drove through town checking every single bar in sight to make sure she wasn't there.
"Well considers Jinny family history I think it runs in the family," Nate said. The comment warrented a slap from CD. "What was that for?"
"Jinny is my friend!" CD said. "She had a hard life don' t make fun of it."
"I'm sorry," Nate said. "I just hope that she is okay."
"I do too," CD said.
***
"She should be here," Magda said." Somewhere!"
"We'll find her Magda don't worry," Kate said.
"We'll find her in time," Raina said.
"Providing she wasn't ran over by a car," Magda said as she continued ranting about how she hoped Jinny was okay. "Then as Kate turned a corner she saw a flash of black. "Wait stop!"
"What?" Kate said.
"I think I see her," Magda said as Kate pulled up to the corner and Magda ran towards the lump on the ground that she thought was Jinny. "Oh my god," Magda said as she looked her friend over. She had black and blue blisters and her lips were starting to turn a bluish purple. "Jin!! Jin!! Jin!! Jin!!" Magda called shaking her friend.
"I'm calling 911," Kate said as Raina ran up from behind her with the blanket Kate kept in the trunk of the car. She helped Magda cover Jinny in the blanket and waited for the ambulance.

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Oh please don't stop there!! I have to make sure Jinny is okay. Please post more now!

[JinnyExstead897]

Nate and CD continued to drive around town waiting for some news on Jinny when CD's phone rang.
"Hello!" CD answered.
"CD it's Captain McCafferty," Kate said.
"Captain hi did you find her? CD asked.
"We found her on the road I guess she passed out," Kate said. "I called an ambulance and they bought her to the hospital but they haven't told us anything yet," Kate explained.
"Okay Captain we'll be right there,"CD said hanging up the phone. "They found her she's at the hospital."
"Is she going to be okay?" Nate asked.
"The Captain doesn't know yet but she passed out on the side of the road," CD said.

g2g more tommorrow!

[zwalane]

Great start keep going

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

I hope everything goes ok in the next post. More please..

[Snowfall]

This is great so far!!! Keep it coming.

[JinnyExstead897]

Magda was sitting in the waiting room. The doctors hadn't given them any news on Jinny and Magda was beginning to get worried. Magda had watched the paramedics bring Jinny to the hospital and she was bearly able to register what they were saying but they said something about an 91.4 degree body tempeture and they had placed Jinny in a hypothermia bag before they loaded her into the ambulance. Raina was sitting next to her with a blank expression on her face and the Captain was busy trying to reach John and Casey at their apartments. As far as she knew Nate and CD were on their way.
The Captain finally made her way towards them and sat down next to Magda.
"You okay?" Kate asked.
"My best friend and partner is in the hospital how could I be okay?" Magda asked.
"Jinny is going to be okay," Kate said. "It looks like she has hypothermia, the doctors will help her."
"What if she doesn't make it?" Magda asked.
"She will don't be negative," Raina jumped in.
"How is she?" CD asked as she ran through the door.
"We don't know the doctors haven't told us," Magda said.
"Exstead?" a doctor questioned.

[Snowfall]

That was great! I want to know if Jin will make it! Post more soon.

[JinnyExstead897]

"How is she?" CD asked as she ran through the door.
"We don't know the doctors haven't told us," Magda said.
"Exstead?" a doctor questioned.
"Yes!" everyone said.
"How is she?" Magda asked.
"She has severe hypothermia," the doctor explained. "Her body temperature is 91.4 and we had to place her in a hypothermia wrap in order to get her body temperature to rise." The doctor gulped and the detectives looked at him scared of what he might say next. "She has a fifty percent chance of survival," the doctor said.

[JinnyExstead897]

"She is going to be okay right?" Magda asked.
"She should be okay once we get her body temperature back up to normal," the doctor said. "There is more though, the achohol she drank before she collapsed caused her to develop achohol poisoning." the doctor explained. "Which means that she is in a coma and will probably need a kidney transplant when she comes out of it."
"What if we can't find a match for her," Raina asked.
"If she comes out of a coma and we can't find a match then she will have to go on dialysis but the complete truth is that if Jinny wants to live then she will have to stop drinking and I mean she'll HAVE to stop."
"Can we see her?" Kate asked.
"You can but I should warn you she doesn't look much different then the when you found her on the side of the road," the doctor said. "The next thirty minutes are critical to prevent afterdrop but then we will get her a room."
"I don't care," Magda said. "I just have to see her."
"Thank you doctor where is she?" Kate asked.
"She's down the hall in room seven," the doctor said.
"Thank you," Raina said as the group began walking down the hall to their friends room.
***
Monitors were beeping and keeping track of Jinny's heartrate and body tempurature. Jinny herself was lying on a bed covered in blankets and a hypothermia wrap.
"She looks so cold," Raina said.
"She looks so pale," Magda said.
"I hope that she will be okay," CD said.

[*Nancy Mckeon*]

mmmmmmmooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Snowfall]

That was so good! I liked it. Post more soon.

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

I loved it!!! I need more! PLEASE don't kill Jinny.