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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 03-05-2004, 10:48 PM

Hey here's a new one..
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Jinny just got out of rehab and has been back to work for a few months. She had just met this guy at an AA meeting Frank and was going out with him for about 2 weeks now. She felt this was one man in her life was different. She was actually happy. She thought she was in love. She was wrong...very wrong.

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CD and Nate have been partners for a while and they had not to each other this but CD was falling in love with Nate and Nate was falling in love with CD.

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Kate was basically the same. She was helping a new officer to The Division Raina Washington. She was kind of getting on Kate's nerves but she didn't care that much.

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Jinny had done her work for the day and was on her way out the door to go out for dinner with Frank. Then Kate stopped her.

Kate- Exstead come in here for a minute.
Jinny- Actually Cap, I was just on my wa--
Kate- Now!
Jinny- *Sighed* What is it?
Kate- Your witness called. She says she has new information.
Jinny- Captain, can I call her tomorrow? I really have to get going.
Kate- She wanted you to call her right away.
Jinny- But I have a date.
Kate- We are talking about a man who likes to kill old people and if our only witness wants to speak with you you have to do it. Are we clear?
Jinny- Aren't we always? *Leaves*

After she makes that very quick phonecall she leaves to go to the restaurant. When she got there, Frank wasn't there. She went back to her apartment and he was standing in front of her door. He was angry.

Frank- I thought you were going to meet me at the restaurant???
Jinny- Stop yelling. Come inside.
Frank- We had a date.
Jinny- I know. Captain had me do something and I had to do it. I didnt want to take the risk of being fired.
Frank- I smell a man on you.
Jinny- I work with lots of men.
Frank- You are cheating on me! *Slaps her across the face*
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Like? Don't like? Let me know.

candace~n~nathan · 03-05-2004, 10:54 PM

yes, i'm choosing LIKE!

great start, can't wait to read more!! I hope Jin uses those karate moves!!!

zwalane · 03-06-2004, 12:09 AM

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 03-06-2004, 03:54 PM

OK 2 replies not bad lol ok here's more..
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Frank- I smell a man on you.
Jinny- I work with lots of men.
Frank- You are cheating on me! *Slaps her across the face*
Jinny- *Falls to the ground and starts crying as Frank bends down to help her up*
Frank- Oh honey I am so sorry. Are you okay?
Jinny- Please leave.
Frank- Not until I know you are okay. *Looks at her cheek. It was already turning black and blue* I will go get some ice. *Goes into the kitchen*
Jinny- *Thinking to herself* He hit me. No one has ever hit me before.
Frank- Here you go. Just put it on your cheek.
Jinny- Frank, you hit me.
Frank- I don't know why. I'm sorry. I have never hit anyone in my entire life. It won't happen again I promise. *Kisses her* I love you.
Jinny- I love you too.
Frank- I am going to go home..or would you like me to stick around for a little bit?
Jinny- No I am tired I think I will go to bed.
Frank- *Kisses her again* I will see you tomorrow ok?
Jinny- Ok. Bye.

The next day, she went into work. Of course Magda noticed the mark right away.

Magda- Oh my God, Jinny. What the hell happened?
Jinny- I'm fine it's nothing.
Magda- Jinny I want the truth.
Jinny- That is the truth.
Magda- Look into my eyes and tell me that is the truth.

Jinny looked at her with tears in her eyes.

Magda- What really happened.
Jinny- We just got into a little fight. It's no big deal.
Magda- No big deal?? He hit you!
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Replies..please.

planet_stella · 03-06-2004, 04:59 PM

What the hell is Jinny doing?!?!?!?

That Frank guy hit her and she's still with him?!?!?! Not a big deal......yeah right!!! Get your ass back here and post more Kelly!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!

zwalane · 03-06-2004, 06:06 PM

That's not the Jinny we know. Good post anyway, keep going.

bananasplit · 03-06-2004, 10:41 PM

Hey this is really good. Keep going! Can't wait to read more!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 03-07-2004, 01:23 AM

Here's more.
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Magda- What really happened.
Jinny- We just got into a little fight. It's no big deal.
Magda- No big deal?? He hit you!
Jinny- Mag I'm fine really. You have to stop worrying about me so much.
Kate- Exstead, Ramirez, in my office.
Magda- You need to tell Captain.
Jinny- No. I can't. *They go into Kate's office*
Kate- Now here's is--oh my God Jinny what happened to you face?
Jinny- I um fell of the bed and uh hit the side of my face on the thingy on the floor.
Kate- The thingy?
Jinny- Yeah the im alarm clock.
Kate- You have your alarm clock on the floor.
Jinny- Yes.
Kate- Why?? *Not buying it for a second*
Jinny- I just do now what did you need us for?
Kate- Your witness is coming in today to discuss her statement she gave you on the phone she will be here soon.
Jinny- Alright. *Gets ready to leave*
Kate- Magda, may I speak to you for a minute?
Magda- Sure. Jinny I will meet you in the lobby.
Jinny- Okay. *Leaves*
Kate- Magda what really happened?
Magda- She told me she got into a fight with her boyfriend.
Kate- He hit her? Oh my God is she okay.
Magda- Well she was fine enough to forgive him.
Kate- Don't tell me that. She forgave him? Did she at least go see a doctor? That is a pretty bad bruise.
Magda- Her? Go to a doctor? Good luck trying to do that.

Later on that night, Frank took her out for a romantic dinner. When she was done with her dinner, Jinny just ordered some desert. She ordered strawberry short cake and when she got it, there was a ring shoved into the strawberry.

Jinny- Oh my God.
Frank- Jinny, I know what I did to you last night and I would not blame you if you never wanted to see me again but you have to believe me when I tell you how sorry I am. Jinny Exstead *gets on his knees* Will you marry me?
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bananasplit · 03-07-2004, 04:50 PM

That's really good so far! Can't wait to read more! Post more soon!

planet_stella · 03-08-2004, 12:40 PM

Marry him?!?!?! Marry HIM?!? I hope Jinny's smart enough to say no........ If you make Jin say yes, Kelly, I'm gonna do something bad for you.......

Snowfall · 03-08-2004, 06:34 PM

NO! Don't marry him, Jin!

He's an abuser! This is really great so far, Kelly. I would've replied sooner but I wasn't online all weekend. Post more soon!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 03-08-2004, 09:06 PM

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Frank- Jinny, I know what I did to you last night and I would not blame you if you never wanted to see me again but you have to believe me when I tell you how sorry I am. Jinny Exstead *gets on his knees* Will you marry me?
Jinny- Oh my Gosh. I don't know what to say.
Frank- Say you will make me the happiest man in the world. Say you will marry me.
Jinny- I will marry you.

Frank got off of his knees and picked her up and kissed her while the whole restaurant clapped.

The next day, Jinny walked into The Division, still having her bruise but with a smile on her face.

Magda- What are you soo happy about?
Jinny- Oh nothing. *Puts hand up to her face to try and show her the ring without showing her the ring*
Magda- Oh my God Jinny where did you get that ring?? *Grabs her hand* It's gorgeous! .. And expensive. *Whistles*
Jinny- Frank gave it to me last night.
Magda- What was it an apology ring? *sarcastic*
Jinny- Actually it is an engagement ring.
Magda- What!?
Jinny- He asked me to marry him and I said yes.
Magda- Jinny! He abused you. He hit you and you are going to marry this man?
Jinny- I haven't been with a man that I felt this close to. This is the first time he has done it. He apologized and he will never do it again. He promised.
Magda- Jin-
Jinny- Mag, please. Just be happy for me. I love him.
Magda- Well, as long as you are happy, I am happy.
Jinny- Thank you. *Hugs her*

A few hours later. Frank called Jinny at work.

Jinny- *Phone rings* Exstead...Hi...Sure what time?..Ok see you then..Love you too..Bye.
Magda- Who was that?
Jinny- Frank. We are meeting for lunch now. When I get back we can go over with what the witness said ok?
Magda- Ok see you then.

Jinny left and as soon as she did, Magda went bursting into Kate's office carrying a folder.

Magda- Captain I have to talk to you. It's an emergency.
Kate- What's wrong? Why did you come bursting in here??
Magda- Because I found this. *Hands her the folder*
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More to come later.

bananasplit · 03-08-2004, 09:14 PM

you better post more soon! I need to know what's in that folder! lol!

Snowfall · 03-09-2004, 12:54 AM

What's in the folder? I have an idea, but I want to know! Post more soon!

JinnyExstead897 · 03-09-2004, 04:39 PM

WHAT IS IN THE FOLDER!!!!! WRITE MORE PLEASE!!

03-05-2004, 10:48 PM	#1
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Call Someone Hey here's a new one.. ____________________________________________________ Jinny just got out of rehab and has been back to work for a few months. She had just met this guy at an AA meeting Frank and was going out with him for about 2 weeks now. She felt this was one man in her life was different. She was actually happy. She thought she was in love. She was wrong...very wrong. ----- CD and Nate have been partners for a while and they had not to each other this but CD was falling in love with Nate and Nate was falling in love with CD. ----- Kate was basically the same. She was helping a new officer to The Division Raina Washington. She was kind of getting on Kate's nerves but she didn't care that much. ----- Jinny had done her work for the day and was on her way out the door to go out for dinner with Frank. Then Kate stopped her. Kate- Exstead come in here for a minute. Jinny- Actually Cap, I was just on my wa-- Kate- Now! Jinny- Sighed What is it? Kate- Your witness called. She says she has new information. Jinny- Captain, can I call her tomorrow? I really have to get going. Kate- She wanted you to call her right away. Jinny- But I have a date. Kate- We are talking about a man who likes to kill old people and if our only witness wants to speak with you you have to do it. Are we clear? Jinny- Aren't we always? Leaves After she makes that very quick phonecall she leaves to go to the restaurant. When she got there, Frank wasn't there. She went back to her apartment and he was standing in front of her door. He was angry. Frank- I thought you were going to meet me at the restaurant??? Jinny- Stop yelling. Come inside. Frank- We had a date. Jinny- I know. Captain had me do something and I had to do it. I didnt want to take the risk of being fired. Frank- I smell a man on you. Jinny- I work with lots of men. Frank- You are cheating on me! Slaps her across the face ____________________________________________________ Like? Don't like? Let me know.

03-05-2004, 10:54 PM	#2
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	yes, i'm choosing LIKE! great start, can't wait to read more!! I hope Jin uses those karate moves!!!
	__________________ Drunk guy: What's her name? Is it Jennifer? It's usually Jennifer. Is it Heather? Sometimes it's Heather. Nate- It's Candace. But we, uh, call her CD.

03-06-2004, 10:41 PM	#7
bananasplit 'Whatsoever' Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 04, 2003 Location: Chi-Town Posts: 786	Hey this is really good. Keep going! Can't wait to read more!
	__________________ She's a rebel She's a saint She's salt of the earth And she's dangerous "People who are very beautiful make up their own laws."

03-08-2004, 06:34 PM	#11
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	NO! Don't marry him, Jin! He's an abuser! This is really great so far, Kelly. I would've replied sooner but I wasn't online all weekend. Post more soon!
	__________________ Nate: When somebody asks for the salt, you hand them the pepper, too, even if they didn't ask for both. You never separate the salt and the pepper. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Luke: Will you marry me? Lorelai: What? Luke: Anything to shut you up.

03-06-2004, 12:09 AM	#3
zwalane Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 08, 2003 Location: Southeastern Louisiana Posts: 228

03-06-2004, 03:54 PM	#4
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	OK 2 replies not bad lol ok here's more.. ____________________________________________________ Frank- I smell a man on you. Jinny- I work with lots of men. Frank- You are cheating on me! Slaps her across the face Jinny- Falls to the ground and starts crying as Frank bends down to help her up Frank- Oh honey I am so sorry. Are you okay? Jinny- Please leave. Frank- Not until I know you are okay. Looks at her cheek. It was already turning black and blue I will go get some ice. Goes into the kitchen Jinny- Thinking to herself He hit me. No one has ever hit me before. Frank- Here you go. Just put it on your cheek. Jinny- Frank, you hit me. Frank- I don't know why. I'm sorry. I have never hit anyone in my entire life. It won't happen again I promise. Kisses her I love you. Jinny- I love you too. Frank- I am going to go home..or would you like me to stick around for a little bit? Jinny- No I am tired I think I will go to bed. Frank- Kisses her again I will see you tomorrow ok? Jinny- Ok. Bye. The next day, she went into work. Of course Magda noticed the mark right away. Magda- Oh my God, Jinny. What the hell happened? Jinny- I'm fine it's nothing. Magda- Jinny I want the truth. Jinny- That is the truth. Magda- Look into my eyes and tell me that is the truth. Jinny looked at her with tears in her eyes. Magda- What really happened. Jinny- We just got into a little fight. It's no big deal. Magda- No big deal?? He hit you! ____________________________________________________ Replies..please.

03-06-2004, 04:59 PM	#5
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	What the hell is Jinny doing?!?!?!? That Frank guy hit her and she's still with him?!?!?! Not a big deal......yeah right!!! Get your ass back here and post more Kelly!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!

03-06-2004, 06:06 PM	#6
zwalane Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 08, 2003 Location: Southeastern Louisiana Posts: 228	That's not the Jinny we know. Good post anyway, keep going.

03-07-2004, 01:23 AM	#8
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Here's more. ____________________________________________________ Magda- What really happened. Jinny- We just got into a little fight. It's no big deal. Magda- No big deal?? He hit you! Jinny- Mag I'm fine really. You have to stop worrying about me so much. Kate- Exstead, Ramirez, in my office. Magda- You need to tell Captain. Jinny- No. I can't. They go into Kate's office Kate- Now here's is--oh my God Jinny what happened to you face? Jinny- I um fell of the bed and uh hit the side of my face on the thingy on the floor. Kate- The thingy? Jinny- Yeah the im alarm clock. Kate- You have your alarm clock on the floor. Jinny- Yes. Kate- Why?? Not buying it for a second Jinny- I just do now what did you need us for? Kate- Your witness is coming in today to discuss her statement she gave you on the phone she will be here soon. Jinny- Alright. Gets ready to leave Kate- Magda, may I speak to you for a minute? Magda- Sure. Jinny I will meet you in the lobby. Jinny- Okay. Leaves Kate- Magda what really happened? Magda- She told me she got into a fight with her boyfriend. Kate- He hit her? Oh my God is she okay. Magda- Well she was fine enough to forgive him. Kate- Don't tell me that. She forgave him? Did she at least go see a doctor? That is a pretty bad bruise. Magda- Her? Go to a doctor? Good luck trying to do that. Later on that night, Frank took her out for a romantic dinner. When she was done with her dinner, Jinny just ordered some desert. She ordered strawberry short cake and when she got it, there was a ring shoved into the strawberry. Jinny- Oh my God. Frank- Jinny, I know what I did to you last night and I would not blame you if you never wanted to see me again but you have to believe me when I tell you how sorry I am. Jinny Exstead gets on his knees Will you marry me? ____________________________________________________

03-07-2004, 04:50 PM	#9
bananasplit 'Whatsoever' Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 04, 2003 Location: Chi-Town Posts: 786	That's really good so far! Can't wait to read more! Post more soon!

03-08-2004, 12:40 PM	#10
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	Marry him?!?!?! Marry HIM?!? I hope Jinny's smart enough to say no........ If you make Jin say yes, Kelly, I'm gonna do something bad for you.......

03-08-2004, 09:06 PM	#12
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	____________________________________________________ Frank- Jinny, I know what I did to you last night and I would not blame you if you never wanted to see me again but you have to believe me when I tell you how sorry I am. Jinny Exstead gets on his knees Will you marry me? Jinny- Oh my Gosh. I don't know what to say. Frank- Say you will make me the happiest man in the world. Say you will marry me. Jinny- I will marry you. Frank got off of his knees and picked her up and kissed her while the whole restaurant clapped. The next day, Jinny walked into The Division, still having her bruise but with a smile on her face. Magda- What are you soo happy about? Jinny- Oh nothing. Puts hand up to her face to try and show her the ring without showing her the ring Magda- Oh my God Jinny where did you get that ring?? Grabs her hand It's gorgeous! .. And expensive. Whistles Jinny- Frank gave it to me last night. Magda- What was it an apology ring? sarcastic Jinny- Actually it is an engagement ring. Magda- What!? Jinny- He asked me to marry him and I said yes. Magda- Jinny! He abused you. He hit you and you are going to marry this man? Jinny- I haven't been with a man that I felt this close to. This is the first time he has done it. He apologized and he will never do it again. He promised. Magda- Jin- Jinny- Mag, please. Just be happy for me. I love him. Magda- Well, as long as you are happy, I am happy. Jinny- Thank you. Hugs her A few hours later. Frank called Jinny at work. Jinny- Phone rings Exstead...Hi...Sure what time?..Ok see you then..Love you too..Bye. Magda- Who was that? Jinny- Frank. We are meeting for lunch now. When I get back we can go over with what the witness said ok? Magda- Ok see you then. Jinny left and as soon as she did, Magda went bursting into Kate's office carrying a folder. Magda- Captain I have to talk to you. It's an emergency. Kate- What's wrong? Why did you come bursting in here?? Magda- Because I found this. Hands her the folder ____________________________________________________ More to come later.

03-08-2004, 09:14 PM	#13
bananasplit 'Whatsoever' Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 04, 2003 Location: Chi-Town Posts: 786	you better post more soon! I need to know what's in that folder! lol!

03-09-2004, 12:54 AM	#14
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	What's in the folder? I have an idea, but I want to know! Post more soon!

03-09-2004, 04:39 PM	#15
JinnyExstead897 Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 07, 2004 Posts: 52	WHAT IS IN THE FOLDER!!!!! WRITE MORE PLEASE!!