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Im going to skip a fan fic for March 7th, and go 2 March 14go to
Starts: ( In Kates House)
Kate: Come on katieann..you come from my side of the family..your a smart girl..yeah you are..come on you can do it.(she said playful)
KatieAnn: Looks at Kate in confusion but reaches her arms out and balances why bobbing uo and down.
Kate: You can do it..just keep your balance..*she said letting go of her hands slowly*
KatieAnn: Sat up for a minute and waved her hands in the air..and then tipped over a little.
Kate: Oh my gosh you did it! (she said laughing a little when she tipped over)
Kate: Louis! Guess what, Katie Ann isnt even 6th months old yet and she sat up fully! But tipped over a little but hey the kid has great balance! (she said convincing him and laughing)
Louis: Ya know Kate, if you react to Katie Ann this way when she just sat up a little..then I cant imagine you when she begins to crawl! And when she walks...I better be cautious and watch you dont give yourself another stroke! (He said making fun of her a little)
Kate: Oh..shut up Louis!
Louis: Im gonna go check the mail.
(Kate picks up KatieAnn and takes her to the kitchen for breakfast.)
Louis: (kate walks into the kitchen and looks upat Louis and sees him in a shocked or stunned way.)
Kate: Louis.wahts wrong..what did we get?
Louis: Oh..my god..its the bills...they say we havent paid them..it reads we missed 3 payments and our water bill is sky high!
Kate: What? This has got to be a mistake. Theres no way this happened..this is weird.
Louis: Are you sure??
Kate: Yeah..well at least I positively think I am. (They stare at eacother in confusion)

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StartsNates appartment)

Nate: (Sighing putting on his shoes and looking at his yearbook)
Nate: Notices Jackie in the Cheerleading, Drama, Softball, Volleyball, Feild Hockey, Student Council, and Chorus..activities.
Nate: (remembers he used to fantasize about her and him when he was a teen) (He really liked her)
Nate: (as he stares..he hears a ring from the telephone)
Nate: (picks it up as he was a tad bit startled by it)
Nate: uh, Hello?
Jackie: Hey, Nate!
Nate: Uh, hey Jackie (he said in a low miserable voice)
Jackie: Umm..I was a little worried..I called your house last night and noone answered. And you didnt stop by at my place..
Nate: Ya know, I have to go.
Jackie: Is something wrong..anything?
Nate: Ah..no..no..there isnt..ill talk to you later..bye.
Nate: *Hung up.*
(he headed for the Anchorside..which was now having a special thing where they were now temporaily serving breakfast in the mornings)

(In Magdas House)
(Door opens and its Ben coming in halfway with Gabe w/ packed bags)
Ben: Mom, Mom! Im home! Wherea re you?
Gabe: Magda? Magda?
*Magda walks in*
Magda: Ooh..my babys home! How was your trip? Sorry I didnt hear you..I was in teh bathroom.
Ben: It was cool! And fun! Dad says that you and him can have a talk about you and him living with eachotehr again.
Gabe: Yeah, I told you about that, Mag.
Magda: Well, uh Benjamin..let's see, ok?
Ben: Sure..go ahead..talk. (He said rushing them)
magda: Uh, Ben, I would like to have a 5 minute little talk with dad, ok?
Ben: O..ok (He said a little mysterious)
Magda: So, Gabe..how was the trip for you?
Gabe: Oh..its all been smooth..and going great.
Magda: Im glad. (she said unsure of herself and trying to make a good conversation without any sudden fights interuppting)
Gabe: Look, Magda.....I love you and you know I do.
Magda: Honey, I meant what I said on the phone.
Gabe: I know..me too.
Magda: I love you..and thats why I had to tell you..well part of it.
Gabe: I understand taht.
Magda: I felt so guilty after it happened..so I broke it off with the doctor I was seeing. And when I held it in for a while..I realized taht it wasnt fair for you not to know..and at the same time..i was thinking it isnt fair for you to know. Its so hard to explain. And..I knew the hurt you felt when you hear me blurt it out like that. It wasnt supposed to come out..in that sort of way either.
Gabe: Yes, Im aware of all that.
Ben: (comes back in)
Ben: Are you guys done?
Gabe: Yeah.
Magda: Well, Gabe..ill talk to you next week, ok?
Gabe: Sure, Bye..i love you..(they hugged)
Ben: Wait..I thought you guys were getting back together??
Magda: Baby, we are still talkign about it and trying to make things a little better before daddy moves back in.
Ben: I have to wait? Oh..alright....(he said looking dissaponted)
Magda: Bye Gabe.
Gabe: Goodbye Magda..

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Starts: ( In Jinnys house)
Jinny: Magda, will you be honest with me?
Magda: Sure, Jin..what?
Jinny: Since Im pregnant, does it nessecarily mean I should get married, to Hank..If I told him and he approved of it?
Magda: Jinny! Thats crazy talk..you shouldnt rush into anything yet. I mean..maybe you and Hank are the right couple..at least I have a feeling you are. But..you still have time Jinny..
Jinny: Thank you! (she said releived)
Magda: Im only telling you to wait because..you havent gone hardly anywhere with this relationship..I mean you guys have been communicating rather good..but you have to have a feeling inside that shows love for eachother..
Jinny: I just don't want my life to turn into some kind of depression stage..i went through recently..
Magda: If you relax and deal with whats happened, then youll get through it.
Jinny: Ooh, I really hope so.
Magda: *nodded as she sipped her coffee*
Jinny: So..did Ben and Gabe return yesterday?
Magda: Uh, yeah they did.
Jinny: Whats up with you guys? Anything decided yet on whats gonna happen?
Magda: Not completely.
Jinny: Ah..so how did Ben seem?
Magda: Oh..he seemd happy and a little anxious and excited at the same time, i guess..
Jinny: Well, I hope everything works out, Mag.
Magda: Jinny, remember when I told you..the doubts, and those bad feelings I had about me and Gabe not for eachother, and it wasnt right for us to get married? It was a couple days..maybe a week before our wedding.
Jinny: Oh..yeah..i do (she said in a low voice)
Magda: *sighs* I hate to laugh a little but those feelings really paid off....*oh god*. But I did fall back in love with him..the way he treated me..and the way he was with Ben. It was like, he had never left and he already knew Ben and all.
Jinny: Mag, nobodys life is perfect, and if it was......*she paused with a look on her face*..we'd still be miserable.
Magda: *gave Jinny a look like true, as Jinny walked passed her to her car*.

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Starts: ( Kates House)
Kate: How could this happen?
Louis: I dont know, Kate....Im very confused right now.
Kate: I mean, 3 payments??? That could leave us with the possibility of getting sued..
Louis: I hope we have enough money to pay off these 3 payments...and enough time to get all the money in.
Kate: Just imagine if I dropped out of work..*she said in a sarcastic voice*
Louis: *gave her a look*
Kate: I mean yeah..im right..you yelled at me all that time about me continuing more w/ my job, and imagine what kind of fix we would be in if i hadn't continued..
Louis: Kate, just ..drop it, ok? Damn, I havent been in work alot lately.
Kate: Well if I work longer hours and you do..we might be able to totally pay off these bills.
Louis: I guess thats the only way out right now.
*KatieAnn starts to make miserable sounds.*
Kate: I'm going to go see KatieAnn, see if shes thirsty.
Louis: Ill..ill go start dinner.

( Division station)
Magda: Hey Captain..I got a copy of those sketches Hank drew for us. We might need him alot lately.
Kate: Oh..and Magda..can I speak with you for a few seconds?
Magda: Uh..sure Captain, yeah. (she looked nervous)
Kate: Please shut the door.
Magda: (shuts door)
Kate: Is Jinny ok? I mean does she need to talk with someone? I just mean..
Magda: No..Captain I know what you mean.. shes working through it right now.
Captain: Im just a little worried about her. you dont think she would start drinking again..and sink into depression, do you?
Magda: No! No Captain, and If she was depressed..and thought about drinking again..I wouldnt let her..I'd help her and guide her through it.
Captain: You know, when you were gunned down last year and you almost died...and we were all scared..Jinny, was the one who was more of a wreck and couldnt stay calm. She really cares about ya. I could see it and when she said your the best..and her words were "she stuck by me when no one else would". "It should have been me". That was one of my first hints that had me thinking..she was getting too unhappy. You are a good person Magda. Im proud of you for being there for Jinny too.
Magda: *Looked touched and a little stunned) Thank you Captain. I really appreciate that. Really... and shes been there for me so far when my problems came along.
Kate: Well, what are friends for..ya know?
Magda: Yeah..umm can I go now..Jinnys waiting for me to help her with these files.
Kate: Go ahead. Take it easy..you work too hard.
Magda: Thanks Captain..but Im ok (she said smiling)

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Starts: ( In elevator)
Jinny: Oh god..I keep getting heartburn...but not much sickness..thank god!
Magda: Your lucky with that one!
Magda: I did forget to ask you, when exactly is your appointment?
Jinny: Umm..I dont know yet.
Magda: You did make one, didnt you?
Jinny: Just drop it Mag!
Magda: Jin..
Jinny: Magda Im so sorry..no i didnt make one. Im just a big chicken thats all....
Magda: Well, Jinny yeah it is scary going to your first appt when its your first time being pregnant.
Jinny: Yeah, you left out one thing..I havent told Hank yet.
Magda: I hope you do that soon Jin.
Jinny: I wont break my commitement that I made with Hank, I care about him.
Magda: *sighs* I love ya Jin..and I love ya even more when ya talk like that.
Jinny: I love you too..I never had a friend as great as you.
Magda: Captain, mentioned to me aout when I was caught..in teh line of fire. In the hospital..you said some pretty nice things about me.
Jinny: *laughs a little*...well I meant every word.
Magda: Thank you Jin..


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Starts: ( Nate is on his way home coming into his apartment)
Nate: Decides to put his jacket back on and head to Jackies.
Nate: (walking up to her house)
Jackie: *Opens the door after he knocks*
Jackie: Hey Nate!
Nate: Uh..hey Jackie how are ya?
Jackie: Good good..come in baby..(she said excited that hes there)
Nate: Jackie, we need to talk.
Jackie: Sure..before we do I want to show you some recent pictures I have. Of me and my friends..and family too. Heres the box she went into her closet for.
Nate: Th..this is your family? Wow..you guys sure look happy together. Alot of friends, like you always had..(he said smiling a little)
Jackie: Well, I have a strong family chain.
Nate: Oh..he found in the box..is this your picture album of your whole family tree?
Jackie: Yes yeah..some of it was embarassing to show people.
Nate: No I wanna see it!
Jackie: Ok..but don't laugh...(she said demanding in a playful voice)

( 10 minutes later)(Nate had forgot about when she was on the phone with her husband saying shed still have a marriage w/ him)
Jackie: (Laughing..oh that was the time me and my sister went to Florida and I had to go to the bathroom..and I peed my pants..there was no near bathroom! We were in the elevator!)
Nate: (Laughs hard) Oh..god
Jackie: Heres old letters from my old boyfriends.
Nate: Yeah, I know you had alot of them..you were so poular..pretty..and had great personality. Not a snotty girl at all.
Jackie: Thanks Nate.
Nate: Im just saying what is true..
Jackie: (Looks into Nates eyes)
Nate: (Sits frozen..still unsure of himself)
Jackie: Kisses him passionately.
Nate: Goes along w/ it.
Jackie: Nate, I want to be with you....
Nate: Jackie..I really want to take this slow..ok?
Jackie: Uh..ok Nate I guess..do you like me..at all?
Nate: Of course I do.
Jackie: Well lets just get some dinner......im starving.
Nate: Great, I'll order..pizza?
Jackie: Yeah..Im in the mood for pizza.
Nate: Good, cause I love it!
Jackie: Ill order it be right back Natie pie....(really going to call her husband first and asure him that shes not seeing anyone)
Nate: (Look around her room and then searches through her box of album stuff..and then sees the year book that he has..the exact same one he saw recently a few days ago when he looked at her picture.)
Nate: Picks it up and sees her autographs from 4 girls and then..he sees 2 pages ripped out turned over. He flipped tehm over and there was autographs from guys and girls. He started reading them and was shocked........................


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Starts: ( Nate looking at the year book and is shocked)
Nate: *Read all the horrible comments*, on those 2 ripped out pages..*
Nate: " Oh hey Jackie, hope you enjoyed the blow job you gave me..you nasty whore..hahaha hey can I have another one..ByE GrL! Nick
" Hi Jackie, **** off..my boy friend is not the object of your HOOvER vaccumm cleaner ****hole mouth of yours..k pEacE..Maya
" Hey slutto, Yeah u thought i was ur freind..think again biotch! I hate ur guts! Rott in hell hoe! ..Donnielle
Nate: There was more but he had to talk to her right away..he had read enough!
Jackie: Comes back in in 3 minutes..it's ordered Nate. It'll be here in 45 minutes or less.
Nate: I saw you on the phone..when I stopped by your house the other day. You..you lied to me. I never knew you were married. I meant to talk to you about it earlier..but I didnt want to mention it yet.
Jackie: Nate..no you have it wrong! I did lie..i was married but Im gettingdivorced in 1 month..then it..its final.
Nate: That conversation sounded like your husband didnt know what you were talking about.
Nate:Nodont explain..ithink this should be over..I cant bare with this Jackie, I can't.
Jackie; Wait Nate please! (She said getting histerical)
Nate: Yes!
Jackie: Kisses him..you are like the only one who appriciates me Nate! My husband did..but hes probably out screwingsome other woman while on his rich biussiness vacations. Yes Nate Im rich..I have alot of money. I lost alot of my self respect when I was young..Im gettign over that..but I feel so alone Nate! Please dont go! Im begging you. I feel like now your all i have!!!!!! (she broke down)
Nate: *sighs* (frustrated) Ok..its ok..he huggs her and feels lost and confused. *herememberswhen CD and him shared that kiss. Oh that sweet taste ohher candy lips.*


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