It's a Sure Shot

[candace~n~nathan]

damn, after reading a trashy novel and then listening to Sex Never Goes Outta Fashion, I just HAD to get writing again!!


Disclaimer to the losers of Lifetime and the #1 Whammy--DJL. Here's what we got--



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Nate lied her body down on his countertop after supper he’d invited her to after work. He kissed roughly against her jaw, and she moaned softly against the feel of his mouth on her naked skin.

He hungrily pawed at her shirt and ripped it off of her, exposing her lacy bra. His fingers slid the straps of it down her shoulders as his mouth trailed directly behind. CD,
although nervous, was willing to do anything with him, but she couldn’t admit that yet TO him.

Nate glided the bra down her waist, and immediately transported his ravenous mouth to her breasts. CD groaned, arching her back, and moved her hands down to his belt to start unbuckling. “Let me stay the night, Nate,” she muttered as she unlooped the belt.

Nate’s previously free-moving body immediately tensed up. He stopped viciously kissing her, and reached for her shirt. He silently put it back on her, handed her her bra, and replied softly, “I think it’s time for you to go home, CD.”

CD looked at him in utter bewilderment. “I, uh, what?” she stuttered. “I’m sorry, I guess I read too much into what you were doing to me; I thought we were about to do something else,” she replied and sat up. “I’m sorry I was so dumb; I thought you finally wanted me,” she muttered and got up off the counter.

Nate sighed. “CD, it’s not that.....” he started.

She put her hand up to shush him. “Nate, stop, it’s not a big deal; I just thought when you started kissing me...” she stopped to grab her coat. “but I see I misunderstood. It’s not a problem, I just feel like an idiot,” she mumbled as she opened the door and left his apartment.

Nate unhappily started doing the dishes and wondered when he was going to finally break down and make love to that woman--the only person he ever wanted to be with for the rest of his life.
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continue??? stop the madness?? i need to know!!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

I know I want more. There has to be a good reason why Nate doesnt want to make love to her. So again, more please?????

[maria1986]

wtf is Nate's problem? You better get yourself back here and post more!

[Snowfall]

Originally posted by maria1986
wtf is Nate's problem? You better get yourself back here and post more!

Yah, really! Um, let's see, the woman of his dreams is topless underneath him, wanting him, and he's kissing her..........and then he STOPS?! You'd better get back here, missy!

[planet_stella]

LIIIIIISSSSSSSSAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! Why is Nate acting like a mentally challenged dork?!?!?!?!??? There can't be any venial reason for this!!!!! Get yourself back here and post more!!!!!!!!!!!NOW!

[candace~n~nathan]

Originally posted by planet_stella
LIIIIIISSSSSSSSAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! Why is Nate acting like a mentally challenged dork?!?!?!?!??? There can't be any venial reason for this!!!!! Get yourself back here and post more!!!!!!!!!!!NOW!

that just made me ROTF for some reason, lol

Anyway, thanks for the responses, and here's more!! You'll all love it so much! *rolls eyes*

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~CD went directly home and immediately to the shower. She had the scent of his house all over her, and she wanted it to disappear quickly. She turned on showerhead to extreme
heat, stripped her clothes off and climbed under the relief of the heat. She sighed angrily as she cleansed herself but then stayed there, letting her skin burn a little from the intensity.
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Nate lied in his bed later that night, feeling like a fool. He turned to the picture of her and him on his bedside table and stared at it for hours on end until he finally drifted off.
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CD curled her body into a little ball under her blankets and grabbed a pontyhail holder from her side table. She forgot what she was doing when she picked the holder up; it was sitting by a picture of her and Nate, and she stopped to stare at it. “You bastard,” she muttered as she picked it up and brought it close to her body, gazing into his hurt-causing eyes. She fell into a slumber with him resting next to her.

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Division--8:15 am

CD rushed into the Division, forty-five minutes early to talk to Kate. She didn’t feel like working with Nate today, so she had to make up an excuse to work with Jinny.

She walked into Kate’s office, and she had just hung up the phone. “Cap, can I ask you about assignments today?”

Kate looked up and smiled. “Good morning to you, too, Inspector.”

CD grinned. “Sorry, good morning, Cap,” she replied. “So now about assigments....”

Kate laughed. “What can I do for you?”

“Um, I really want to go out on the street today, all day, but Nate has some paperwork to do, and I don’t know when he’ll get done with it, so.....” CD paused to see if she was
believing it. She was positive she was, so CD continued. “Can Jin and I go out in the field together today?”

Kate smirked at the obvious lie. “Trouble in paradise?” she teased her.

“NO!” CD exclaimed. “Nate has a lot of paper...”

“Yeah, paperwork, ya told me,” Kate replied with a devilish smile. “I guess the two of you can work together then,” she paused. “His paperwork will be solved by tomorrow though, won’t it?”

CD nodded. “Oh yeah, he should be done with it by then.”

Kate agreed. “Fine, when Jin comes in, tell her and get in here, so I can give you your case.”

“Thanks, Cap!” CD exclaimed and turned around to leave, practically running over someone else who needed to speak to their Cap. “Crap, I’m so sorry, I didn’t mean.....” she started but looked at the figure on the floor that she’d knocked down. “What the hell were you doing standing there?” she hissed.

Nate picked himself up. “Appearantly finding out about all this paperwork I’m behind on,” he muttered.

“You were spying on me?! I don’t believe you!” she yelled.

“No, dammit, why would I want to spy on you?” Nate replied. “I had to ask Cap a question on the Brown case.”

“Oh,” CD replied and blushed. “But yeah, I told her about your behind paperwork, and I wanted to work in the field all day, so Jin.....”

“Has replaced me, I heard,” he muttered as he walked back to his desk.

CD sighed. “No she hasn’t, Nate,” she paused to grab about 10 files from her desk. “These need to be finished, you have some more that need to be done, so I needed a partner. You know what it feels like to need a partner?” she asked him accusingly.

“If this is about last night.......” he started.

CD snorted. “Don’t flatter yourself, I’ve obviously forgotten about last night until you brought it up just now,” she lied.

Jinny walked through the door at that opportune time.

CD grinned sweetly at Nate. “Excuse me, my PARTNER is here,” she emphasized and strided to Jinny to explain the situation.

After going into Kate’s office and getting a case, five minutes later the two women were gone.

“Bitch,” he muttered under his breath as he started filling out the rest of CD’s reports.

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[turtle63102]

GET BACK HERE AND DO A HAPPY POST! lol

[*Nancy Mckeon*]

mmmmoooooorree!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[maria1986]

That was good, but CD and Nate need to admit how they feel and stop acting like that! So get your reeking ass back here and post more!

[Snowfall]

Oh, COME ON!!!!!!!! (And I know that you know what I mean by that ) Get back here and make it all good!

[planet_stella]

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
Nate lied in his bed later that night, feeling like a fool.

I wonder why..... Argh!! Lisa!!!! People here want a happy post!!!! Ya know,the one where CD and Nate screw like rabbits or something like that.......lol Post more soon!

[candace~n~nathan]

Originally posted by planet_stella
I wonder why..... Argh!! Lisa!!!! People here want a happy post!!!! Ya know,the one where CD and Nate screw like rabbits or something like that.......lol Post more soon!

HEY! u keep up this complaining, and I'll kill em both off!! We all know I sometimes have the audacity to do that!!

P.S. LOOK AT THE TITLE!!!


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1 pm rollled around, and Nate’s stomach let out a huge grumble. “Where is she?” he
muttered to himself. After they’d started casually dating, him and CD went out to lunch
every day together. There were days when they were partnered with someone else, but
they always met up at the Division to go to Anchoside.

Twenty more minutes passed, Nate had munched down a couple of candy bars to hold
him off while he waited for CD. He was on her last file when her and Jinny came
laughing through the door.

“CD,” Nate announced when he saw her.

She looked over at him. “Excuse me,” she murmured to Jinny and walked to his desk.
“What is it? You got a question about a case?” she asked him nicely.

He shook his head. “No, but are you ready to go eat? I’m starving.”

“Oh, I’m sorry, Jin and I grabbed a bite about an hour ago; we were too hungry to
wait.”

Nate’s eyes widened. “Uh, why didn’t you call me? I’ve been waiting on you, so I could
eat!” he exclaimed.

“Nate, shhhh,” she replied. “I’m sorry, we got hungry, so we ate. It’s NOT a big deal.”

“Like hell it isn’t! I was starving, CD! All you had to do was pick up your damn
cellphone and call me!” he shouted.

Kate came out of her office. “Inspectors, everything ok out here?”

“YES!” CD and Nate shouted angrily.

“Follow me,” CD grumbled and led Nate into the interrogation room.

He sat down in the chair and propped his head on his arm. “What is it?”

“You know damn well what it is, look at me!” she exclaimed and grabbed his face to look
at her.

He shot back out of the seat, so they were face to face. “I thought you’d forgotten about
last night?” he asked her sarcastically. “So why did you purposely leave me today and
then “forget” to call me for lunch?”

“I didn’t want to work with an ******* today!” CD shouted.

“Good, I don’t want to work with a ****ing bitch! Maybe we should ask for
replacements!” he screamed right in her face. Their noses were so close they almost
touched.

CD completely forgot about their argument, grabbed his neck and pressed his lips
against hers. She wrapped her arms around him tightly as she pulled him down to the
table.

[maria1986]

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
HEY! u keep up this complaining, and I'll kill em both off!! We all know I sometimes have the audacity to do that!!

P.S. LOOK AT THE TITLE!!!

Noooooooo!!!! If you do that, I'll find out where your house is and kick your ass!!!!

no really, that was WONDERFUL!!! Hurry up and post some more of this great fic(and make Nate return that kiss!).

[turtle63102]

That was pretty good! Now post more!

[Snowfall]

Originally posted by turtle63102
That was pretty good! Now post more!

Pretty good?! That was AMAZINGLY good!!!!!! I love that post!!! Do it again soon!