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02-23-2004, 08:44 PM
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Jessica NMK FlaVa
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1st fan fic..a short one..so far..
This is called " Continued after "Thats them".
Starts: (In doctors office) Jinny: Baby??! What baby? You mean you found out from the blood tests that I am pregnant? Doctor: You didn't know that? ( He asks in a little bit of shock) Jinny: No! I really didn't! Doctor: Well, we did run the blood tests 3 times Miss Exstead. Jinny: But how..oh my god.. Doctor: Are you going to be ok? Jinny: Uh..yeah..umm thank-you for telling me this.. i guess ( she said in a shocked and worried voice) Magda: Oh my god, Jin..you and Hank? Oh my..I just cant beleive this..are you okay? Jinny: Oh my god is right! Magda, whats going to happen? I cant raise a baby or even deal with having one right now! oh my..god..this has to be a dream...(she said in a shakey shocked voice) Magda: Jinny, this is a real shocker..and I know how you must feel..and your right..this is too much for you to handle. What are you going to tell Hank? Jinny: How am I going to tell him??! How am I? I dont know Mag! I am so scared right now! Oh god..I can't even put this into words! I just got out of the divorce and all..and I am just beginning to feel some happiness and actually feel..good about myself! Hows this going to happen? How? I have enough problems to deal with!! I know I'm not ready to have a baby..and you know im not..What am I going to do? I wish i could just wake the hell up! ( Jinny exclaimed in a scared voice and bolted down the hallway) ( Magda followed her and they caught the elavator) (Jinny started to get panicy and then got teary eyed) That was it so far>ill post more very soon..i always continue stuff like this..i just made one up quickly..ill try to finish most of it before 2 wks when the real continuing ep comes along!xoxoJessie Bye |
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02-23-2004, 08:52 PM
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That was GREAT! I need more of this fic..NOW!!! hee j/k post more when ya can Jessie!
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02-23-2004, 09:06 PM
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This whole fan fic is just based on Magda and jinny and Hank and all..
Starts: (In the car) Magda: I still can't..believe that this is happening to you.. Jinny: how do you think I feel Magda? Magda: I can only imagine Jinny: Its like im in a nightmare..this just can't be true! Magda: Jin, they did it 3 times Jinny: I'm positive..it is Hank's Magda: When are you..uh planning to tell him? Jinny: I really want to as soon as possible..when we discussed our relationship, we decided not to keep any secrets from eachother. So this wont stop me from telling him about his baby. Jinny: Besides he deserves to know..( Jinny said very frustrated) Magda: I'm hear for you though, its going to be ok..well figure something out. You were there for me when I had my pregnancy scare, right? Jinny: Yeah, she said with a chuckle..and the getting serious she said but this isnt a scare..this is real. Magda: I know..and I don't want you to keep any secrets from me either..let me know when you need support, Jin. I will help you. I am going to suggest that you go see your therapist if you feel too overwhelmed and talk to her a little. Jinny: Really Mag..i dont need.. Magda: Jinny, please..and no your not a nut job..she's just going to help you through it a bit..like she did before when you found out that you were depressed. Jinny: Ok, I will. ( she said feeling a tad bit better and trying to get her mind off what she heard today) Ok thats it so far..remember this is a quick short mainly about jinny and magda fan fic of whats gonna happen in the next episode. (More magda moments soon..coming up)xoxoJessie bye |
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02-23-2004, 09:29 PM
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WOW that was great please post more !!!!cant wait to read what happens next!!!!
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02-23-2004, 10:22 PM
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Jessica NMK FlaVa
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Guys you know whats weird..I wrote a little fan fic about Jinny and Hank continueing after the kiss in the paint room and I put that they were in the shower and all..its like im psycic! lol ..Tya! Im posting more!!
Starts: ( Magda dropped Jinny off hr house (mags house) and they were sitting on her bed talking and Magda let Jinny spend the night. Meanwhile Magdas on the phone) Magda: Jin I'm going to call Gabe and see how him and Ben are doing, ok? Jinny: Go ahead..Im just gonna read a magazine about pregnancy. It shows some of the phases you go through. Magda: Hey thats a goof idea. Gabe: Hello? Magda: Gabe? Gabe: Magda, uh hi, how have you been lately? Magda: Ok I guess, how are you doing with Ben, is the trip going well? Gabe: oh we really are having fun Magda: Thats terrific, I hope Ben wasnt upset at all still from back at the house. Gabe: Actually me and Ben did have a little talk about me leaving and all. Magda: Oh..and Gabe I do deserve to be yelled at..I know I made a very big mistake.. Gabe: Even though you did something foolishand were under alot of stress, I am willing to forgive you. you have given me a second chance for something that I did foolish. By leaving you pregnant with Ben. Magda: Really..umm..Gabe, you dont know how good it feels to have those words spoken to me ( she says a little teary eyed) Gabe: Well, you gave me an opportunity to change, and I think I can forgive you. Magda: If you decide to, Thank you, Gabe I really should of told you how unhappy I was getting, and how I was sinking further into depression. I just wanted a strong marriage with some love, honesty, and trust. And I still do...(she said starting to cry and her thorat acheing) Magda: It's just that, you've been gone on all your trips and... Gabe: I know Mag, look I'll call you saturday night, ok, Here's Ben. I still love you Magda, remember that. Ben: Hey mom! Magda: Hi, baby tell me about your trip on Saturday ok because mommy's gotta get back to work real quick. Ben: Ok, talk to you on Saturday then. Magda: Ok honey! Ben: Bye mom! Magda: Bye. Thats it so far..isnt it weird though how i was gonna write my own version of what happened next before last nugts ep and I like wrote that theyd be in the shower and Hank would be telling Jinny where things were under the sink and in that episode we saw she told him where they were lolxoxoJessie MoRe to come! I post fast..if u like it youll be thankful ill be writing it! lol Bye 
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02-24-2004, 03:30 PM
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POST WHATEVER U GOT THIS IS GOOD
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02-24-2004, 04:41 PM
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post anything and fast its good so far!!
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02-24-2004, 04:58 PM
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Jessica NMK FlaVa
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MoRe
Tya for all the replies lol I'm gonna start thinking up some stuff to write now..Hmmm..oh got an idea!
Starts  Morning at Mags house)Magda: Jinny, wake up come on we have to go to work, now! Jinny: (just opened her eyes) It's time already..huh.. Magda: Uh yea Jin! We overslept, here just put my purple t-shirt on, get ready..and ill call captain. Jinny: I need pants Mag..look tell captain Ill be over there in like 30 minutes, ok?' Magda: Alright..oh my god what a crazy week this has been..and not just for me! Jinny: Damn it, I lost my earing! Magda: Ill search my bed when we get off from work later. Jinny: Ok, uh just let me get my shoes on and Ill be outa here.. Magda: Hey Jin, did you sleep well at all? Jinny: Oh my..I forgot..Im pregnant.. arent I? That really wasnt a dream, was it Mag? Magda: Im afraid not Jin. Jinny: Oh..god..umm Im gonna go now, Ill see you in 30.(she said a little confused and worried) Magda: Bye Jinny ( she said as she sighed) Thats it so far..Ill post more soon..rememebr this short story revolved around Magda and Jinny..lol Ill finish it before the next ep continues lol xoxoJessie |
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02-24-2004, 05:03 PM
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Jinny Exstead Riley
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SHORT BUT SWEET PLEASE POST MORE
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02-24-2004, 05:57 PM
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why do you always type in capital letters? lol mmooooorrrreee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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02-24-2004, 06:01 PM
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Jinny Exstead Riley
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Cause i like 2lol
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02-24-2004, 06:40 PM
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I love this fic. Moooooooooooooooooooore!
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02-24-2004, 07:02 PM
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Jessica NMK FlaVa
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MoRe
Heres some more..
Starts Jin and Mag are at work now)Kate: Nate, did you check Gary Danzigers records? Any criminal ones from his past or recently? Nate: No..the guys clean..clean enough to be a saint! Raina: Thats for sure, I went to have a little chat with Garys friends..his family..it turns out that his family never would think hed be involved in any kind of trouble. They also said that when he was a kid he had the honor roll every year and alot of the times they were straight A's, plus he was grounded once in his life. Hard to beleive and he went to college..one of the finest ones in the country. Then became a very good doctor after his parents helped him through medical school. From his friends, which there was alot, they told me that he was involved with charity. Its like saying hes definitly not a suspect and definitly did not murder any of his patients. Even though he was in that area close to that time. Nate: Surprised he isnt a frigen priest.. Kate: Yeah well, usually when we find out about something like that..about people, we assume they're perfect. But later the police uncover that they are the murderers. Funny how life fools ya huh? Raina: You said it captain. I know this was short..but ill be back on soon to post the rest i was gonna write..bye xoxoJessie |
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02-24-2004, 07:03 PM
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Jessica NMK FlaVa
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guys sry bout tha sad smiley face..accidently posted it there lol bye
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02-24-2004, 07:20 PM
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Jessica NMK FlaVa
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Re: MoRe
[QUOTE]Originally posted by OjiNmagnatebonnO
[B]Heres some more.. Starts Jin and Mag are at work now)Kate: Nate, did you check Gary Danzigers records? Any criminal ones from his past or recently? Nate: No..the guys clean..clean enough to be a saint! Raina: Thats for sure, I went to have a little chat with Garys friends..his family..it turns out that his family never would think hed be involved in any kind of trouble. They also said that when he was a kid he had the honor roll every year and alot of the times they were straight A's, plus he was grounded once in his life. Hard to beleive and he went to college..one of the finest ones in the country. Then became a very good doctor after his parents helped him through medical school. From his friends, which there was alot, they told me that he was involved with charity. Its like saying hes definitly not a suspect and definitly did not murder any of his patients. Even though he was in that area close to that time. Nate: Surprised he isnt a frigen priest.. Kate: Yeah well, usually when we find out about something like that..about people, we assume they're perfect. But later the police uncover that they are the murderers. Funny how life fools ya huh? Raina: You said it captain. Nate: Let's go talk to Gary and see if we can uncover something..in the way he acts or anything. Raina: Its worth a shot. (Magda walks into Kates office) Magda: Sorry Captain, I overslept a little and I have had a pretty rough week too. Kate: Its fne, its just that youve never done that before.. Magda: I know..itll never happen again though. Kate: Like I said its fine. Magda: Like I said on the phone, Jinny will be arriving soon. Kate: Okey dokey. Magda: Listen, Jinny had a very rough day yesterday, so dont be surprised if shes a little off. Kate: Not too off, I hope.. Magda: No..you know what, all i meant was, she hit he head yesterday and she had a mild concusion. Kate: She shouldnt of came to work today.. Magda: Sgould I call her up on her cell and let her know that. She needs rest. kate: Absoloutly, you do that while I go check how Stacys doing with copying some records. Brb jesie |
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