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~*~Lep andjeo~*~
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OKay, waiting, and that was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna know what it is too.
POst more sooooooooooon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Hmmmf Looks like ya got a new page, and a NEW reader....Mawahahahah call for more don't ya think????????
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~*~TilOWCCSA~*~ Can you see the flying monkeys coming out of Nate's butt? Many people are different. Many people are the exactly same..what the same people have to learn is that there are different kinds of people. Cat is the sexiest Division fan WE ALL LIVE IN THE DIVISION SUBMARINE... DIVISION SUBMARINE |
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ok, so u twisted my arm!! lol, here's a little more! *********** At precisely noon there was a knock on CD’s door. She ran to it and was disappointed to find a man she’d never met standing face to face with her. “Hello, can I help you?” she asked. “Yes, are you Candace DeLorenzo?” the shorter man asked. She nodded. “Yes, I am, and you are?” The man smiled. “I’m your driver, ma’am,” he explained and saw her bag and box. “Is this all of your luggage?” She nodded, confused. “Um, did you say driver?” “Yes, Ms. DeLorenzo, your car is waiting downstairs if you’d follow me.” She shrugged and decided to fall in behind him. He insisted on taking both items and led her down to her ride. A white stretch limo was sitting outside for her. The man opened the trunk and put her stuff in, and then he opened the door for her. “Um, thank you very much,” she muffled, still a little uneasy. He got in as well, and CD started talking to him. “Where are we going?” she asked him. He smiled. “It’s a surprise, Ms. DeLorenzo.” She grinned as well. “Call me, CD, Sir.” He nodded. “Alright CD, you can call me Carl then.” “Okay, Carl, so can you at least tell me if Nate will be waiting for me, or do I have to wait even more for him?” “Mr. Basso will be there, CD,” he explained. “He had to go ahead of you to situate and confirm the details. She nodded and rode silently to her destination. ************ Carl pulled up to the Hilton hotel. “We’re here, CD!” he excitedly told her. She was in awe at the fancy and deluxe aspects of the place. “Oh my gosh,” she murmured as Carl opened the door for her. “Alright, Ma’am, I’ll take you to your meeting place,” he replied and got out his cellphone. CD followed Carl into the hotel, and Carl placed a call. “Yes, Sir, yes, alright,” he said and hung up the phone. “What’s going on?” CD asked him. “Mr. Basso needs a couple of more minutes, but he told me that my job is done, so here is where I leave you,” he explained. “Good luck, CD,” he encouraged her. She nodded and shook his hand. “Thank you so much, Carl,” she replied and watched him leave. CD stood there waiting for Nate for a good five minutes before he walked down to greet her. She grinned from ear to ear as soon as she saw him. “Hi sweety,” he welcomed her with a kiss. “You’re late,” she teased him and gave him a hug. |
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Drunk guy: What's her name? Is it Jennifer? It's usually Jennifer. Is it Heather? Sometimes it's Heather. Nate- It's Candace. But we, uh, call her CD. |
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“"You’re late,” she teased him and gave him a hug."
You TEASE us by leaving us there! Twist arm a lil more....More please!!!!! |
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CD and Nate Forever
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Aw, wow, I that was so wonderful! I love your fics so much, Lisa. They're so sweet, just the way I like them!
Post more soon.
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HATCHEE GAL
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww Nate is such a sweety!...I love him....
...now post some more!
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Kat with a "K" It's so much more romantic. What is greater than God, More evil than the devil, The poor have it, The rich need it, And if you eat it, you'll die? I asked God for all things that I might enjoy life. God said, No. I will give you life, so that you may enjoy all things. |
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thank you guys sooooooooooooooo much for all of the replies!! Here's some more!!!!
******************** She grinned from ear to ear as soon as she saw him. “Hi sweety,” he welcomed her with a kiss. “You’re late,” she teased him and gave him a hug. He laughed. “I know, I’m sorry. Can you ever forgive me?” She smirked. “Maybe, depends on what you have in store for me.” He grinned. “Oh, CD, you have NO idea,” he replied and took her hand. “Let’s go find out what you have to look forward to.” She nodded and reached down for her stuff. “No no, don’t you dare!” he exclaimed and picked up her bag and the dress. “Did you like it?” he asked and held up the box. She grinned and kissed his cheek. “I loved it so much, thank you Nate.” He nodded and silently led her upstairs to their suite. They got into their room, and CD was amazed at what he had been up to. “Nate, you’ve been busy!” she expressed her happiness as she looked around. More roses, this time red, white, and pink, were spread throughout the room. Candles surrounded the bed, and champagne was chilling by the CD player, which had the mode music playing. Chocolate covered strawberries were on the other side of the bed, and Hershey Kisses were generously placed from the floor up to the bed. “What are the kisses on the floor for?” she asked him. He blushed. “You’re going to think I’m corny,” he realized and started to pick them up. She grinned and took his hand. “No, I won’t!” she promised him and put her arms around him. “Tell me, Nate,” she paused and pouted her bottom lip. “Please?” He smiled and decided to tell her. “Well, I was planning on telling you what those kisses represent,” he started and looked at the ground, blushing. “Um, well, uh....” “Nate, look at me,” she said and brought his face back to hers. “Tell me,” she repeated. He nodded. “The kisses represent what I feel for you. Now that I’ve kissed the ground you walk on, I would love more than anything to kiss you like there’s no tomorrow.” She blushed and kissed him passionately, pulling away long enough to murmur, “That WAS incredibly corny, but it was the sweetest corny line I’ve ever heard,” she reassured him and let him kiss her just how he’d been wanting to since day one. She led him to the bed and laid down on it for him to climb on top of her. Of course Nate did, and he started kissing her all over. “I love you, sweety, more than you’ll ever know,” he whispered against her skin. She grinned. “I love you, too,” she replied and began to rip at his shirt. He kissed her once more before standing up and buttoning his shirt first. “Nuh uh,” he shook his pointer finger at her, “no peeking yet. You’re surprising day isn’t over yet,” he teased her. you guys didn't really want more, did you????
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Merf. Just...merf.
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*makes puppy eyes* More, pwease?
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- Jaime - wingedorange.net ------------------------------------ Nate: What's the fascination with boxing? CD: I like to punch people. People who ask questions. |
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CD and Nate Forever
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OMG, that was so FABULOUS!!!! I love this fic so much. Nate is such a romantic! Oh, if only guys like him actually existed!
I can't wait for more of this, Lisa, so come back here and write!
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TRACEY FOREVER!!!
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yeah really!!!!!!! More lisa!!!!!!!!!
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Merf. Just...merf.
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*sighs* It'd be so nice to write my own romantic visions and implant them in his head.
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HATCHEE GAL
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awww I love this!...and I love Nate!...I wish I could find a guy like him?
...wait, is there even guys like him out there???...oh anyway...that was great so get back here and post more!
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Awwwwwwwwwwwww that was so adorable!!!!
Nate's such a sweet guy......I love this fic!Post more soooooooooon!
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i'm pretty sure-- NOOOOOOOOOOOOO, there isn't!!!!!! lol thanks for all the fast responses, so here's more!!!! *********** She grinned. “I love you, too,” she replied and began to rip at his shirt. He kissed her once more before standing up and buttoning his shirt first. “Nuh uh,” he shook his pointer finger at her, “no peeking yet. You’re surprising day isn’t over yet,” he teased her. “It’s good enough, Nate,” she whined. “You can show me everything else after this,” she told him and began to unbutton her shirt. “Come here and help me,” she purred and got on her knees up on the mattress. He smiled and put his hands on the buttons, on her breasts, before kissing her sweetly. “You made the rules, baby,” he murmured and played with her shirt before buttoning it back up. “Now you gotta follow them.” “Naaaate,” she complained. “I don’t want to.” He smiled and went to obtain her dress. “Here, put this on, and we’ll go downstairs and eat.” He grinned. “THEN maybe we can do what YOU want,” he teased. She grinned. “Okay, deal,” she replied and accepted the dress. She unbuttoned the first button. “Sure you don’t want to help?” He shook his head no. “Not right now, baby, you do it. I’ll go change in the bathroom,” he replied, kissed her cheek, and left her to be alone. “Fine,” she muttered and took off her shirt and pants. She put her evening wear on for the second time and decided that she looked great. She got out her make up bag and added some blush, eyeliner and lip gloss to set off her look. Her hair was cute, flipped out and perfect, and she was ready to go. Nate came out of the bathroom in a three piece suit and his hair was combed down, looking neat as a pin. He blushed when he saw how perfect that dress that he’d picked for her actually looked. He knew she’d look great, but his heart wasn’t ready for what stood in front of him. “You look absolutely gorgeous, CD,” he told her and outstretched her arms to get a full look at her. The dress clung to her curves and accentuated her breasts. “Absolutely gorgeous.” She blushed. “Thank you,” she murmured, not used to those kind of compliments. “You look pretty amazing yourself.” He nodded. “Of course I do, you’re standing right beside me!” She giggled. “Stop it, Nate, you’re embarrassing me!” He smiled and slipped something out of a box. “Here, let’s make your wrist look as beautiful as the rest of you,” he said and slipped a matching red and white rose corsage. She grinned. “Thank you, it’s beautiful,” she commented. “You’re welcome,” he replied and looked at her other wrist. “That doesn’t look right,” he remarked as he took her wrist into his hands. “What’s wrong with it?” CD asked him. He grinned. “It looks so bare,” he replied and pulled out yet another box. “Maybe this will help it out a little.” CD shook her head. “Nate! I don’t need anything else.” He smiled. “Doesn’t matter, you get it anyway.” She sighed but opened the little jewlry box excitedly. In it was a silver bracelet with “Candace” engraved in the middle of it. On each side of her name were two cut out hearts. “Nate, it’s beautiful,” she told him as she flipped it over. In the inside were three little words that always felt good to hear- ‘I love you.’ CD blushed and kissed his cheek. “Thank you so much for this day, Nate. I don’t deserve any of this,” she told him as she put her arms around him. He shook his head. “CD, you deserve so much more than what I can give you. “ She disagreed. “No, I don’t Nate, all I need is you. You don’t have to spoil me with all of these gifts.” “But it’s fun!” he remarked. “I want you to know how special you are to me.” She nodded. “I understand that, and I appreciate it so much,” she replied. “And Nate?” He smiled. “Yes?” “Please let me pay you back for all of this. I don’t need all of it, and you shouldn’t have to buy all of it. I’ll pay half at least,” she promised him as he shook his head. “Sure you can pay for it,” he smirked. “Not with money, though. You’ve got a LOT to make up for all of this,” he teased her, “and you can start making payments as soon as we go back upstairs,” he explained to her. She giggled and got right up in his face. “You can count on it,” she told him and held out her hand, ready for him to escort her downstairs.
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