I Turn to You

[Snowfall]

YESSSSS!!!! I want more of this! I want to know what happens! Post more soon!

[Snowfall]

Well, would you look at that, Lisa...... A NEW PAGE!

[candace~n~nathan]

Originally posted by wingedorange
I this story. 'Tis cute!

NEW READER NEW READER!! lol, in THAT case (and b/c of maria's comment that i SO agree w/ ) (and Cat's comment= i don't EVER wanna be bored again! ), i'll just post some more!!


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After their “meeting” was adjourned, and they’d picked their out of
breath bodies off the floor, Nate asked her, “So does this mean that your
date with Brian is off tonight?”
CD sighed as they walked out the door. “Nate, I don’t know. I think
I should talk to Brian face to face.”
“But you’re going to break up with him then?” he asked her
hopefully.
“Nate, I don’t know!” she shouted as he sweetly held the door open
for her. “Thanks,” she muttered and got in.
He swung around to the driver’s side and sat down. “CD, I don’t
want to keep pestering you, but I’d like to know if I have a chance with
you or not!” he whined.
“Nate, I don’t know. I honestly think we’re making a big mistake,
so I don’t think we should be with each other as more than just partners
and best friends,” she explained.
“And there’s nothing I can do to change your mind?” he asked her
sadly.
“You can let me make my own decisions,” she muttered. “And it’s kind of
hard for me to trust you, since you’d lay me an hour after you’ve broken
up with your girlfriend. What does that tell me about what you’d do to me
the first time we get in a fight?”
“CD!” Nate exclaimed. “I am in love with you, why can’t you see
that?” he asked her. “Ask me for anything, I’ll give it to ya, or I’ll find it
for ya. Go ahead, ask me.”
CD decided to play his little game. “Fine, I want you to take me by
surprise, do something for me that I would never think a man would do,
and I want you to promise you can always be honest with me, no matter
how hard it is.” she sighed when she saw his bedazzled look. “Ya see? I
told you that I was too much for you.”
“No, it’s not that at all!” Nate replied. “I didn’t think you’d make it
that easy!” he admitted and kissed her.
“Nate, no, I mean it, don’t kiss me,” she remarked and pulled
away.

and the verdict is???

[candace~n~nathan]

Originally posted by "Snowfall"
Well, would you look at that, Lisa...... A NEW PAGE!

aw we must have posted at the same time!! i would've included u too i promise!! LOL

[Snowfall]

And the verdict is that this is GREAT! Of course, YOU wrote it!

A little bird needs to land on CD's shoulder and tell her to lighten up and go with it!

Post more soon!

[Snowfall]

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
aw we must have posted at the same time!! i would've included u too i promise!! LOL

And, man, THERE we go again and post at the same time!

[maria1986]

Originally posted by "Snowfall"
And the verdict is that this is GREAT! Of course, YOU wrote it!

A little bird needs to land on CD's shoulder and tell her to lighten up and go with it!

Post more soon!

yeah totally!...

[wingedorange]

The verdict is...the story rocks my socks.

[candace~n~nathan]

here's smore!!!!


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“Nate, no, I mean it, don’t kiss me,” she remarked and pulled away.
He nodded. “Sorry, I just got a little excited,” he explained and put
her face into his hands. “CD, I’ll do one thing for you right now. I
absolutely promise you that I will be completely honest with you for the
rest of my life. I will love you and cherish you and.......”
“Nate, stop,” she commented and put a finger to his lips. “Not yet,
I have some business to tend to,” she replied and got out her cellphone.
“Hello?” a voice answered.
“Hi, it’s CD.”
“CD!” Brian exclaimed. “Did ya change your mind?”
“No, I’m busy tonight,” CD told him. “But I need to see you; would
you have any time to stop by the Division, before or after one of your
clients?”
“Of course I can, honey!” Brian happily said. “I can be right over,
actually. I don’t have a client until 10.”
She nodded. “Okay, I’ll be at the Division in 5 minutes, so whenever
you can make it, I’ll be there” she replied and hung up.
Nate smiled and kept his eyes on the road as he drove happily the
rest of the way to work.

CD paced the floor until Brian showed up. She was getting herself
and Nate each a cup of coffee when he came in, and he decided to
surprise her.
He came up from behind her, put his hands across her eyes and
kissed her neck. “Hey baby, guess who!” he purred into her ear.
He took her by surprise, and she immediately spilled both cups of
coffee, mainly on the front of her shirt. “Dammit, look what you made
me do!” she shouted.
“I’ll get some paper towel,” Nate told her and stood up.
She shook her head. “Don’t worry about it, this shirt is ruined
anyway,” she mumbled as she peeled the clingy white shirt away from her
skin. “Brian and I need to talk now anyway,” she replied and walked him
into an empty interrogation room.
“CD, I’m so sorry,” Brian apologized. “I didn’t mean....”
She held her hand up. “I know you didn’t mean to spill coffee on
me, Brian, it’s alright.” she sighed. “I have to tell you something that
you’re not going to like,” she mumbled and stared at the ground.
“What is it?” he asked her worriedly. “You don’t want to go to the
art festival with me this weekend?”
She shook her head. “That’s not it, but now that you say it, I can’t
go with you there.” she paused. “Or anywhere for that matter.”
“Huh?”
“We can’t see each other anymore, Brian, I’m so sorry,” she told him. “I
would be lying to you if I said I was completely happy because I’m not. I
want more than what we have. I NEED more, Brian, and we just can’t give
that to each other.”
“What do you need?” he pleaded. “I promise, CD, we can figure out
something! I’ll change! I’ll stop chewing with my mouth open and cooking
all the time! We can go out more often! I’ll let my wife have Michael more
often!”
CD shook her head. “No, Brian, that’s crazy!” she exclaimed. “I
don’t want to date you anymore, and that’s that,” she sighed. “I’m so
very sorry I’ve hurt you,” she said, almost whispering.
“Not as sorry as I am,” Brian muttered and walked out of the
room.
CD lied her head onto the table and gently teared up. She didn’t want to
cry, and frankly, she didn’t really need to cry because she hadn’t ever
loved Brian. He was a great guy, but he wasn’t what she needed in her life
forever.

[Snowfall]

Ooooh, how SWEET! I love this fic! Post more soon!

[CD DeLorenzo]

Yeah Lisa! Where are ya at? Sleeping? School? WASTE OF TIME!!!!!!!!!!! Get back here and post more!!!!!!

[candace~n~nathan]

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
Yeah Lisa! Where are ya at? Sleeping? School? WASTE OF TIME!!!!!!!!!!! Get back here and post more!!!!!!

Since SOMEONE left me really early last night, I had plenty of time to write more, so have at it! PLUS, I got 9 hours of sleep, wasted away at school, AND we're under 2 hour delay again tomorrow! WAHOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! So here's more!!!!

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CD lied her head onto the table and gently teared up. She didn’t want to
cry, and frankly, she didn’t really need to cry because she hadn’t ever
loved Brian. He was a great guy, but he wasn’t what she needed in her life
forever.

Nate watched Brian storm out and decided to give CD a couple of
minutes to recooperate. When she didn’t come out 15 minutes later, he
decided to check up on her.
She had her face in her hands, and she was staring off into space.
She had cried a little, and her make up had smeared. All he could see
was how beautiful his heartbroken guardian angel looked.
He didn’t say a word because he knew she wouldn’t want to talk,
but he simply put his arms around her.
She turned around and buried her body onto him. “Don’t ever let
me go,” she whispered as she held on to him.
He nodded. “Never, CD, I promise.”
She stayed in this silent arms for a couple of minutes, but she soon
broke away. “Let’s get back to work, alright? I don’t need to think about
this right now.”
He nodded and looked at her as she stood up to leave. “Wait, CD, I
think I need to offer you this,” he replied and took his button up shirt off.
“Why?” she questioned him as he situated his short sleeve shirt.
Her white shirt had become completely seethrough, and her pink
bra had shown through. He could see a perfect outline of each of her
breasts, and even though he immensely enjoyed it, he didn’t want anyone
else basking in his wealth.
“I don’t want anyone taking a peek at your merchandise before I
finish my good deeds and get to have an eye witness view!” he explained
to her and wrapped the shirt around her, even buttoning it for her as
well. “That’s better!”
She rolled her eyes and grinned. “Why, thank you, Sir,” she
laughed. “And yes, if you’re expecting us to get together, then you’d
better have a surprise and an unexpected event planned for me soon, or
you’ll have no chance!” she joked.
“You got it!” Nate exclaimed, and she laughed at his enthusiasm.
“Coming sometime soon, you won’t know what hit ya!” he promised her.
She got right into his face, her lips almost touching his. “Can’t
wait,” she whispered and walked away with his heart in her grasp.
“Damn woman, doesn’t know what she does to me,” he muttered
and followed his partner for work.

more anyone??

[maria1986]

yes more!!!!!....that was really good....

[CD DeLorenzo]

Always more babe!!!!!!!

You thrill me, you delight me
You please me, you excite me
You're something I'd been pleading for
I love you, I adore you
I lay my life before you
I'll have you want me more and more
And finally it seems my lonely days are through
I've been waiting for you

[1strunfan]

Well, I wasn't going to start reading any new fics, since you and Cat have so many that I'm reading already. But, since TS and Girls haven't been doing anything much today, I thought I'd start yet another.

IT"S AWESOME!!!!! You need to write more, since I am a new reader and all.