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[*Marilyn Monroe*]

Originally posted by #1_Nancy_McKeon


I resent that insinuation. LOL I don't describe it... I've read a lot worse- thank you very much. haha.... I write my fan fictions very nicely. At least I like them, I don't write too much more than they show on TV anyway. lol.....I still resent that though! Although I died laughing when I read that. hahaha...... Hmm, so Mag maybe pregnant- do I see a baby in Jinny's future too? Interesting concept............... I have no life- don't mind me! lol I look WAAAAYY too far into things.

lol i wrote that part after i read the graphic scene lol. You are a good writer though, u aren't the only one who likes them, when you said that at least you like your fics! BTW...about the Jinny being pregnant. I think that would be copying someone elses idea!
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Jinny drove the whole way to Magda’s house thinking about Teddy, and at every stop sign, she stared at the ring on her left hand. She couldn’t believe this was happening to her. Just the other night, she had been thinking about how awful her life was, and now she was happy and excited about her future. She couldn’t wait to tell Magda about the night before. Not all the details, of course, but before they had gone to bed.

Jinny pulled into Mag’s driveway and stepped out of the car. Ben had stayed the night with his father, so Mag hadn’t had to fight with him that morning. She came out before Jinny had even begun to climb the steps. “Hey Jin. What’s up?” Magda asked her friend.
“Nothing. How are you?” Jinny asked politely. She knew that Mag was dying to know details from the previous night.
“Good, I actually got to get up early and out without any fighting today!” Magda said, laughing.
“Oh, you know you miss him!” Jinny said.
“Yeah, but it’s nice to get away for awhile, you know?” Magda asked. She had had time to think the night before when she was alone. She was tired of thinking about the baby inside of her, if there even was one. “So…how was last night?”
“Fine. You’ll never guess what happened though.” Jinny said. She loved making Magda wait in suspense. She had cleverly hidden her left hand behind her back.
“What? Jinny, you cannot even do this to me!” Magda cried out.
“OK, this.” She whipped her hand out from behind her back and flashed it in front of Mag’s face.
“Oh my God! I didn’t think he’d actually do it!” Magda exclaimed.
“What? You knew about this?” Jinny asked, surprised.
“Well, we talked about it, because he said that he still loved you and I told him that you liked him too.”
“How’d you know?” Jinny asked.
“You always get that look when we talk about him or when he walks in the room. I could just tell! So, any dates set yet?”
“Nope, not yet.”
By this time, they had reached the station and were heading for the door. When they got to their floor, Jinny opened the door to the division. Inside, there were flowers and a teddy bear on her desk. She walked over to where they were and inspected them, definitely Teddy’s doing.
“Magda, come look at these!” She called out in Mag’s direction.
“How the heck did he get these here that fast?” Magda asked.
“I have no clue. He’s so sweet, though.” She said, gazing lovingly at the flowers.
“Jin, you’re getting the look!” Magda exclaimed. She loved when Jinny was with Teddy, because it meant that Jinny was in a constant good mood.
“Oh, shut up Mag!” Jinny said. She realized that the usual buzz of the division had hushed and everyone was looking at her, and her new flowers.

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

Originally posted by NancyMcKeon1987
BTW...about the Jinny being pregnant. I think that would be copying someone elses idea!

Well, I didn't think it would be copying. Afterall, it's not my storyline. It's only copying if people use the same names and write it exactly like mine. Otherwise- I have no problem with it. I want to know if Magda is pregnant though. That'll be interesting.................. which means. POST MORE!!!!! Please!!! Very good writing!

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Here's some more! As i said before, I write too much of this, then i have to make these huge posts of the fic! lol
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Captain Kate McCafferty also heard the news that day. She was in her office and she stepped out to see if Jinny and Magda were there yet, so she could start reading their assignments to them. She caught the end of the conversation, and wondered if maybe Gabe had sent Mag the flowers and the delivery people put them on the wrong desk. Then, she saw the diamond ring on Jinny’s finger, glistening in the sun from the nearby window. She put two and two together, but she still wondered who sent the flowers. She knew it was none of her business, but she still had to wonder.
“Magda, could you come to my office.” She asked, not in a question, more of a command.
“Yeah, sure.” Magda said, getting up from her desk, giving Jinny a look.
“Oooh” Jinny mouthed. Magda mouthed back to shut up.
“Magda, about your doctor’s appointment that you asked for time off for today. Is it something serious?” the Cap asked.
“Oh, no. I don’t think so anyways. I just…well, I may as well tell you. I think that I might be pregnant and I’m going to make sure.” She said.
“Oh, ok. I see.” Kate said, kind of in shock at Magda’s forwardness about the situation. “Anything else you want to tell me?” she asked, jokingly.
“Just that Jinny and Teddy are getting married.”

Mag walked out of Kate’s office with a sheepish look on her face. She knew that Jinny wouldn’t have wanted the Captain to know, but now she did. Oh well. I just won’t tell her, Mag thought to herself. Yeah, right Mag, you tell her everything.
“What did she want, Mag?” Jinny asked. “I didn’t hear any yelling.”
“Nope, she just wanted to know what the doctor’s appointment was for today. I also kind of told her that you and Teddy are getting married.” Mag said the last sentence very quietly.
“What?” Jinny asked, unsure if she had heard correctly.
“I told her that you and Teddy were going to get married.” Magda said, this time a little louder.
“Really? How did this come up?”
“I don’t know. It slipped. She asked if there was anything else that I wanted to tell her, and I said that you and Teddy were going to get married. She didn’t act surprised or anything.” Mag rambled.
Jinny smiled. “Mag, I don’t care. She would have found out sooner or later.”
“Oh, so you aren’t mad?” Mag asked Jinny, surprised.
“Nope, not at all.” Jinny replied. She loved making Mag guess. It was so much fun. “What time is the doctor’s appointment?”
“It’s at 11:30. Why, do you want to come?” Magda asked, jokingly.
“Oh, you know it!” Jinny said sarcastically. “I’ll leave you to the fun doctor’s appointments!”
“Thanks, Jin. I appreciate it.” Mag replied.

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Here's a little bit more for those that are still reading!
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As 11:30 approached, Magda began to worry. ‘Maybe I’m not even pregnant. Then what? I’ve already told people that I am. Then I’ll have to tell them that I’m not. And what about Gabe? You’ve got to tell him!’ she thought to herself. Both she and Jinny had again been lost in thought that day, Jinny thinking about her newfound relationship with Teddy, and Magda, evidently, about her baby and Gabe and Ben. At 11:00, she glanced at the clock, yet again, shot up from her seat at her desk. She grabbed her purse and jacket.
“Bye, Jin. I’m leaving.”
“Bye. Hey, good luck!” Jinny told her best friend.

As Magda climbed in her car, Jinny was getting ready to leave for an early lunch. She figured that she wouldn’t get much work done with Magda gone anyways, so she had called Theodore and asked if he could meet her somewhere. He had said that he’d needed to finish some paperwork, but he’d meet her at the Anchorside in about 20 minutes. After they hung up, Jinny realized her mistake. How could he have forgotten? She was newly sober. “This is going to be a challenge.” She muttered to herself.

At the doctor’s office, Magda signed herself in and took a seat next to an expectant mother. “How far along are you?” she asked, a smile on her face.
“About eight and a half months. When are you due?” The woman asked.
“To tell you the truth, I don’t really even know if I’m pregnant for sure! That’s what I’m here for.” She knew she was rambling, but she was nervous, and wanted to hurry and get this over with. The woman turned her attention back to the magazine that she was reading, so Magda got out of her seat and went over to the magazine rack. She picked an issue of People and settled herself in for the wait that was inevitable.

As Jinny walked into the bar, her mind was filled with memories of the past. She had a smile on her face as she remembered the time that she and Teddy had danced on their first date, and had been the only one’s to do so. But her expression quickly changed when she remembered the last time she and Teddy had been in this bar together. It had been the day that Teddy called off the trip to Napa. She had assumed that he was blowing her off, so she’d grabbed the first guy that she had seen, and started making out with him. She stopped there, because she saw Teddy waving at her from a booth in the back.
“Hey Jin, what’s up?” He asked.
“Nothing, just remembering, that’s all.” She replied.
“Do you want something to drink?” Teddy asked. “Water, Coke…”
“Water’s fine, thanks.” She replied. She wasn’t sure that he knew that she had quit drinking before, but when he offered her water and coke, she knew that he knew.
They spent the rest of the lunch date talking about their future. She had never realized how much she loved him until that moment. Teddy felt the same way, but he actually said something about it.
“Jinny, I’ve missed you so much. I know that I’ve only told you that about a million times, but I did. I’m so glad we’re back together.” He said to her and leaned across the table for a kiss.
“Teddy, I’ve missed you too.” She said, after the kiss had been broken off. “I love you and I can’t wait to get married.” Even she was shocked at the words that had just come out of her mouth.
“I’m happy, because I love you too. Let’s move in together.”

[Ewan's My Man]

AWESOME!!! I LOVE IT!!! Move in...eh...lol!

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Here's some more. Sorry it took so long!
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He sprung the question as a statement. This was a big thing for her, but she knew that she was ready for it.
“OK, let’s do it.” Jinny said, grinning sheepishly.
“So…where are we going to live?” Teddy asked. He knew that her apartment was the most convenient for the two of them to live in, but he wanted Jinny’s opinion.
“Well, would my apartment be ok?” Jinny suggested. She really liked the new place that she was living in. It had a pool, which was something that Jinny had looked for when she was looking for an apartment. She had really started to enjoy swimming. It was something new, which she needed. After rehab, she had lived with her dad for about six or seven months, then started to get restless. She wanted her own place, and she trusted herself enough now to stay away from the alcohol. Of course she was tempted at times, but she knew in her heart that she wasn’t going to go back to her old ways.
“Yeah, I think that’s a great idea. I was hoping that you’d suggest it.” Teddy said. He hadn’t been to the new apartment yet, but Jinny had described it to him. It sounded perfect for the two of them. She had picked an apartment that was in her budget, but was still cool. She wanted a huge bedroom, so she’d gotten a very cheap two-bedroom apartment. She figured that all of her things wouldn’t fit into a cheap one-bedroom, so she got a cheap two.
“I love you so much Jin, but I really have to get back to the office. I just had time for a short lunch anyway, and they are taking forever, so I’ll see you later.” He stood up and leaned down for a kiss. “I love you.”
“I love you too.” She said, and kissed him back.

Back at the division, CD and Nate were just getting back from questioning a couple of kids involved in some robbery turned murder. CD always hated those cases. Not so much the fact that it was kids that were involved, but it was the parents that got to her. She didn’t think that people who didn’t know where their kids were, at all times, were fit to be parents. CD and Nate had questioned the kids first, who were your everyday, normal teenagers. After questioning the kids, they went to the kids’ houses to question the parents about the whereabouts of their children. They had had no idea where there children were the night because they were too busy having a party where the rich people in the neighborhood came over and ate and drank. She couldn’t help but feel sorry for the kids who had done this. Even though they were going to have to face up to the consequences, she felt that it wasn’t really their faults. If their parents had taken better care of them…but that was a problem that she had with her job. All of the ‘what ifs’ and ‘if onlys.’ She had always had trouble with that part. But Nate didn’t seem to be affected in the same way by this case. Of course it made Nate mad, but it was all part of his job. CD chalked it up to his being a guy.
“CD, what’s wrong?” Nate asked as he was driving towards the division.
“Nothing,” was CD’s response.
“Don’t lie to me, CD! I can tell. You’re all moody and depressed. What’s wrong?”
“Nothing,” she said again. “OK, you can’t tell me that that didn’t piss you off back there.”
“What pissed you off?” he asked, completely oblivious to the fact that CD had been deeply effected by this case.
“The way that those parents didn’t even know where their kids were that night they had that party. They were too busy getting drunk or high with their snobby friends that they didn’t know. In my opinion, those kinds of people are not fit to be parents.” CD said.
“I understand how you feel, but you can’t do anything about it, so don’t think about it so much.”
“I don’t know why I let it get to me like I do.” CD said, lost in thought.
“It’s because you’re a woman. See, men don’t let things like this get to them. We just ignore the children and let the women take care of them.”
”Oh, shut up, Nate.” She cried, grinning at him.

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OK here's some more. I realize that a lot of this stuff is wrong, like Magda's whole doctor scene. I've never been pregnant, so i don't know the procedure. lol
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As Jinny was heading back up for the division, Magda was getting impatient at the doctor’s office. She had been waiting for a half an hour when the nurse finally stepped out the door and called, “Magda Ramirez.” She got up, set down the issue of People and walked with the nurse down a hall. She was shown to a room and her blood pressure was taken and was basically given a small check up.
“OK, Ms. Ramirez, the doctor will be with you shortly. Just take off your clothes and put these on.” The nurse said when the check up was done, handing her a paper gown.
“Thanks.” Magda said. As soon as the nurse had closed the door, she began getting undressed and put the gown on. She hated the feeling the gowns gave her. She couldn’t move without the paper crackling, and she felt naked. Twenty minutes later, the doctor came in.

“Hello, Magda. How are you today?” Doctor Moore asked.
“Good, you?” Magda asked back, to be polite.
“Fine. So, I hear that you are pregnant again.” Doctor Moore had been her doctor when she was pregnant with Ben.
“Actually, that’s what I’m here for. I don’t really know, and I wanted to be sure, you know?” Magda said, suddenly nervous.
“Yes, I understand. Well then, we’ll get started.” The doctor said.
The doctor took a sample of Magda’s blood and told her to lie out on the examination table.
“I’m just going to feel around your stomach, because sometimes I can tell that way.”
While the doctor was feeling Magda’s stomach, Magda was thinking about the baby inside of her. Could she really give this baby what it needed? She thought that she could, until she thought of how hard it had been with Ben, and she had been younger and in better shape then. How could she take care of an infant and an 8-year-old?
“OK, Magda. All done. I’ll go get the test results while you get dressed, OK?” the doctor informed her.
“OK, thanks.”

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