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monkeygirl · 02-10-2004, 12:37 PM

Nate sat in the hospital room, and Jinny walked in a little while later holding two coffees. She handed one to him.He took a sip, and stood up.
"what is this?" he asked
"it's a double malted mint chocolate with whipped cream and rasberry sprinkles mocha." Jinny smiled.
"Well, I'm kidding ya. I traded ours. Here, this one is the plain old coffee one." Jinny handed a coffee to him.
"thanks." Nate said, still with the I-just0drank-lemon-juice look on his face.
"sheesh, goof. get that look off your face." Jinny laughed.
"ok" Nate took a sip of his drink.
"Ah...... that's good." Nate sat back down.
"congratulations Jinny." Nate said
"what?" Jinny asked.
"Well, you got my mind off my troubles for a few minutes." Nate said.
"that's good. I hope you won't worry too much...." Jinny started to say.
"too much about what? whether or not my future wife is gonna die? Yeah, that's all I worry about" Nate said
"ok. well, if you need anything, I'll be right here." Jinny sat down right next him.
"Jinny.... do you think she'll be ok. I mean, well, the doctor said to say our goodbyes, but I can't help but think.......... well, I don't know." Nate said.
"well, I hope to God she'll be ok. I mean, I can't imagina a world without her." Jinny said.
"Really? you guys didn't seem that close."
"well, no. But I always really looked up to her. She always seemed to have it all together, and I didn't." Jinny looked around the room.
"Jinny. I need to get some shut eye....." Nate started to say.
"Sure, I'll stay up for ya. And wale you if anything changes." Jinny re assured him.
Nate laid down and closed his eyes. The next thing he knew Jinny was yelling.
"Nate! Nate! wake up! now!"

planet_stella · 02-10-2004, 12:45 PM

Why was Jinny yelling? That's because CD woke up????RIGHT??? RIGHT???? ARGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Post more!!!!

candace~n~nathan · 02-10-2004, 05:36 PM

and you stopped WHY?!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL, get back here and give me more!!!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 02-10-2004, 07:16 PM

Knowing Jinny I have a feeling she is just messing with his head..who knows. Post more soon so we can find out

croatian_princess · 02-10-2004, 08:11 PM

That was good! Post more! :P

monkeygirl · 02-11-2004, 12:23 AM

Nate jumped out of bed, and rubbed his eyes.
"what, Jinny........ oh my GOD!!!!" Nate started screaming.
"No! please God, no!" Nate started crying
the heart moniter went dead, CD had passed away.
The doctors and Nurses came rushing in. Nate grabbed one of them.
"Can't you do anything? Do something! Please! any money, I'll pay anything!" Nate screamed.
"Sorry, this is in the Lord's hands now. I can't do anything. But I'm very sorry for your loss" The doctor said
"yeah, right. like you care." Nate was so sad, he didn't care what he said.
Jinny took Nate's hand.
"c'mon. I'll take you home. We'll come back in the morning. Nothing good can come from us staying here." Jinny said
Nate reluctantly turned away and walked out. In the car on the way home, Jinny drove, and Nate sat in the passenger seat and cried.
"Do you know what I regret the most?" Nate asked
"what?" Jinny asked

"that I never got to say goodbye." Nate said
"don't be silly. you did every thing you could. If you had said goodbye, she wouldn't have heard you anyway." Jinny said
"Does that matter now? God, she's gone, and no words that you say are gonna make me feel better!" Nate said, tears streaming down his face.
"Yes, I know. I was that way when my mom died." Jinny started to cry now too.
Jinny pulled up in front of Nate's apartment.
"do you want me to come in with ya?" Jinny asked.
"No, I'll be okay. Thanks though." Nate got up and walked inside. Jinny waited until she knew he was in his apartment, then she pulled away, tears starting to come more frequently.

Snowfall · 02-11-2004, 02:33 AM

What are you doing, Deirdre? Oooh, good, you're sleeping now and I know your password, I can go and edit that post.....hehe...

j/k.

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 02-11-2004, 06:59 PM

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Originally posted by Snowfall
What are you doing, Deirdre? Oooh, good, you're sleeping now and I know your password, I can go and edit that post.....hehe... j/k.

PLEASE do that!!!!!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 02-11-2004, 07:12 PM

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Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
PLEASE do that!!!!!!!

oh yeah! And spank her ass when she wakes up!!!!!!!!!

monkeygirl · 02-12-2004, 03:55 PM

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Originally posted by Snowfall
What are you doing, Deirdre? Oooh, good, you're sleeping now and I know your password, I can go and edit that post.....hehe... j/k.

Okay, i just changed my password, lol I thought that would be in my best interest. And, after y'all read my final installment here, you'll relize WHY I had CD die.

Nate sat in his apartment late that night thinking.
"If only I'd gone with her to the hospital, if only I had figured out she was at Gina's earlier. If only I was physic" He was saying to himself. Then, he didn't know why, he found himself praying
"God? Are you there? Well, I know I'm not the praying type, and I don't really know what to say. Actually, I should be as mad as hell at you for taking away from me the only reason I take each breath, but anyway, this is my last hope. So I'll just come out and say it.
I'll do ANYTHING you want from me if you do something to bring her back. Anything, you name it. If you want me to donate all my money the some over seas mission, I'll do it. It's just that, oh, God, please!!!!! I'll do anything!!!! PLEASE! I BEG YOU" Nate looked up, and he was sitting at his desk at work, and he noticed his computer.
It said the time and date of the afternoon before CD got shot.
Then he noticed a message blinking on his screen:

You have one chance

Nate rubbed his eyes and looked at it again.
"what the heck....." he thought.
Then out of the corner of his eye he noticed some one walk up to him.
"hey, Nate, you wanna walk down with me?" Cd asked.
"How did you get here?" Nate asked.
"um, I drove." CD laughed.
"No, I mean, um, shot, hospital, death, messy...." Nate was stammering.
"Um,, are you okay? You don't look to good." CD asked
Then Nate finally figured it out. he had some how gone back into time to fix the problem.
"um, actually, now I'm great!" Nate said.
CD laughed. "I'll never figure you out."
Nate put on his jacket and walked out with her.
When they got put of the elevator CD asked "Nate?"
"yeah?" he answered.
"what are you doin' tonight?" she asked.
"having dinner with you I hope."
"Great. Well, i'm gonna stop by the hospital to visit Gina, so I'll meet you someplace. Where should I meet you?" CD asked
"actually, I think I'm gonna visit Gina with you." Nate walked next to CD
"Nate, I can take care of myself."
"yeah, well I'm gonna come anyway." he winked at her, and put his arm around her shoulders.
"Let's go." Nate said.
And they walked off together, and lived happily ever after

The End

candace~n~nathan · 02-12-2004, 04:20 PM

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Originally posted by monkeygirl
donate all my money to some over seas mission, I'll do it

EXCELLENT!!!! could he donate that $$ to the German mission?!!!! I want a particular dudette over HERE!!!!!

and that was great, Deirdre!!! MUCH better than the REAL ending to that movie!!

EXCELLENT JOB, so are you going to be writing another fic now?? B/c I think you should!!!!!!!!

planet_stella · 02-12-2004, 04:37 PM

Awwwwww yay!!!! This fic was great!!! And i just loved the ending!

Snowfall · 02-12-2004, 04:53 PM

Awwwwww, I LOVED THAT ENDING!!! Gosh, how many times have I wished that Nate had really gone with CD that night.

The storyline would be 1000 times better then. I loved this fic. It was excellent.

CD DeLorenzo · 02-12-2004, 07:39 PM

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Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
EXCELLENT!!!! could he donate that $$ to the German mission?!!!! I want a particular dudette over HERE!!!!!

LMAO awwwwwwwww that's so cute

yeah, a plane ticket isn't even THAT expensive

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and that was great, Deirdre!!! MUCH better than the REAL ending to that movie!! EXCELLENT JOB, so are you going to be writing another fic now?? B/c I think you should!!!!!!!!

and awwwwwwwwwww that was really cute too, and I'm glad that it ended this way, and I agree on the new fic!

turtle63102 · 02-12-2004, 11:40 PM

oh, that was so sweet. I totally loved it!

02-10-2004, 12:37 PM	#16
monkeygirl I love Nate and CD! Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 21, 2003 Location: drowning in a pool of tears Posts: 148	Nate sat in the hospital room, and Jinny walked in a little while later holding two coffees. She handed one to him.He took a sip, and stood up. "what is this?" he asked "it's a double malted mint chocolate with whipped cream and rasberry sprinkles mocha." Jinny smiled. "Well, I'm kidding ya. I traded ours. Here, this one is the plain old coffee one." Jinny handed a coffee to him. "thanks." Nate said, still with the I-just0drank-lemon-juice look on his face. "sheesh, goof. get that look off your face." Jinny laughed. "ok" Nate took a sip of his drink. "Ah...... that's good." Nate sat back down. "congratulations Jinny." Nate said "what?" Jinny asked. "Well, you got my mind off my troubles for a few minutes." Nate said. "that's good. I hope you won't worry too much...." Jinny started to say. "too much about what? whether or not my future wife is gonna die? Yeah, that's all I worry about" Nate said "ok. well, if you need anything, I'll be right here." Jinny sat down right next him. "Jinny.... do you think she'll be ok. I mean, well, the doctor said to say our goodbyes, but I can't help but think.......... well, I don't know." Nate said. "well, I hope to God she'll be ok. I mean, I can't imagina a world without her." Jinny said. "Really? you guys didn't seem that close." "well, no. But I always really looked up to her. She always seemed to have it all together, and I didn't." Jinny looked around the room. "Jinny. I need to get some shut eye....." Nate started to say. "Sure, I'll stay up for ya. And wale you if anything changes." Jinny re assured him. Nate laid down and closed his eyes. The next thing he knew Jinny was yelling. "Nate! Nate! wake up! now!"
	__________________ http://www.tvlinksonline.com/boards/...postid=1437138 http://www.tvlinksonline.com/boards/...postid=1437174 CD: Just for the record, I would hide you in my attic any time Nate: Even if the Nazi's were after me? CD: even if Gestapo picked me up and tortured me, I wouldn't reveal your hiding place Nate: I always knew that about you ~~~~~~~~~~ Through the sun, through the rain, I will still feel the same Be it good, be it bad, I'll always understand When you're down, when you're blue, I will be there for you, 'Cause nobody does it better, We're gonna get there together ~ S Club (or, as I would like Nate to say to CD, and having them still together!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~~~~~ http://www.livejournal.com/users/deirdre_88/

02-10-2004, 05:36 PM	#18
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	and you stopped WHY?!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL, get back here and give me more!!!
	__________________ Drunk guy: What's her name? Is it Jennifer? It's usually Jennifer. Is it Heather? Sometimes it's Heather. Nate- It's Candace. But we, uh, call her CD.

02-10-2004, 08:11 PM	#20
croatian_princess ~~Lep andjeo~~ Frequent Poster Join Date: Sep 27, 2003 Location: Psych ward...I think....too much electroshock therapy... Posts: 402	That was good! Post more! :P
	__________________ ~croatian_princess~ _________________________ "Don't hive up hope."~Candace DeLorenzo "Have some faith."~Dana Stowe

02-11-2004, 02:33 AM	#22
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	What are you doing, Deirdre? Oooh, good, you're sleeping now and I know your password, I can go and edit that post.....hehe... j/k.
	__________________ Nate: When somebody asks for the salt, you hand them the pepper, too, even if they didn't ask for both. You never separate the salt and the pepper. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Luke: Will you marry me? Lorelai: What? Luke: Anything to shut you up.

02-12-2004, 11:40 PM	#30
turtle63102 av. designed by Cat Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 13, 2004 Posts: 209	oh, that was so sweet. I totally loved it!
	__________________ "Number one, you're very close to having a bond between my foot and your ass, alright, and that's about the only bond we're ever going to share, and number two, the 'chick's' name is Inspector DeLorenzo, and if I ever hear you refer to her as a 'chick' again, I'm going to go ahead and refer you to number one. OK?!" ~ Nate Basso

02-10-2004, 12:45 PM	#17
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	Why was Jinny yelling? That's because CD woke up????RIGHT??? RIGHT???? ARGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Post more!!!!

02-10-2004, 07:16 PM	#19
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Knowing Jinny I have a feeling she is just messing with his head..who knows. Post more soon so we can find out

02-11-2004, 12:23 AM	#21
monkeygirl I love Nate and CD! Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 21, 2003 Location: drowning in a pool of tears Posts: 148	Nate jumped out of bed, and rubbed his eyes. "what, Jinny........ oh my GOD!!!!" Nate started screaming. "No! please God, no!" Nate started crying the heart moniter went dead, CD had passed away. The doctors and Nurses came rushing in. Nate grabbed one of them. "Can't you do anything? Do something! Please! any money, I'll pay anything!" Nate screamed. "Sorry, this is in the Lord's hands now. I can't do anything. But I'm very sorry for your loss" The doctor said "yeah, right. like you care." Nate was so sad, he didn't care what he said. Jinny took Nate's hand. "c'mon. I'll take you home. We'll come back in the morning. Nothing good can come from us staying here." Jinny said Nate reluctantly turned away and walked out. In the car on the way home, Jinny drove, and Nate sat in the passenger seat and cried. "Do you know what I regret the most?" Nate asked "what?" Jinny asked "that I never got to say goodbye." Nate said "don't be silly. you did every thing you could. If you had said goodbye, she wouldn't have heard you anyway." Jinny said "Does that matter now? God, she's gone, and no words that you say are gonna make me feel better!" Nate said, tears streaming down his face. "Yes, I know. I was that way when my mom died." Jinny started to cry now too. Jinny pulled up in front of Nate's apartment. "do you want me to come in with ya?" Jinny asked. "No, I'll be okay. Thanks though." Nate got up and walked inside. Jinny waited until she knew he was in his apartment, then she pulled away, tears starting to come more frequently.

02-12-2004, 04:37 PM	#27
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	Awwwwww yay!!!! This fic was great!!! And i just loved the ending!

02-12-2004, 04:53 PM	#28
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	Awwwwww, I LOVED THAT ENDING!!! Gosh, how many times have I wished that Nate had really gone with CD that night. The storyline would be 1000 times better then. I loved this fic. It was excellent.