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iliveforjayandnancy2 · 09-25-2003, 06:47 PM

haha you both don't have to lie for my sake! lol lol j/k Ok I'll psot more and use the rest of the words I'll complete your challenge!

I'm determined. You'll like PART 2 the best!

CD DeLorenzo · 09-25-2003, 07:52 PM

ooooooh yeah!!!!!!

Please keep going! It rocks! I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!

candace~n~nathan · 09-25-2003, 10:24 PM

I can't wait for some more of this!!

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 09-30-2003, 09:56 PM

Before I start part two of this fan fic., I just want to say a couple of things first. One, is that I haven't been able to type anything for a few days because I worked a double at my job, then had a night off but I worked for a friend of mine. Then when to work the next night, and I just finished catching up on my sleep! lol So now I can write. The more I work though, the faster I'll have money saved up for my car. I owe, I owe so off to work I go! lol Also, you might not notice the words that are in the challenge right away. I used em, but scarcely. Because I figure if I use all the words right away it will sound stupid. So I'll use them sparingly, but I'll use them all. Alrighty, here it is!!!

*At Nate's Apartment*
(There's a knock on the door. Camera shows Nate from the inside answering it. Then you see CD on the outside.)
Nate: Well, for a second there I thought you forgot about me.
CD: What makes you say that?
Nate:Well you said you'd be here in an hour, an hour and a half ago.
CD: I see, well next time I'll just shower and come over here and forget about putting on perfume or gelling up my hair, and all that stuff ok? I'm so sorry I took my time trying to look good for you, It'll NEVER happen again. (She says pretending as though she has done something really wrong.)
Nate: Ok ok I get your point.
CD: Good that's what I thought. she says with a smirk walking into his apartment. Nate gives a crooked grin, and shuts the door behind her. After he does he asks CD:
Nate:So did you miss me? But before he could get his question out, CD had already spun him around 180 degrees and pushed him against the wall and proceeded to answer his question physically. Once the shock of what had just happened had left Nate's head, he let himself be taken in CD's hands and for the first time in his life he realized he didn't have to be the one to initiate the kiss. Then once CD was thru having her way with him, she gently pushed him away from her and proceeded to walk away.
Nate; WOW! he says while wiping the corner of his mouth.
CD gives him a grin over her left shoulder, then walks to his coffee pot.
Nate: Ok one quick question. He says putting one finger up, still standing in the position CD had left him in.
CD: And what's that CD asks while pouring water into the coffee pot.
Nate approaches CD.
Nate: Well, whoever told you I prefered a take charge type of woman?
CD: Oh I don't know but I figured since you didn't mind at the hospital, what the hell I'd try and make it two for two.
Nate: True, but...
CD: Yes you do have a cute butt.
Nate gives her a side look.
Nate: Well, good point you got me.
CD: I know, and I couldn't be happier.
Nate: Cute. he says walking behind CD putting his hands on her waist.
CD: Yeah you are. She says swaying side to side comfortable in his arms.
Nate rests his head on CD's left shoulder as he watches CD finish w/ the coffee.
Nate: You know, I've never been this happy with a woman my whole life. You accept me for me. In the past, I've had to pretend I was something I'm not just to keep them. And now I know it wasn't worth it. They weren't worth it.
CD: They? You're talking like you've dated 100 girls. she pauses. How many HAVE you dated?
Nate laughs.
Nate not as many as you'd think. Really. And none even came close to what you mean to me. We've both been to hell and back in our lives, and I'm just glad I finally ended up happy in the end, and I didn't think it possible.
You can see CD's eyes well up w/ tears. Oh Nate! she says turning around to kiss him putting the glass coffee pot on the counter. The camera shows the on/off button in the on position. CD has her back to the counter and after a rather long kiss, CD breaks it off.
CD: Ahh. she says w/ a girly girl tone in her voice.
Nate: What's the matter.
CD: I'm wet!
Nate: Really?! He asks surprised. I didn't know I was that good! All I did was kiss ya.
CD: Nate! she says smacking his arm. I didn't mean that. She turns around to face the counter. DAMN IT! I forgot to put the coffee pot back under the machine. I got coffee all over me. And it's all your fault!
Nate laughs.
My fault?! Who kissed who first!? As usual.
CD: Well?
Nate: Ok look. Why don't you shower and I'll clean this up and be back shortly.
CD: Be back? Where are you going?
Nate: Nowhere. It's not important.
CD: Then why don't you join me in the shower. We can play who dropped the soap!
Nate: Well as good as that sounds, I got something to do.
CD: What's more fun then playing who dropped the soap? she asks surprised.
Nate: Alright, nosey! If you must know, I'm going to get you a present.
CD: Oh a present what is it?
Nate: I'm not gonna tell you, that would kill the surprise! Go take your shower, and by the time you come out, I should be back.
CD sighs.
CD: Ok, but try and make it quick.
Nate laughs.
Nate: OK I will.

*Scene cuts to CD walking out of Nate's bathroom with a long towel wrapped around her. She goes over to a picture of her and Nate sitting on a park bench together. She smiles thinking back remembering how Nate had asked an elderly woman to take a picture of them together. The couple gladly did and the wife told them "I can feel the love that you two share. It's amazing. I sense that you'll both be together forever. I wish you both the same amount of hapiness that me and my Robert share."
Then CD is knocked back into reality when she here's a doorbell. She looks through to see Nate. She gets a funny look on her face, and opens the door enough to let him in, but not enough to let the whole rest of the world see her in a towel.
CD: Why didn't you just come in?
But before he can answer she notices the big box in his hands and the little box on top of it.
Nste: Why don't you go put something on, and I'll be waiting here on the couch. But try and hurry. I can't leave this present in the box too long.
CD: Uh ok. she says with a wierd look and goes off to get dressed.
When she comes out she's wearing Nate's old tee-shirt as a nightgown, with her hair still funky looking and wet. She then heads over to the couch, where she sees Nate sitting holding a puppy.
CD: Nate?! Where did you get him from?
Nate: Uh where most people get animals from, the pet shop. He laughs.
CD: OH Nate, he's adorable! She takes the puppy off his lap.
(It's a brown German Shepard.)
CD: Come here puppy!
Nate: Come here puppy? he laughs mocking CD.
Nate: He needs a name.
CD: Ok well, what do you suggest?
Nate: He's yours, so you name him.
CD: Ok, how about Cinnamon?
Nate: Cinnamon? Where did you get a name like that?
CD: Well I wanted an original name, and he's brown like cinnamon, so there you go.
Nate: Why didn't you call him Brownie then?
CD: Well for one, it's a boy and Browie sounds like a girls name to me, and besides that's not original, cinnamon is. She says with confidence.
Nate: Ok, cinnamon it is. I bought this little guy for ya, because I figured one, he can keep you company when I'm not around. And two, when you see him you'll think of me and three when he gets bigger he can protect ya. And four a dog is a man's best friend. And this way, you'll now have to men in your life, he jokes.
CD: Oh that's so sweet! I love you! So, what's in the other box?
Nate: OH sorry. Kinda got caught up with the dog. Um, it's chocolate fromGhirardelli's square. It's a little food spot that sells all kinds of specialty foods. Including this kind of chocolate. And let me tell ya, it's the best going. So rich, and creamy and delicious.
CD: And fattening. She cuts off Nate.
Nate: Please you are FAR from fat and I don't think one box of chocolates will make you gain like 50 pounds.
CD: Well not right away maybe but eventually.
Nate: Oh don't worry about it and enjoy your chocolate and your cinnamon. he laughs.
CD: OH thanks Nate you're the best!
They hug cuddle on the couch with cinnamon and watch tv.

One more part to come, to finish using all the words!

candace~n~nathan · 09-30-2003, 11:04 PM

this fic ROX!!! it makes me feel all warm and cuddly inside!!!

lol

CD DeLorenzo · 10-01-2003, 12:39 AM

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Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
this fic ROX!!! it makes me feel all warm and cuddly inside!!! lol

awww yeah! Me too!

I can't wait for more!

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 10-01-2003, 08:10 AM

WHAT?! lol That's all you can to say about my fan fic! It's the bomb, ya'll! LOL ROTF I need to get a swelled head!!!! lol I'm just kidding you guys.
Well, I need to get some sleep I just got out of work, and then I'll come on and type up more. Talk to you all later. Glad you like it. And that was the feeling I was going for. The warm cuddly kind. hehe ttyl!

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 10-09-2003, 02:39 AM

*After a little while of watching t.v. together CD, Nate, and Cinnamon all fall asleep on the couch. Four hours later, CD wakes up rubbing her neck from sleeping the wrong way. She sees Cinnamon on the floor chasing his tail, and Nate still asleep with his arm where CD's head was. She smiles at him while he sleeps, and puts his arm in his lap figuring it was numb from being there so long, and gets up to use the phone careful not to wake him.*

CD: (whispering) Hi Julie. I'm just calling to let you know I'm at Nate's house right now, so if I get any calls there can you please take a message or call me here if it has to do with work and let me know? It seems like I'm always getting called in on the weekend when I'm suppose to be off! She says not realizing she raised her voice a little. Nate starts to moves around.
Then you hear CD say "OK thanks Julie I'll talk to you later." She hangs up. Then she goes back over to Nate and sits in the position she was previously in, but left Nate's arm in his lap. Then she turns the channel from a painting infomercial to Lifetime. (hehe Couldn't resist that one LOL) Nate starts to stir around and opens his eyes.*
CD: Oh I didn't mean to wake you! She says upset.
Nate: No, don't worry about it! It's ok. I mean after all, I woke you up today.
CD: Yeah but that's not your fault, silly. I was suppose to have already been up.
Nate: Yeah but still I feel bad. He says getting up and looking out the window.
CD: What are you doing? she asks turning her head to Nate.
Nate: Wow I was right! Nate said.
CD: Right about what?
Nate: Well, you know what it feels like when you're right in between being asleep and being awake?
CD: Yeah.
Nate: Well, you had fallen asleep before me and I was in that state. And I thought I heard rain but wasn't sure. I was hoping I did, because I knew with the weather we've been having lately, we would get a big beautiful rainbow for sure, and I was right!
CD: Really? CD says, getting off the couch picking up Cinnamon and walking over to Nate. She pulls the curtain aside.
CD: Oh wow. You're right that is georgous. I've only seen faint rainbows, but I've never seen anything more beautiful. Have you Nate?
Nate; Have I what? he asks a little lost, not realizing (being a guy) that when a woman talks you're suppose to listen.
CD: Have you seen anything more beautiful that that?
Nate: Yes, I have. he says looking into her eyes.
Nate: You.
They kiss, up until Cinnamon barks totally startling them.
Nate: Relax boy, I'm not hurting her.
CD: Of course you're not.
Nate: Oh dammit!
CD: What?
Nate: It's that freakin racoon again that keeps going through are trash.
Nate walks over to the outside door and opens it.
Nate: SCOOT! He yells, and the racoon runs over giving him a wierd look but not acting very frightened by him.
CD: Nate! She yells. Now what would you have done if that would have been a skunk.
Nate: I would have left him alone.
CD: I thought so. She says with a chuckle.
Nate goes over to the fridge and grabs a Heinekein and asks CD if she wants one.
CD: Yuck, no thanks. I'm not that heavy of a drinker don't you know me by now? Booze Aren't really my thing.
Nate: I know, but don't you get a craving for a nice cold one every so often?
CD: Uhhh sometimes but not like you do.
Nate: Suit yourself. he says.
CD looks at her watch and goes to put the watercolor paint set, and bubble gum machine she bought for Ben's 7th Birthday Party in a gift bag, and then both her and Nate go sit on the couch once again.
Nate: Oh, ok do we HAVE TO watch Lifetime? he asks with his arm crossed in front of her on her stomach.
CD: You always complain when I want to watch something other then sports. She says taking his arm off her.
Nate: That's right. Lifetime is a chick flick channel. BORING! he says putting his arm back.
CD: Tough. she says taking it off again.
Nate: Ok wow! he says with a laugh. CD is still sitting there watching a commercial for Strong Medicine not having once made eye contact with Nate.
Nate: Ok I'll LET you win THAT argument. But can I at least get another kiss?
CD: Sure.
Nate leans in with puckered lips. CD puts her hand over his mouth.
CD: After you brush your teeth. She says, still with eyes glued to the TV. There is nothing more disgusting then kissing a guy with beer breath.
Nate leans back disapointed.
CD: Well, you going to or what? she asks totally expecting him to go brush his teeth because she wanted the kiss so bad.
Nate; No, he says I think I'd rather watch Lifetime.
CD realizes she won the battle but lost the war!!!!!!!!! LOL

Scene fades, the end!!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 10-09-2003, 02:46 AM

Really great again! But didn't ya forget some things there? LOL you better post another part, and that soon!

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 10-09-2003, 02:51 AM

gerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr I'm tellin ya CD you're gonna be the death of me! lol OK, OK, OK! Although that was SUPPOSE to be the end, I'll fine a way to add to it! Omit this part: Scene fades, the end!!!! ANd I'll add another part. Jeepers!!!!!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 10-09-2003, 02:58 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
gerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr I'm tellin ya CD you're gonna be the death of me! lol OK, OK, OK! Although that was SUPPOSE to be the end, I'll fine a way to add to it! Omit this part: Scene fades, the end!!!! ANd I'll add another part. Jeepers!!!!!!!

muahahhahaha!!!!

candace~n~nathan · 10-09-2003, 08:41 AM

that was really great!! I'm glad cat convinced you for more!!!

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 10-10-2003, 07:06 AM

YEA WELL......... she wouldn't have got me to write more if I DIDN'T SCREW UP THE FIRST TIME!!!!! lol hehehe I got some stuff to do today, like pick up my check, and copy somethings for her....she's lucky I'm this nice! lol And then I'll try and post some today before work. It's all her fault, IF I don't find time to post today. Cuz I'm copying this stuff for her! lol j/k HEHE Seriously, she's doing alot for me as it is. I'm just kidding. Besides I have to post on three other fan fics eventually too. lol Just wish there was enough time in a day!

CD DeLorenzo · 10-10-2003, 12:14 PM

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Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
YEA WELL......... she wouldn't have got me to write more if I DIDN'T SCREW UP THE FIRST TIME!!!!! lol hehehe I got some stuff to do today, like pick up my check, and copy somethings for her....she's lucky I'm this nice! lol And then I'll try and post some today before work. It's all her fault, IF I don't find time to post today. Cuz I'm copying this stuff for her! lol j/k HEHE Seriously, she's doing alot for me as it is. I'm just kidding. Besides I have to post on three other fan fics eventually too. lol Just wish there was enough time in a day!

LMAO, you're lucky that I'm so nice and copied something for you. And Was at the post office today and spent a fortune on two packages that I had to send out... lol j/k But I did send em away

and my parents drive me insane! Sorry that I wasn't online yesterday.

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 10-10-2003, 04:14 PM

lol lol OK I forgive you. lol And I DEMAND to know how much the package was, so I can send ya the money, and IF you DON'T tell me, then I won't send you your package. SO HA! :-D

09-25-2003, 06:47 PM	#16
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09-25-2003, 07:52 PM	#17
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09-25-2003, 10:24 PM	#18
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	I can't wait for some more of this!!

09-30-2003, 09:56 PM	#19
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	Before I start part two of this fan fic., I just want to say a couple of things first. One, is that I haven't been able to type anything for a few days because I worked a double at my job, then had a night off but I worked for a friend of mine. Then when to work the next night, and I just finished catching up on my sleep! lol So now I can write. The more I work though, the faster I'll have money saved up for my car. I owe, I owe so off to work I go! lol Also, you might not notice the words that are in the challenge right away. I used em, but scarcely. Because I figure if I use all the words right away it will sound stupid. So I'll use them sparingly, but I'll use them all. Alrighty, here it is!!! At Nate's Apartment (There's a knock on the door. Camera shows Nate from the inside answering it. Then you see CD on the outside.) Nate: Well, for a second there I thought you forgot about me. CD: What makes you say that? Nate:Well you said you'd be here in an hour, an hour and a half ago. CD: I see, well next time I'll just shower and come over here and forget about putting on perfume or gelling up my hair, and all that stuff ok? I'm so sorry I took my time trying to look good for you, It'll NEVER happen again. (She says pretending as though she has done something really wrong.) Nate: Ok ok I get your point. CD: Good that's what I thought. she says with a smirk walking into his apartment. Nate gives a crooked grin, and shuts the door behind her. After he does he asks CD: Nate:So did you miss me? But before he could get his question out, CD had already spun him around 180 degrees and pushed him against the wall and proceeded to answer his question physically. Once the shock of what had just happened had left Nate's head, he let himself be taken in CD's hands and for the first time in his life he realized he didn't have to be the one to initiate the kiss. Then once CD was thru having her way with him, she gently pushed him away from her and proceeded to walk away. Nate; WOW! he says while wiping the corner of his mouth. CD gives him a grin over her left shoulder, then walks to his coffee pot. Nate: Ok one quick question. He says putting one finger up, still standing in the position CD had left him in. CD: And what's that CD asks while pouring water into the coffee pot. Nate approaches CD. Nate: Well, whoever told you I prefered a take charge type of woman? CD: Oh I don't know but I figured since you didn't mind at the hospital, what the hell I'd try and make it two for two. Nate: True, but... CD: Yes you do have a cute butt. Nate gives her a side look. Nate: Well, good point you got me. CD: I know, and I couldn't be happier. Nate: Cute. he says walking behind CD putting his hands on her waist. CD: Yeah you are. She says swaying side to side comfortable in his arms. Nate rests his head on CD's left shoulder as he watches CD finish w/ the coffee. Nate: You know, I've never been this happy with a woman my whole life. You accept me for me. In the past, I've had to pretend I was something I'm not just to keep them. And now I know it wasn't worth it. They weren't worth it. CD: They? You're talking like you've dated 100 girls. she pauses. How many HAVE you dated? Nate laughs. Nate not as many as you'd think. Really. And none even came close to what you mean to me. We've both been to hell and back in our lives, and I'm just glad I finally ended up happy in the end, and I didn't think it possible. You can see CD's eyes well up w/ tears. Oh Nate! she says turning around to kiss him putting the glass coffee pot on the counter. The camera shows the on/off button in the on position. CD has her back to the counter and after a rather long kiss, CD breaks it off. CD: Ahh. she says w/ a girly girl tone in her voice. Nate: What's the matter. CD: I'm wet! Nate: Really?! He asks surprised. I didn't know I was that good! All I did was kiss ya. CD: Nate! she says smacking his arm. I didn't mean that. She turns around to face the counter. DAMN IT! I forgot to put the coffee pot back under the machine. I got coffee all over me. And it's all your fault! Nate laughs. My fault?! Who kissed who first!? As usual. CD: Well? Nate: Ok look. Why don't you shower and I'll clean this up and be back shortly. CD: Be back? Where are you going? Nate: Nowhere. It's not important. CD: Then why don't you join me in the shower. We can play who dropped the soap! Nate: Well as good as that sounds, I got something to do. CD: What's more fun then playing who dropped the soap? she asks surprised. Nate: Alright, nosey! If you must know, I'm going to get you a present. CD: Oh a present what is it? Nate: I'm not gonna tell you, that would kill the surprise! Go take your shower, and by the time you come out, I should be back. CD sighs. CD: Ok, but try and make it quick. Nate laughs. Nate: OK I will. Scene cuts to CD walking out of Nate's bathroom with a long towel wrapped around her. She goes over to a picture of her and Nate sitting on a park bench together. She smiles thinking back remembering how Nate had asked an elderly woman to take a picture of them together. The couple gladly did and the wife told them "I can feel the love that you two share. It's amazing. I sense that you'll both be together forever. I wish you both the same amount of hapiness that me and my Robert share." Then CD is knocked back into reality when she here's a doorbell. She looks through to see Nate. She gets a funny look on her face, and opens the door enough to let him in, but not enough to let the whole rest of the world see her in a towel. CD: Why didn't you just come in? But before he can answer she notices the big box in his hands and the little box on top of it. Nste: Why don't you go put something on, and I'll be waiting here on the couch. But try and hurry. I can't leave this present in the box too long. CD: Uh ok. she says with a wierd look and goes off to get dressed. When she comes out she's wearing Nate's old tee-shirt as a nightgown, with her hair still funky looking and wet. She then heads over to the couch, where she sees Nate sitting holding a puppy. CD: Nate?! Where did you get him from? Nate: Uh where most people get animals from, the pet shop. He laughs. CD: OH Nate, he's adorable! She takes the puppy off his lap. (It's a brown German Shepard.) CD: Come here puppy! Nate: Come here puppy? he laughs mocking CD. Nate: He needs a name. CD: Ok well, what do you suggest? Nate: He's yours, so you name him. CD: Ok, how about Cinnamon*? Nate: Cinnamon? Where did you get a name like that? CD: Well I wanted an original name, and he's brown like cinnamon, so there you go. Nate: Why didn't you call him Brownie then? CD: Well for one, it's a boy and Browie sounds like a girls name to me, and besides that's not original, cinnamon is. She says with confidence. Nate: Ok, cinnamon it is. I bought this little guy for ya, because I figured one, he can keep you company when I'm not around. And two, when you see him you'll think of me and three when he gets bigger he can protect ya. And four a dog is a man's best friend. And this way, you'll now have to men in your life, he jokes. CD: Oh that's so sweet! I love you! So, what's in the other box? Nate: OH sorry. Kinda got caught up with the dog. Um, it's chocolate fromGhirardelli's square. It's a little food spot that sells all kinds of specialty foods. Including this kind of chocolate. And let me tell ya, it's the best going. So rich, and creamy and delicious. CD: And fattening. She cuts off Nate. Nate: Please you are FAR from fat and I don't think one box of chocolates will make you gain like 50 pounds. CD: Well not right away maybe but eventually. Nate: Oh don't worry about it and enjoy your chocolate and your cinnamon. he laughs. CD: OH thanks Nate you're the best! They hug cuddle on the couch with cinnamon and watch tv. One more part to come, to finish using all the words!

09-30-2003, 11:04 PM	#20
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	this fic ROX!!! it makes me feel all warm and cuddly inside!!! lol

10-01-2003, 08:10 AM	#22
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	WHAT?! lol That's all you can to say about my fan fic! It's the bomb, ya'll! LOL ROTF I need to get a swelled head!!!! lol I'm just kidding you guys. Well, I need to get some sleep I just got out of work, and then I'll come on and type up more. Talk to you all later. Glad you like it. And that was the feeling I was going for. The warm cuddly kind. hehe ttyl!

10-09-2003, 02:39 AM	#23
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	After a little while of watching t.v. together CD, Nate, and Cinnamon all fall asleep on the couch. Four hours later, CD wakes up rubbing her neck from sleeping the wrong way. She sees Cinnamon on the floor chasing his tail, and Nate still asleep with his arm where CD's head was. She smiles at him while he sleeps, and puts his arm in his lap figuring it was numb from being there so long, and gets up to use the phone careful not to wake him. CD: (whispering) Hi Julie. I'm just calling to let you know I'm at Nate's house right now, so if I get any calls there can you please take a message or call me here if it has to do with work and let me know? It seems like I'm always getting called in on the weekend when I'm suppose to be off! She says not realizing she raised her voice a little. Nate starts to moves around. Then you hear CD say "OK thanks Julie I'll talk to you later." She hangs up. Then she goes back over to Nate and sits in the position she was previously in, but left Nate's arm in his lap. Then she turns the channel from a painting infomercial to Lifetime. (hehe Couldn't resist that one LOL) Nate starts to stir around and opens his eyes.* CD: Oh I didn't mean to wake you! She says upset. Nate: No, don't worry about it! It's ok. I mean after all, I woke you up today. CD: Yeah but that's not your fault, silly. I was suppose to have already been up. Nate: Yeah but still I feel bad. He says getting up and looking out the window. CD: What are you doing? she asks turning her head to Nate. Nate: Wow I was right! Nate said. CD: Right about what? Nate: Well, you know what it feels like when you're right in between being asleep and being awake? CD: Yeah. Nate: Well, you had fallen asleep before me and I was in that state. And I thought I heard rain but wasn't sure. I was hoping I did, because I knew with the weather we've been having lately, we would get a big beautiful rainbow for sure, and I was right! CD: Really? CD says, getting off the couch picking up Cinnamon and walking over to Nate. She pulls the curtain aside. CD: Oh wow. You're right that is georgous. I've only seen faint rainbows, but I've never seen anything more beautiful. Have you Nate? Nate; Have I what? he asks a little lost, not realizing (being a guy) that when a woman talks you're suppose to listen. CD: Have you seen anything more beautiful that that? Nate: Yes, I have. he says looking into her eyes. Nate: You. They kiss, up until Cinnamon barks totally startling them. Nate: Relax boy, I'm not hurting her. CD: Of course you're not. Nate: Oh dammit! CD: What? Nate: It's that freakin racoon again that keeps going through are trash. Nate walks over to the outside door and opens it. Nate: SCOOT! He yells, and the racoon runs over giving him a wierd look but not acting very frightened by him. CD: Nate! She yells. Now what would you have done if that would have been a skunk. Nate: I would have left him alone. CD: I thought so. She says with a chuckle. Nate goes over to the fridge and grabs a Heinekein and asks CD if she wants one. CD: Yuck, no thanks. I'm not that heavy of a drinker don't you know me by now? Booze Aren't really my thing. Nate: I know, but don't you get a craving for a nice cold one every so often? CD: Uhhh sometimes but not like you do. Nate: Suit yourself. he says. CD looks at her watch and goes to put the watercolor paint set, and bubble gum machine she bought for Ben's 7th Birthday Party in a gift bag, and then both her and Nate go sit on the couch once again. Nate: Oh, ok do we HAVE TO watch Lifetime? he asks with his arm crossed in front of her on her stomach. CD: You always complain when I want to watch something other then sports. She says taking his arm off her. Nate: That's right. Lifetime is a chick flick channel. BORING! he says putting his arm back. CD: Tough. she says taking it off again. Nate: Ok wow! he says with a laugh. CD is still sitting there watching a commercial for Strong Medicine not having once made eye contact with Nate. Nate: Ok I'll LET you win THAT argument. But can I at least get another kiss? CD: Sure. Nate leans in with puckered lips. CD puts her hand over his mouth. CD: After you brush your teeth. She says, still with eyes glued to the TV. There is nothing more disgusting then kissing a guy with beer breath. Nate leans back disapointed. CD: Well, you going to or what? she asks totally expecting him to go brush his teeth because she wanted the kiss so bad. Nate; No, he says I think I'd rather watch Lifetime. CD realizes she won the battle but lost the war!!!!!!!!! LOL Scene fades, the end!!!!

10-09-2003, 02:46 AM	#24
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	Really great again! But didn't ya forget some things there? LOL you better post another part, and that soon!

10-09-2003, 02:51 AM	#25
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	gerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr I'm tellin ya CD you're gonna be the death of me! lol OK, OK, OK! Although that was SUPPOSE to be the end, I'll fine a way to add to it! Omit this part: Scene fades, the end!!!! ANd I'll add another part. Jeepers!!!!!!!

10-09-2003, 08:41 AM	#27
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	that was really great!! I'm glad cat convinced you for more!!!

10-10-2003, 07:06 AM	#28
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	YEA WELL......... she wouldn't have got me to write more if I DIDN'T SCREW UP THE FIRST TIME!!!!! lol hehehe I got some stuff to do today, like pick up my check, and copy somethings for her....she's lucky I'm this nice! lol And then I'll try and post some today before work. It's all her fault, IF I don't find time to post today. Cuz I'm copying this stuff for her! lol j/k HEHE Seriously, she's doing alot for me as it is. I'm just kidding. Besides I have to post on three other fan fics eventually too. lol Just wish there was enough time in a day!

10-10-2003, 04:14 PM	#30
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	lol lol OK I forgive you. lol And I DEMAND to know how much the package was, so I can send ya the money, and IF you DON'T tell me, then I won't send you your package. SO HA! :-D