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lonelinesshurts · 08-16-2003, 02:02 AM

Here you go:

“We have to get ready to leave. Molly got me a job interview tomorrow at her job and I still have to find something to wear.”

“Why don’t we go to the mall so you can get something new. Plus I want spoil the hack out this little one.” CD said tickling Alley that was setting on her lap.

“Are you sure? I mean you never seen her in a public place she not always this good.” Abby tried to warn her.

“Yeah I’m sure. You won’t show off will Alyssa?” CD asked tickling her again.

“Nope. I promise.” She giggled

“See.” CD smiled

“Whatever. You’ll see when we get there.” Abby laughed
*****
An hour later they arrived at the mall.

“What store you want to go in first?” Abby asked CD as they entered the Mall.

“I don’t know. Let’s get your work clothes first and go from there. What type a job is it?”

“Desk clerk for a law firm.” She said with a sigh. “Meaning I probably have to wear something boring.” She said sadly, she was so use to her regular attire blue jeans in a T-shirt. CD laughed.

“I know what you mean.” She smiled she was about to say something else when her cell phone ringed. “Hello?”

“Hey baby I was just call to see if you want to have dinner with me since we didn’t have our lunch.”

“Oh yeah Nate I’m sorry about that I had to-“

“Hay don’t worry about it the captain told me that you found out that that girl in the office was one of you relatives and you wanted to spend the day with her. So you want to come to dinner you can bring her if you want.”

“Hold on a minute. Let me asked her.” she said and took the phone from her ear and covering it with her hand. “He wants to know if you want to come to dinner with us. I really want to tell him about you.” CD said trying to convince her.

“Alright I’ll go.” Abby smiled

“Abuela can I come to?” Alyssa pouted.

“Sure sweetie.” CD smiled and but her phone back to her ear. “ Okay where do you want to go?”

“How about you come over my place and I’ll cook dinner for you two.”

“You cook?” she laughed

“Yeah I can cook.” He said definably.

“I never said you couldn’t I was just surprise. So what time did you want us to come over.”

“Eight o’clock?”

“Okay eight it is.”

“Alright bye.”

“Bye.” She smiled and hung up the phone.

TO BE CONTINUED....

candace~n~nathan · 08-16-2003, 05:22 PM

MORE!!!!!!

lonelinesshurts · 08-17-2003, 02:32 AM

More Like I Promised:

After being at the mall for three hour Abby finally found set for her interview. And even with all Abby’s protest CD ended up buying Alyssa a little over hundred dollars worth of clothes and toys. After dropping their bags at CD apartment and changing there clothes they way over Nate’s apartment.

“So what are you going to tell him.” Abby asked CD curious how she was going to explain to him about her and Alyssa.

“I’m not sure yet.” CD said quietly

“You’ll know when the time is right. You don’t have to tell him tonight.” Abby said putting her hand on top of CD’s to reassure her. CD smiled ‘I don’t deserve her’ she thought sadly.

Five minutes later they arrived at Nate’s apartment building.

“Mom you sure you want to go through with this.” Abby asked looking at CD who was holding Alyssa while they stood in front of Nate’s door.

“I’m sure.” She smiled and knocked softly on the door. Nate answered the door in seconds.

“Hi… who’s this.” Nate asked pointing to Alyssa.

“That is my daughter Alyssa.” Abby smiled “ Hi I’m Abigail.” She said extending her hand.

“I’m Nate but you probably already know that.” He returned the smile and shook her hand. “Well come in and make you self at home.” They follow him in the living room and sat down on the couch. “Dinner should be ready in five minutes, can I get you anything to drink while you wait?” He asked nervously

“I’ll have a glass of water.” CD and Abby said in union. They looked at eachother and start to laugh.

“Okay two waters. What about you little lady.” Nate asked Alyssa. She just stared at him.

“She’s a little shy around people she doesn’t know.” Abby told Nate he nodded and went into the kitchen for their water. “What is he so nervous about?” Abby asked in a whispered to CD.

“I have know idea.” She whispered back. Nate came back with their water a minute later. As they where beginning to chat Alley started squirming on Abby’s lap.

“Mommy I have to go to the bathroom.” Alley whispered in Abby’s ear.

“Okay sweetie. Nate can we use your bathroom?”

“Yeah it’s just down the hall to you left.”

“Thanks.” Abby said as she rushed Alyssa to the bathroom.

“You and Abigail look a lot a like, how exactly are you two related.” Nate asked CD when they where alone in the living room.

“Well…Nate she’s…Nate remember what I told you happen to me when I was fifteen… I didn’t tell you everything…” she trail off hoping he got the drifted

“She’s your daughter?” he whispered in disbelief. CD nodded as she did every thing in her power to avoid eye contact.

To Be CoNtInUeD...

planet_stella · 08-17-2003, 06:03 AM

you stopped! that's SO unfair! i need more lol

candace~n~nathan · 09-18-2003, 10:56 PM

ok, seriously, what ever happened to this fic?? I wanna know what happens!!

croatian_princess · 09-29-2003, 05:13 PM

Me 2. This is so weird. CD having a kid? Wow. But I love the story line.

lonelinesshurts · 03-13-2004, 03:59 PM

I'm sorry it took so long but I was caught up with my Third Watch and Law and Order SVU fic's. This chapter is really short but I promise the next chapter is longer and it will come sooner then eight months lol. here goes nothing
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“I gave her up for adoption a week after she was born.” She whispered barley audible “she was never adopted she was raised in an orphanage. She got my name from the orphanage.” She said never making eye contact. Nate was speechless; he didn’t know what he was suppose to say after hearing something like this.

“H-how do you feel about this, I mean I know this have to be hard for you.” Nate said as he got his wits back.

“I never knew how much I miss her until now. I mean thought about her every day since I gave her up but now that I see her I don’t know why I gave her up.” She replied feeling tears coming to her eyes. “Then I met Alyssa she’s an angel. Nate I finally feeling like I’m getting a second chance you know. She’s not even blaming me for giving her up, she understands completely.” She said openly crying. Nate quickly went to her side to and pulled her into a hug.

“I already told you’d make a great mom, so now here’s your chance.” He said rubbing her back. She smiled.

*********

To Be Continued...

Snowfall · 03-13-2004, 09:16 PM

Awwwww, that was so great! I'm a new reader, and I love it! Post more soon!

candace~n~nathan · 03-13-2004, 11:36 PM

YAY!!!! i'm so glad u posted on this fantastic fic!!!! It had better be sooner next time!!!!

That was so great!!!!!

zwalane · 03-13-2004, 11:54 PM

Techically I'm a reader but since it had been so long since u posted i didn't post anything. So now that u posted I will say MORE ASAP

lonelinesshurts · 03-14-2004, 01:04 AM

See I told you I'd update sooner...
******
The Next Day-

The day had been going really slow for both Jinny and Magda the only case the division got that day went to Nate and CD so the were stuck back in the precinct doing paper work.

"Did you notice something different about CD today?" Magda questioned Jinny who obviously wasn't in the mood to do paper work.

"No why?" She asked welcoming the detraction.

"She just seemed really happy today." Magda shrugged, she put her pen down and turn her full attention to the conversation,.

"Hasn't she been really happy for the last couple months? Every since she and Nate hooked up she’s always happy."

"No not today, today it was a different kind of happy." Magda mused

"A different kind of happy? How many kinds of happy are there?" Jinny asked sarcastically, which made Magda rolled her eyes.

"It didn't seem like it had anything to do with Nate."

"How the hell could you tell?" Jinny asked . Magda was about to replied when something caught her eye.

“Jinny look.” Magda said softly and motioned for Jinny to turn around.

When Jinny turned around she saw a small scared looking toddler with a note attached to her coat. Magda immediately went over to the little girl.

“Hi sweetie I’m Magda what’s your name?” she asked softly and squatted down so she was almost eyelevel with the little girl. The girl didn’t respond. “Do you know where your mommy is?” she tried again the time getting a response. The little girl put her hand over the note on her jacket and started to cry. Magda immediately put her into a hugged and motion for Jinny to go get the caption. She had a feeling the little girl’s mother just abandon her in the police station.

To Be Continued…

Snowfall · 03-14-2004, 01:28 AM

Awwww, poor little thing! That was so great, and I want to know what happens now! Post more soon.

lonelinesshurts · 03-14-2004, 02:10 AM

See I told you I'd update sooner...
******
“It’s okay sweetie, it’s alright.” Magda said soothingly trying to calm the small girl. Once she calmed a little Magda picked her up and walk over to her desk and sat down. “Can you tell me your name?” she asked quietly as she rubbed her back. The girl was quite at first but they she mumbled something against her chest, To Magda it sounded like Calley. “Calley do you know what you last name is?” The little girl lift her head off of Magda’s chest a little and repeated her name.

“Alley.” she whispered and put her head back on Magda chest.

“Oh I’m sorry I must have heard you wrong Alley. Is that your first name or your nick name?” She asked knowing most kids Alley's age wouldn’t know the difference but she had to try.

“Alyssa.” the girl whispered clearly.

“Alyssa that’s a pretty name. Alyssa do you mind if I take this off your jacket?” Magda asked pointing to the note. Alyssa shook her head yes.

“Mommy said I couldn’t take off til I saw Abuela.” her voice still not above a whisper.

“Your grandmother?” Alyssa nodded. “Did your mommy tell you where Abuela was suppose to be?”

“Here, work.” she said quietly

“Abuela is she a cop?” Alyssa shrugged her shoulders. “Okay, can you tell me what she looks like?”

“She looks like me and mommy.”

“Okay, what does your mommy look like does she have light hair like you or dark hair like me?” she hesitated a second before answering

“Light.” Magda was about to continue with her questioning when the caption call her over. “Alley set right here for a minute I’ll be right back Okay.”

“Promise?” she asked almost scared. Magda’s heart broke

“Yeah I promise” she said honestly. She then walked over to where Jinny and the caption was standing

“Did you get any thing?” Kate asked when Magda reach the two women.

“Not much. Her name is Alyssa her mom told her she was coming her to meet her grandmother.”

“That’s it?”

“Yeah that’s it. She can’t be more the two years old, she scared out of her mind I’m surprise I got that much out of her.”

“How the hell could somebody abandon a two year old.” Jinny asked angerily

“I don’t know, lets just be glad that she abandon her here and not at some crack house.” Kate reminded them it could have been much worst

Magda went to say something went she heard Alyssa speak “Abuela!” she squealed.

To be continued…

planet_stella · 03-14-2004, 10:57 AM

YOU POSTED!!!! Yay! That was great!!!! I can't wait for the next post! So you better post more soon!

Swimfan85 · 03-14-2004, 11:13 AM

this is wicked good, add more

08-16-2003, 02:02 AM	#16
lonelinesshurts Princess Of Darkness Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 12, 2003 Location: Total Darkness Posts: 97	Here you go: “We have to get ready to leave. Molly got me a job interview tomorrow at her job and I still have to find something to wear.” “Why don’t we go to the mall so you can get something new. Plus I want spoil the hack out this little one.” CD said tickling Alley that was setting on her lap. “Are you sure? I mean you never seen her in a public place she not always this good.” Abby tried to warn her. “Yeah I’m sure. You won’t show off will Alyssa?” CD asked tickling her again. “Nope. I promise.” She giggled “See.” CD smiled “Whatever. You’ll see when we get there.” Abby laughed ***** An hour later they arrived at the mall. “What store you want to go in first?” Abby asked CD as they entered the Mall. “I don’t know. Let’s get your work clothes first and go from there. What type a job is it?” “Desk clerk for a law firm.” She said with a sigh. “Meaning I probably have to wear something boring.” She said sadly, she was so use to her regular attire blue jeans in a T-shirt. CD laughed. “I know what you mean.” She smiled she was about to say something else when her cell phone ringed. “Hello?” “Hey baby I was just call to see if you want to have dinner with me since we didn’t have our lunch.” “Oh yeah Nate I’m sorry about that I had to-“ “Hay don’t worry about it the captain told me that you found out that that girl in the office was one of you relatives and you wanted to spend the day with her. So you want to come to dinner you can bring her if you want.” “Hold on a minute. Let me asked her.” she said and took the phone from her ear and covering it with her hand. “He wants to know if you want to come to dinner with us. I really want to tell him about you.” CD said trying to convince her. “Alright I’ll go.” Abby smiled “Abuela can I come to?” Alyssa pouted. “Sure sweetie.” CD smiled and but her phone back to her ear. “ Okay where do you want to go?” “How about you come over my place and I’ll cook dinner for you two.” “You cook?” she laughed “Yeah I can cook.” He said definably. “I never said you couldn’t I was just surprise. So what time did you want us to come over.” “Eight o’clock?” “Okay eight it is.” “Alright bye.” “Bye.” She smiled and hung up the phone. TO BE CONTINUED....
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09-29-2003, 05:13 PM	#21
croatian_princess ~~Lep andjeo~~ Frequent Poster Join Date: Sep 27, 2003 Location: Psych ward...I think....too much electroshock therapy... Posts: 402	Me 2. This is so weird. CD having a kid? Wow. But I love the story line.
	__________________ ~croatian_princess~ _________________________ "Don't hive up hope."~Candace DeLorenzo "Have some faith."~Dana Stowe

03-13-2004, 03:59 PM	#22
lonelinesshurts Princess Of Darkness Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 12, 2003 Location: Total Darkness Posts: 97	I'm sorry it took so long but I was caught up with my Third Watch and Law and Order SVU fic's. This chapter is really short but I promise the next chapter is longer and it will come sooner then eight months lol. here goes nothing ****** “I gave her up for adoption a week after she was born.” She whispered barley audible “she was never adopted she was raised in an orphanage. She got my name from the orphanage.” She said never making eye contact. Nate was speechless; he didn’t know what he was suppose to say after hearing something like this. “H-how do you feel about this, I mean I know this have to be hard for you.” Nate said as he got his wits back. “I never knew how much I miss her until now. I mean thought about her every day since I gave her up but now that I see her I don’t know why I gave her up.” She replied feeling tears coming to her eyes. “Then I met Alyssa she’s an angel. Nate I finally feeling like I’m getting a second chance you know. She’s not even blaming me for giving her up, she understands completely.” She said openly crying. Nate quickly went to her side to and pulled her into a hug. “I already told you’d make a great mom, so now here’s your chance.” He said rubbing her back. She smiled. ******* To Be Continued...
	Last edited by lonelinesshurts; 03-13-2004 at 06:56 PM.

03-13-2004, 09:16 PM	#23
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	Awwwww, that was so great! I'm a new reader, and I love it! Post more soon!
	__________________ Nate: When somebody asks for the salt, you hand them the pepper, too, even if they didn't ask for both. You never separate the salt and the pepper. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Luke: Will you marry me? Lorelai: What? Luke: Anything to shut you up.

03-14-2004, 01:04 AM	#26
lonelinesshurts Princess Of Darkness Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 12, 2003 Location: Total Darkness Posts: 97	See I told you I'd update sooner... ****** The Next Day- The day had been going really slow for both Jinny and Magda the only case the division got that day went to Nate and CD so the were stuck back in the precinct doing paper work. "Did you notice something different about CD today?" Magda questioned Jinny who obviously wasn't in the mood to do paper work. "No why?" She asked welcoming the detraction. "She just seemed really happy today." Magda shrugged, she put her pen down and turn her full attention to the conversation,. "Hasn't she been really happy for the last couple months? Every since she and Nate hooked up she’s always happy." "No not today, today it was a different kind of happy." Magda mused "A different kind of happy? How many kinds of happy are there?" Jinny asked sarcastically, which made Magda rolled her eyes. "It didn't seem like it had anything to do with Nate." "How the hell could you tell?" Jinny asked . Magda was about to replied when something caught her eye. “Jinny look.” Magda said softly and motioned for Jinny to turn around. When Jinny turned around she saw a small scared looking toddler with a note attached to her coat. Magda immediately went over to the little girl. “Hi sweetie I’m Magda what’s your name?” she asked softly and squatted down so she was almost eyelevel with the little girl. The girl didn’t respond. “Do you know where your mommy is?” she tried again the time getting a response. The little girl put her hand over the note on her jacket and started to cry. Magda immediately put her into a hugged and motion for Jinny to go get the caption. She had a feeling the little girl’s mother just abandon her in the police station. To Be Continued…
	Last edited by lonelinesshurts; 03-14-2004 at 12:30 PM.

08-16-2003, 05:22 PM	#17
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	MORE!!!!!!

08-17-2003, 02:32 AM	#18
lonelinesshurts Princess Of Darkness Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 12, 2003 Location: Total Darkness Posts: 97	More Like I Promised: After being at the mall for three hour Abby finally found set for her interview. And even with all Abby’s protest CD ended up buying Alyssa a little over hundred dollars worth of clothes and toys. After dropping their bags at CD apartment and changing there clothes they way over Nate’s apartment. “So what are you going to tell him.” Abby asked CD curious how she was going to explain to him about her and Alyssa. “I’m not sure yet.” CD said quietly “You’ll know when the time is right. You don’t have to tell him tonight.” Abby said putting her hand on top of CD’s to reassure her. CD smiled ‘I don’t deserve her’ she thought sadly. Five minutes later they arrived at Nate’s apartment building. “Mom you sure you want to go through with this.” Abby asked looking at CD who was holding Alyssa while they stood in front of Nate’s door. “I’m sure.” She smiled and knocked softly on the door. Nate answered the door in seconds. “Hi… who’s this.” Nate asked pointing to Alyssa. “That is my daughter Alyssa.” Abby smiled “ Hi I’m Abigail.” She said extending her hand. “I’m Nate but you probably already know that.” He returned the smile and shook her hand. “Well come in and make you self at home.” They follow him in the living room and sat down on the couch. “Dinner should be ready in five minutes, can I get you anything to drink while you wait?” He asked nervously “I’ll have a glass of water.” CD and Abby said in union. They looked at eachother and start to laugh. “Okay two waters. What about you little lady.” Nate asked Alyssa. She just stared at him. “She’s a little shy around people she doesn’t know.” Abby told Nate he nodded and went into the kitchen for their water. “What is he so nervous about?” Abby asked in a whispered to CD. “I have know idea.” She whispered back. Nate came back with their water a minute later. As they where beginning to chat Alley started squirming on Abby’s lap. “Mommy I have to go to the bathroom.” Alley whispered in Abby’s ear. “Okay sweetie. Nate can we use your bathroom?” “Yeah it’s just down the hall to you left.” “Thanks.” Abby said as she rushed Alyssa to the bathroom. “You and Abigail look a lot a like, how exactly are you two related.” Nate asked CD when they where alone in the living room. “Well…Nate she’s…Nate remember what I told you happen to me when I was fifteen… I didn’t tell you everything…” she trail off hoping he got the drifted “She’s your daughter?” he whispered in disbelief. CD nodded as she did every thing in her power to avoid eye contact. To Be CoNtInUeD...

08-17-2003, 06:03 AM	#19
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	you stopped! that's SO unfair! i need more lol

09-18-2003, 10:56 PM	#20
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	ok, seriously, what ever happened to this fic?? I wanna know what happens!!

03-13-2004, 11:36 PM	#24
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	YAY!!!! i'm so glad u posted on this fantastic fic!!!! It had better be sooner next time!!!! That was so great!!!!!

03-13-2004, 11:54 PM	#25
zwalane Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 08, 2003 Location: Southeastern Louisiana Posts: 228	Techically I'm a reader but since it had been so long since u posted i didn't post anything. So now that u posted I will say MORE ASAP

03-14-2004, 01:28 AM	#27
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	Awwww, poor little thing! That was so great, and I want to know what happens now! Post more soon.

03-14-2004, 02:10 AM	#28
lonelinesshurts Princess Of Darkness Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 12, 2003 Location: Total Darkness Posts: 97	See I told you I'd update sooner... ****** “It’s okay sweetie, it’s alright.” Magda said soothingly trying to calm the small girl. Once she calmed a little Magda picked her up and walk over to her desk and sat down. “Can you tell me your name?” she asked quietly as she rubbed her back. The girl was quite at first but they she mumbled something against her chest, To Magda it sounded like Calley. “Calley do you know what you last name is?” The little girl lift her head off of Magda’s chest a little and repeated her name. “Alley.” she whispered and put her head back on Magda chest. “Oh I’m sorry I must have heard you wrong Alley. Is that your first name or your nick name?” She asked knowing most kids Alley's age wouldn’t know the difference but she had to try. “Alyssa.” the girl whispered clearly. “Alyssa that’s a pretty name. Alyssa do you mind if I take this off your jacket?” Magda asked pointing to the note. Alyssa shook her head yes. “Mommy said I couldn’t take off til I saw Abuela.” her voice still not above a whisper. “Your grandmother?” Alyssa nodded. “Did your mommy tell you where Abuela was suppose to be?” “Here, work.” she said quietly “Abuela is she a cop?” Alyssa shrugged her shoulders. “Okay, can you tell me what she looks like?” “She looks like me and mommy.” “Okay, what does your mommy look like does she have light hair like you or dark hair like me?” she hesitated a second before answering “Light.” Magda was about to continue with her questioning when the caption call her over. “Alley set right here for a minute I’ll be right back Okay.” “Promise?” she asked almost scared. Magda’s heart broke “Yeah I promise” she said honestly. She then walked over to where Jinny and the caption was standing “Did you get any thing?” Kate asked when Magda reach the two women. “Not much. Her name is Alyssa her mom told her she was coming her to meet her grandmother.” “That’s it?” “Yeah that’s it. She can’t be more the two years old, she scared out of her mind I’m surprise I got that much out of her.” “How the hell could somebody abandon a two year old.” Jinny asked angerily “I don’t know, lets just be glad that she abandon her here and not at some crack house.” Kate reminded them it could have been much worst Magda went to say something went she heard Alyssa speak “Abuela!” she squealed. To be continued…
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03-14-2004, 10:57 AM	#29
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	YOU POSTED!!!! Yay! That was great!!!! I can't wait for the next post! So you better post more soon!

03-14-2004, 11:13 AM	#30
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	this is wicked good, add more