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Heeeeere's more :-) hope ppl r still reading...
"Oh Crap..." Jinny thought to herself,grabbing a couple of papers off her desk,and heading back to Kate's office "Can't forget this." Louis stood there with the phone in his hand, speechlees. How could he do this to Kate? Kate interupted his thoughts, "bye Louis." Louis snapped out of it, and shouted , "no Wait!" This nearly made Kate jump out of her skin because of the night before. "What?" she said upset, and annoyed that he wouldn't let it go. He was still in shock that he would hit her, and he couldn't remember a damn thing. Louis wanted to know why. "Kate please tell me what happend?" "I came home,you were drunk, you accused me of sleeping around,and then you hit me. There now you know,I gotta get back to work." Louis felt bad, he still couldn't remember, but he also knew that Kate wouldn't lie. The best thing for him to do now he thought was to let her go, and calm down, he would think of a way later to say how sorry he was."Kate, I am really sorry...bye..." Kate said a quick good bye, and hung up the phone. She sighed, and put hand to her head. She thought"This is going to be a longer day then I thought." Jinny stood outside her captain's door, with her hand about to knock on the door when she had heard her cap with a loud voice say, "I came home,you were drunk, you accused me of sleeping around,and then you hit me. There now you know,I gotta get back to work." Jinny stood there in shock for a second, and then thought to herself that she knew that her captain had lied about last night and the bar fight. Jinny knocked on the door. Kate sighed again, "What now..." she thought. Then she said "come in..." Kate looked up, and saw jinny coming through the door, and asked her, "Whatcha need?" "uhhh..." Jinny looked down, and then back up at her captain, "Well I needed for you to sign this." Jinny handed her the paper. "Is that it?" kate asked annoyed that Jinny was still standing there. Kate just wanted to be alone at the moment. Jinny took a seat in one of the chairs across from Kate's desk...Kate just looked at her like what is she doing? "No...it's not.." Jinny was suprised at herself that she was doing this. But she felt she needed to. "..Okay...what else?" "Uh..c...can I talk to you..about something personal?" Jinny chose her words very carefully. "You wanna talk personal to ME?" Kate looked at Jinny rather suprised. "Heh,...yeah.."She chuckled. "Okay...shoot.." There was silence in the room Jinny tried to plan out what she was going to say,quickley,"Okay,normally...you know me...I wouldn't but in..."She sighed," but,I'm just...really concerned..." "About who?" Kate sat back in her chair. "You..." "m..me?"It wasn't that she wasn't grateful for Jinny's concern,becuase she was...she shocked too,But she just didn't want to talk about it.She didn't want anyone to know about it. "...Cap..I was at Clark's bar last night...and there were no fights..." "D..did I say Clark's?..I..I ment Kent's.." "..and I overheard what you said..to...Louis..on the phone.." Jinny watched as her Captain just looked down at her lap,not saying anything. She wasn't sure what to say to Jinny. "Cap..What's going on?" "I really don't think it's any of your business" She snapped. She didn't like being put in this position. She felt like she was caught between a rock and a hard place. Between Embarrassment,and humiliation. "Okay,fine! Y'know it's not often that my captain comes to work,with a huge black eye,and a twisted ankle,and lies about it,."Jinny said standing up,"So I can later learn that her boyfriend did it! So please,forgive me for be a little concerned!" Kate looked at Jinny astonished,"..I'm sorry I snapped at you.." She sighed.,"Thank you for your concern, But i'm okay, Don't worry about me,i'm fine...really,...everything is okay..." There were a few too many 'fine's and 'ok's in Kate's statement for Jinny's comfort,but she went along with it,She'd already stepped on terf she didn't belong on,and she didn't want to push it,"...okay.."She sighed. "Thank you,though...I...I really appreciate your concern..." "Eh..."Jinny shrugged,"it seems like you are always looking out for me.."She tried to make it seem like less of a big deal. "I'm glad you realize that,Jin." Jinny nodded,flashing an awkward smile,"Well,I guess...I should get back to work..." "Yeah,I think that's a good idea..." "For his sake,everything had better really be fine."Jinny thought as she left her Captain's office. So wut did ya think of the jin/cap moment? huh? lol hope ya liked,let us know wut ya think.....Shud we go on? |
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Yeah, we know it's been a looong time, lol here's more,if anybody is still readin...
"So...uh...I hear you slept with your partner last night."Magda showed CD a sly smile. "Who told you?" CD thought,that surely Jinny hadn't.When Jinny was told to keep a secret,it was as if she locked it away in a bank vault. "Nate..." "Why?" "Becuase I asked him why you guys are acting so weird...it took some coaxing ,but i got it out of him."Magda sounded rather proud. "Magda,you could coax Donald Trump into filing for bankruptcy." "The man is disgustingly rich,why on earth would he want to?" "To shut you up."CD smirked. "Hey..."Magda put her hands on her hips. "Hey,Magda...I think we got somethin."Nate held up their case file as he walked up. "What do we got?" "Come on,I'll explain on the way." "Ok,...CD,we'll finish our conversation later." Magda shook her finger at CD. "Bye,CD."Nate winked,as he pinched her butt. "Ouch.."He rubbed his arm where CD punched him,and chuckled as he walked away. Cd took a long collective sigh and looked down at her watch,"Three more hours,and and we're home free."She thought outloud. "Yippee!.."Jinny said,walking over to CD. "Hey,come on,The witness is in interogation 1." "Okay.."Cd's arms were firmly crossed in front of her,just as they always were,when she was not happy about something. "I saw Nate grab your ass..." Jinny chuckled. "Shut up,Jinny."Cd shook her head,as they walked through the division doors,on their way to the interogation room. Wich didn't shut Jinny up,it only made her laugh more. AThree and a half hours later,Kate was sitting at her deck as if, her day couldn't get any worse. She thought,now she had to go back home to the man who had hit her last light, and she really wasn't looking faward to that. "He didn't mean it, but then again that is what most batared women have said"She thought.."No. I am not one of them..He would never hit me again"...once again Kate thought that is what all batared women say...One would think,that the extensive knowledge she had of this kind of thing,would help her...but it didn't,if anything,it made it worse...it certainly made her feel even more embarrassed about what had happened. At times Louis could be so sweet, and other times he was so controling, and bitter. He was never like that the first time they were married. Jinny let out a sigh of relief,when she signed the paper,and laid it on top iof the rather large stack,she had already sighed. She gathered them up,and then put them in a file folder,and then in her file drawer,and locked it. She sat there looking around the now almost empty division. Raina,Magda,Cd and Nate had all already gone home for the night. Technically she had gotten off about thirty minutes earlier,but she wanted to get the paper work done that night,so she wouldn't have to fool with it the next day. She didn't really want to go home,because there was nothing to do there. Teddy was out of town at the moment. She looked into her Captain's office,and saw Kate sitting at her desk,not working,just sitting there. "Eh...why not.."Jinny thought to herself, and grabbed her jacket,as she got up. "Enough thinking." Kate said to herself, "stop putting off going home.", and then it was as if on cue, there was a knock on Kate's door,Kate motioned for Jinny to come in. "Hey,uh...you...wanna grab a bite to eat before calling it a night?" Jinny shrugged.Kate didn't know what to think but it was her way of not going home yet. She never saw this side of Jinny the one that was look after her..it was kinda nice kate thought..Kate, asked, "Ya do realize you're asking me,don't cha?" "Yes..."Jinny chuckled. "Are ya comin' or not?" "Yeah,sure...thanks."Kate got up,and grabbed her coat and purse. "Eh..actually I plan on getting you drunk, I'm really curious to see what you're like,after ya loosen up a bit...I might even video tape it." Jinny flashed an evil grin. "Actually i had thought about downing a...whole bottle of Taquila.." She laughed,turning off her lamp,and walking out of her office. "Ooo,you must really be able to handle your liquer,I can't wait to see this..." "Well,keep dreaming,because i didn't say i was going to,I said I thought about it." "D@mn...So close..." Jinny and Kate had been at Anchorside for at least an hour now,things had been going pretty well. They chit chatted, it seemed that that they actually had more in common then anyone realized. "And since i was the only women on the force,that wasn't married to the Luetinant, having an affair with the captain,and didn't closely resemble Dave Starsky...from Starsky and Hutch...I always ended up undercover as the prostitute,or a cage dancer.....once i came horribly close to actually having to strip." Kate finished off another beer. "Oh my god!...I am having a very hard time picturing that" Jinny was enjoying all the stories of what the division was like in the 'old days'. "Everybody says that." "Okay,so...wich one was having the affair with the captain?" "Dave Starsky...and the Luetinant's wife." "Oh gawd,thats funny.." "Yep..and the luetinant was havng an affair with Dave Starsky...She was the daughter of the Chief..." "Ooohhh....gawd,this place was like a soap opera back then." "Jinny,it still is...trust me." "Can I get you anything else?" The waiter asked,as he picked up their empty plates. "Yeah,another beer,please."Kate smiled at the waiter. "Sure thing." Said,and then l;ooked to Jinny. "Nah,I'm fine thanks."Jinny waited till the waiter was gone before she said anything to Cap . "Umm...Cap..are you sure you really want another one?" "Yes, I am..." Kate nodded. "Ok...but,that's like your sixth..." It looked like Jinny might get to see her captain a little less then sober after all. "You're the only one counting..." "What? Why?" CD asked. She'd planned to tell Jack,that she couldn't see him anymore,but the tables had turned and now that was what he was telling her.And She didn't like being on this side of the table. "Oh,now that belongs in the 'Lame Exscuse Hall Of Fame'!.....no,no..I'm not hurt that you don't want to see me anymore,I had planned to tell you the same thing...what pisses me off is that you don't have a better exscuse!.....Y'know what I have better things to do then listen to this crap! I'm gonna go watch TV...Goodbye..."She it took her a coule of tries to turn the phone off,she was so mad.When she finally suceeded she tossed the phone to the other side of the couch,and put the tv on the USA channel, wich was currently showing 'JAG'. "What time is it?" Kate asked. "Ten till Ten."Jinny said looking down at her watch. "Oh...well, I guess I better get going..."She said standing up. "I'll drive ya..."Jinny watched her Tipsy captain sway slightly,as she put on her coat. "Nah,I'm ok.."Kate picked up her purse."Thanks for dinner"She said. She bumped into the table,as she started to walk away. She held onto the chair as she turned,to keep herself steady "OK,nevermind..."She said,handing Jinny her car keys. "What Nate?"CD said into her phone. "Look...I just got dumped,wich is not something I enjoy,and I'm not in a very good mood right now...No,I don't want you to come over and 'cheer me up'...I don't mean to be rude,but what i want right now is to just be left alone,okay?...Okay,thank you..I'll see you tomorrow....Bye Nate." Once again,she she tossed the phone to the other side of the couch,after she shut it off. She picked up the remote,and started flipping through channels,so fast she couldn't possibly see what was on each channel. "You need me to help you inside?" Jinny offered,as they pulled into her captain's driveway. "No,I can manage..."Kate climbed out of the car,and had to hold onto the door for a minute,to steady herself. "Thanks for everything,Jinny..." "No prob, G'night,Cap." " g'night." Jinny felt kinda like a mother hen,as she waited,and watched to make sure Kate made it inside alright,before driving off in her Captain's car,wich she was going to return in the morning,at work. Kate had tried to close the door quietly when she came in,but her lack of coordination,backfired,and she accidetally slammed it. "Kate,where have you been?" Louis asked,as he walked over to her. "Having dinner,with a friend.."She slurred. She leaned against the table in the entryway,for sum support,as she took her coat off,and missed the coat tree when she went to hang up her coat." Oh screw it." She mumbled. "Are you drunk?" "No,I'm tipsy." She stated. "So, you have been drinking." "Ok,Sherlock,now you're supposed to say: It's elementary,My Dear Watson." Louis didn't appreciate that remark,rather she had been drinking or not. 'Come here."He guided her to the couch,and sat her down. "I'm gonna go make some coffee." "Oh,I see!"She stumbled to her feet"You're allowed to get drunk on your ass...and deck you girlfriend,but you girlfriend can't even get a little tipsy after a long hard days work!..Wich was made extra hard by the twisted ankle,and black eye,...a pressent from her boyfriend...that everyone kept asking about!!" She ranted,stumbling her way into the kitchen. "I'm sorry..."Louis mumbled,turning the coffee maker on.He really was sorry that he hit her. But Kate just ignored him,and went on with her rant. "Huh?! is that what it is?! Cause,I don't get it!,It's just plain stupid,if ya ask me! Cause,I mean I never decked my girlfriend!..." Kate stopped and stared at him for a moment.,"Un like the ass standing next to me.."She mumbled. " Infact! I don't plan on hitting anybody!!"She shouted. Louis heard her call him an ass,but he decided to ignore it."Kate, i've said i'm sorry over and over and over again,amd you just keep ranting on" "Ranting!? Ranting!?Oh,hunny you haven't seen ranting yet!" "Don't yell in my face.!" His voice was starting to get pretty loud as well. "Oh,so you can get pissed off about something,that you should know didn't,and would never happen,and hit me with more strength hat i thought you had in you!.,But I can't get mad about somethin that DID happen,and yell a little bit!? Gawd,that's one hell of a double standard!" "I apologized a thousand times,and you won't listen!" Louis was getting really frustrated. He couldn't get through to her for nothing,on top of the fact that he didn't like being yelled at,or having his words turned around,and taken out of context."You just keep getting more and more upset!" He slammed his fist down on the counter. This startled Kate,and she stepped back a couple of steps....wich made her even more pissed off at herself,for letting him scare her in the least bit. Louis,didn't notice Kate step away from him, he was rubbing his aching fist. "You hit me a hell of a lot harder then that last night." She mumbled. "Kate,I love you, I'm sorry..I don't know what more I can say..."He stepped towards her. Her first instinct was to step back,but she stopped herself. She refused to admit that she was even slightly nervous. He ran his hand through her hair,and then placed it on her cheek. "Kate,I'm - -" "Don't touch me." She shoved his hand away. He sighed and looked at the floor,"Kate I don't know what else I can do...I'm sorry,It'll never happen again...I promise." "It never should have hapened in the first place,especially if you love me!" "God,why am I still trying?! Everything I say, You turn it around,and use it against me!! Why should i apologize?! It just seems to make you angrier!" His voice rose once again. Kate looked at him,then turned and started to walk out of the kitchen. And then it happened. Just like the night before. Louis grabbed her arm,and pulled her back. "Don't walk away from me!" He glared at her. It wasn't like the night before,but she could tell that he was very angry. "Don't give me orders!" She tried to pull her arm free,but he had a good grip on her. Now she was really scared,But she wasn't about to let him see it. "Just answer my question!" "D@mn it Louis!,let go of me!! You son of a bitch!!" She screamed,digging her fingernails into his hand. He let go of her arm,and without thinking,raised his other hand. "So much 'I'm sorry' Huh..."She stared him straight in the eye, She flinch or back away or anything,it was almost as if she were daring him to do it. He slowly lowered his hand,realizing what he was about to do. He looked down at the ground, "Kate,I am so sorry..I wasn't thinking..." He pulled her to him,and wrapped his arms around him. "I'm sorry..."He whispered in her ear,and then kissed her neck. She stood there,with tears streaming down her face,she didn't hug or kiss him back. "Don't do it again." She said. She pulled his arms loose from her waist,and went to the bedroom. Shortly after Kate got in bed,Louis did too. He scooted over next to her,and put his arm around her. "Good night..." He whispered,and kissed her cheek. kate ignored his jestures,and just mumbled a barely audible "G'night." The next morning,she woke up with a spilting headache. She got up,and walked sleepily to the bathroom,to take a shower. About forty-five minutes later,she was ready for work. As she neared the kitchen,she smelled something cooking,and as she entered the kitchen,she saw what she was smelling. Louis was cooking breakfast. Infact,he was cooking Kate's favorite. When Louis heard Kate come in,he turned to her,and gave her a very passionate 'good morning kiss'. "I made your favorite." He flashed a hopefull smile. "I can see that..it looks good." She mumbled. She could see,that he was making an effort to make it up to her. And She was making an effort to forgive him...though it was going to be hard...due to her stubborness,she had a tendancy to hold grudges for various lengths of time "Here,have a seat.."He motioned,pulling out a chair at the table for her. "It's almost ready..." He quickly kissed the top of her head,and went back to the stove. So Kate's day had gone better then the day before. She thought that it was partly owed to the fact that She and louis were on some what better terms. Though the fact that he almost took another swing at her, did bother some... She thought he did seem genuinely sorry. "Knock,knock..."Jinny said,walking into Kate's office,carrying a large bouquet of red roses. Kate who was on the phone,smiled,and mouthed "Who..?" to to her. Jinny took the card out of the bouquet,and read it. She pointed to a picture of Louis that was sitting on Kate's desk. "Okay,thanks...you too.." Kate said into the phone,and then hang it up. She smelled of the roses. "Here...it's really sweet."Jinny smiled,handing Kate the card. Kate read the card,and couldn't help but smile. "So...uh...How's it goin?" Jinny asked."You..uh...seem to be doing better..."She shrugged. Kate looked out her office window..to make sure no one was in hearing distance of what was being said in her office,"Yeah...uh...He's really sorry for what he did...it's not gonna happen again,so..." "Are you sure,it's not?..."Jinny didn't mean to ask such a personal question..it just came out. Kate really wasn't quite sure if she did or not,yet. "...Yeah...I think he deserves another chance....he was drunk...people do some stupid things when they're drunk..." "Smooth way to avoid the question."Jinny thought to herself. She also noticed how Kate hesitated to answer her...Jinny exactly why...but She was still very worried about her captain. She just kinda had a bad feeling. "Yeah...well...uh..glad things are goin better fr ya..."Jinny said,and turned to go. "Thanks,Jin..."Kate said,as Jinny left her office. a few hours later,Jinny passed a delivery man,as she and Teddy who'd just got back from L.A. and came straight to see her from the airport. "Wahoo..mor flowers huh,Cap?" Jinny smiled. "That's what,the third bouquet?" "No....actually these,are for you.."Kate handed the bouquet of 12 yellow roses to her. "By the way,Theodore...the card is really sweet." Hearing this,Jinny imediately read the card. "Yeah,well I'm cornball,no point in hiding it." He smiled. Jinny "The handsomest,sexiest,sweetest cornball of time.."Jinny said,pinching his cheek. "Thank you." She kissed him,resulting in an "Awww..." from all of her friends. "Can,I read the card?" Raina asked eagerly. Normally Jinny wud say ,Hell no!,but this time..."Suuuuure..." She said just to embarrass Teddy,and handed the card to Raina. "Awwww, Teddy thats sooo sweeeet!" She pinched his cheek. Then CD grabbed the card,and read it. "Awww...Teddy....that soooo corny!" She teased. "K,well ,i gotta get to work..I swear I do more paper work then anything lately." Jinny said sitting down at her desk. "And i just happen to have more for you to do.."Kate said cheerfully, "Oh Joy!"Jinny said saracastically. Kate went into her office.while in there,she got a little black box out of her desk drawer,and stuck it in her jacket pocket. "Here,ya go" She said dropping the papers on Jinny desk. "Oh,thank you so much! it's what I've always wanted!" "Yeah,I thought you'd like it." "Well,I'm gonna get out of you way."Teddy kissed Jinny,and started to leave. "I'll walk ya out.."Jinny stood up again. "That's okay,you don't gotta.."This was going against plans...Jinny was supposed to stay there,and kate was supposed 2 meet him outside. "The sooner you get to work..the sooner you get off..." He winked. "True...but, I don't care I'm walking you out." She smiled. "Okay."He smiled back. As they walked out,He gave Kate a "What now??" look,wich she returned. "I'll be right back..."Kate said and started to leave. "Where ya goin?" Raina asked. "I,uh...gotta get something outta my car..." She replied,and walked out. Walking down the hall,she met back up with Jinny and Teddy. "Hey,where you headed,Cap?" Jinny asked. "I gotta get something outta my car." "Oh..is it heavy?...I can get it for you..."Teddy offered,trying to go along with whatever she was planning. "Um...Nah, I can get it, I don't wanna inconvenience you..."She shrugged. "Are ya sure?" "Yeah,thanks anyways.." Kate replied. Slowing her pce,so that she was a little behind Jinny,hoping that Teddy would figure out to do the same. And he did,except that plan got gliched too,when Jinny put her arm around his waist. "Damn.." Both Teddy and Kate thought. "Hey,Jin!" Magda called from over at the coffee stand in the lobby. "Come here!...Welcome back Teddy!" Teddy waved "Thanks!" "I'll be right back.."Jinny said,and walked over to Magda,and Nate. Keeping their eyes,on Jinny,Magda and Nate,to make sure they weren't looking...Teddy picked up Kate's hand and held it for a moment. Louis enter the building of the San Fransisco Police Department,and saw his girlfriend holding hands with a very handsom,and rather young man in a blue suite. "Who the hell is that?" He thought. And when he watched the young man lean down and...kiss Kate's cheek....He jumped to what seemed to him to be the only conclusion. "Okay.."Kate whispered,with a grin. Then Kate let go of his hand and headed to her car...she didn't really need anything from her car...but she hand to make her story hold up. "Oh, Hi...Hunny...."Kate met Louis at the doors "What are you doing here?" "Who was that guy?" He asked point blank. "W..what guy?" She asked in confusion. "That guy!" He pointed over to Teddy,who was walkin towards them with Jinny. "Oh...That's just ADA Blumenthal...why?" "Don't play clueless with me... I saw you...holding hands...He kissed you..." And then it clicked for her. "Oh, no..Louis,it's not at all what you think..."She was worried that he was going to blow Her and Teddy's cover. "Listen,I'll explain at home okay..." "You got that damn right." He glared at her,and walked out. Jinny had heard the last thing he said to Kate. And saw the look on his face...and for some reason that feeling she had got a little stronger. Jinny looked at her captain questiongly. Kate just shook her head. Sooo...wutcha think? do ya want more? hmmmmm? |
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So what is going on with Teddy and Cap?
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Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay sumbody is reading!!! lol
QUOTE]Originally posted by Jeanie So what is going on with Teddy and Cap? [/QUOTE] Lol,read and find out........ "Here's the file for the Watson case.."Jinny said,as she walked into Kate's office,and handing it to Kate. "Thanks, Jin." She replied,and laid the file on her desk. "Well...I guess I'm outta here...finally!...Good night." Jinny laughed. "G'night Jin...Have fun on your date..."She said without thinking. "How did you know?...I don't think I told you..." Jinny looked at her confused. "You didn't...I can read minds..."Kate joked. "Nah...Teddy told me..while you were talking to Magda..." "Oh...okay.."Jinny laughed. "Tell Romeo ,I said Hi." "Will do..."Jinny said,and left. "Hi, Dad..."Jinny said into he phone receiver. "Is Teddy there?" John Sr. asked. "No, he'll be here in a little bit...I really need to go get ready..." "Okay,okay, I won't keep ya....you tell ole Teddy Boy, I said hi." "Okay, I will..." "And you wear something really nice okay...why don't you wear that red dress Casey got you for your birthday...you look beautiful in that one.." "Dad, why are you making such a big deal outta this date? You haven't any of the many other date we've been on..." "Jinnygirl, just humor your poor oldman,okay..." "Okay,Dad,I will...i gotta go okay?" "Okay,bye..."He said"...I love you.." He added. "I love you too,Dad...bye.." She hangup the phone before he could say anything else...and went to get ready. "Hey, I'm home! "Kate called taking her coat off,and hanging it on the coat tree,along with her holster and gun, and walking on into the living room. "I go chinese." She smiled at him. "So, you think,Chinese is gonna make me forget about what I saw earlier...between you and that guy!" She looked at her accusingly. "You didn't see anything! I told you it wasn't what it looked like!" Kate couldn't believe he'd jump to conclusion like this..and so quickley, and it not only pissed her off, it really hurt her. He looked at her up, and down as if she were a posession..Like he owned her. She walked into the kitchen and he followed her. "I saw with my own two eyes. Are you calling me a liar!? She put the food down on the counter and said, "No... not a liar, you just didn't see it right..I was handing him something that belonged to him." " Oh yeah, I can imagine." Louis mumbled. "Louis, I swear! I would never cheat on you,and you know it!! Okay! He aske dme to hang on to some thing! Something that he didn't want his girlfriend to see!!" "Hmmm,that's one way I've never heard it put!!" "Damn it Louis! I'm telling the truth!! I don't apreciate being accused of lieing,and adultery!!" "Well,if the shoe fits!!" He screamed, grabbing a beer out of the refridgerater. Kate saw were this was leading, and tried to change the direction of it . She said, "You know Louis, I really don't wanna do this tonight, can't we just leave it at that. eat dinner watch a movie, and go to bed." "oh, I see, you didn't get to go to bed with your hot young boyfriend, so your gonna sitle for me.!"Louis Mumbled. "Louis!" Kate yelled, "your imposible!" She goes to walk out of the kitchen not even hungry anymore. She was just tired. "I don't wanna argue with you tonight..There is nothing going on between me and Teddy! He - -" "Teddy?..Oh is that your pet name for him?" "He is seeing one of my inspecters! That's all I can tell you for now." He grabed her arm, and backed her up into the wall and says your not going anywere." "Damn it louis let go of me!!" She screamed in his face,trying to get loose."You're hurting me!" Jinny had followed her Dad's advice,and put on the clingy strapless red dress,and shoes that matched,that he little brother baught her for her birthday. She still couldn't figure out what posessed him to by her something like this...but now she saw that it could come in useful. "Figures,when i finally decide to wear stillettos,you blind fold me,and take me to some strange place." She said. "Oh stop complaining,you'll like it." He laughed. "Come here.."He picked her up and carried her. "Are we going down steps?" "Very perceptive of you..yes we are." Once at the bottom of the steps he put her down. "Take you shoes off,it'll be easier to balance."He said once they reached their destination. "Theodore,where are we?" She asked, doing as he suggested. "Take a few steps...you'll figure it out." She took a few step forward...and first she felt the sand under her feet,and then she heard the waves crashing. "Tell me where we are,and then I'll take the blind fold off." He smiled. "We're on a beach." She laughed. "What beach?" "Teddy... how am I supposed to know that?" "Just retrace your steps..." "Uh...." She thought about the parking lot they'ed parked in,and she she didn't know why,but she assumed they'd walked down an alley of sorts...and then she thougth about the two flights of steps he'd carried her down...and then they walkd a little ways further. "....The bay?..." He pulled off the blindfold, and smiled. "No wonder you made inspector." "What did I tell you about yelling in my face!?" "What did I tell you about giving me orders!?" Kate yelled louder just to spite him. "I'm warning you!" "What are ya gonna do!? Hit me!?" Louis just stared at her. He wanted to...he really really wanted to. He let go of her,and walked to the other side of the kitchen. He leaned on the counter,and put his face in his hands. "1...2...3...4...5...6...7..." He tried counting to ten,but it wasn't working...he had thought that was a bunch of crap. She watched him closely...She could tell that he was having to put forth an effort...that he really wanted to hit her. Somebody...one of them...needed to leave,she thought. She just couldn't be around him right now...she needed to be alone...to think. But she was afraid to say anything...at least right now. It wasn't being hit that really scared her...She didn't wan to be hit again,of course...but,She'd taken a few hefty punches over her years as a cop...It was the fighting...She didn't want to fight anymore...her throat was burning,and her head was starting to hurt from the yelling. She slowly walked into the living room,rubbing her arms where he'd been holding her. She nearly jumped out of her skin when she heard a loud crash,and Louis yell in pain. She slowly returned to the kitchen,and saw his bloody hand,and then the brand new whole in the wall. "At least it wasn't me." She thought. "Uh...here..." She mumbled and went to the bathroom...She came back with some gauz,some bandage tape,and rubbing alcohol. Neithere of them said anything as she fixed his hand up. An eery silence took over the house.She was asking herself why she was even helping him...She should have just left...He deserved it. For punching the wall,for accusing her of cheating on him,and lieing...for slamming her against the wall.... "Uh...Jinny...." Teddy began nervously. "Teddy..." "Um...." "Um....what?.." She asked. He'd had everything planned to a tee,but he never did figure out how he should say what he was about too. "Teddy...something wrong?" "No...no,not at all...uh...." He reached into his coat pocket,and pulled something out. She finished bandaging his hand,and looked up at him. They looked eachother in the eye for several moments with out speaking. "I'm sorry Kate.."He whispered. He took her face in his hands and gently kissed her. "Really,I am." "About what you did to me or the wall? She thought to herself. but she didn't say it. She wasn't about to push things even further,now that they had calmed down. "Yeah..."She whispered. He just watched, as she walked out of the kitchen through the living room.and to the door,she grabbed coat and her purse, looked at Louis, "I don't know if I'll be back tonight..But I will be in the morning,to change for work..." She didn't wait for a responce,she just left. Kate sat at her desk with her face in her hands. The blinds in her office were closed,so that none of the few officers working couldn't se in. The door was locked,and the room was lit by only her desk lamp. She had so many thoughts about so many things going through her mind,that she thought her eyes were gonna cross. Thoughts about Louis accusing her of cheating on him..."Gawd, If I were gonna have an affair...I wouldn't do it in the lobby of the SFPD....or anywhere within a 25 mile radius of Raina...How stupid does he think I am!?" Then her train of thought switched tracks,and went to the fact that Louis accused her. She couldn't figure out what she'd done or when she did it to make him distrust her. Because she hadn't done anything. He'd always been the jealous type "But this taking it to a whole new level." She thought. Then Her mind went to his sudden outburst of rage...why was he suddenly so...She hated to use the word 'abusive'. That would imply that she was being abused. And she wasn't..He hit her once...that was it. Or was it? "He wanted to...He really wanted to..." She thought back to the events of only a couple of hours ago. But why did he want to? Why was he being like this? "..He had to watch his father do it to his mother..." She told herself. "But why?"...And why now?Why not twenty years ago when we were married?" She asked herself,"...And he always said..He was never gonna be like his father..." The more she thought the more confused she got. Soooooooooo,wutcha think????? Shud we go on????Hmmm??? |
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Here's...alot more lol we got on a roll,hope ya like.............
After that night the weeks flew by. Things between Kate, and Louis had settled down. It was for the most part. Kate tired to keep the peace, and stepped down form any huge arguments that she would have gotten into with Louis. Witch was not like Kate, and that was starting to get to her. Any, mistakes that Louis had made he had made it up to her by sending her flowers, and love notes...Well if, you could call them love notes Writing was not a strong point of Louis's, but it was the thought that counted or at least in Kate's option. Things going around the division Kate was starting to question though. CD, and Nate had not as of yet returned to being partners. And to say the least things between the two had been very strained, that was of coarse when they weren't making googoo eyes at each other when they thought no one was looking or that the other wasn't looking. Kate had turned a blind eye two what she was seeing from those two she had enough on her plate. Then there was Jinny Kate didn't think this was possible at of all her inspectors she was the one that was most happy. She had never scene her like that. Kate only wanted to best for Jinny, and it had taken a long time, but Jinny finely understood that, even if it meant it was because Louis had hit her. Something good had come out of all of that Jinny and Kate were closer then ever. Kate looked at her watch she still had to go home, and get ready for the wedding...and she already knew that her hair was gonna take forever to do cause it already wasn't working with her that day. ***************************** CD was in the bathroom..."Hurry up" the other women said," The wedding should be happening anytime , and will it would look really bad, if the bride, and one of her brides maids were Late to the weeding." CD said I am trying to go as fast as I can, but I can't pee! Damn it! She said getting frustrated. The other women said "If, I turned on the water you think that would help?" CD said, "It might Finely!" CD yelled getting somewhere. She came walking out of the stall, "okay now we only have to wait fifteen minds for the Results...." She was cut off my other women's response. "Only fifteen minutes, I don't have Fifteen Minutes...I am supposed to be walking down the isle in five. IF that!" CD tired to clam the bride, "it's okay don't worry we will just put is some were until after the wedding." The bride yelled "Were...? were?!?!" The bride heard footsteps coming towards the bathroom. "Oh, no someone's coming!" CD said, "Oh ****!" She was running around the bathroom trying to find a place to stash it. "I can't let anyone find out that I might be pregnet!" The bride said, "They won't, here put it in my purse." They looked up at the person standing at the door. Them both looking like they were about five years old, and had gotten into something that they shouldn't have. "Umm, We can't start the wedding without the bride." The bride said Okay ready." **************************** They all stood for the bride to walk down the isle, she was so pretty. She wasn't as nervures as she thought that she would be. She had what little family she had there. She was missing her mother, but that was okay it was time that she got past that part of her life, and start a new on with her new family, and her husband to be. God she thought I have never scene someone has gorgeous has he looks today. He doesn't look scared at all. It's like WE were meant to be. For the first time in her life she knew that she was doing something right. Marrying the man of her dreams. Kate was seated in the first row she was kinda of suprised when they had done that she was sitting right next to the father of the bride. AS she had walked up to hand given her a hug, and a kiss on her check. She had noticed Louis's face, and knew that he wasn't very happy about the kiss. Kate asked if this were she be supposed to be sitting, because this was were the family should be sitting, and She wasn't family. No the man said this is the way she wanted it. You mean so much to her even if she doesn't show that all the time. Kate teased "She must take after her father, but at least she got her mothers looks." The man looked at Kate with a smile, and said "thank god she doesn't look like me. Hey I gotta go to walk my daughter down the isle." With that he walked away, and Kate, and Louis sat down. She was hopping that he would start anything with her. When he didn't say anything at all she knew that he wasn't going to say anything....Yet anyway. Kate thought she had never scene him so happy before. The music started, and the bride's maids started walking down the isle, Kate wasn't sure how, but somehow Raina had made her way into the wedding. She was the first one to come walking down, and when she saw Kate she smiled and waved at her. .Kate just laughed. Close to the end one of the groom's men walked up and walked Raina to be she was supposed to stand. Then CD came walking down the Isle. CD had this glow on her that Kate saw.. there was something there that was different about her, but she couldn't quite put her finger on it, but she knew that in good time she would figure it out. When Nate came to walk CD the rest of the way down she knew that only the bride would have the nerve to do that. Know that CD, and Nate weren't exaltedly getting along at the moment. Then the marten of honor came walking down.. Magda She was so happy for her best friend. The best man led her the rest of the way. They all stood there waiting for the bride everything was perfect. From the flowers to the bride's maid dresses. Then the music started, and everyone stated up....The bride was walking down the isle, with her father in toe. They looked so well together. Kate could feel the emotions getting the best of her as her eyes tearing up. Kate was remembering the first time that she saw Jinny.. Hard to believe the same person that she was today. She walked into her office with that all-knowing attitude of hers. Kate new that one day that would make Jinny one hell of an officer on day, but first Jinny had to grow up a bit, and that she had. Jinny was fine young women who disserved the best. Even, back then Kate couldn't describe it, but Jinny was and will always me like a daughter to her, and just the fact that she ended up wanting Kate to sit in the first row had meant a lot to Kate. She felt the tears going down her face as the ceremony started. And they started their vows. AS it went on Kate kept think of times she had had with Jinny...good times and bad. It was a fast ceremony, Kate kinda thought that it might be knowing Jinny cause she would want to go straight for the party... The minister said:...I now pronounce you man and wife...Mr. and Mrs. Blumenthal.... **************************************************** Jinny, and Teddy stood there, with a knife ready to cut the wedding cake. Everyone was chanting for her to smash the cake in his face. But Jinny did something very unlike Jinny, and didn't smash it in his face. After they ate the cake it was time for the first dance. Teddy and Jinny got up and started dancing to Martina McBride's Valentine. After words everyone stood up, and cheered for them. They were so happy for them. All but, one person who was barley able to stand at the moment, and for once it wasn't. And for once it wasn't Louis.. It was a little later in the evening, and Jinny had to go to the bathroom. She thought "Fine time to start her period. She grabbed her purse, and went to the bathroom. She got out of her purse what she needed, and placed it down on the sink. Jinny heard someone come on, but she wasn't sure and they didn't say anything. When Jinny was done she stepped out of the stall, and saw Teddy's mom standing there. Jinny didn't know what to say, "Mrs. Blumenthal. Was the only thing that did come out. Mrs. Blumenthal had had a smirk on her face. Jinny thought that was a bad sign. The women didn't even know how to smile let alone know how to be nice. "So I was right...You are just a gold digger, after my son's money...Is this just a little more incentive to get him to marry you or what?" The older women waved the pregnancy test in the air. All Jinny could say was "Wha… Wha.. What?" She new the lady could be cruel, but this mean, she had no idea. Teddy's mother just glared at her, and said, "Oh, get off of it, you know exactly what I am talking about. Your nothing more this a gold digging slut." Jinny stood there in disbelieve. Once again, "No." was the only thing that came out of her mouth. She was in so much shock that she couldn't even think of what to say to defend her self. The older women nearly laughed at her. "I tell you what… I won't tell my son, and I will write you out a blank check for however much you want." Jinny stood there speechless. She couldn't believe her years. Hell she couldn't believe what was happening at this very moment. Then she heard it a voice from the doorway say, "What the hell is going on here?" The women that Jinny saw was Kate's she never thought she would be so glad to see her captain. Mrs. Blumenthal said, "This is between me, and Jinny. I think she, and I understand each other don't we Jinny?" "Funny," Kate, said, "The I don't see any understanding going on here. The only thing I see is black mail." "Well, then you miss understood." "I miss understood nothing!" Kate nearly yelled, "It's black mail, and I don't think your son would be to happy to know that his mother is trying to blackmail his bride." "Oh really," she spat out, "You have no proof." Kate looked at the women, and smiled, "Your right I don't." Kate walked up to the women, and grabbed the check out of her hands, and smiled again, "But now I do." Kate raised and I brow and said, "Oh, and look here, it even has you name signed to it. Hmmmmm, Who do you think you son, is going to believe, Jinny, the women that he loves, Or the no good, conniving, manipulative stuck up bitch who he calls mom, Who on several different occasions tried to make Jinny look bad?! Something tells me he is gonna believe Jinny…Shall we go.. and see…?"Kate asked in a condescending tone. Kate started walking towards the door when she heard the women yell, "Stop. Fine", she glared at Jinny, and said "you win this time." Mrs. Blumenthal started walking for the door, but Kate blocked her way, and said, "Oh, No I think you going to leave Jinny alone period. Or I'll show Teddy the check I just happened to save." The women was surprised, she had never had someone stand up to her like this. She hated it more then anything, but said, "That's blackmail!" Kate, Said to her as if, she were a little girl, "Very good. You're smarter then you look. But isn't that better then you son knowing what has happened in here right now?" Teddy's mom couldn't believe this was happening in a rather upset voice she said, "Why you bitch!" She pushed passed Kate, and left the room. "That's Captain Bitch to you!." Kate called after her. "Thanks. "Jinny smirked. "Your welcome. Kate was looking at the pregnancy test, "Is this- -" She asked. Jinny cut her off, "No, it's not." She didn't want to get stuck saying anything she shouldn't so she grabbed the test, and left the room before Kate could say anything else to her, "Then who? "Kate thought out loud, as she followed Jinny out. ********************************************* "Hey, I was wondering where you went. "Louis handed Kate a glass of wine. "Thank you. "Kate noticed that he didn't sound happy, but she ignored it, She wasn't gonna let anything else go wrong with this day. "Hiya, Captain. "Teddy smiled. "Hello. "She returned the smile. "How are you?" "I'm great ." She replied. Mrs. Blumenthal walked by, and then exchanged glares. "So, uh...word is you tango." He smiled. "Is this true?" 'Yes..."She looked at him suspiciously. "Kewl, are ya as good as I've heard?" "Eh...well.." "I don't have time for modesty.. "He laughed. "Yeah, I'm, I guess. "She laughed. "Why?" "Because a tango contest has just been organized, and I'm going after that pop-o-gold....please?" "Nah, I don't think so, go dance with your wife..." "She's judging,...Oh come on...I'll split the pot with ya..."He gave her the puppy face. "Oh so that's the face Jinny's always talking about." "Yep sure is...and it hasn't failed me yet.. pleeeeeeease....so far there's two hundred in...come on...don't cha wanna make my brother-in-law look like a fool?" "Okay.. "Kate sighed." But it's the making your brother-in-law.. assuming you mean John Jr. not Casey. "She chuckled." look like a fool, that sold it...not the face." "Suuuure." Kate handed her wine back to Louis, and walked onto the dance floor with Teddy. just as Casey got on the mike, and announced the contest. "Figures. "Louis mumbled, as he finished off his glass and Kate's glass of wine, and went back to the bar for another. "Hasn't managed to say no all night...Mrs. Robinson wanna-be." **************************************************** 'You're goin in debt, Brother-in-law. "Teddy smirked, as He and Kate ripped across the dance floor.. John sr. & his date, and CD &Nate ,and Teddy's parents had already quite, and were now cheering Kate & Teddy on...well, except for Mrs. Blumethal who wasn't at all happy that her son was dancing Kate. Leaving John Jr. & Raina, Magda & Gabe, and of course Kate & Teddy. out of the three couples,. either Kate & Teddy or Magda & Gabe were most likely to win. "She's a hell of a dancer. "John Sr. commented to Louis. "Yeah, I know. "He replied, as he finished off another glass of wine. "Okay, okay. "Jinny stepped up to the microphone as the music stopped. "The winner of the tango contest is...Me and Casey. "She laughed. "No seriously though...basted solely on my personal bias opinion..." "Jinny play fair." Casey laughed. "Okay, fiiine "She rolled her eyes. "Clap if you think the winner should be John Jr. &Raina....okay, how's about Gabe & Magda....or.. My wonderful husband.. and everybody's favorite captain.?" "Suck up.!" John Jr. called out. "Okay, well the applause have it! Teddy you may rub it in my brother's face till it falls off." Casey clapped. "Ha! That's who I was gonna pick in the first place." Jinny cheered. "Pay up suckers! "Teddy let out an evil laugh as all the men handed him their share of the prize money. "Your half, my Dear. "He handed Kate her share of the prize. "This day just keeps getting better. "She laughed, folding the money and putting it in her purse. "How's about a victory lap?" He asked, as the music started back up. "sure, why not." Louis stood watching Kate and Teddy dance for the second time that night, and second time in a row. "Even hogging the groom from the bride. "He thought. "May, I cut in?" Jinny asked, with a laugh "He's yours after all. "Kate laughed. Teddy reached for his bride, but instead she took Kate's hand, "I'll lead. "She laughed. "Uh, well bump you too. "He laughed. "Don't worry I'll dance with you next. 'Jinny pinched his cheek. "Have fun ."He chuckled and walked over to hang with his best man, till it was his turn. "Jinny, you...are crazy. "Kate laughed, as the began to dance. "Yep....You've met my family, you know why." "Good, point." Then Jinny stopped joking around, "Listen.. I just...I wanted to say thanks for being here..." "What did I tell you about sayin that crap? "Kate smiled. "You know that I'm glad to do it." "And for...kinda standing in for my mom...you have no idea how much it means to me. "Jinny sighed. "Aww, Jinny..."Kate stopped dancing "you have no idea how much it means to me ,that it means so much to you. "Well, you have no idea how much it means to me, that it means so much to you that it means so much to me." "Well.. you have no idea how much it means to that it means so much to you that it means so much to me, that it means so much to you.. "Kate laughed. Jinny took a moment to process what Kate said, and make sure she understood it right..."Well, you have no idea how much it means to me that it means so much to you that it means me that- -" "Ok, I think we both get the point, Jin "Kate laughed. "Yeah. "Jinny laughed and hugged her captain. "Now that is a site I never...ever thought I would see." Magda said, watching Her partner and her captain, laughing, hugging, and dancing. "It's sooooo sweeeet!" "Yeah, and on top of it… Jinny hugged Cap...go figure. "CD laughed. She grabbed Teddy's arm, and pulled him over too her, "Tell me we are getting this on tape." She pointed to Jinny & Kate. "We're getting this on tape. "He laughed. "Seriously?" "Yes." "I want a copy. "Me too. "Magda ,and Raina added. 'Okay, I'll see what I can do." He laughed. "Okay, it's my turn. "Teddy laughed, as he walked up to Jinny and Kate as soon as the music stopped. 'Okay, okay.. you are possessive. "Jinny laughed. "Iny mini -"Teddy pointed back and forth between Jinny and Kate. "What are you doing?" "Trying to diced...do I wanna dance, with.. the dancer. 'He pointed to Kate, "or the toe crunchier?...You, that is" "UH, well..."Jinny pretended to be offended (hey that rhymed...oops lol)"You just dance with he dancer.. if that's the way you're gonna be...I'll go crunch on somebody else's toes." "I was just joking, Jin. "He laughed. "I know. "She smiled. "Well, you two have fun. "Kate laughed. "Sorry about your toes Teddy." "Eh, small sacrifice for the woman I love." "Oh that was so corny. "Jinny kissed him. "Well, I just realized I have pretty much danced with everybody but my boyfriend tonight, so..." 'You're just the bell of the ball. "Teddy twirled her around. 'Yeah ,well.. I like the title, but I don't think Louis is.. "She looked over and saw the not happy expression on his face. ************************************************** It was time, time for Jinny, and Teddy to leave. They had one last dance, and as Jinny as there, and thought about her wedding day it didn't go nearly as she had thought that it would. It was better, much better. She had always thought that at her wedding she would get drunk of her a$$, but she was a lot happier this way. And more in love with a guy then she ever thought possible. This was the man she would be spending the rest of her life with. She put her head on his shoulder, and whispered "I love you Teddy" He said "I love you too." The song was over, and so wedding day. A day they would never forget. The best day of their life. Jinny, and teddy said bye to every one, and when Jinny got to Kate, Both of them had tears in their eyes. But it was Kate who said, "C'mon, Jinny, lets not cry, it's supposed to be a happy occasion, not a sad one. And Jinny said. "I know, I just can't help it." They both laughed though their tears, Jinny kissed her cheek and Teddy moved her along and they got in the limo and everyone waved good bye, As the car went to drive away "Good luck Jin..." Kate thought with a smile. "Okay, you've had more then enough, Louis." Kate took the wineglass from him, and sat it on the table. "Come on, I think we'd better go. "She tried to help him stand up, but he wouldn't budge. "I'm fine ,Kate." He snapped, and picked up the glass again. 'no you're not, now come on. "She took the glass away from him again, and handed it to Raina who handed it to a waiter she was chatting with. " Damn it Louis, help me out here. "She said, once again trying to help him stand. He stood up, but he still wasn't a big help, He was pretty heavy, and she was having a hard time supporting him. 'Do ya think you can stand by yourself?" "Yes, I can. "He slurred. "Are ya leavin, Captain? "John Sr. asked. " Yeah...somebody partied a little too hearty. "She pointed to Louis "Oh.. "John Sr. chuckled. 'Well, thanks for comin, It was nice seein ya." He helped her into her coat. "Thanks, you too. "She smiled. "It was my pleasure." "Aw, come here. "He laughed, and they shared a hug. "G'night." "Good night. "She replied, and acted as Louis's human crutch ,as they left. "Wahoo, Man, you and...what's-his-name sure are lovey dovey. "Louis slurred. Kate rolled her eyes, and chose to ignore him. "Needs some help Captain? 'Casey asked. "No think you, I got him." Casey being, the ever helpful gentleman he is, Kate never could figure out how he could possible be fully related to John Exstead Jr., decided to follow her out to the car, to make sure anyway. **************************************************** Louis walks up to the driver's side, and Kate asks 'What do you think your doing?" " The tango.. with Mr. Blumenthal. What's it look like I'm doing?" He replied sarcastically. "It looks like you are coming back over here, and getting in the passenger seat." "Oh, I'm coming over there, but only to get the keys. "HE said, wobbling around the car. "No." Kate stated. "Kate, give me the damn keys! "He yelled in her face. "No. You are way too drunk. "She replied calmly. "I'm not drunk! Give me the keys!!" "No!" Kate started to walk around to the driver's side, but Louis grabbed her, and pinned her to the car. "Ow, let go! "Kate tried to free herself from his grasp. 'Give me the damn key!" "Louis, please, you're hurting me. "She sighed. "Hey, what the hell do you think you're doing?!" Casey pulled him off of her. "You just stay outta this! "Louis yelled, and started for Kate again. "Hell no! "Casey got in front of Kate so Louis couldn't get to her. "This is none of your business!" Louis tried to go around him. "Oh yes it is!" Casey moved so he could get around him. "I be damned I'm gonna let you treat her like that!" "Here, Louis. "Kate stepped out from behind her bodyguard. 'Here take the damn keys. "She sighed, and handed them to him. "Go ahead, and wreck it, I don't care." Then she turned to Casey, "Would… do you mind giving me a ride home?" "Not a bit, come on." "No! You're coming with me! "Louis grabbed her arm, and pulled her over to him, almost causing her to trip. Kate pulled her arm away from him, and Casey pinned him to the car. "If you ever lay another hand on her, and I find out about it...you will regret it." Kate was almost shocked, she'd never seen Casey like this, he was really pissed at Louis, and He looked like he was ready and willing to beat the snot out of him. "Get outta here. "Casey let Louis go. "Come on, Casey. "Kate picked up his hand and gave it a tug. "I'll see you at home. "Louis stated. "Maybe, maybe not. "Kate replied. "What's that supposed to mean?!" Kate ignored him, and got in the passenger side of Casey's car. **************************************************** Through most of the car ride there was silence, except when Kate told him where to turn to get to her house. Kate was starring out the window,. preparing herself for a question or two. And she really didn't want Casey to see her crying. Casey had a few questions he wanted to ask her, but he wasn't sure if he should. And He did know that she was crying, he saw her reflection in the window. "Hey, uh Captain..."Casey hesitated. "What?" "Has uh...has he done this before?" Kate sighed. There it was, the question she knew was coming, "He...hit me once...but it was a long time ago" 'Why the hell are you still with him??" Casey asked without thinking. "Because, it was once,...like I said a longtime ago, he apologized, and said he'd never do it again...up until now, it looked like he was gonna make good on that promise." "Y'know you can always stay at my place tonight ."Casey offered, as he pulled into her driveway. "Thanks anyway Casey. "She smiled. "But I'll be fine." "Captain - -" "Really, He's probably already passed out on the couch." "And if he's not?" "Casey, I'll be fine. "She kissed his cheek. " Thanks for the ride." "Captain, If he tries anything, call me." "Okay, thanks good night. "They hugged and she got out of the car. Casey hesitated, but he pulled out, and drove away. Kate went to open the door, just as it flew open. ********************************************* "So...that's why he was so quick to come to your rescue tonight." ,he through his beer across the room, shattering it against the wall. Kate starred at the beer dripping down the wall, and started to wish she'd gone with Casey. 'What are you talking about? "She asked as calmly as she could. "I saw your mini-love fest in the car! "He shouted. "Love fest?? "Kate was nervous but you certainly couldn't tell it. "I kissed his cheek.. and we hugged, what love fest?!" Louis glared at her, then went into the kitchen with out saying a word. Kate saw her chance, and she was gonna take it. She started scanning the room for the car keys. "If you're looking for these, they're right here." Louis waved the keys in the air, then shoved them back in his pocket, and chugged his new beer. "Can, I have them please? "She figured it was worth a shot. "Say: May I." "May I.. have them please? "She rolled her eyes. "Don't roll your eyes at me. "He grabbed a hold of her face. "Say pretty please." "Pretty please. "She knocked his hand away. Her nervousness was giving way to frustration.. and if she didn't watch herself, things could possibly get a lot worse. "With a cherry on top." "Screw it! "She yelled and picked up the phone. "Who are you calling?" "Somebody. "She looked through her caller-id hoping the number was on there. "Who?! "He shouted. "Yes! "She whispered, as she pushed the call button on the phone. "Somebody to come get me, I'm not staying here, as long as you are like this!" "Like hell, you're not!" He grabbed the phone from her, and through across the room.. busting it to pieces. " Louis, why are you doing this?!" She asked, walking into the bedroom. "Doing what!? I'm not doing anything!? You are the one that was dancing and flirting with every man at that wedding.. well everyone but me!" He followed her. "Don't walk away from me when I'm talking to you! "He grabbed her arm, and pulled her to him. She pulled her arm free. "I would have danced with you gladly but by the time I was done 'flirting' "She made quotes with her fingers," with everyone, you were too damn drunk to know Big bird from Cher!!" "You bitch! "Louis hit her, and she hit him back just as hard. Then Louis grabbed her by the shoulders, and shoved her as hard as he could. As she fell her back hit the corner of the dresser. She sat in the floor, blood dripping down her back, she didn't scream, She certainly wanted to but, she couldn't get it to come out. Soooo,wutcha think??Did ya fall asleep? shud we go on???hmmmm???lol |
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OMG!!!!!!!! You must continue this ASAP!!! If there isn't more by the time I get home from church tomorrow, I will not be happy. lol...j/k. But please post more soon. I was just getting hooked!
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Wow, I just started reading this, and I'm hooked!!!! More SOON!!!!!!
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Heeeeeeeere's more...finally,lol Hope ppl r still readin......
Jinny looked at Teddy on their wedding night, she couldn't believe this was happening. "C'mon Teddy, get it in the whole." "I'm, trying Jinny." He said getting frustrated "Well, apparently not hard enough," she said, "Push harder." Teddy said, "I'm trying. But it just doesn't fit." Jinny rolled her eyes, "It did just the other day." Teddy even more frustrated, "Something tells me this isn't something we should be worry about on our wedding night, wither or not my wedding band fits." Jinny laughed, "From the sounds of the honey room sweat next to us, it sounds like we are 'DOING it" just fine." Teddy jokingly glares at her, and says, "except for were not 'doing it' at all." "Whose fault is that?" Jinny asked "Yours, I am not sure how, but it was your fault that my wedding band doesn't fit." He said, "Maybe it's all your cooking." Jinny laughed again, "I don't do any cooking." Teddy said, "Exactly." "Hey teddy?" Jinny asked "What? He asked "Shut up, and Kiss me!" "I have never been one to refuse you," He said as he started kissing her. She had on a white night gown for her weeding night. They lay back on the bed with teddy on top still kissing her. She grabbed at the silk boxers that he had on, and pulled them off. He grabbed out her nightgown, it took him a couple of tries, but he finely got it. They put their arms around each other, and started moving with each other as if there was music that they were moving to that neither one of them could hear, but it was still perfect. *~**~~* Louis just stared at her like a big drunken idiot. After a couple of minutes Kate slowly tried to get up. But her back was hurting so badly, she could barely move without wanting to faint. When Louis saw the blood that was slowly turning her green shirt red, realization began to creep into his dense drunken little brain. "Oh ****. "He mumbled, reaching down to help her up. "Oh **** is right! "She only let him help her because, she knew there was no way she could get up by herself. She very gently put her hand on her back, trying to see if it was as bad as it felt was. Judging by her blood-covered hand...it was worse. "Give me the damn keys! "She demanded. Guilt hadn't really set in for Louis yet, but he knew what he had just done was not a good move. He didn't say nor do anything, he just starred at her. "Give me the damn keys! "She yelled. "No..."He said coldly. "You'll just go to Lover boy.... You are not going anywhere." "He is NOT my 'lover boy' as you put it!... He's gay damn it!" She yelled. "I wish he wasn't though, He's probably the only good guy I've met in a long time." "What's that supposed to mean?!" Louis yelled, as he through Kate onto the bed, causing a horrible sharp pain to rip through her back. "Get off of me!!" She screamed. She prepared herself for a very hard punch, and it didn't come. "Louis, No, please! Louis, Please!" Tears streamed down her face when she realized what he was going to do. She tried to push him off of her, and that's when she got the punch she'd been expecting. "Louis, please don't! Please!" She pleaded as she tried to stop him from ripping open her shirt. She took yet another punch, which caused her more pain in her back, and made it so she couldn't move. Louis then ripped her shirt open, and then reached down to pull up her skirt. Kate said a quick prayer for someone to help her or give her the strength to get Louis off of her. Casey stood outside the house trying to figure out what he should do. He thought he heard someone scream and he decided he was going in. Invited or not. He Yelled, "SFPD open up!" No one did. His first thought was to break down the door, because he wanted to break something so bad. He was soooo angry. Before, ramming the door, he decided to try the knob first. It opened without a problem. And he was slightly disappointed. He walked in, and could hear someone crying upstairs. "Captain!?" He called out as he walked up there. "Casey?" She slowly fumbled out of the bedroom, leaning on everything she could for support. The fight with Louis had done even more damage to her back. She didn't care why he was there or how he got in, She was just glad to see him. "Oh my god, are you okay?!" He rushed over to his bruised, bleeding half-naked captain. She just clung on to him, like she was stuck in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, and he was her life raft. He looked into the bedroom, and saw Louis laying in the floor unconscious. "Hey, you're okay...relax now, you're okay." He took his coat off, and put it on her. She looked up at him. She felt so ashamed that she would let something like this even happen to her, and nodded her head, and said weakly, "Can you take me to the hospital?" "Yeah." He replied. He gently picked her up, so as not to hurt her back. As he carried her through the living room, He saw the pieces of phone lying on the floor beside pieces of beer bottle, and realized that was the bang he heard right before he heard the dial tone. Sooooooooooo,wutcha think???Hmmmmm??? Feel free 2 reply,we don't mind one lil bit.
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this is EXCELLENT!!!
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