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Ewan's My Man · 02-13-2003, 10:18 PM

MOOOOOOOOOORE I LUV THIS FIC!!!

PhoenixMcKeonism · 02-14-2003, 04:23 AM

heres more:

Jinny woke up in tears and saw that nobody layed beside her. It was 4am and she walked outside and looked at a group of homeless people pushing a shopping cart full of clothes and blankets. She saw this look on their faces as a craving for money but Jinny walked back inside the apartment complex.

She took out her picture of her mother and held onto it till the sun started rising again franothr workday at he division.

AT THE DIVISION
Jinny walked towards the metal detector and went through it. She saw a young man named Jack walking towards her with a big smile.

JACK: Hey, I want to see you again
He gave her a hug
JINNY: It was a one night thing, it's not gonna happen

JACK: Why can't you let it blossom?

JINNY: I told you why and I need to get to work now.

Jinny speeds towards the elevator and leaves Jack Behind.

AT THE DIVISION

Kate talks to CD and Nate about a possible homicide shooting on a prostitute. Jinny sits at her desk looking at a picture of her father. Across her mind, an image ofa gun being shot appears in her head. She gets up real fast and goes in the bathroom. Magda gets up from her seat and follows her in.

JINNY: I need a break

MAGDA: Then why dont you ask cap for one?

JINNY: Because at times of stress, I need to be working

MAGDA: Ok

JINNY: Mag, do you mind?

MAGDA: ok Jin, but Im just getting worried about you. I dont want you to slip up or anything.

JINNY: Mag, ive been sober seems like forever, dont even worry about a thing. There aint nothing thats gonna get me going back to booze.

Magda leaves the bathroom and Jinny looks at herself with shame through a mirror full of water spots.

PhoenixMcKeonism · 02-14-2003, 04:45 AM

heres more: Titled: The Triangle

Jinny goes out for lunch and sees Jack at the same sandwich place. She walks right in and says hi

JINNY: I'm sorry about this morning

JACK: Jinny I thought it was over between you and him

JINNY: He was on a business trip...it was a mistake

JACK: Jinny...

JINNY: Cant we just be friends?

JACK: I want more than that..... I want to see you tonight
Jinny looks out the window and sees a triangle shaped statue across the street...

JINNY: We'll see... lets have lunch at least...

An hour passes by and Jinny is driving with Madga on a case concerning a young girl murdered in her own bedroom.

MAGDA: its a triangle case

JINNY: What are you talking about?

MAGDA: Well obviously she was seeing two guys at once and the one that got hurt went after her.

JINNY: We dont even know enough information yet to assume that.

MAGDA: Trust me on this one, I can spot situation like this with my eyes closed.

JINNY: Ok whatever

MAGDA: Whats wrong now?

JINNY: Nothing just thinking

MAGDA: About?....

JINNY: Its me and Teddy.... we have a few things to work out

MAGDA: Oh, well just for the record I think you guys need to get away for awhile and go somewhere fun

JINNY: Like where?

MAGDA: I dont know, you guys should at least go out to lunch togeher... I know this great sandwich sho---

JINNY: Teddy is very busy and our lunch hours are never together only once in a while.

MAGDA: OK ok just making a suggestion

JINNY: yeah uh huh, and what about you and the wonderful talented Gabe.

MAGDA: We're doing fine... Ben is doing well too

JINNY: Thats good to hear

Jinny and magda drive off down the street quiet once again.

I'll give you guys more tomorrow

Jo/Blair_fan · 02-14-2003, 08:27 AM

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

extead · 02-14-2003, 10:27 PM

more pleez

JDS84 · 02-15-2003, 08:22 PM

AWESOME!!!! POST MORE!!!!!!

Ewan's My Man · 03-01-2003, 02:30 PM

It's great!! Where's more?!?! I've been waaaaaaaaaaaaaiting!!! Don't forget...I'm one of the stalker-posters on these boards.

InspectorExstead · 03-02-2003, 01:22 AM

omg come on! this is the first fan ficition i've read in like a read. and you stop there!??!?!?!? post!!!!!! NOOWWW! I NEED MORE!!!! POST POST POST! I looove this fic.

POST MORE!

PhoenixMcKeonism · 03-04-2003, 08:34 PM

you have to wait until after friday..... this week i have three projects due on friday

InspectorExstead · 03-04-2003, 11:35 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by PhoenixMcKeonism
you have to wait until after friday..... this week i have three projects due on friday

i guess i can wait till friday..........good luck on your projects!

PhoenixMcKeonism · 03-04-2003, 11:47 PM

thanks

Babes_Cat · 03-11-2003, 03:42 PM

.... yes?

InspectorExstead · 03-11-2003, 11:36 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Babes_Cat
.... yes?

i'm waiting too!

BlairW_1 · 05-22-2003, 10:27 PM

Umm, it's past Friday... past several Fridays, as a matter of fact... More??? plz??? (btw, it's awesome!)

JDS84 · 05-27-2003, 07:35 PM

Are you not going to post more or not? You have alot of people who are wanting you to post more.

02-13-2003, 10:18 PM	#16
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	MOOOOOOOOOORE I LUV THIS FIC!!!
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02-14-2003, 04:23 AM	#17
PhoenixMcKeonism Psychotic McKeon Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 20, 2001 Location: Los Angeles Ca Posts: 306	heres more: Jinny woke up in tears and saw that nobody layed beside her. It was 4am and she walked outside and looked at a group of homeless people pushing a shopping cart full of clothes and blankets. She saw this look on their faces as a craving for money but Jinny walked back inside the apartment complex. She took out her picture of her mother and held onto it till the sun started rising again franothr workday at he division. AT THE DIVISION Jinny walked towards the metal detector and went through it. She saw a young man named Jack walking towards her with a big smile. JACK: Hey, I want to see you again He gave her a hug JINNY: It was a one night thing, it's not gonna happen JACK: Why can't you let it blossom? JINNY: I told you why and I need to get to work now. Jinny speeds towards the elevator and leaves Jack Behind. AT THE DIVISION Kate talks to CD and Nate about a possible homicide shooting on a prostitute. Jinny sits at her desk looking at a picture of her father. Across her mind, an image ofa gun being shot appears in her head. She gets up real fast and goes in the bathroom. Magda gets up from her seat and follows her in. JINNY: I need a break MAGDA: Then why dont you ask cap for one? JINNY: Because at times of stress, I need to be working MAGDA: Ok JINNY: Mag, do you mind? MAGDA: ok Jin, but Im just getting worried about you. I dont want you to slip up or anything. JINNY: Mag, ive been sober seems like forever, dont even worry about a thing. There aint nothing thats gonna get me going back to booze. Magda leaves the bathroom and Jinny looks at herself with shame through a mirror full of water spots.
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02-14-2003, 04:45 AM	#18
PhoenixMcKeonism Psychotic McKeon Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 20, 2001 Location: Los Angeles Ca Posts: 306	continuation heres more: Titled: The Triangle Jinny goes out for lunch and sees Jack at the same sandwich place. She walks right in and says hi JINNY: I'm sorry about this morning JACK: Jinny I thought it was over between you and him JINNY: He was on a business trip...it was a mistake JACK: Jinny... JINNY: Cant we just be friends? JACK: I want more than that..... I want to see you tonight Jinny looks out the window and sees a triangle shaped statue across the street... JINNY: We'll see... lets have lunch at least... An hour passes by and Jinny is driving with Madga on a case concerning a young girl murdered in her own bedroom. MAGDA: its a triangle case JINNY: What are you talking about? MAGDA: Well obviously she was seeing two guys at once and the one that got hurt went after her. JINNY: We dont even know enough information yet to assume that. MAGDA: Trust me on this one, I can spot situation like this with my eyes closed. JINNY: Ok whatever MAGDA: Whats wrong now? JINNY: Nothing just thinking MAGDA: About?.... JINNY: Its me and Teddy.... we have a few things to work out MAGDA: Oh, well just for the record I think you guys need to get away for awhile and go somewhere fun JINNY: Like where? MAGDA: I dont know, you guys should at least go out to lunch togeher... I know this great sandwich sho--- JINNY: Teddy is very busy and our lunch hours are never together only once in a while. MAGDA: OK ok just making a suggestion JINNY: yeah uh huh, and what about you and the wonderful talented Gabe. MAGDA: We're doing fine... Ben is doing well too JINNY: Thats good to hear Jinny and magda drive off down the street quiet once again. I'll give you guys more tomorrow

02-14-2003, 08:27 AM	#19
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02-15-2003, 08:22 PM	#21
JDS84 Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Dec 11, 2001 Location: My Old Kentucky Home Posts: 3,377	AWESOME!!!! POST MORE!!!!!!
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02-14-2003, 10:27 PM	#20
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03-01-2003, 02:30 PM	#22
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	It's great!! Where's more?!?! I've been waaaaaaaaaaaaaiting!!! Don't forget...I'm one of the stalker-posters on these boards.

03-02-2003, 01:22 AM	#23
InspectorExstead Member Forum Fanatic Join Date: Oct 29, 2001 Location: The Golden State Posts: 12,902	omg come on! this is the first fan ficition i've read in like a read. and you stop there!??!?!?!? post!!!!!! NOOWWW! I NEED MORE!!!! POST POST POST! I looove this fic. POST MORE!
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03-04-2003, 08:34 PM	#24
PhoenixMcKeonism Psychotic McKeon Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 20, 2001 Location: Los Angeles Ca Posts: 306	you have to wait until after friday..... this week i have three projects due on friday

03-04-2003, 11:47 PM	#26
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03-11-2003, 03:42 PM	#27
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05-22-2003, 10:27 PM	#29
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	Umm, it's past Friday... past several Fridays, as a matter of fact... More??? plz??? (btw, it's awesome!)
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05-27-2003, 07:35 PM	#30
JDS84 Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Dec 11, 2001 Location: My Old Kentucky Home Posts: 3,377	Are you not going to post more or not? You have alot of people who are wanting you to post more.