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Old 05-12-2002, 12:22 PM   #16
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AWESOME!!! POST MORE SOON!!!
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Old 05-12-2002, 06:06 PM   #17
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You know I want and when I want it so get to it Babes! LOL!
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Old 05-12-2002, 06:26 PM   #18
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Cool geeze i love the audience..lol

heres some more..

Jinny stormed out of the division and down the elevator...
all the while her thoughts were trailing back to all the people that she had lost..first my mom, then my friends, now teddy..god why am i such an idiot..she thought to herself.. she walked swiftly out the courthouse door and began heading across the street to anchorside. she walked through the door and sat down at the bar..

Sean: Jinny! hey girl long time no see. usually you dont say hi..you sit down at the table..look jin magda told me about rehab and im so proud of..

Jin: gimme a silver pratrone

Sean stared blankly at her.
Sean: i cant do that kid

Jin: Sean its either here where you can watch me or somewhere else where i get drunk. Your pick.

Sean sighed and began mixing the vodka, white rum and other ingridients together and gave it to jinny.
Jinny remembered leaving rehab

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

FLASHBACK: leaving rehab.

Jinnys roomate Dawn: Now remember Jinny. If you feel pressured to drink at anytime just think of me. i should be a primse example. Ive been here what 5 times?Its no fun coming back and if you drink, you will be back here.. remember that..

End Flashback
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Jinny sighed and quickly picked up the drink and gulped it.
Jinny: oh my god.. *SIGH* oh man ive missed this. Sean- gimme a miller lite. Ill nurse that for a while..
Sean sighed and handed her the requested drink.Jinny grabbed the bottle and began to "slowly drink it." After about 2 minutes it was gone and another was in front of her.
Soon Jinny had inhaled 3 millers and 2 silver pratrones..

sean: Jinny stop.. i have to cut you off. im sorry. I shouldnt have given you one...

Jinny: thanx for nothing sean.
She slirred her speech as she stood up and almost fell over. She had forgotten the affects of alcohol and since she hadnt drank in 149 days she didnt realize it would hit her more. She stumbled her way out the door and down the two stairs.. She could barely see anything her vision was so blurred and she stepped off the curb. She fell to her knees and rolled over a bit right before she heard the loud honk and screeching of a moving car, heading right towards her...

more?
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Jo- How could you do that to me? How could you use me to get yourself out of a jam?

Eddie- honey i did not use you!

Jo- Yes you did! you wanted me to love you no matter who it hurt.

Eddie- Whats so terrible about wanting you to love me? I never stopped loving you Jo.

Jo- Eddie, love isnt just hugs and kisses. its honesty, and trust-- and why did you have to take all of that away!
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"this is so hard to understand, but when you have so little self respect, youre just afraid all the time. I was afraid that one day you were gonna wake up and see the real me. The real...screwed up me and you would just go... So i uh.. i beat you to the punch."
(AHH THAT SOUNDS SO FAMILIAR!)
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Old 05-12-2002, 06:29 PM   #19
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WHOAH GIRL! YOU DID NOT JUST STOP THERE! MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!















Do I gotta beg some more? Hehe!
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Old 05-13-2002, 03:49 PM   #21
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C'MON BABES! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! I'M DYIN' HERE!
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Old 05-13-2002, 04:25 PM   #22
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Default suddlenly!!!

MORE!! ok gosh caitlin..chill


The car quickly swirved to the right to avoidhitting jinny but came to a screaming stop just past her. The driver stepped out of the car and looked at her. He recognized her very well. She was the girl who slept with him, made him really like her, than turned around and lied to his face by saying she was engaged.

Bob: Bitch! ****ing lunatic. Ive been waiting so long to be able to tell you how i feel about you. cop or no cop.. witness or no witness.
He shouted as he reached under his jacket and pulled out a small M15. He shot two shots off then jumped in his car and sped off. ... Sean having seen the whole thing rushed to her side.

Sean: Jesus. Jinny. Hold on baby. Hold on Jinny. God someone clal 911 now! hurry up.

At that moment, Teddy was pulling up in front of the division and saw sean knelt down beside a body and decided to see if he could help. Realizing it was Jinny, he screamed and ran in front of the other cars to be at her side.

Teddy: Jesus what happened!!!

Sean: she came into the bar, had to much to drink. Fell off the curb and somebody almost hit her. Then he hollered something and shot her.. go call 911!

Teddy: You go.. i cant leave her!

Man: I called. theyll be right here.

Sean and Teddy: Thanks.

Jinnys breathing began to skip as she looked at teddy..

Jinny: I saw ...the note.. you wrote me...

Teddy: i know i know.. god jinny.. dont talk..just be still.

Jinny: Im so sorry.. we could have..given it another chance.. But i had to be stupid.. Im sorry theodore.. I have always loved you... you can..see it in my eyes..

and with that teddys eyes filled with tears as he lifted her hand and kissed it gently.

Teddy: hang on jinny. my god hang on...

and with that Jinny took her last few faint breaths...

More??
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Old 05-13-2002, 04:35 PM   #23
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*Caitlin Reply Coming Up!*

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MORE!! ok gosh caitlin..chill

I chilled, I was. I was cool. Then I come along and read this....... oh wow, no longer cool anymore!

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and with that Jinny took her last few faint breaths...
OMG!
OMG!
OMG!
OMG!

ARE YOU F*CKING KIDDING ME AGAIN?!?!?!?!

HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO HER? TO TEDDY? TO ME? TO EVERYONE ELSE READING?

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!

Don't you dare tell me to calm down or chill here!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!

ARE YOU F*CKING KIDDING ME AGAIN?!?!?!?!

HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO HER? TO TEDDY? TO ME? TO EVERYONE ELSE READING?

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!

ARE YOU F*CKING KIDDING ME AGAIN?!?!?!?!

HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO HER? TO TEDDY? TO ME? TO EVERYONE ELSE READING?

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!

ARE YOU F*CKING KIDDING ME AGAIN?!?!?!?!

HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO HER? TO TEDDY? TO ME? TO EVERYONE ELSE READING?

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!

ARE YOU F*CKING KIDDING ME AGAIN?!?!?!?!

HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO HER? TO TEDDY? TO ME? TO EVERYONE ELSE READING?

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!

NO!
NO!
NO!
NO!

BABES! MORE! OMG MORE!

I'm not gonna stop bugging you now! YOU ASKED FOR IT!

HERE I COME WITH MY ARMY! MOOOOOOOOOOORE! OMG MOOOOOOORE! OMG MOOOOOOOOORE! MOOOOOOOOORE!
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Old 05-13-2002, 04:39 PM   #24
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Jo, you want another "Caitlin Reply?"

You know how to get it?

You do?

Ok, good!

THEN DO IT!

You know what I'm talking about!
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Sad the end

Jinny was immediatly rushed to the hospital and operated on. He pulse was faint so they had to get the shells out of her body and try to help her. The shots had hit her in her left arm and in the side of her chest, where we all know is very hard to recover from. The doctors, surgeons and nurses all tried for hours to recover jinny whos pulse was now dropping rapidly.. sadly, everything they were doing was not enough. They announced Jinny's Time of Death at 12:04 pm.

teddy felt guilty and sean felt worse. He had given her an excuse to die..to end her pain. he felt at fault because he had given her the last drink that killed her. Teddy on the other hand had written the note that had made her drink. Soon Madga, CD, and Kate showed up. The three of them all had there own reasons for blaming themselves..Kate thought that since she let jinny walk out upset she was at fault. Madga thought that it all related back to the intervention so she was at fault. CD thought that it was her fault because she didnt do anything for jinny except rag on her about her drinking. But all barried deep inside them somewhere, they knew that the only person to blame was Jinny...They also knew that at her funeral, they were all gonna cry and show their blame and true feelings. All except for Teddy, who vowed that he wouldnt go and he didnt..

The funeral..

Priest: ashes to ashes..dust to dust.. Go Virgina Exstead. Rest in Peace for all eternity.. go ...go ...go..
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Wow, ok, no "Caitlin Reply"


JO! I HATE YOU! AH! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?!?!?!!?
















You gave me false hope babes!

Excuse me while I go and cry!
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Jinny: NO!!!!!!
She woke up breathing hard and sweating heavily..She looked over to see Teddy wide awake at her side.
Teddy: whats wrong.
Jinny realizing that she was fine, leaned over and kissed him gently..
Jinny: teddy we have to do this..

Teddy: do what.

Jinny: this teddy..be together. I cant lose you again, not to drinking, not to someone else, not to anything. You have to promise me that we are gonna be together now. No more losing. Please teddy promise me..

Teddy: i thought you didnt know what you wanted.

Jinny: lets just say i had a wake up dream..and im so glad, because it really hit home. I know where my priorites are now and i dont ever , EVER want to lose you. You mean so much to me and i just..

Teddy: jinny? In your words.. Shut up

he said as he quickly pulled her to him and began to kiss her softly. She reached down and moved the sheets that were serparating their naked bodies, and moved her body down to kiss his chest. he gently kissed the top of her head as she continued her journey down his muscular body. Somewhere Jinny knew that this was the only the begining of a beautiful realionship between her and her teddy bear. She knew that she wanted this more than anything..Just to wake up in his arms and to feel comfortable with the person who was at her side, No more drinking, no more slutting.. no more being alone..she had finally found the one person that she had always dreamed about holding for an eternity...or had she???



come on caitlin you didnt really think id kill her did ya? geeze wheres the love...More??
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*innocent smile* No, really, I don't overreact. I NEVER do that!

















Geez, Jo, you trying to make me look like an idiot?

















MORE PLEASE! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOU BABES!
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Teddy continued to kiss Jinny softly but all at once his work came back to him. He shouldnt be doing this. She had hurt him once and now he should be concentrating on his work. BUT shes such a hot kisser: he thought to himself.
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On the other note, jinny was busy thinking erotic thoughts..
Jinny (to herself): Oh what the hell. i havent had sex in almost 3 weeks. Ive been good. Its been hard but im been good. Speaking of hard....
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The two begin to fondle eachothers clothes. Teddy's masculine chest is an instant pair of lips to jinny as she begins to kiss him up and down his body. In return Teddy does the same (haha this is the part of the divisioin you cant see lol)
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They begin to passionatley make love, the whole time teddy concentrating on how bad he wanted Jinny to be his again, and Jinny concentrating on how could it felt to be with someone again.
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She reached down and moved the sheets that were serparating their naked bodies, and moved her body down to kiss his chest. he gently kissed the top of her head as she continued her journey down his muscular body.
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