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Certifiably Insane
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Let 'em have it, Mag! More ASAP please, Warnsey
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I'll Cover You
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SISTAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! I LOVE!! POST MORE SOON!!!
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Don't you wanna be footloose and free? Well, you could be the life of the party If you were more- Like me! All you have to do is jump over the moon Moo with me! |
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defying gravity
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Join Date: Jan 13, 2001
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here ya go,,,
**CD and Nate had gone to the bank and watched the videotape of the exact time the murder took place. Turned out that Tony Jackson was telling the truth. The video from the bank ended up to have an outside view as well. This tape proved Mark Bolton guilty for the murder of Julie Gordon. They were now at Mark’s house, planning to arrest him.** CD knocked on the door and a woman answered it. “Can I help you?” she asked. CD and Nate flashed their badges. “Mrs. Bolton, I’m Inspector DeLorenzo and this is Inspector Basso, SFPD.” “Well, what do you want with me?” the woman asked, confused. “We need to know where your husband is.” Nate answered. “He’s out food shopping, why?” “Because he committed the murder of Julie Gordon on Wednesday night and we need to find him.” “My husband?” she laughed, “ No, I think you have the wrong man…my husband would never kill anyone!” the woman said. “We have a tape to prove it so obviously he would…” CD answered back rudely. “Now, what supermarket is he at?” Mrs. Bolton just shook her head and mumbled something like “you people are crazy”, and shut the door in CD and Nate’s faces. “Let’s just check the supermarket down the block or something…” Nate said. CD nodded and they both went back to the car. **It took them both about 4 minutes to get to the closest supermarket. They walked in and looked around. They had backup waiting outside…** “You check over there, I’ll get this side.” CD nodded in approval and started walking over to the other side of the supermarket. She was looking through each aisle when she saw a man who looked like Mark Bolton. She quickly checked the small picture of him she had brought with her to double check to see if it was actually him. Once she was sure, she approached him. “SFPD Freeze!!!” she yelled as she grabbed him from the back. “Hey!” he yelled back as he tried to get away from her grasp. Nate had heard CD yell, so he called for backup as he rushed over to where she was restraining Mark. Once Mark saw Nate coming and realized that there was no other way out, he used all his strength and jammed his elbow straight into her stomach. CD’s eyes widened as she hunched over, holding her stomach and fell to the ground. Nate chased after the man, and with the help of the other back up officers, was able to get the man in cuffs. Than, Nate immediately raced back to CD to find her practically in tears on the tile floor. He called 911 right away…. ahh btw-cd's divorce lawyer person she was datin was the one who got her pregnant in the first place...but they broke up...CD didnt care tho...she wanted the baby anyway and was planning to be a single mom. |
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Sweet scaredy cat
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oooohoooh moore
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Izzaboo (izzy) needs prayers, she (well family and friends) have been told she has a terminal brain tumor. She has had surgery, but they can't get it all w/out destroying her brain. With radiation and chemo, they know they can't get it all. Please keep this fifteen year old girl who has 2 years of her life left at the most in your prayers as she makes a fight to survive. She had leukemia as a baby, so we all know she can do it! "WE LOVE IZZABOO!!!!!"--Froggy @ job's meeting "Si...but can we take her an evil flying (insert animal of choice but mainly monkey, iguana or pig)!"--Me... |
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I'll Cover You
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!! POST MORE SOON SISTAH!!!!!!!
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oh, you pretty things
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Join Date: Jan 21, 2002
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MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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defying gravity
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ive been really busy lately...sry for the delay and sorry it aint much and isnt all that xciting but...
**Jinny and Magda went over to Brittany’s house to talk to her again** “How ya feeling?” Jinny asked. Brittany shrugged. “Okay, I guess…” she paused “so did you arrest him yet?” she asked eagerly “Well, we have him in custody, but that’s not exactly what we’re here to talk about.” Mag said. “Well, than what do you want?” “Joe claimed that you were ‘all over him’ that night of the rape…is this true?” Jinny asked. “Of-course not! How could you even think that?! You actually think I would ‘be all over’ my mom’s boyfriend?!” she slouched back. “please tell me your kidding…” **Meanwhile, Nate is sitting in the waiting room of the hospital waiting for news on CD. He decided that he wouldn’t call anyone to explain what had happened until he knew for sure what was going on…” “DeLorenzo?” a doctor asked as he walked into the waiting room. Nate nodded and walked over to the doctor. “She okay?" The doctor looked at Nate, “are you the father?” Nate shook his head “No, I’m just a friend.” "Oh, well I'd like to give the father the news first if you don't mind..." "Well that's gonna be kinda hard considering there is no father as of now so why don't you just stop stalling and tell me what's going on with my partner." he said rudely. The doctor took a breath, "She lost the baby..." |
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oh, you pretty things
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Thats sooo sad Kerri....she lost the baby....thats sooo sad. -sigh- anyway...its really good. you should post more...
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I'll Cover You
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AWWWWWWW!! POOR CD!!! POOR BABY!!! POST MORE SISTAH!!
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Sweet scaredy cat
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more okay? good...thanks |
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defying gravity
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thanks for the replies...herea lil more..its kinda depressing but......yea
**Nate didn’t want to bother any of the others yet…besides, he wanted to see CD by himself first.** “Can you show me where room 387 is?” Nate asked a Nurse in the hallway. The Nurse pointed to the right, “go straight down that hallway, make a left, it’ll be the first door on your right.” “Thanks…” said Nate as he headed towards CD’s room. He had finally reached the roomed marked ‘387’. Slowly, he opened the door. “Hey,” he said as he walked over to the bed and sat down on the edge. “Hi…” answered CD. They both sat there silently for about 20 seconds. “I’m assuming the doctor already told you…” Nate nodded and looked down “Yea…” he paused “you okay?” CD didn’t reply at first, but then she took a deep breath and began to speak softly and slowly. “you know, at first I didn’t even want to have this baby…I mean I figured all it would do was interfere with my job, prevent me from having a life.” she paused “But then I started thinking about it and..” her voice started to get a little bit shaky. “I realized… I was gonna have a baby.” a tear rolled down her cheek “I’d get to see it take its first steps, go to the first day of kindergarten…and I figured out that this is what my life has been missing all along…“ she shook her head “not a husband, or a big fancy house, or anything like that…my life has been missing a child.” she wiped her eyes “But now, it’s suddenly all over. Just like that.” she paused as another tear rolled down her cheek. “ I guess this is all just a sign that it wasn’t meant to be, you know?” “CD don’t say that…” Nate said “Being with the SFPD for 15 years now, I’ve managed to take a lot of people’s lives. but all of the sympathy I felt for all of those people combined can’t even amount to half of what I feel right now.” Nate moved closer to CD and hugged her and let her cry…it was all he felt he could do. |
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oh, you pretty things
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...kerri...that made me sooo..emotional.....it was soo sad.....wow...its good though. post more
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I'll Cover You
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That was great sistah!! For a split second u made me want to have kids, and that's hard to do. POST MORE SISTAH!
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Join Date: Jan 12, 2002
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THIS IS WAYYYYY TOO GOOD.....KEEP IT UP IM LOVING EVERY BIT OF IT!!! :-)
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