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Jinny Girl · 03-12-2002, 11:03 PM

Jinny woke up the next morning and felt perfectly fine, her entire memories of last night were gone totally but she really didn't mind that. She layed there for nearly a half hour, then changed her clothes (she went from yesterdays mini tank top and jeans to a pair of sweatpants and a Sesame Street T shirt that still fit from when she was 6) and went downstairs. She tried to be quiet but realized everyone was already awake anyway. John was staring at a wall Casey was on the verge of crying, John Sr. was looking for food (he had never been in the kitchen before) and nobody acknowledged her presence for a good 20 minutes. Finally her father realized she was alive.
"Oh... Hey. How are you feeling?" He tried to be nice. He didnt want to start anything right now. Jinny flashed on him yelling last night and remembered that he knew she had drank.
"I'm--- Fine. Actually, perfect." Jinny mumbled.
"Yeah... Thats how ti is when you're a kid." he looked like he was reminiscing about something "... Don't ever do that again." he shook his head and went back to the refridgerator. "Do you know where your mother... Umm, kept any ediblke food." He regretted saying her name at first.
"No. Don't bother. I'm going to starve myself to death. It might be fun."
"Jinny Just shutup." John Jr finally spoke. "I dont need, we dont need, none of us need your crap right now alright so just shutup.
"I don't have to. I dont have to do anything so go to hell." Jinny said.
"Kids..." John Sr started but it was to late.
"What is your problem anyway> Yeah shes dead, yeah were upset you dont have to go on about starving to death and dieing and all that crap."
In impulse tore at Jinny to hit him. What he said wasnt even really offensive at all in her opinion she just really couldn't stand him, he always had to say somethin negative. She raised her fist and lunged at him, but felt someone grab her from behind and pull her back. She knew it was her father.
"HAHA Nice try" John said and stuck out his toung like a 3 year old. Jinny kicked him in the crotch as well as she could from a distance.
"JINNY!" John Sr. said stuggling to get a hold of her. She was so skinny he was having trouble. Eventualy she gave up and John Jr caried on with his moaning and "Oh im in so much pain..." routine even though Jinny didnt kick him that hard. Casey was crying and nobody noticed and Jinny for some reason really wanted to slam her head on the table and see how bad it hurt, just to get an accurate assumption of what it must feel like to have a little piece of metal rip half of your head of.

Swimfan85 · 03-12-2002, 11:12 PM

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Ewan's My Man · 03-13-2002, 06:25 PM

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Jinny Girl · 03-13-2002, 10:54 PM

Finally, the Exsteads were doomed to eat dry bread. Jinny ate about a half of a slice and slogged (that actually is a word... weird aint it?) back up to her room. She layed on her bed for a few minuted until her personal phone line rang.
"Uh huh?" That was how she always answered the phone.
"Jinny... Its Raquelle... How are you doing?" Jinny heard her sneeze.
"Alright... Considering. Do you have a cold?" Jinny asked avoiding the subject of her mother.
"Yes. Im home sick.... Look I read in the morning paper... about your mom... I'm so sorry..." Raquelle said.
"So am I." Jinny wiped a tear out of her eye.
"She was so nice... Do you remember that time, that I scraped my knee when we were like 7 and she baked me cookies and let me take like 50 home? That was so nice... She was the only parent in town who didnt want me to die...."
"Raquelle..." Jinny started to cry. "Just would you stop it???"
"Look, I'm sorry, I shouldn't have said anything. It was that was right after my dad died. I didnt want to hear the word Dad for like 3 months..." She paused. "DO you wanna go to the mall? It'll be a good pick-me-up." Raquelle recalled when he father died when she was 10. She was at a freinds house when her mother came in, to announce her father had died of Cancer, which had only been detected 3 months earlier. The next day her freind took her to the mall to see a movie. Even though she was upset, it was still nice to know someone cared enough to at least try and help her.
"No... No I really just want to stay here. Bye." Jinny hung the phone up, she appreciated the offer but she didn;t want to go anywhere. Or do anything. She wanted to jump off the roof but that wasn't an option either... the roof wasn;t high enough. Jinny wanted another drink. It was very nice, to drink until u pass out and not suffer from a hangover like her father (and brother occaisionally) did. Jinny started to get up, but remembered her father was downstairs and layed back down. The liquor cabinet, right near the kitchen was her only source of alcohol. She needed a new plan.

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Jinny Girl · 03-14-2002, 10:51 PM

ok then dont respond... Raquells story was a troo story btw... Except the person who lived it didnt see a movie, she just went to the mall after her dadie died

While lying in her room Jinny could hear her father talking on the phone, his voice muffled from haveing to travel through the floors. She knew it was about her mother and the funeral but that was all she could get out of it. The rest was inaudible.
(Oh god I have to go to her funeral. I don't want to go... I don't want to be in the same room with her...)
Jinny remembered some stupid horror movie she saw where the dead guys coffin got knocked over and he rolled out and his eyes were knocked open and he landed right on his daughters feet staring up at her. Jinny imagined what it would be like to have someone with half their head missing land on your feet, opened eyed and dead. A chill ran up jinny back as she got the mental image of her mother lying on the floor.
(Thats NOT going to happen... it was a stupid old movie things like that never happen......... They could... But they don't, if it did you would hear about it all the time... or not because who would care if a dead guy fell down wouldn't really hurt him now would it? Mom wouldn't care is she fell after she died... I would. )
Jinny got up and went downstairs.
(Milk, not alcohol. Milk, not alcohol. Milk, not alcohol. Milk, not alcohol. )
she repeated over and over in her head. When she got downstairs nobody was in the kitchen, nobody was near the liquor cabinet, and the lock still hadn't been put back on.
(Milk, not alcohol. Milk, not alcohol. Milk, not alcohol......... ALCOHOL.)
She changed her mind pretty quickly. Last night would have been completely wonderfull if her dad hadn't walked in. This time she'd just say she was going to take a nap and not to disturb her. She went to the cabinet and pulled out the first bottle she saw, she only glanced at the label which she thought read rum but she really didn't cath the wordng. She only saw the label was a nice gold color. She listened behind her. She didn;t hear anything so she decided to check through the cabinet again and see if there was anything else. There as everything else in the world of alcohol. Including a few bottles with pricetags still on then, and damn considering her father was cheap 160 bux was alot. She reached out and picked it up but had not time to read the label.
"WHAT are you doing!?" Jinny heard her father bellow from behind her. Jinny whipped around, holding two bottles of booze infront of the off limit cobinet.
"DAD!... What a nice surprise... I was... afraid you had gona out and hadn't told me... I was just re arranging the cabinet... BY PRICE!!! Yes... by price mmm hmmm thats right yes.... Price."
John Sr. raised his eyebrow in a disbeliving way.

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Jinny Girl · 03-16-2002, 01:09 AM

"Ok lets try this again... What are you doing?" John Sr. Asked.
"Dusting?............. Washing bottles?.......... Stealing?" Jinny finally gave in. He knew what she was doing no denying it.
"Thats what I was looking for... ARE YOU INSANE???" he sceamed, Jinny shrunk back against the wall.
"WELL SORRY!!!"
"Sorry is not enough. I went easy on you Jinny the first time... Which was less that 24 HOURS AGO... because I know how you fell Jinny we all do... We're all going through the same thing and drinking will not make it better. It's only a temporary fix. That will cause more problems in the future... Even I'm trying to cut back... You're mother wanted that and she wouldn't want you to start..." He tried to sympathise with her. He started drinking when he was about 13 for no apparent reason. He didn't want to see Jinny end up like him. Subconciously he knewhe was an alcoholic, he just never actually admitted it to himself or others.
"WHO CARES WHAT SHE WANTED!? SHE'S DEAD! OBVIOUSLY SHE DIDNT GIVE A DAMN ABOUT WHATS GONNA HAPPEN TO ME! SHE SURE DIDN'T WANT TO STICK AROUND AND SEE!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jinny screamed.
"Jinny STOP IT! She cared about you. She really did. I don't know why she did this but she loved you very much. AND SHE DID CARE ABOUT WHAT HAPPENS TO YOU! SHE DID WANT TO SEE IT!... I just don't think she wanted to see what happened to her!" John Sr. threw his arms into the air and turned, walked about 3 feet back and trned around again. Jinny started to break down. She was a total dissapointment as a daughter. She made her mother kill herself and she had obviously dissapointed her dad.
"It was all my fault." Tears began to stream down her cheeks. "I couln't ever do anything right... The best I could get in school was a B and even mom thought I dress like a slut... SHe never said it but she always suggested it... And I always talked back... God I've told u people a million times that I;ve hated you and I've insulted you I'm the worst daughter. You should have disowned me a long time ago." She took a second to let out a long sob hen paused for a second. "How can you still like me?"
"Jinny, we love you..." John Sr. said.
"I know you love me... You have to... I'm your daughter... But how can you LIKE me? As a person? If I were somebody elses kid you probably wouldn't let me in your house... I don't even like me. I never did. Obviously mom didn't either."
"Jinny stop taking this out on youself!" He had to hold himself back from crying. He thought It was his fault she was dead, but he knew he couldnt cry infront of her. He had to be a strong example for everyone. "She always talked about you... How much she loved you. She really cared about you Jinny alot and... and I'm sure she was thinking about you when she pulled the damn trigger... but sometimes the good things in life are outweighed by the bad, but trust me Jinny you were the biggest good thing there..." That really didn't help Jinny.
(She loved me so much and I didn't do anything right... I always implyed I didn't love her I was always a bitch... maybe thats why she's gone. She didn't think I loved her as much as she did me.)
She thought. She slid down the wall and dropped the bottles, but they landed safely on the carpet without breaking. She put her hands down to support her as she sobbed loudly and hysterically. Casey had heard the entire conversation from his room. John could hear it too from his but he could care less. John Sr. sat next to Jinny and hugged her. She felt completely limp and lifeless. Like a pile of laundry. When he pulled her over to him she just swayed in his direction and slumped over on his shoulder.
(That was not the right thing to say...)
John Sr. thought.

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Swimfan85 · 03-16-2002, 12:49 PM

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Jinny Girl · 03-16-2002, 08:34 PM

When Jinny fianlly pulled herself together she tried to give herself things to do. She swept, she vaccumed, she actually cleaned off the top of her dresser and found 4 month old cheese (she was wondering what was so smelly) and she got the mail. There were 5 bills and a flyer with Jinnys name scribbled on it. She read it aloud.
"Attention everyone in the Tri State area... Party in SF. Its in 3 weeks. Go to it or feel my wrath. Follow the arrows."
Jinny has a feeling it was from the psycho kid in her biology class. He had a party every so often and he;d give u clues as to how to find it. Once he spray painted blue pawprints in a path leading to an old warehouse. The kid was an insane drug addict and everyone knew it, but he could throw a good party. Jinny had never actually gone to any of them because her dad always found out about it. Liek now.
"What does the tri state area have to do with anything?" He asked comeing around the corner.
"Ummm... I really don't know. The kids crazy anyway. Hes had like 50 partys this year. His brothers a DJ... Hes the one you dont like?... Remember?.... Billy the Pothead?"
"Ooooh yeah! I forgot about him... He still smoke pot?" he asked.
"yeah. He nicknamed himself Smokey McPot." (anyone ever see Dude Wheres my Car?") she replied.
"O... Ok.... You're not going to that party." He went back around the corner toward the livingroom. Jinny really didn't intend on going. Everyone said his partys kicked ass but she knew she'd get caught. She rolled the paper up and stuck it in her back pocket and went back to finding things to do. At about 5 PM her father informed her her mothers funeral would be the day after the next day. Jinny once again flashed on that movie and the possibility of that happening made her throw up. it was of course a closet casket service. The damage done to her head was could not be hidden or covered. That was one thing that made Jinny feel better, she wouldn't have to look at her face again. Knowing she was dead was bad enough. Somewhere in the back of ehr mind she still didn't actually believe it. Seeing her mother at the funeral would confirm the fact she was gone. She had seen her dead and taken away but for some reason she still expected her to be just fine in a hospital, or that she really hadn;t died and she had destroyed an inactive part of her brain. She was in Semi Denial. In the stage where your just beginning to accept the fact their gona but U still feel like they're alive and u want them to be alive so badly u almost believed it. The next day was uneventful. People called and offered their condolences and Jiny really just wanted them to all shut the hell up and go away but everyone seemed to care to dan much to consider how babling on about how wonderful Crystal Exstead was. One person they hadnt talked to in years called up just to say how nice she was and that the name Crystal was a beautiful name. In Jinnys opinion that was pointless. Everyone liked her name, who cares? The fact her parents were creative enough to name her Crystal was the last thing on all of their minds. That day Jinny finally got up the energy to go jogging, and ran into a bunch of kids she new. They went on and on about how sorry they were and how bad they fel for her. Jinny treid to be nice. which took alot of self control... Hell it took alot of self contol not to beat all of them to the ground and rip their hair out. Finally they shut up and Jinny jogged on by. That night the phone calls finally stopped and her father had a few beers and went to sleep almost-sober. Jinny had a chance to steal a bottle of Rum and drink herself to sleep. Right before she fell asleep she started the coundown.
"9 hours... 4 minutes... and 27 seconds until I die." she slurred outloud just before passing out. By die, she meant arriving at the funeral parlor.

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Swimfan85 · 03-17-2002, 12:21 PM

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Jinny Girl · 03-17-2002, 01:24 PM

Oooh dude wheres my car is the best movie... that and rat race... i was watching parts of Dude Wheres My car yesterdaya nd its funnyer after uve seen it... I love the chinese dude.. "You were really lup sup doy last night!" mwahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. On with the fic.

"I GOT YOU BABE!!!" Jinny was woken up by her radio alarm clock that was unbearably loud. She punched it about 5 times before she actually hit the button to make it shut up.
(...I didn't set my alarm clock...) Jinny rolled over to see her dad stnading next to her holding the bottle of rum (only 1/4 was left) stareing at her.
"...DO you have video cameras in here or something?"
"No but thats a good idea!" He replied. "Jinny you are really starting to get on my nervs... YOU DONT WANT TO GET ON MY NERVES NOW!!! MY ENTIRE CENTRAL NERVOSE SYSTEM EXPLODED LAST NIGHT!!! NOW THE REST OF ME IS GOING TO EXPLODE!!!!!!!!!!!" Finally Jinny was feeling some of the remote effects of alcohol. No nausea just a pouding awful migrane type headach, that her father screaming was not helping.
"Well right now my head is about to explode and you're not helping!!" Her own voice was incredibly louyd inside her head.
"IT'S NOT MY FAULT YOUR IN PAIIIIIIN!!!!!"
"... Ow." Jinny rolled onto her stomach and covered her head with a pillow.
"Alright fine whine about it you have 20 minutes Jinny and u better be ready I am not missing my wifes funeral because of you and your head!!" He walked out and made it a point to slam the door very hard. Afterwards he felt bad about it but she deserved it. Jinny litterally crawled to her closet and put on the first black thing she could find. Like everything else her mother would have thought it was "Indecent" but thats all she owned. It was a black mini skirt, and by mini I mean it also doubled as a headband and her shirt was just a plain somewhat tight button down shirt. Jinny had a very nice figure for a girl her age, and she could eat whatever she wanted and never gain weight. her hair went down to a little longer than mid-back length, and her mother never lether cut it. Well she had before but Jinny at one time had very nice butt length hair which she aboslutely despised in every way, so when she was 12 she took it upon herself to give herself a trim. A trim that resulted in having a stylist cut it up to chin length just to get it remotely even. Jinnys mother made her swear never to cut her hair again. Jinny didn't pla on letting it get any longer than this though. Haveing ultra long hair was something a 5 year old would do. She examined herself in the mirror and found that she looked surprisingly good. She never wore makeup, but for once in her life she actually didn't look bad enough to actually need it. She put on a pair of the black shoes that her mother liked the best. They were 4 inches high and black with the thing around the ankle and the big old strap over the foot. It took Jinny a while to get them on right but when she finally did she got downstairs to where everyone was waiting impatiently.
"Were gonna be late.
"Nice skirt."
"You look like a whore."
"Couldn't you have gona any faster!?"
"You overslept by 2 hours!"
"Were nevergonna get there at this rate." Everyone said 1 million different things at the same time. Jinny just ignored tham and put on her leather jacket (the only coat she owned). Enentually they shut up and got in the car. Jinny looked at the clock.
"42 minutes, 73 seconds, and a millisecond before I die."

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03-11-2002, 10:55 PM	#16
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03-12-2002, 11:03 PM	#19
Jinny Girl Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: ...I'm not sure (looks around) WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!!?!??!? Posts: 2,726	Jinny woke up the next morning and felt perfectly fine, her entire memories of last night were gone totally but she really didn't mind that. She layed there for nearly a half hour, then changed her clothes (she went from yesterdays mini tank top and jeans to a pair of sweatpants and a Sesame Street T shirt that still fit from when she was 6) and went downstairs. She tried to be quiet but realized everyone was already awake anyway. John was staring at a wall Casey was on the verge of crying, John Sr. was looking for food (he had never been in the kitchen before) and nobody acknowledged her presence for a good 20 minutes. Finally her father realized she was alive. "Oh... Hey. How are you feeling?" He tried to be nice. He didnt want to start anything right now. Jinny flashed on him yelling last night and remembered that he knew she had drank. "I'm--- Fine. Actually, perfect." Jinny mumbled. "Yeah... Thats how ti is when you're a kid." he looked like he was reminiscing about something "... Don't ever do that again." he shook his head and went back to the refridgerator. "Do you know where your mother... Umm, kept any ediblke food." He regretted saying her name at first. "No. Don't bother. I'm going to starve myself to death. It might be fun." "Jinny Just shutup." John Jr finally spoke. "I dont need, we dont need, none of us need your crap right now alright so just shutup. "I don't have to. I dont have to do anything so go to hell." Jinny said. "Kids..." John Sr started but it was to late. "What is your problem anyway> Yeah shes dead, yeah were upset you dont have to go on about starving to death and dieing and all that crap." In impulse tore at Jinny to hit him. What he said wasnt even really offensive at all in her opinion she just really couldn't stand him, he always had to say somethin negative. She raised her fist and lunged at him, but felt someone grab her from behind and pull her back. She knew it was her father. "HAHA Nice try" John said and stuck out his toung like a 3 year old. Jinny kicked him in the crotch as well as she could from a distance. "JINNY!" John Sr. said stuggling to get a hold of her. She was so skinny he was having trouble. Eventualy she gave up and John Jr caried on with his moaning and "Oh im in so much pain..." routine even though Jinny didnt kick him that hard. Casey was crying and nobody noticed and Jinny for some reason really wanted to slam her head on the table and see how bad it hurt, just to get an accurate assumption of what it must feel like to have a little piece of metal rip half of your head of.
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03-13-2002, 10:54 PM	#23
Jinny Girl Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: ...I'm not sure (looks around) WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!!?!??!? Posts: 2,726	Finally, the Exsteads were doomed to eat dry bread. Jinny ate about a half of a slice and slogged (that actually is a word... weird aint it?) back up to her room. She layed on her bed for a few minuted until her personal phone line rang. "Uh huh?" That was how she always answered the phone. "Jinny... Its Raquelle... How are you doing?" Jinny heard her sneeze. "Alright... Considering. Do you have a cold?" Jinny asked avoiding the subject of her mother. "Yes. Im home sick.... Look I read in the morning paper... about your mom... I'm so sorry..." Raquelle said. "So am I." Jinny wiped a tear out of her eye. "She was so nice... Do you remember that time, that I scraped my knee when we were like 7 and she baked me cookies and let me take like 50 home? That was so nice... She was the only parent in town who didnt want me to die...." "Raquelle..." Jinny started to cry. "Just would you stop it???" "Look, I'm sorry, I shouldn't have said anything. It was that was right after my dad died. I didnt want to hear the word Dad for like 3 months..." She paused. "DO you wanna go to the mall? It'll be a good pick-me-up." Raquelle recalled when he father died when she was 10. She was at a freinds house when her mother came in, to announce her father had died of Cancer, which had only been detected 3 months earlier. The next day her freind took her to the mall to see a movie. Even though she was upset, it was still nice to know someone cared enough to at least try and help her. "No... No I really just want to stay here. Bye." Jinny hung the phone up, she appreciated the offer but she didn;t want to go anywhere. Or do anything. She wanted to jump off the roof but that wasn't an option either... the roof wasn;t high enough. Jinny wanted another drink. It was very nice, to drink until u pass out and not suffer from a hangover like her father (and brother occaisionally) did. Jinny started to get up, but remembered her father was downstairs and layed back down. The liquor cabinet, right near the kitchen was her only source of alcohol. She needed a new plan. MOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEE?

03-14-2002, 10:51 PM	#24
Jinny Girl Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: ...I'm not sure (looks around) WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!!?!??!? Posts: 2,726	ok then dont respond... Raquells story was a troo story btw... Except the person who lived it didnt see a movie, she just went to the mall after her dadie died While lying in her room Jinny could hear her father talking on the phone, his voice muffled from haveing to travel through the floors. She knew it was about her mother and the funeral but that was all she could get out of it. The rest was inaudible. (Oh god I have to go to her funeral. I don't want to go... I don't want to be in the same room with her...) Jinny remembered some stupid horror movie she saw where the dead guys coffin got knocked over and he rolled out and his eyes were knocked open and he landed right on his daughters feet staring up at her. Jinny imagined what it would be like to have someone with half their head missing land on your feet, opened eyed and dead. A chill ran up jinny back as she got the mental image of her mother lying on the floor. (Thats NOT going to happen... it was a stupid old movie things like that never happen......... They could... But they don't, if it did you would hear about it all the time... or not because who would care if a dead guy fell down wouldn't really hurt him now would it? Mom wouldn't care is she fell after she died... I would. ) Jinny got up and went downstairs. (Milk, not alcohol. Milk, not alcohol. Milk, not alcohol. Milk, not alcohol. ) she repeated over and over in her head. When she got downstairs nobody was in the kitchen, nobody was near the liquor cabinet, and the lock still hadn't been put back on. (Milk, not alcohol. Milk, not alcohol. Milk, not alcohol......... ALCOHOL.) She changed her mind pretty quickly. Last night would have been completely wonderfull if her dad hadn't walked in. This time she'd just say she was going to take a nap and not to disturb her. She went to the cabinet and pulled out the first bottle she saw, she only glanced at the label which she thought read rum but she really didn't cath the wordng. She only saw the label was a nice gold color. She listened behind her. She didn;t hear anything so she decided to check through the cabinet again and see if there was anything else. There as everything else in the world of alcohol. Including a few bottles with pricetags still on then, and damn considering her father was cheap 160 bux was alot. She reached out and picked it up but had not time to read the label. "WHAT are you doing!?" Jinny heard her father bellow from behind her. Jinny whipped around, holding two bottles of booze infront of the off limit cobinet. "DAD!... What a nice surprise... I was... afraid you had gona out and hadn't told me... I was just re arranging the cabinet... BY PRICE!!! Yes... by price mmm hmmm thats right yes.... Price." John Sr. raised his eyebrow in a disbeliving way. mmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooooooooo u better respond of I shall send hot coals down upon your assssss

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03-16-2002, 01:09 AM	#26
Jinny Girl Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: ...I'm not sure (looks around) WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!!?!??!? Posts: 2,726	"Ok lets try this again... What are you doing?" John Sr. Asked. "Dusting?............. Washing bottles?.......... Stealing?" Jinny finally gave in. He knew what she was doing no denying it. "Thats what I was looking for... ARE YOU INSANE???" he sceamed, Jinny shrunk back against the wall. "WELL SORRY!!!" "Sorry is not enough. I went easy on you Jinny the first time... Which was less that 24 HOURS AGO... because I know how you fell Jinny we all do... We're all going through the same thing and drinking will not make it better. It's only a temporary fix. That will cause more problems in the future... Even I'm trying to cut back... You're mother wanted that and she wouldn't want you to start..." He tried to sympathise with her. He started drinking when he was about 13 for no apparent reason. He didn't want to see Jinny end up like him. Subconciously he knewhe was an alcoholic, he just never actually admitted it to himself or others. "WHO CARES WHAT SHE WANTED!? SHE'S DEAD! OBVIOUSLY SHE DIDNT GIVE A DAMN ABOUT WHATS GONNA HAPPEN TO ME! SHE SURE DIDN'T WANT TO STICK AROUND AND SEE!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jinny screamed. "Jinny STOP IT! She cared about you. She really did. I don't know why she did this but she loved you very much. AND SHE DID CARE ABOUT WHAT HAPPENS TO YOU! SHE DID WANT TO SEE IT!... I just don't think she wanted to see what happened to her!" John Sr. threw his arms into the air and turned, walked about 3 feet back and trned around again. Jinny started to break down. She was a total dissapointment as a daughter. She made her mother kill herself and she had obviously dissapointed her dad. "It was all my fault." Tears began to stream down her cheeks. "I couln't ever do anything right... The best I could get in school was a B and even mom thought I dress like a slut... SHe never said it but she always suggested it... And I always talked back... God I've told u people a million times that I;ve hated you and I've insulted you I'm the worst daughter. You should have disowned me a long time ago." She took a second to let out a long sob hen paused for a second. "How can you still like me?" "Jinny, we love you..." John Sr. said. "I know you love me... You have to... I'm your daughter... But how can you LIKE me? As a person? If I were somebody elses kid you probably wouldn't let me in your house... I don't even like me. I never did. Obviously mom didn't either." "Jinny stop taking this out on youself!" He had to hold himself back from crying. He thought It was his fault she was dead, but he knew he couldnt cry infront of her. He had to be a strong example for everyone. "She always talked about you... How much she loved you. She really cared about you Jinny alot and... and I'm sure she was thinking about you when she pulled the damn trigger... but sometimes the good things in life are outweighed by the bad, but trust me Jinny you were the biggest good thing there..." That really didn't help Jinny. (She loved me so much and I didn't do anything right... I always implyed I didn't love her I was always a bitch... maybe thats why she's gone. She didn't think I loved her as much as she did me.) She thought. She slid down the wall and dropped the bottles, but they landed safely on the carpet without breaking. She put her hands down to support her as she sobbed loudly and hysterically. Casey had heard the entire conversation from his room. John could hear it too from his but he could care less. John Sr. sat next to Jinny and hugged her. She felt completely limp and lifeless. Like a pile of laundry. When he pulled her over to him she just swayed in his direction and slumped over on his shoulder. (That was not the right thing to say...) John Sr. thought. mrrriiiiiiiiioeoeoegggeahahahahahr more?

03-16-2002, 12:49 PM	#27
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	dana!!! this is awesome!!!!!!!!!!! i love it add more soon!

03-16-2002, 08:34 PM	#28
Jinny Girl Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: ...I'm not sure (looks around) WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!!?!??!? Posts: 2,726	When Jinny fianlly pulled herself together she tried to give herself things to do. She swept, she vaccumed, she actually cleaned off the top of her dresser and found 4 month old cheese (she was wondering what was so smelly) and she got the mail. There were 5 bills and a flyer with Jinnys name scribbled on it. She read it aloud. "Attention everyone in the Tri State area... Party in SF. Its in 3 weeks. Go to it or feel my wrath. Follow the arrows." Jinny has a feeling it was from the psycho kid in her biology class. He had a party every so often and he;d give u clues as to how to find it. Once he spray painted blue pawprints in a path leading to an old warehouse. The kid was an insane drug addict and everyone knew it, but he could throw a good party. Jinny had never actually gone to any of them because her dad always found out about it. Liek now. "What does the tri state area have to do with anything?" He asked comeing around the corner. "Ummm... I really don't know. The kids crazy anyway. Hes had like 50 partys this year. His brothers a DJ... Hes the one you dont like?... Remember?.... Billy the Pothead?" "Ooooh yeah! I forgot about him... He still smoke pot?" he asked. "yeah. He nicknamed himself Smokey McPot." (anyone ever see Dude Wheres my Car?") she replied. "O... Ok.... You're not going to that party." He went back around the corner toward the livingroom. Jinny really didn't intend on going. Everyone said his partys kicked ass but she knew she'd get caught. She rolled the paper up and stuck it in her back pocket and went back to finding things to do. At about 5 PM her father informed her her mothers funeral would be the day after the next day. Jinny once again flashed on that movie and the possibility of that happening made her throw up. it was of course a closet casket service. The damage done to her head was could not be hidden or covered. That was one thing that made Jinny feel better, she wouldn't have to look at her face again. Knowing she was dead was bad enough. Somewhere in the back of ehr mind she still didn't actually believe it. Seeing her mother at the funeral would confirm the fact she was gone. She had seen her dead and taken away but for some reason she still expected her to be just fine in a hospital, or that she really hadn;t died and she had destroyed an inactive part of her brain. She was in Semi Denial. In the stage where your just beginning to accept the fact their gona but U still feel like they're alive and u want them to be alive so badly u almost believed it. The next day was uneventful. People called and offered their condolences and Jiny really just wanted them to all shut the hell up and go away but everyone seemed to care to dan much to consider how babling on about how wonderful Crystal Exstead was. One person they hadnt talked to in years called up just to say how nice she was and that the name Crystal was a beautiful name. In Jinnys opinion that was pointless. Everyone liked her name, who cares? The fact her parents were creative enough to name her Crystal was the last thing on all of their minds. That day Jinny finally got up the energy to go jogging, and ran into a bunch of kids she new. They went on and on about how sorry they were and how bad they fel for her. Jinny treid to be nice. which took alot of self control... Hell it took alot of self contol not to beat all of them to the ground and rip their hair out. Finally they shut up and Jinny jogged on by. That night the phone calls finally stopped and her father had a few beers and went to sleep almost-sober. Jinny had a chance to steal a bottle of Rum and drink herself to sleep. Right before she fell asleep she started the coundown. "9 hours... 4 minutes... and 27 seconds until I die." she slurred outloud just before passing out. By die, she meant arriving at the funeral parlor. mmmrrrrrrrrrrrrrooooeeeeeeee?

03-17-2002, 12:21 PM	#29
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	yes i want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! and i love the dude wheres my car reference!!

03-17-2002, 01:24 PM	#30
Jinny Girl Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: ...I'm not sure (looks around) WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!!?!??!? Posts: 2,726	Oooh dude wheres my car is the best movie... that and rat race... i was watching parts of Dude Wheres My car yesterdaya nd its funnyer after uve seen it... I love the chinese dude.. "You were really lup sup doy last night!" mwahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. On with the fic. "I GOT YOU BABE!!!" Jinny was woken up by her radio alarm clock that was unbearably loud. She punched it about 5 times before she actually hit the button to make it shut up. (...I didn't set my alarm clock...) Jinny rolled over to see her dad stnading next to her holding the bottle of rum (only 1/4 was left) stareing at her. "...DO you have video cameras in here or something?" "No but thats a good idea!" He replied. "Jinny you are really starting to get on my nervs... YOU DONT WANT TO GET ON MY NERVES NOW!!! MY ENTIRE CENTRAL NERVOSE SYSTEM EXPLODED LAST NIGHT!!! NOW THE REST OF ME IS GOING TO EXPLODE!!!!!!!!!!!" Finally Jinny was feeling some of the remote effects of alcohol. No nausea just a pouding awful migrane type headach, that her father screaming was not helping. "Well right now my head is about to explode and you're not helping!!" Her own voice was incredibly louyd inside her head. "IT'S NOT MY FAULT YOUR IN PAIIIIIIN!!!!!" "... Ow." Jinny rolled onto her stomach and covered her head with a pillow. "Alright fine whine about it you have 20 minutes Jinny and u better be ready I am not missing my wifes funeral because of you and your head!!" He walked out and made it a point to slam the door very hard. Afterwards he felt bad about it but she deserved it. Jinny litterally crawled to her closet and put on the first black thing she could find. Like everything else her mother would have thought it was "Indecent" but thats all she owned. It was a black mini skirt, and by mini I mean it also doubled as a headband and her shirt was just a plain somewhat tight button down shirt. Jinny had a very nice figure for a girl her age, and she could eat whatever she wanted and never gain weight. her hair went down to a little longer than mid-back length, and her mother never lether cut it. Well she had before but Jinny at one time had very nice butt length hair which she aboslutely despised in every way, so when she was 12 she took it upon herself to give herself a trim. A trim that resulted in having a stylist cut it up to chin length just to get it remotely even. Jinnys mother made her swear never to cut her hair again. Jinny didn't pla on letting it get any longer than this though. Haveing ultra long hair was something a 5 year old would do. She examined herself in the mirror and found that she looked surprisingly good. She never wore makeup, but for once in her life she actually didn't look bad enough to actually need it. She put on a pair of the black shoes that her mother liked the best. They were 4 inches high and black with the thing around the ankle and the big old strap over the foot. It took Jinny a while to get them on right but when she finally did she got downstairs to where everyone was waiting impatiently. "Were gonna be late. "Nice skirt." "You look like a whore." "Couldn't you have gona any faster!?" "You overslept by 2 hours!" "Were nevergonna get there at this rate." Everyone said 1 million different things at the same time. Jinny just ignored tham and put on her leather jacket (the only coat she owned). Enentually they shut up and got in the car. Jinny looked at the clock. "42 minutes, 73 seconds, and a millisecond before I die." mmmmmmmmmmrooooooooooeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrooooeeermmeormeomroeemroemrmemore?