"THE DIVISION" JINNY STYLE~ by Celine

[Esperanza]

What!! Excuse me, but did I give you permission to possible kill of Casey... no j\k, just getting into the story too much I guess!!! lol... anyway this is really great, and you have got to keep going because you just left me hanging there... SO POST MORE ASAP!!!!

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

SCENE TWENTY
setting: morning at Magda's place.... the sun rises slowly and a bright dark blue sky begins to sparkle some new light reflecting the bay area.... 60 degrees

(Magda and Gabriel have breakfast)

MAGDA: Give me another week

GABRIEL: Take all the time you need... you want some more juice?

MAGDA: Sure.... thanks for staying here last night while I was at the hospital with Jin.

GABRIEL: No problem... I might as well live here eh?

(Gabriel starts to laugh)

MAGDA: Dont push it

(She smiles)

(Ben enters the kitchen ready to eat breakfast)

MAGDA: Hey are you ready for your soccer game on saturday?

BEN: Yep!! I'm gonna kill the other team!! You should see me on the field mom!!

GABRIEL: Yeah.. he's a star player... you should come with us on saturday to see him

MAGDA: Sure that will be great!!

MAGDA: Hurry up and eat honey. You dont want to be late for school.

BEN: ok

SCENE TWENTYONE
setting: Jinny's Dad's house
(its 8:00am and Jinny is getting ready for work)

JINNY: Here, let me help you with the bandages for your head

CASEY: No.. its ok I got it Jinny.

JINNY: I'm just trying to make myself useful here

CASEY: You helped enough Jinny. I wouldnt know what to do without you around.

JINNY: Any sign of John?

CASEY: No... I dont plan on talking to him for a while. You know Jinny, I dont know if I'll ever be able to forgive him for what he did to me last night.

JINNY: If he shows his face... I'll be sure to kick his ass for you!!

CASEY: Thanks Jinny

(Jinny's father appears in the front room with them)

JOHN: So...what are we going to do about John?

JINNY: I dont know.. but I have to go, I'll call you guys later.

(Jinny hugs the both of them, then heads off to work)

SCENE TWENTYTWO
setting: The Division

RAINA: I organized all the police files, and finished all the paper work you gave me.

CAPTAIN: Good... now see if you can scan these pictures for me

RAINA: UGHHHHHHHHH!!!

(CD and Nate come walking in captain's office)

CAPTAIN: There's a situation in China Town a rival gang beat up a pregnant woman from another gang... I want you to find out where the gang is hiding

CD: Is she alright?

CAPTAIN: Yes... she was very lucky her baby is still healthy.. although she suffered some injuries to her head and her arms.

NATE: Ok then.. we better get started then

(Nate and CD walk to the car)

NATE: Are you sure you can work today? Doctor said you can take another week off if you like.

CD: I need to get back to work Nate. I'll be fine

NATE: Ok, so how about we change the subject to something more interesing.

CD: Like what?

NATE: If I wanted to take a girl out to eat around here.... what place would you recommend?

CD: Why? You have a "secret" you're not telling me?

NATE: Me? secret? No way!!!

CD: The Flamming Royal

NATE: What?

CD: That's a good place... used to go with my husband all the time there to eat.

NATE: Ohhhh... I see.

NATE: Thankyou

CD: Anyone I know?

NATE: Maybe...

CD: She's not someone from the division right?

NATE: Well, let's get going

(They are still sitting in the car... Nate and CD start to drive off)

SCENE TWENTYTHREE
setting: Hospital

(Kate visits her mom at the hospital during her lunch break)

KATE: Make sure you eat most of it mom. You want to gain back all your energy you lost when you fell.

:: Kate's mom looks at the fruit bowl and slowly starts to pick at the cantalope::

:: The doctors walks in::

KATE: So how is she... when can she come back home?

DOCTOR(SIGHS): I'm afraid she can't come back home. She is extremely weak and I dont think she will be able to stay at home much longer. I'm sorry to say.... You might consider putting her in a nursing home.

KATE: A nursing home? Those places are terrible!! I've already considered it... I dont want her put in a nursing home.

DOCTOR: Well you have to put her into some medical care facility because you cant just take her home and expect her to take care of herself.

KATE: My sister and I take care of her. That's all she needs.

DOCTOR: She's going to be in here for at least another week. Her white blood cell count is low and she needs care here.

KATE: Fine whatever... she's out by next week you hear me?

DOCTOR: Like I said... please consider what I suggested to you.

(The doctor leaves)

SCENE TWENTYFOUR
setting: It's late at night... Jinny is sleeping in her apartment having a nightmare

:: Jinny finds herself in a room with no tv.... no radio..... :: and the walls are all padded::

JINNY: LET ME OUT!!! LET ME OUT!!! LET ME OUT PLEASE!! WHAT DID I EVER DO TO DESERVE THIS!!

:: Just then, someone opens the door and it's the doc she works with from the division::

DOCTOR: Well Jinny girl.... I have some information about a recent case to discuss with you

JINNY: Sure alright.... what is it doc?

DOCTOR: I was examining this deceased woman in her early 30's and she had all these marks all over her body....

JINNY: Oh god how awful!!

DOCTOR: Yeah she looked like she had been raped and stabbed to death... anyways it happened 3 months ago

JINNY: huh?

DOCTOR: Yeah... late at night.... suposely she was drunk with two guys and the other one for some reason left... and the other man ended up raping her.

DOCTOR: Police found her later that night dead with cuts all over her face and body

JINNY: Did you identify the body?

DOCTOR: Yeah I did....

(Suddently this bolt of fear hits her like a ton of bricks... she starts to turn very pale)

JINNY: Well? Who was she?

DOCTOR: She was a former Inspector.... Inspector Jinny Extead. You know her?

JINNY: WHAT?

JINNY: That cant be true... I'm JINNY EXTEAD!!!

DOCTOR: No you're not... Jinny Extead died three months ago... I have the death certificate to prove it..

(Shows Jinny the death certificate)

JINNY: You're kidding me right?

DOCTOR: I'm a professional.... would I kid about something like this?

JINNY: But I'm JINNY EXTEAD!!!

DOCTOR: Looks like you need to take your medication now... NURSE!!!!

( A nurse shows up to the empty white room with a needle in her hand)

JINNY: NO PLEASE!!! WAIT!!!! I DONT NEED A SHOT!!!

DOCTOR: Yeah you do.... You dont even know who you are...

(Jinny's dad, John Jr, Casey, CD, Magda enter the room)


JINNY'S DAD: Yeah Jinny girl. You're the one that killed my wife!! YOU KILLED HER DAMN YOU!!!

JINNY: NO!! I DONT KNOW WHAT YOURE TALKING ABOUT!!! I DIDNT MEAN TO HURT HER!!! SHE WAS MY MOTHER FOR GODSAKES!!

MAGDA: Jinny Why you lie to me so much?? All you do is lie lie lie lie lie lie!! you good for nothing drunk!!

JINNY: Mag, I'm sorry I lied to you... but it was just that one time!!

MAGDA: Yeah sure it was....

CD: Why didnt you ever visit me at the hospital?

JINNY: CD I did!!! I did!!! I was at the hospital!!!

CD: Sure you were.... You're such damn liar I dont know why the captain kept you on the division for so long.

CASEY: Listen Jinny... you're my sister... i dont know what I would do without you. I think this shot will do you some good.

JINNY: What Shot? What are you talking about?

CASEY: Hurry Nurse... she is losing her memory!!

JOHN JR: You know Jinny you might want to put some bandages on those cuts you have

JINNY: WHAT CUTS!?!?

JOHN JR.: The ones all over your face and body

:: Jinny looks at her arms and discovers herself covered in blood::

JOHN JR: Whats the matter Jinnygirl!! You cant take the pressure?

NURSE: Ok strap her onto the bed.

:: everyone grabs her and forces her on the bed and straps her on there::

JINNY: NOOOOO what are you doing?... This is insane!!! please I'll be a good girl from now on!!! I'll be good!!!! I'll be a good girl from now on!! I'll get good grades and ....

EVERYONE: JINNY GIRL JINNY GIRL JINNY GIRL!!! JINNY GIRL JINNY GIRL JINNY GIRL!!!

JINNY: Oh god... i cant feel my arm... what did you do? Stop it!! stop the noise!!!! stop calling me that!!! stop the noise!! stop it stop it stop it!!!

:: Jinny wakes up with cold sweat pouring off her face... she looks at the time.. and its 3:30am::

( She lays in bed and starts to cry.... and the scene blackens out)

TUNE IN TOMORROW FOR PART 7 SAME JINNY TIME SAME JINNY CHANNEL!!
Write what you think of it so far....

[Babes_Cat]

Wow! OK, That was a twisted dream! MORE!

[Esperanza]

(Hmm, I think that about sums it up! You know, This FF is SO AWESOME!!! But then again, to be fair, you best post more, and let me decide on that because it could get even better... if that even possible!! So post more ASAP... actually now!!!)

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

wow thankyou!! That means a lot to me.... knowing people like my fan fiction story. I'm so sorry.. i know i said this the other day but i ended up writing a couple of scenes anyways... well tonight... i cant write my daily scenes because I'm so busy with my homework. Anyway, I know you come on the afternoon or whatever LOL I'm usually so very exhausted coming home from school... you could imagine me getting only 3 hours of sleep a day seriously you would be little worn out LOL Anyways tomorrow definitely cause its friday I write some more scenes. I'm actually glad some people read my scenes... they seem kind of stupid compared to the other fan fics... but maybe im being too critical on myself I dunno... ive only been doing this for like about a week so i guess im getting better each day as you can see So I'll see you all laters bye

[Ewan's My Man]

I just finished reading this...it is awesome!!!

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

SCENE 25
setting: The Division

It's a cloudy morning, but everything is starting to dry up slowly as the sun slowly rises to the top and it becomes daylight once again.

(Jinny comes in late for work)

MAGDA: I thought you wanted to start off good.

JINNY: What? You think she noticed?

CAPTAIN: JINNY!!!

( Jinny turns around looking at the captain. The captain walks up to Jinny slowly... observing her movements and staring at her eyes like she was a test subject to this experiment they were conducting)

CAPTAIN: Jinny, come in my office now please.

(Jinny walks into the captains office expecting to get yelled at right then and there, but the captain sits at her desk and puts her hands on her forehead... and then glances at a picture of her daughter)

CAPTAIN: Jinny.... here you go.

(The captain gets something from the bottom drawer of her desk and gives it to Jinny)

JINNY(SURPRISED): I'm not doing this...

(The captain sets a small clear plastic cup on her desk)

CAPTAIN: You get a drug test.... once a week. go get started.

(Jinny stares at her and starts to laugh)

JINNY: Oh.... I get it. I was late to work today, you think it had something to do with alcohol right?

CAPTAIN: Yeah I do..... take the test Jinny.... that was part of the deal ok?

JINNY: No I wont.... I'm clean alright? I dont understand why all of a sudden you want to test me.

(Just then two police officers walk in the office and each stand beside Jinny)

JINNY : Do you mind? We're trying to have a private conversation here.

CAPTAIN: Jinny, I dont want to have to force you.

JINNY: Fine look I'll go. You happy now?

CAPTAIN: Ask me again when the results come back.

(Jinny walks to the bathroom)

SCENE 26
setting: Anchorside

(Magda is having lunch with Jinny at Anchorside)

MAGDA So why were you so hostile with the captain this morning?

JINNY: I dont want to talk about it Mag. So I'd appreciate it if you dont bring it up again.

MAGDA: Come on Jinny!! It was a simple drug test!!

(Jinny starts to get pissed and looks at Magda)

JINNY: WHO TOLD YOU

MAGDA: It doesnt matter... what matters is that if you continue with that attitude of yours, you are going to get yourself fired.

JINNY: well??

MAGDARaina.

JINNY: I'll be back, I'm going to get an iced tea.

(Jinny leaves the table and walks up to the counter. Nate walks in through the door and sits at the booth)

MAGDA: Hey, what are you doing here?

NATE: I heard this a pretty good restaurant.

NATE: Actually I just wanted to talk to you. I was wondering, I have tickets to the opera tomorrow night and...

MAGDA: Nate now isnt really a good time. I'm taken anyways.

NATE: How is Gabe anyways?

MAGDA: We have to be professional about this and I really hope we can be friends, but that's all we'll be is friends.

NATE: Look Magda, I really like you. I wont hide that. You're beautiful. I like your hair and your eyes and just everything about you makes me crazy.

MAGDA: Nate.... please.... if you didnt come here to talk about the case please just leave.

NATE: Just think about it Magda. If this thing with you and Gabriel doesnt work out... call me.

MAGDA: Me and Gabriel dont have a "thing" we have a relationship and we have a child. I suggest you leave now.

NATE: I'm sorry I just wanted to tell you how I felt. I wish you luck on your new case. Goodbye.

(Nate leaves Anchorside and Magda sits there thinking about
what Nate said to her)

(Jinny returns with an Iced Tea in her hand)

JINNY: So whats going on with you and Nate? He looked upset when he left.

MAGDA: Nothing... whats up with you and the captain...

JINNY: Nothing...

(They get their plates of food and start to eat)

SCENE 27
setting: China Town

(C.D. and Nate are walking to a beat up old house with a broken screen door and some bullet holes on the sides of the house they knock on the door)

YOUNG MAN#1: Hello. I was expecting you. Come in.

(C.D. and Nate walk into a pile of toys and magazines laying around a brown carpet and sit down)

NATE: What can you tell us?

YOUNG MAN#1: Look uh... um... ill be honest here. I wasn't surprised when I heard my girlfriend was stabbed by a bunch of rival gang members. The truth is, I'm glad that B**** is dead, she was doing all of them. She broke my heart what can I say. The mother of my two kids. I cant believe she would date a gang member and wind up getting killed though. She never used to be that way. She was the sweetest girl you would know around these parts of town you know I'm saying?

( C.D. nods as she takes some quicks notes on her tablet)

YOUNG MAN#1: I really dont know where they are right now. But I do know that her boyfriend is part of the gang. Tony Stevenson. He lives a couple of blocks from me. 2392 Miarke St.

NATE: Thankyou for your time.

C.D: Hold on. Are you part of a gang?

YOUNG MAN#1: No Ma'am. I dont get into that sort of thing. I just hope you find out where the gang is located so you can put them all in jail for life.

C.D. Believe me I wish it was that easy. Can you describe Mr. Stevenson for me?

YOUNG MAN#1: He has like a shaved head, A small goatee and some piercing on his right eye brow. Weighs like around 200 he is 5'9. Has like a big tattoo of a dragon on his right arm.

NATE: Thankyou very much for you're time sir you have a nice day.

(C.D. and Nate walk out the door and they head to the car)

C.D.: I think she got killed because the gang members didnt like the idea that their "leader" was spending so much time with her so they just murdered her to get rid of her.

NATE: You really think that?

C.D.: Yeah I do. It happens all the time around here.

NATE: Yeah, well I think that guy we were questioning was lying to us about the whole thing.

C.D.: possibly.... there's only one way to find out.

SCENE 28
setting: The Division

(Jinny and Magda are working when Teddy shows up with some documents)

TEDDY: Hey.... here are the documents you asked for.

JINNY: Thanks Teddy.

(Jinny grabs the documents and Teddy quickly takes them away from her)

TEDDY: You could of just got them yourself you know. You didnt need me to get them for you.

JINNY: I know... I just wanted to see how you were doing and everything.

TEDDY: Well, why dont you call me or send me an email like most of my other friends do.

JINNY: Is that all I am.... just a friend?

TEDDY: Yeah...

JINNY: Leave me alone

(Teddy touches Jinny's shoulders but she pushes his hand away)

JINNY: No you know what? Just go.

TEDDY: I'm sorry Jinny.

(Teddy leaves the room)

MAGDA: Jin? What the hell is wrong with you today?

JINNY: Nothing!!! I'm just having a bad day that's all.

( Magda walks away from her desk to go get something to drink, meanwhile The captain walks towards Jinny again)

CAPTAIN: Jinny..... my office.

(Jinny walks slowly towards her office, with an anxious look on her face)

CAPTAIN: I got your results right here from the drug test you took yesterday.

JINNY: Well, let's hear it.

CAPTAIN: Here...

(The captain gives Jinny the folder that has the results inside, and jinny opens it up)

TUNE IN TOMORROW SAME JINNY TIME SAME JINNY CHANNEL TO SEE WHAT THE RESULTS ARE..... tell me what you think of this story so far.

[Esperanza]

WHAT!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT THE RESULTS ARE, AND I WANT TO KNOW NOW!!! LOL... I love this FF so much so post more ASAP!!!

[Divisionbabe05]

BITCH...I mean...ummm CHIK you better add more now LOL...this is awesome!

[Swimfan85]

DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT DO U THINK U ARE DOING BY STOPPING THERE?!?!??! O MY LORD............ U HAVE TO ADD MORE!!!

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

Hey you guys, I'm sorry I havent updated my fan fic in like a week.. its been a busy week for me at school and stuff.... well here it is... the moment you've been waiting for... the continuation of this story... enjoy!

SCENE 29
setting: (The Division... clear skies 60 degrees)

(The Captain hands Jinny a yellow folder that contains the test results and Jinny opens it)

CAPTAIN: Well....

JINNY: Negative.

CAPTAIN: I think I owe you an apology Jinny. When you came in late the other day, I thought you "fell off the wagon" again.

JINNY: None is necessary Captain. I had some stuff going on that night and I couldnt sleep. Are we through here?

CAPTAIN: Yes we are.

(Jinny leaves the office)

CAPTAIN: Wait..... Jinny.

(Jinny turns around and takes a step back in the room)

JINNY: yes?

CAPTAIN: I happen to know another sponsor you might want to meet.

JINNY: How did you know....

CAPTAIN: I keep track of things from your "program". You see, thats part of the deal I made with the Division. Would you like to meet him?

JINNY: Yeah sure... listen, I would love to chat with you but I got to get going.

CAPTAIN: Ok, well, here's the number if you want to contact him. His name is Marcus.

JINNY: Marcus?

CAPTAIN: Yep... I think you're gonna like him.

JINNY: Yeah...

(Jinny leaves the office once again)

SCENE 30
setting: 2392 Miarke St.

(CD and Nate go up to this beat up old white house and knocks on the door)

CD: Nobody is answering

NATE: Just ... hold on... I think I heard someone.

(A young woman opens the door)

WOMAN1: Yes? What can I do you for?

CD: SFPD... we are looking for a man by the name of Tony Stevenson.

WOMAN1: What about?

NATE: Is he here or isn't he?

WOMAN1: No he isnt, he is out with his friends shooting pool at some bar down the street from here. Did he do something wrong?

CD: We have reason to believe that Tony was involved in the murder of Elaine Marison.

WOMAN1: I thought Elaine and her baby were alright. That's what the police said.

CD: She was but a few days later, she passed away along with her baby. Apparently she had a major infection that looked minor but it turned out to be something seriously internal that killed her.

WOMAN1: Oh, I'm sorry to hear that. You think my boyfriend had something to do with it?

(CD and Nate look at each other and sigh)

CD: Miss, Elaine was pregnant with your boyfriends child. We need to question him ASAP. Can you let us in?

WOMAN1: Sure... I have nothing to hide.

(The woman lets both CD and Nate in to check out the place. There are beer bottles all over the tables and food all over the floor)

CD(TO HERSELF): God.... don't these people ever pick up around here?

NATE: CD! Come in here for a minute...

(CD and Nate walk into Tony's room to find several guns under the bed that are fully loaded.)

NATE: We need to take these guns away from here.

CD: Yeah we do...

(CD and Nate hear a noise coming from the front room. Tony just came in the house)

TONY: What the hell are you doing in my room?

CD: We need to talk, have a seat.

(CD points to the empty wooden chair that looks about 20 years old)

TONY: Look, my girlfriend told me that you wanted to talk about the murder. I have nothing to do with the murder of Elaine. Some people from a gang shot her. Its a rough neighborhood... I mean, how could you possibly assume that....

CD: We have a witness

TONY: Oh is it that Bast*** that claims to have loved her? He doesn't know s*** about anything. I dont know why you would ever believe him.

CD: Look, we found guns in the room, we saw the gang symbols. We know you're part of a gang. Would you come with us please?

TONY: Fine whatever, I didn't lay a damn finger on her, you gotta believe that.

(CD and Nate takes Tony with them to the car)

WOMAN1: Where are you taking him? What are you doing? You can't just....

TONY: Don't worry baby, I'll be back.

SCENE 31
setting: The Mural Restaurant

(There's all this music playing and Jinny walks in, late as usual. She sees Marcus, her new sponsor and she sits down next to him)

MARCUS: Hello Jinny

JINNY: Hello

(Jinny sees the black man stare at her like she was the most beautiful woman in the world)

JINNY: You are my sponsor.... aren't you?

MARCUS: Yes, I am.... it's just....

JINNY: Oh god, not again.

MARCUS: What?

JINNY: I'm attracted to you, you are attracted to me. I just can't have a male sponsor.

MARCUS: I understand that. It was nice seeing you. I don't want to make it any more harder on you than it already is.

(Marcus gets up and starts to leave)

JINNY: Wait....

(Marcus turns around and looks at Jinny's green eyes. He sees them sparkle with life)

JINNY: Why dont you sit down and we'll have some dinner... alright? It shouldnt be a waste of time for you or for me, so lets just make the most out of an akward situation.

MARCUS: Sounds like a great idea Jinny, I like the way you think

JINNY: I dont know what it is with you, you seem so different from most guys I talk to.

MARCUS: Yeah you are different also. We have something in common.

JINNY: yeah we do. So what do you do for a living?

MARCUS: I'm a UPS guy.

JINNY: Oh... so you are.

MARCUS: What about you?

JINNY: Im an Inspector.

MARCUS: Oh wow, sounds interesting

JINNY: Yes it is.... it's not the best job in the world, but it's in my blood.

MARCUS: In your blood?

JINNY: My dad is a retired cop and my two brothers are cops also.

MARCUS: Oh.... Well.... What about your mother?

JINNY: So have you been here before?

MARCUS: Yes, once before. I love their seafood.

JINNY: I'm not really into seafood that much. But if you say its great here, then I guess I'll try it.

MARCUS: Great.

SCENE 32
setting: hospital

(Kate is at the hosptial in the ICU ( Intensive Care Unit) watching her mother slip away from her)

KATE: Mom, can you hear me mom?

(Tears run down her cheeks)

KATE: I'm so sorry. I tried so hard.

(Kate kneels down and puts her head on her mother's bed)

(Kate sees Amanda standing there, next to the door with tears in her eyes)

KATE: They let you in? When did you get here?

AMANDA: About 15 minutes ago, yes they finally let me in. How is she?

KATE: The doctor says, she can go anytime now. I just can't help but feel responsible for this.

AMANDA: No, you shouldnt believe that at all. Its not true, she lived a wonderful life mom... you didnt do anything to harm her.

KATE: I still cant believe you flew all the way from LA just to come here.

AMANDA: I care about her mom. Just as much as you do, and I wouldnt leave her like that. You know the way I am.

KATE: I know honey, it.. its great to see you.

( Kate and Amanda hug each other)

( They both feel look at her .... resting.... they hold her cold dry lifeless hands as they both watch her slip away..... slowly.)

READ MORE TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS IN THE COMING DAYS.... SAME JINNY TIME... SAME JINNY CHANNEL.
tell me what you think of it after you read it.

[Esperanza]

Thanks for posting more!!! I was getting worried you'd forgoten about me... and you were just gonna leave me hanging here forever... and then my grades would suffer... i'd never get into collge... and end up living in a box..... but that's not the point. Post more ASAP!!!

[Esperanza]

HEY!!! ARN'T YOU GONNA KEEP GOING????

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

Hahahaha Calm down!! Dont worry there will be more coming. I've been depressed all this week with finals and all so now that im free.... I'm gonna be writing more this evening so you can read it

[Esperanza]

THANK YOU!!! I THOUGHT YOU'D FORGOTTEN ABOUT ME!!!!