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Hollow · 04-30-2005, 04:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Henry727

...says the person who posted multiple threads of the same pointless 800-word story and posts other threads merely to inform everyone that he loves doral cigarattes.

Henry727 · 04-30-2005, 04:33 PM

Hi Paris Hilton

Hollow · 04-30-2005, 04:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Henry727

Hi Paris Hilton

Nighthawk76 · 04-30-2005, 05:09 PM

Really good. It would make good lyrics to a song.

TheGreatPretender · 04-30-2005, 06:48 PM

I like it alot ecpsecially the chorus, but I honestly think in some parts you are just trying to rhyme and that doesn't make for good lyrics. Like the "We both hate Hilary Duff" verse.

Courtnee · 04-30-2005, 08:21 PM

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Originally Posted by TheGreatPretender

I like it alot ecpsecially the chorus, but I honestly think in some parts you are just trying to rhyme and that doesn't make for good lyrics. Like the "We both hate Hilary Duff" verse.

yeah you'll have to excuse that....It was 3:00 in the morning.

Any suggestions?

Courtnee · 04-30-2005, 08:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Henry727

That was really rude

If you didn't wanna see it,you shouldn't have clicked

Max Whittaker · 05-01-2005, 12:59 AM

He is mistaken. See:

Max Whittaker · 05-01-2005, 01:03 AM

I'm the good-looking one.

Courtnee · 05-01-2005, 09:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Max Whittaker

I'm the good-looking one.

haha

Sterling Holobyte · 05-01-2005, 09:59 AM

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Originally Posted by Max Whittaker

I'm the good-looking one.

You need to put on some weight!

robyrob · 05-01-2005, 04:56 PM

[QUOTE=Max Whittaker]I'm the good-looking one.

[\QUOTE]

i'm the one with the staple remover =)

05-01-2005, 12:59 AM	#23
Max Whittaker I want Serenity back Forum Veteran Join Date: Apr 30, 2001 Posts: 6,180	He is mistaken. See: Attached Images

05-01-2005, 04:56 PM	#27
robyrob certified wackball#3 Moderator Forum Icon Join Date: Aug 03, 2003 Location: hiding under the third booth at Arnold's Posts: 58,206	[QUOTE=Max Whittaker]I'm the good-looking one. [\QUOTE] i'm the one with the staple remover =)
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04-30-2005, 04:33 PM	#17
Henry727 Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Dec 24, 2003 Location: Nebraska Posts: 65	Hi Paris Hilton

04-30-2005, 05:09 PM	#19
Nighthawk76 Rachel Berry Forum Celebrity Join Date: Feb 28, 2003 Location: Illinois Posts: 23,254	Really good. It would make good lyrics to a song.

04-30-2005, 06:48 PM	#20
TheGreatPretender just because Forum Veteran Join Date: May 22, 2004 Location: Trying to think of a creative, witty location. Posts: 7,628	I like it alot ecpsecially the chorus, but I honestly think in some parts you are just trying to rhyme and that doesn't make for good lyrics. Like the "We both hate Hilary Duff" verse.

05-01-2005, 01:03 AM	#24
Max Whittaker I want Serenity back Forum Veteran Join Date: Apr 30, 2001 Posts: 6,180	I'm the good-looking one.