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OjiNmagnatebonnO · 03-04-2004, 08:18 PM

Starts: ( Raina and Stacy's house)
Raina: *relaxing on the floor in her Pjs*
Stacy: *Bringing them chips and while Rainas on the phone with Dom*
Raina: Yeah..Dom! Thats crazy! I am not going to no club to pretend to be your hooker just so you can get back at one of your friends!
Dom: Ya know hes jealous and says he dont like you but I think he does. He always trys to look at you! His eyes are glued to your pretty little butt girl...
Raina: Dom! (she said embarassed) you are so.. weird!
Dom: Ok..im just playing with you..but he is jealous.
Raina: Well, just tell him that he needs to get over it..and you just happened to get lucky! Thatll teach him not to be a jackass to you! (she teased)
Dom: (laughed) Yeah I was lucky wasnt I? I have to go..Raina?? Raina??
Raina: *got too distracted in the movie her and Stacy rented*
Dom: Now Im gonna go inpregnate another one of my female fans..bye baby..(didnt really hang up)
Raina: Wha..what the hell (she said just waking up*)
Dom: See now I knew you loved me! Just another logan you laid on me to get your attention.
Raina: Bye Dom..Ill call you tomorrow and maybe you can stop by..
Dom: Love ya..*hangs up)
Stacy: Dom..huh? (she said noisy)
Raina: Stace I told you about Dom.
Stacy: Are you guys serious?
Raina: I guess..
Stacy: Ahh..(she said in a sarcastic voice)
Raina: Its..well if you have to know..I really like him and have been seeing him..I just am a little picky about guys..and Im very cautious...
Stacy: Oh..me too.
Raina: Do you realize something?
Stacy: What?
Raina: Girl..we need some furniture.
Stacy: Yeah..true.
Raina: Well shop for it on next Saturday.
Stacy: I cant wait..all new stuff!
Raina: Im gonna go put these away before I eat the whole bag!

More later xoxoJessie**

DIVISION/NMFAN4466 · 03-04-2004, 08:24 PM

BROVO more please

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 03-04-2004, 09:13 PM

That was great!! More please..

OjiNmagnatebonnO · 03-07-2004, 12:05 AM

Hey guys..i just mixed up Rainas lovers..i put Dom instead of Johnney. SrY..ill change his name. More

Starts: ( Magda looking at Ben and Gabe in picture album)
Magda: *stares at Ben and Gabe when they were both the same age*
Jinny: They look so much alike when they were 6.
Magda; Oh i know..
Jinny: When he was a baby he looked like ya..he looks more like ya now than Gabe.
Magda: Im thinking of actually starting all over again and actually having a marriage with Gabe. After we got married it was like we had never had a real marriage at all. The 1st week we were I found out that Ben had gotten diagnosed with Leukimia..and..
Jinny: Thats how..well not quite..how I felt with Jack.
Magda: So we do have something in common that makes us BOTH screwups right? (she said sarcasticlly)
Jinny: Mag..your not a screwup.
Magda: Yeah..then why did i cheat on my husband?
Jinny: You were..uh..
Magda; Screwed up at the time? she said trying not to laugh.
Jinny: Ok you got me! Maybe a little..
Jinny: But you have to put yourself back on your own feet.
Magda: Yeah..who am I to beat on myself..your pregnant! (she said laughing)
Jinny: Now that you said it..I hate to feel like I wanna laugh..but its true. Of all the times I screwed up..even with men..I never got knocked up!
Magda: Yeah..thats a new one.
Jinny: Oh...but seriously..what am I gonna do? Im scared..and I think I really really like Hank..hows this gonna make him feel..react?

More L8er xoxoJessie

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 03-07-2004, 12:10 AM

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OjiNmagnatebonnO · 03-07-2004, 12:58 AM

More fan fic!

Starts: ( Kates Office)
Kate: Well I had Raina and Stacy take the day off yesterday..Jinny and Magda took part of theday off..and Nate called in for desk work.
Kates Boss: Wow..all those inspectors got off easy??
Kate: They're good people..good cops..they deserve an easy time every now and then.
Kates Boss: Remember..dont treat them like babies..they shouldnt be taking days off..only when they are required too.
Kate: Sure.
Kates Boss: Glared..and left.
Kate: Whatever *mumbled afterwards*

( Division station)

Jinny: (sits at desk)
Magda: (walks around bored because Captain hasnt informed them about the case)
( Foreign Mexican bursts through the door limping.. saying " Help! Help! (pointing to her stomach)
Jinny: Oh my god..uh call 911.
Magda: We have to do something..she looks like shes about to deliver!
Jinny: Damn..umm quick get her in the other room *where the cops talk to the criminals*
Magda: We were taught how to deliver a baby..I pretty much am clear.
Jinny: Yeah? Well not me.
Magda: What do you mean? You did take the test..right? (lady moaning in the backround while another police woman gets her in the room)
Jinny: I did..but I am a little rusty with it.
Magda: Jin hand me those blankets and gloves Im going to do this!
Jinny: Mag..Im kind og uncomfortable with this..
Magda: Jinny, slide these under her..behind..(she demanded throwing her gloves to slip on)
Jinny: Oh god..she said in a panic.
Magda: I guess my 1st step is to uh..check how far she is huh? (she said uncomfortably)
Jinny: I guess thats what they do.
Magda: Come on Jin slide it under..further..
Jinny: I am! I am! Mag..
Magda: Yeah...
Jinny: This is beginning to scare me (she said as the lady screamed oh my gosh oh my gosh)
Magda: *looked at Jinny for a minute* Its going to be fine ma'am. Can you speak much english?
Lady: *Babbling Mexican*
Magda: *said in Mexican..or Spanish language that she is going to check her and try not to worry and said she'd help her through the labor*
Jinny: Oh great..a foreign woman in labor and were the ones that have to look in there and get taht baby out!
Magda: You can do this Jinny..just try.
Jinny: Ok Lets start..I guess she should push since shes what dialated?
Magda; Um..10 cm about.
Jinny: So its time?
Magda: You guess right!
Lady: *Starts pushing* (screams and wacks Jinny in the face*
Jinny: Woah..woah..calm down! Oh my god the head is out Mag! Damn this is horrible even imagining it!
Magda; Jinny I need you to hold the head for me while I get the sucction out of the 1st aid bag.
Jinny: Oh God..
Jinny: (Goes over scared and holds it with a towel in her hands)
Lady: *Screams in spanish really loud and she yelled " Mucho head!! Mucho head!! (Which it was a big head)
Magda: Wow! Thats a big head there its looks like about 38 inches wide!
Jinny: Jesus! Hey..umm ladywould you please try to hold in your screams your really freaking me out here! I am pregnant and I would appreciate a good impression on me!!
Lady: (her baby slides out into Jinnys hands)
Jinny: *shakes as she holds the baby*
Magda: Carefully nervously takes the baby boy.
Jinny: That is a big boy!
Magda: Looks about 10 to 12 pounds..its chubby and has the most adorable eyes and cheeks!
Jinny: And the whitest slimy peelings on him..
Magda: You sure knowhow to ruin a good birth moment Jin!
Jinny: Well..it is true..
Lady: Leon! Boy!
Magda; Yeah..(in spanish)its a strong little boy..Leon you say? Hes got beautiful eyes.
Lady: Gracias..
Magda: oh my name is Magda..and this little helper is my partner Jinny. ( were homoside inspectors) (she said in spanich)
(Police officer helped the lady out to the ambulance)
Magda: Comes out..Well I guess we did do something good today.
Jinny: Uh huh..scary too (she laughed)
Magda: Oh Jin, youll be fine!
Kate: Comes over to them
Kate: great Job girls!

xoxoJessie More later almost end of ep!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 03-07-2004, 01:31 AM

That was great!!!! More NOW please?????

OjiNmagnatebonnO · 03-07-2004, 01:36 AM

Im a fast poster guys ill be back tomorrow. bye

OjiNmagnatebonnO · 03-07-2004, 04:23 PM

Starts: ( Nate leaving his desk from the division station)
Nate: * bumps into Raina*
Raina: Oh sorry Nate..
Nate: No my fault..
Raina: Nate, is something bothering you?
Nate: Come on lets talk..I need someone to talk to as of now
Raina: Really?..im right behind you..
Nate: *Goes to a bench out in the hallway*
Raina: Ok Nate..lay it on me.
Nate: Alright, see..theres this woman that I known in high school..well hardly knew..and we met one day and since then we were inseperable.
Raina: Oh..a woman..huh?
Nate: Yeahh..her name is Jackie..i loved her since Iw as in high school..i wanted her so bad to be my girlfriend.
Raina: So whats the problem?
Nate: I read her year boom and it said a bunch of nasty comments in it about her being a slut and all and messing w/ ppls boyfriends. Even the guys called her a slut!
Raina: Oh..man.
Nate: I mean I knew there was something wrong..she couldnt of have been perfect.
Raina: yeah, Nate..if I were you..I'd drop his woman.
Nate: he came cryng in my arms saying her husband deosnt appreciate her at all and just bosses her around. Her self respect is gone..and I was the only one she can turn to as of now..
Raina: Well, that is a tough position Nate.
Raina: If I were you I would forget this..before you get mixed up with this woman who could possibly become crazy!
Nate: *Sighs*
Raina: Ok..well if you need anymore advide..come to me..dont be afraid to. Im your partner..partners are there for eachother.
Nate: Thanks Raina..I uh appreciate it.

xoxojessie More later im getting icecream yum yum fattening! LOL ByE

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 03-07-2004, 04:45 PM

MORE!!!

OjiNmagnatebonnO · 03-10-2004, 01:09 AM

Starts: (Jinny's appointment)
Magda: You will love my OB Jin.
Jinny: I hope so...
Magda: You'll be fine, you just have to think this through..alot!
Jinny: I know..and maybe ya know it will work out.
Magda: Just relax..and take it one step at a time.
OB: *Walks in* Hey Magda, how are you? (she said in a pleasant voice)
Magda: Im fine and so is Benjamin.
OB: Who do we have here in my office?
Magda: This is my dear friend Jinny Exstead. This is her first baby and shes a little nervous.
Magda: Ok, Ill just wait outside..
Jinny: Uh..shes gonna stay..
Magda: Ok..id be glad to stay!
OB: Great..any friend of Magdas is a friend of mine!
Magda: Jin, you can let go of my shirt now..just sit tight..
OB: Ok, hun can you just lift up your shirt, a bit for me.
Jinny: *Does it slowly*
OB: *Takes out a heart beat monitor probe*
Jinny: Uh..wait..what is that?
OB: Oh this is a heart beat probe..now I would normally use a stephiscope..but this is alot more fun. (she said ina lively voice)
Jinny: *Looked a little unsure*
OB: Ohh, dont be afraid hunny I would never hurt you or your baby..and I enjoy what I do. And am very good at it. (she said putting the probe gently to the side of her stomach)
Jinny: *Hears a low sound* *silent*
Jinny: Looks around) Ok, is there..something wrong?
OB: No..no thats good oh thats real good..(beat gets louder as she turns up the volume)
Magda: *Gets excited* There it is, Jin
OB: Your baby has a very strong and active heartbeat!
Jinny: Woah..
OB: *Gets beeped for a 3 minute procedure*
OB: Oh Im so sorry..I have to..well Ill be right back.
Jinny: *Covers her face and thinks for a minute**sighs*
Magda: I know Jin, your having doubts and everything..
Jinny: *Smiles a little*
Magda: Maybe not...
Jinny: I dont know Magda, Is it possible to fall in love at first..sound? (she said getting a little happier and emotional)
Magda: Oh Jinny, yes yes it is! (She said excited)
Jinny: Oh my, Mag, Im gonna have a b..aby.
Magda: Yeah!
Jinny: Ya know Magda, I can't tell you how many times I've had unprotected sex with men I hardly knew. When I was drunk, and now I meet this incredible man..who I care about and i know he cares about me..and I dont know. Maybe it was just meant..to be.
Jinny: Its gonna be fine, right..
Magda: Jin its gonna be more than fine.
Jinny: Oh I am hoping it turns out that way.
Jinny: All I have to do now is..tell Hank. (she said a little jumpy)
Magda: Hmm..well Congradulations..! *Goes to hug Jinny)
Jinny: *Looks like I guess so* *Hugs mag back*

End of this ep..going on to where jinny tells hank!)

Bye xoxoJessie
Lifetime Productions
Directed by Deborah Joy Levine

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 03-10-2004, 01:14 AM

Awww that was soo sweet. Can't wait to read the next episode.

03-04-2004, 08:18 PM	#16
OjiNmagnatebonnO Jessica NMK FlaVa Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 08, 2004 Location: Levittown, Pa..wish Hollywood though!! Posts: 147	MorE Starts: ( Raina and Stacy's house) Raina: relaxing on the floor in her Pjs Stacy: Bringing them chips and while Rainas on the phone with Dom Raina: Yeah..Dom! Thats crazy! I am not going to no club to pretend to be your hooker just so you can get back at one of your friends! Dom: Ya know hes jealous and says he dont like you but I think he does. He always trys to look at you! His eyes are glued to your pretty little butt girl... Raina: Dom! (she said embarassed) you are so.. weird! Dom: Ok..im just playing with you..but he is jealous. Raina: Well, just tell him that he needs to get over it..and you just happened to get lucky! Thatll teach him not to be a jackass to you! (she teased) Dom: (laughed) Yeah I was lucky wasnt I? I have to go..Raina?? Raina?? Raina: got too distracted in the movie her and Stacy rented Dom: Now Im gonna go inpregnate another one of my female fans..bye baby..(didnt really hang up) Raina: Wha..what the hell (she said just waking up) Dom: See now I knew you loved me! Just another logan you laid on me to get your attention. Raina: Bye Dom..Ill call you tomorrow and maybe you can stop by.. Dom: Love ya..hangs up) Stacy: Dom..huh? (she said noisy) Raina: Stace I told you about Dom. Stacy: Are you guys serious? Raina: I guess.. Stacy: Ahh..(she said in a sarcastic voice) Raina: Its..well if you have to know..I really like him and have been seeing him..I just am a little picky about guys..and Im very cautious... Stacy: Oh..me too. Raina: Do you realize something? Stacy: What? Raina: Girl..we need some furniture. Stacy: Yeah..true. Raina: Well shop for it on next Saturday. Stacy: I cant wait..all new stuff! Raina: Im gonna go put these away before I eat the whole bag! More later xoxoJessie**
	__________________ x0x0Jessie aka Div gerl or NMK Name: Jessica Remix: JessIe Hair: Dark copper brown Eyes: Hazel Nationalities: Spanish, Italian, Turkish, Czech, French, Irish Hobbies: NMK, TD, Lifetime tv, writing, reading, friends, online..ect. Middle name: ElizaBeth Foods: ALOT Music: Pop/rock School: BCTHS Age: 14 B-day: May 22, 1989 Love: Nate..Jon Hamm Which division gal do I take after?: JINNY totally! Shoe size: 8 Makeup: Eyeliner Sport: Ping pong, tennis, and pool. Season: Spring.summer Drink: Lemonade Waterice: Lemon/lemonlime Allergic to: Mascara and certain eye shadows. Best feature about me: My eyelashes, (hair color and face..cause of Jinny) Weight: 115-116 Height: 5 ft 3 ANY ThiNg elSe YouS aLL waNNa knOw??? OkaY TheN..ByE x0x0 Funfact: Look like Michelle branch and NMK Proud Nancy McKeon lookalike!! L0ve The Division Foreva!**~

03-04-2004, 08:24 PM	#17
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	__________________ WHEN U R A COP,WOMEN,MOTHER,FRIEND,LOVER.. STRIKING THE RITE BALANCE IS EVERYTHING!! EVERY LITTLE DETAIL CAN TELL ONE BIG STORY!! WATCH JINNY,MAGDA,RAINA,NATE,CAPITN, AND,STACY ON THE DIVISION ONLY ON LIFETIME!!

03-07-2004, 12:05 AM	#19
OjiNmagnatebonnO Jessica NMK FlaVa Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 08, 2004 Location: Levittown, Pa..wish Hollywood though!! Posts: 147	MoRe pplz Hey guys..i just mixed up Rainas lovers..i put Dom instead of Johnney. SrY..ill change his name. More Starts: ( Magda looking at Ben and Gabe in picture album) Magda: stares at Ben and Gabe when they were both the same age Jinny: They look so much alike when they were 6. Magda; Oh i know.. Jinny: When he was a baby he looked like ya..he looks more like ya now than Gabe. Magda: Im thinking of actually starting all over again and actually having a marriage with Gabe. After we got married it was like we had never had a real marriage at all. The 1st week we were I found out that Ben had gotten diagnosed with Leukimia..and.. Jinny: Thats how..well not quite..how I felt with Jack. Magda: So we do have something in common that makes us BOTH screwups right? (she said sarcasticlly) Jinny: Mag..your not a screwup. Magda: Yeah..then why did i cheat on my husband? Jinny: You were..uh.. Magda; Screwed up at the time? she said trying not to laugh. Jinny: Ok you got me! Maybe a little.. Jinny: But you have to put yourself back on your own feet. Magda: Yeah..who am I to beat on myself..your pregnant! (she said laughing) Jinny: Now that you said it..I hate to feel like I wanna laugh..but its true. Of all the times I screwed up..even with men..I never got knocked up! Magda: Yeah..thats a new one. Jinny: Oh...but seriously..what am I gonna do? Im scared..and I think I really really like Hank..hows this gonna make him feel..react? More L8er xoxoJessie

03-07-2004, 12:58 AM	#21
OjiNmagnatebonnO Jessica NMK FlaVa Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 08, 2004 Location: Levittown, Pa..wish Hollywood though!! Posts: 147	MoRe More fan fic! Starts: ( Kates Office) Kate: Well I had Raina and Stacy take the day off yesterday..Jinny and Magda took part of theday off..and Nate called in for desk work. Kates Boss: Wow..all those inspectors got off easy?? Kate: They're good people..good cops..they deserve an easy time every now and then. Kates Boss: Remember..dont treat them like babies..they shouldnt be taking days off..only when they are required too. Kate: Sure. Kates Boss: Glared..and left. Kate: Whatever mumbled afterwards ( Division station) Jinny: (sits at desk) Magda: (walks around bored because Captain hasnt informed them about the case) ( Foreign Mexican bursts through the door limping.. saying " Help! Help! (pointing to her stomach) Jinny: Oh my god..uh call 911. Magda: We have to do something..she looks like shes about to deliver! Jinny: Damn..umm quick get her in the other room where the cops talk to the criminals Magda: We were taught how to deliver a baby..I pretty much am clear. Jinny: Yeah? Well not me. Magda: What do you mean? You did take the test..right? (lady moaning in the backround while another police woman gets her in the room) Jinny: I did..but I am a little rusty with it. Magda: Jin hand me those blankets and gloves Im going to do this! Jinny: Mag..Im kind og uncomfortable with this.. Magda: Jinny, slide these under her..behind..(she demanded throwing her gloves to slip on) Jinny: Oh god..she said in a panic. Magda: I guess my 1st step is to uh..check how far she is huh? (she said uncomfortably) Jinny: I guess thats what they do. Magda: Come on Jin slide it under..further.. Jinny: I am! I am! Mag.. Magda: Yeah... Jinny: This is beginning to scare me (she said as the lady screamed oh my gosh oh my gosh) Magda: looked at Jinny for a minute Its going to be fine ma'am. Can you speak much english? Lady: Babbling Mexican Magda: said in Mexican..or Spanish language that she is going to check her and try not to worry and said she'd help her through the labor Jinny: Oh great..a foreign woman in labor and were the ones that have to look in there and get taht baby out! Magda: You can do this Jinny..just try. Jinny: Ok Lets start..I guess she should push since shes what dialated? Magda; Um..10 cm about. Jinny: So its time? Magda: You guess right! Lady: Starts pushing (screams and wacks Jinny in the face* Jinny: Woah..woah..calm down! Oh my god the head is out Mag! Damn this is horrible even imagining it! Magda; Jinny I need you to hold the head for me while I get the sucction out of the 1st aid bag. Jinny: Oh God.. Jinny: (Goes over scared and holds it with a towel in her hands) Lady: Screams in spanish really loud and she yelled " Mucho head!! Mucho head!! (Which it was a big head) Magda: Wow! Thats a big head there its looks like about 38 inches wide! Jinny: Jesus! Hey..umm ladywould you please try to hold in your screams your really freaking me out here! I am pregnant and I would appreciate a good impression on me!! Lady: (her baby slides out into Jinnys hands) Jinny: shakes as she holds the baby* Magda: Carefully nervously takes the baby boy. Jinny: That is a big boy! Magda: Looks about 10 to 12 pounds..its chubby and has the most adorable eyes and cheeks! Jinny: And the whitest slimy peelings on him.. Magda: You sure knowhow to ruin a good birth moment Jin! Jinny: Well..it is true.. Lady: Leon! Boy! Magda; Yeah..(in spanish)its a strong little boy..Leon you say? Hes got beautiful eyes. Lady: Gracias.. Magda: oh my name is Magda..and this little helper is my partner Jinny. ( were homoside inspectors) (she said in spanich) (Police officer helped the lady out to the ambulance) Magda: Comes out..Well I guess we did do something good today. Jinny: Uh huh..scary too (she laughed) Magda: Oh Jin, youll be fine! Kate: Comes over to them Kate: great Job girls! xoxoJessie More later almost end of ep!

03-07-2004, 01:36 AM	#23
OjiNmagnatebonnO Jessica NMK FlaVa Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 08, 2004 Location: Levittown, Pa..wish Hollywood though!! Posts: 147	More tomorrow Im a fast poster guys ill be back tomorrow. bye

03-04-2004, 09:13 PM	#18
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	That was great!! More please..

03-07-2004, 12:10 AM	#20
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03-07-2004, 01:31 AM	#22
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	That was great!!!! More NOW please?????

03-07-2004, 04:23 PM	#24
OjiNmagnatebonnO Jessica NMK FlaVa Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 08, 2004 Location: Levittown, Pa..wish Hollywood though!! Posts: 147	MoRe Starts: ( Nate leaving his desk from the division station) Nate: * bumps into Raina* Raina: Oh sorry Nate.. Nate: No my fault.. Raina: Nate, is something bothering you? Nate: Come on lets talk..I need someone to talk to as of now Raina: Really?..im right behind you.. Nate: Goes to a bench out in the hallway Raina: Ok Nate..lay it on me. Nate: Alright, see..theres this woman that I known in high school..well hardly knew..and we met one day and since then we were inseperable. Raina: Oh..a woman..huh? Nate: Yeahh..her name is Jackie..i loved her since Iw as in high school..i wanted her so bad to be my girlfriend. Raina: So whats the problem? Nate: I read her year boom and it said a bunch of nasty comments in it about her being a slut and all and messing w/ ppls boyfriends. Even the guys called her a slut! Raina: Oh..man. Nate: I mean I knew there was something wrong..she couldnt of have been perfect. Raina: yeah, Nate..if I were you..I'd drop his woman. Nate: he came cryng in my arms saying her husband deosnt appreciate her at all and just bosses her around. Her self respect is gone..and I was the only one she can turn to as of now.. Raina: Well, that is a tough position Nate. Raina: If I were you I would forget this..before you get mixed up with this woman who could possibly become crazy! Nate: Sighs Raina: Ok..well if you need anymore advide..come to me..dont be afraid to. Im your partner..partners are there for eachother. Nate: Thanks Raina..I uh appreciate it. xoxojessie More later im getting icecream yum yum fattening! LOL ByE

03-07-2004, 04:45 PM	#25
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03-10-2004, 01:09 AM	#26
OjiNmagnatebonnO Jessica NMK FlaVa Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 08, 2004 Location: Levittown, Pa..wish Hollywood though!! Posts: 147	MorEs!! Starts: (Jinny's appointment) Magda: You will love my OB Jin. Jinny: I hope so... Magda: You'll be fine, you just have to think this through..alot! Jinny: I know..and maybe ya know it will work out. Magda: Just relax..and take it one step at a time. OB: Walks in Hey Magda, how are you? (she said in a pleasant voice) Magda: Im fine and so is Benjamin. OB: Who do we have here in my office? Magda: This is my dear friend Jinny Exstead. This is her first baby and shes a little nervous. Magda: Ok, Ill just wait outside.. Jinny: Uh..shes gonna stay.. Magda: Ok..id be glad to stay! OB: Great..any friend of Magdas is a friend of mine! Magda: Jin, you can let go of my shirt now..just sit tight.. OB: Ok, hun can you just lift up your shirt, a bit for me. Jinny: Does it slowly OB: Takes out a heart beat monitor probe Jinny: Uh..wait..what is that? OB: Oh this is a heart beat probe..now I would normally use a stephiscope..but this is alot more fun. (she said ina lively voice) Jinny: Looked a little unsure OB: Ohh, dont be afraid hunny I would never hurt you or your baby..and I enjoy what I do. And am very good at it. (she said putting the probe gently to the side of her stomach) Jinny: Hears a low sound silent Jinny: Looks around) Ok, is there..something wrong? OB: No..no thats good oh thats real good..(beat gets louder as she turns up the volume) Magda: Gets excited There it is, Jin OB: Your baby has a very strong and active heartbeat! Jinny: Woah.. OB: Gets beeped for a 3 minute procedure OB: Oh Im so sorry..I have to..well Ill be right back. Jinny: Covers her face and thinks for a minutesighs Magda: I know Jin, your having doubts and everything.. Jinny: Smiles a little Magda: Maybe not... Jinny: I dont know Magda, Is it possible to fall in love at first..sound? (she said getting a little happier and emotional) Magda: Oh Jinny, yes yes it is! (She said excited) Jinny: Oh my, Mag, Im gonna have a b..aby. Magda: Yeah! Jinny: Ya know Magda, I can't tell you how many times I've had unprotected sex with men I hardly knew. When I was drunk, and now I meet this incredible man..who I care about and i know he cares about me..and I dont know. Maybe it was just meant..to be. Jinny: Its gonna be fine, right.. Magda: Jin its gonna be more than fine. Jinny: Oh I am hoping it turns out that way. Jinny: All I have to do now is..tell Hank. (she said a little jumpy) Magda: Hmm..well Congradulations..! Goes to hug Jinny) Jinny: Looks like I guess so* Hugs mag back End of this ep..going on to where jinny tells hank!) Bye xoxoJessie Lifetime Productions Directed by Deborah Joy Levine

03-10-2004, 01:14 AM	#27
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Awww that was soo sweet. Can't wait to read the next episode.