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Janice Johnson · 08-04-2005, 11:06 AM

Why am I being ignored?

This thread used to have a lot of posts, and only ONE other person replied to this thread in a LONG time.........

Where are all the replies that should be here?

Janice Johnson · 08-08-2005, 11:53 AM

No one is answering to my thread?

Janice Johnson · 09-13-2005, 11:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheGreatPretender

That guy is scary. My mom used to watch his tapes.

That guy is Richard Simmosn, right?

Janice Johnson · 10-20-2005, 12:35 PM

I wrote a rewrite to this story. Tell me how you like it.

"Hey Ralph." John said to Ralph at school. "Hey yourself," Ralph said to John. Ralph gave John a little kiss on the lips. John smiled at him and said, "Need a ride home?" Ralph answered, "Yes". Ralph didn't drive and usually rode the bus to school and home. John said, "Okay", and they walked to the school's parking lot together. John opened the car doors and they went in. The put on their seatbelts. John started the engine and he and Ralph rode in relaxed silence. John stopped in front of Ralph's house. He asked Ralph if he could walk him to the front door. Ralph said "Yes." Ralph's mom Mary was at work; she wouldn't see John walking Ralph to the front door. Little did he know, she was home, but her car was in the shop. They went to the front door. She saw everything and heard everything. Mary heard John say, "Come here", to Ralph and saw him wrap his arms around Ralph, bring him close to him, and give him a kiss on the mouth. She saw her son wrap his arms around John and kiss him back.

They kissed for a little while. Her son had a boyfriend! She was shocked, but determined to accept him the way he was. They finally stopped. Ralph looked around furtively and wiped his mouth. John said "Goodbye," and Ralph began fumbling around for his keys. Mary had to get away from the living room window fast! She hid in the kitchen. Ralph came in , closed the door, and had a big, happy smile on his face. Mary came out of the kitchen.

"Mom, what are you doing here?" Ralph's smile disappeared and he looked nervous and a little scared. Then he smiled an obvious forced smile.

"Ralph, my car is in the shop. I came home early because I need it to be fixed," she said, looking at Ralph closely. Don't worry. I saw you and your "friend" a little while ago. She thought. Aloud she said, "Why are you home so early?" Ralph answered,"My friend dropped me off", nervously

"What's that friend's name?" Mary asked. "His name is John." He said, looking nervous.

"Oh. He must be a good friend of yours", Mary said.

"One of the best," Ralph agreed nervously.

"I'm going to bed now," Mary told Ralph. "Goodnight." She of course wasn't going to sleep actually. She was going to eavesdrop on Ralph. Surely he'd call his boyfriend. She would discreetly listen in on their conversation.

Sure enough, in about five minutes, Ralph called John on John's
Cell phone. Mary was listening in.

Ralph said, "Hi John. Do you know what happened?"

John said, "What?"

"My mom was home when I came home." Ralph seemed panicked.

"No!" John said shocked. "Did she see us?"

"I don't know. She knows you dropped me off though."

"It doesn't really even hint that she knows that we kissed before you got in, “John said soothingly.

"You're right. Thanks."

"Anytime." John said. "You know you're my favorite boy, Ralph." He gave him a kiss on the phone.

Ralph giggled happily and told John that he'd see him tomorrow and hung up the phone.

Mary hung up the phone too and pretended to sleep in case Ralph came in. He didn't. Mary lied in bed for a while, then pretended to "wake up". She got out of the room.

She went into the living room. Ralph was sitting on the couch, reading a book.

"Hi, Ralph," she said casually. "How have you been doing?"

"I'm fine," Ralph said.

"Have anything you wanna tell me about? Anything you wanna get off your chest?"

"No, mom." he said. Ralph was obviously lying.

"Anybody special in your life? Anyone new that you care about?" She asked him pointedly.
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Janice Johnson · 10-22-2005, 12:41 PM

(Where he is NOT easily accepted).

Mary said to Ralph, "Maybe it's time you told your dad the truth about you and John."

"No! He'll disown me! He hates gays! He will not accept me", he said, scared.

Mary said, "I know you're afraid of your father. I know he scares you. I know about the fear you have of your father, but this is something you have to tell him."

"But dad wants me to be perfect," he said with a slight sneer on his face. "And being gay in his eyes isn't perfect. I have to live up to his standards and be a well functioning STRAIGHT person," he said, his sneer deepening.

"Look, Ralph, it's time for you to get this off your chest," Mary said.

Ralph said "Okay. "I'll be dead by tonight, though ",he said negatively.

"No, you won't. It will be fine", Mary said.

Ralph went up to his room and begun thinking of what to say to Steve. Steve was one of the toughest fathers Ralph ever knew a person could have. How could he tell Steve about he and John?

Ever since he was a little kid, Ralph's father scared the scrap out of him. He put fear into Ralph's heart. He always treated Ralph sternly, and frankly, cruelly.

Soon, it was time for dinner and Steve showed up. Ralph sat down, looking at his mom with frightened eyes. She nodded. Ralph ate some food, which was hard to do with his problem.

"Ralph, you little no good varmit, how was your day?" Steve asked, giving him an ugly sneer. He punched Ralph in the arm. Hard.

"Fine", Ralph said, scared half to death. "Dad, I have something to tell you."

"Yeah, you little no good piece of nothing?"

Ralph stammered a little and said, "I. I."

"Spit it out", Steve said looking at him with a weird look in his eyes.

"Dad, I have a boyfriend. I'm gay.", he said automatically shielding his face.

Steve stood up, his eyes flashing, his eyes red, and looking ready to blow up.

"Wait. Did I hear you correctly? " "Did I hear you say that you were gay?"

"Ye.Ye. Yes." Ralph stammered.

"Listen to me you little ******. "I don't have a gay son, and I will not tolerate people knowing I have a sissy, gay, queer, homosexual b.i.t.c.h living in my house!" I don't have you you gay b.i.t.c.h! Why don't you move in with your gay a.s.s boyfriend?"

Ralph could barely take it anymore. He ran up to his room, flopped onto his bed, and cried his eyes out. He was devastated at the way his father had spoken to him. His mother came in, trying to comfort him. He continued crying. His mom rubbed his back, trying to sooth him.

"Ralph, your father loves you. It's just that he's shocked. He didn't expect you to admit that."

"No!" Ralph said, explosively. "He doesn't want me in HIS house anymore." He got off the bed, and got out a suitcase and began packing his suitcase.

"Where are you going Ralph?"She asked.

"HE wants me out of HIS house. HE wants me to go live with John", Ralph said angrily. "So that's what I'll do.I'll leave HIM alone with you." Ralph was sad and angry.

"No, honey, you can't do that.You're only 16. And besides, who says John wants you living with him?", Mary said, realistically.

"I don't care. If John doesn't want me, I'll check into a homeless shelter. I'll live in the alley. I'll live under the highway. I'll live with a relative. As long as HE doesn't see me, HE should be happy."

Mary said, "No, it's not like that. Your dad doesn't mean what he said to you. I"ll go get him."

"No!" Ralph said. "He'll humiliate and berate me!"

Mary still called him.

Steve came in Ralph's room, looking at him as if he were a maggot. His face looked disgusted.

Mary asked him to talk to Ralph. So Steve did. He said, "I'll accept you when you give up your boyfriend. I don't want you seeing your boyfriend anymore."

"No! I love him!" I won't stop seeing him", he said, knowing he didn't want to give up John, his love.

"Then you are a ****** who is not my son," he said spitefully and bitingly.

Ralph finsished packing and said bye to his mom in a said, pain-filled, loving voice. To his dad, he said, "I won't see you later," in a cold voice, and stormed out of the room.

Mary followed him out of the room. "Don't leave Ralph. We can solve this. We can work it out."

"No we can't mom! HE won't accept me me." He just told me I wans't his son!", he said, more got tears running down his face. He put his hand on the front door.

"Ralph, we love you," She said, wrapping her arms around him and wiping his tears. "Don't leave."

"Mom, I can't stay here with HIM hating me. He HATES me!", he said with explosive pain.

"Ralph, Steve doesn't hate you." He loves you from the bottom of his heart."

"If he loves me, he's got a funny way of showing it," he said sarcastically.

"Look, I'll call Steve, and we can all figure this out."

"No! Don't call him!" He doesn't want to see me now!" He screamed loudly.

"But, I have to. We have to settle this."

She called Steve out of Ralph's room. He came out and Ralph and he stared at each other icily.

"I want both of you to talk this situation out."

They looked at each other with stormy expressions, and then went to the table and sat down. They looked away from each other. Mary turned their heads so that they were now facing each other.

Mary said, "I know we have a problem here. Ralph is gay and had a boyfriend, and Steve doesn't accept gay people."

"That's right! I hate gay people!" Steve screamed loudly. "They're bad and rotten people!"

"My brother Charlie is gay", she said softly.

"Uncle Charlie is gay?" Ralph asked amazed and shocked.

"Yeah, my brother in law is one of the sisssiest wusses I have ever met." He is such a queer. No offense honey."

Mary said, "He has a very big heart, and is one of the nicest people around", she said, giving Steve a bad look.

"He's a ***!" Steve said disgustedly.

"That's not what you thought of him when he saved your life, honey", she said pointedly.

"Dad, Uncle Charlie saved your life?" Ralph asked amazed and shocked again.

"Yes", Steve admitted, and hung his head low, with a twisted and sorrowful expression on his face. "I once almost drowned, and he got in the water, got me, and put me on shore and gave me CPR. If it weren't for him, I would have died. I was grateful he was there that day."

"Why do you hate gays then?" Ralph asked softly.

"Ralph, I don't know why, but I just don't get along with them too well." But if gays are like Charlie, maybe they aren't so bad."

"Dad, do you hate me?", Ralph asked, curious to know.

"No", he said in a strained voice.

"Dad, that's made me so happy. I'm glad you don't hate me", he said happy.

"Ralph, it'll be hard, but I promise to try my best to accept you. You don't have to be perfect anymore, Ralph," he said giving Ralph a hug. "I love you and I'm sorry for the mean things I just said to you."

"Apology accepted", Ralph said. "Thank you."

"You're welcome."

"That worked out fine", Mary said, happily.

"You can unpack your things Ralph. "You're not going anywhere", Steve said with a big smile.

Ralph smiled and he did.

"Can I meet your boyfriend?" John asked.

"Oh I did already and he seems like a wonderful person", Mary said.

"You can meet him tomorrow", Ralph promised.

"Okay son."

BartSmith · 10-22-2005, 01:42 PM

J, you should never BEG people to reply to your messages.

That is sad and pathetic. Quote "Why isn't anyone replying to this thread anymore "Quote.

Janice Johnson · 10-22-2005, 02:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BartSmith

J, you should never BEG people to reply to your messages.

That is sad and pathetic. Quote "Why isn't anyone replying to this thread anymore "Quote.

You just did. You just replied to my thread.

Janice Johnson · 01-11-2006, 12:06 AM

Did you guys like my continuation? The one with Ralph's dad, Steve?

MsOrange · 01-11-2006, 08:34 AM

those two guys sound like they belong on that "queer eye" show. I can almost picture them snapping their wrists and stuff.

Yea, but anyway, time to move on to a diff. story... you've been rewriting and reposting and begging people to read it for 6 months.

swedeace · 01-11-2006, 10:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janice Johnson

Did you guys like my continuation? The one with Ralph's dad, Steve?

You might want to submit your story to a fanfiction site like www.fanfiction.net There are tons of stories for everyone to read. This way, you get more readers.

Janice Johnson · 01-11-2006, 11:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MsOrange

those two guys sound like they belong on that "queer eye" show. I can almost picture them snapping their wrists and stuff.

Yea, but anyway, time to move on to a diff. story... you've been rewriting and reposting and begging people to read it for 6 months.

What do you mean by "snapping their wrists"?

Dude111 · 05-26-2026, 06:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janice Johnson

Why am I being ignored?

This thread used to have a lot of posts, and only ONE other person replied to this thread in a LONG time.........

Where are all the replies that should be here?

Im sorry honey,I guess we got busy doing other stuff...

I think its wonderful you dont mind LGBQ,its very sweet of you... I dont think God minds who someone loves.. The world needs more love,ESPECIALLY NOW!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janice Johnson

Did you guys like my continuation? The one with Ralph's dad, Steve?

I like both parts... You have alot of caring and creativity Janice!

Im glad your still active with us

10-20-2005, 12:35 PM	#34
Janice Johnson Commercial Lover Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: May 30, 2003 Location: Miami, Florida Posts: 4,738	The rewrite! I wrote a rewrite to this story. Tell me how you like it. "Hey Ralph." John said to Ralph at school. "Hey yourself," Ralph said to John. Ralph gave John a little kiss on the lips. John smiled at him and said, "Need a ride home?" Ralph answered, "Yes". Ralph didn't drive and usually rode the bus to school and home. John said, "Okay", and they walked to the school's parking lot together. John opened the car doors and they went in. The put on their seatbelts. John started the engine and he and Ralph rode in relaxed silence. John stopped in front of Ralph's house. He asked Ralph if he could walk him to the front door. Ralph said "Yes." Ralph's mom Mary was at work; she wouldn't see John walking Ralph to the front door. Little did he know, she was home, but her car was in the shop. They went to the front door. She saw everything and heard everything. Mary heard John say, "Come here", to Ralph and saw him wrap his arms around Ralph, bring him close to him, and give him a kiss on the mouth. She saw her son wrap his arms around John and kiss him back. They kissed for a little while. Her son had a boyfriend! She was shocked, but determined to accept him the way he was. They finally stopped. Ralph looked around furtively and wiped his mouth. John said "Goodbye," and Ralph began fumbling around for his keys. Mary had to get away from the living room window fast! She hid in the kitchen. Ralph came in , closed the door, and had a big, happy smile on his face. Mary came out of the kitchen. "Mom, what are you doing here?" Ralph's smile disappeared and he looked nervous and a little scared. Then he smiled an obvious forced smile. "Ralph, my car is in the shop. I came home early because I need it to be fixed," she said, looking at Ralph closely. Don't worry. I saw you and your "friend" a little while ago. She thought. Aloud she said, "Why are you home so early?" Ralph answered,"My friend dropped me off", nervously "What's that friend's name?" Mary asked. "His name is John." He said, looking nervous. "Oh. He must be a good friend of yours", Mary said. "One of the best," Ralph agreed nervously. "I'm going to bed now," Mary told Ralph. "Goodnight." She of course wasn't going to sleep actually. She was going to eavesdrop on Ralph. Surely he'd call his boyfriend. She would discreetly listen in on their conversation. Sure enough, in about five minutes, Ralph called John on John's Cell phone. Mary was listening in. Ralph said, "Hi John. Do you know what happened?" John said, "What?" "My mom was home when I came home." Ralph seemed panicked. "No!" John said shocked. "Did she see us?" "I don't know. She knows you dropped me off though." "It doesn't really even hint that she knows that we kissed before you got in, “John said soothingly. "You're right. Thanks." "Anytime." John said. "You know you're my favorite boy, Ralph." He gave him a kiss on the phone. Ralph giggled happily and told John that he'd see him tomorrow and hung up the phone. Mary hung up the phone too and pretended to sleep in case Ralph came in. He didn't. Mary lied in bed for a while, then pretended to "wake up". She got out of the room. She went into the living room. Ralph was sitting on the couch, reading a book. "Hi, Ralph," she said casually. "How have you been doing?" "I'm fine," Ralph said. "Have anything you wanna tell me about? Anything you wanna get off your chest?" "No, mom." he said. Ralph was obviously lying. "Anybody special in your life? Anyone new that you care about?" She asked him pointedly. %0
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10-22-2005, 12:41 PM	#35
Janice Johnson Commercial Lover Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: May 30, 2003 Location: Miami, Florida Posts: 4,738	Okay, here is a continuation of the story (Where he is NOT easily accepted). Mary said to Ralph, "Maybe it's time you told your dad the truth about you and John." "No! He'll disown me! He hates gays! He will not accept me", he said, scared. Mary said, "I know you're afraid of your father. I know he scares you. I know about the fear you have of your father, but this is something you have to tell him." "But dad wants me to be perfect," he said with a slight sneer on his face. "And being gay in his eyes isn't perfect. I have to live up to his standards and be a well functioning STRAIGHT person," he said, his sneer deepening. "Look, Ralph, it's time for you to get this off your chest," Mary said. Ralph said "Okay. "I'll be dead by tonight, though ",he said negatively. "No, you won't. It will be fine", Mary said. Ralph went up to his room and begun thinking of what to say to Steve. Steve was one of the toughest fathers Ralph ever knew a person could have. How could he tell Steve about he and John? Ever since he was a little kid, Ralph's father scared the scrap out of him. He put fear into Ralph's heart. He always treated Ralph sternly, and frankly, cruelly. Soon, it was time for dinner and Steve showed up. Ralph sat down, looking at his mom with frightened eyes. She nodded. Ralph ate some food, which was hard to do with his problem. "Ralph, you little no good varmit, how was your day?" Steve asked, giving him an ugly sneer. He punched Ralph in the arm. Hard. "Fine", Ralph said, scared half to death. "Dad, I have something to tell you." "Yeah, you little no good piece of nothing?" Ralph stammered a little and said, "I. I." "Spit it out", Steve said looking at him with a weird look in his eyes. "Dad, I have a boyfriend. I'm gay.", he said automatically shielding his face. Steve stood up, his eyes flashing, his eyes red, and looking ready to blow up. "Wait. Did I hear you correctly? " "Did I hear you say that you were gay?" "Ye.Ye. Yes." Ralph stammered. "Listen to me you little ****. "I don't have a gay son, and I will not tolerate people knowing I have a sissy, gay, queer, homosexual b.i.t.c.h living in my house!" I don't have you you gay b.i.t.c.h! Why don't you move in with your gay a.s.s boyfriend?" Ralph could barely take it anymore. He ran up to his room, flopped onto his bed, and cried his eyes out. He was devastated at the way his father had spoken to him. His mother came in, trying to comfort him. He continued crying. His mom rubbed his back, trying to sooth him. "Ralph, your father loves you. It's just that he's shocked. He didn't expect you to admit that." "No!" Ralph said, explosively. "He doesn't want me in HIS house anymore." He got off the bed, and got out a suitcase and began packing his suitcase. "Where are you going Ralph?"She asked. "HE wants me out of HIS house. HE wants me to go live with John", Ralph said angrily. "So that's what I'll do.I'll leave HIM alone with you." Ralph was sad and angry. "No, honey, you can't do that.You're only 16. And besides, who says John wants you living with him?", Mary said, realistically. "I don't care. If John doesn't want me, I'll check into a homeless shelter. I'll live in the alley. I'll live under the highway. I'll live with a relative. As long as HE doesn't see me, HE should be happy." Mary said, "No, it's not like that. Your dad doesn't mean what he said to you. I"ll go get him." "No!" Ralph said. "He'll humiliate and berate me!" Mary still called him. Steve came in Ralph's room, looking at him as if he were a maggot. His face looked disgusted. Mary asked him to talk to Ralph. So Steve did. He said, "I'll accept you when you give up your boyfriend. I don't want you seeing your boyfriend anymore." "No! I love him!" I won't stop seeing him", he said, knowing he didn't want to give up John, his love. "Then you are a ** who is not my son," he said spitefully and bitingly. Ralph finsished packing and said bye to his mom in a said, pain-filled, loving voice. To his dad, he said, "I won't see you later," in a cold voice, and stormed out of the room. Mary followed him out of the room. "Don't leave Ralph. We can solve this. We can work it out." "No we can't mom! HE won't accept me me." He just told me I wans't his son!", he said, more got tears running down his face. He put his hand on the front door. "Ralph, we love you," She said, wrapping her arms around him and wiping his tears. "Don't leave." "Mom, I can't stay here with HIM hating me. He HATES me!", he said with explosive pain. "Ralph, Steve doesn't hate you." He loves you from the bottom of his heart." "If he loves me, he's got a funny way of showing it," he said sarcastically. "Look, I'll call Steve, and we can all figure this out." "No! Don't call him!" He doesn't want to see me now!" He screamed loudly. "But, I have to. We have to settle this." She called Steve out of Ralph's room. He came out and Ralph and he stared at each other icily. "I want both of you to talk this situation out." They looked at each other with stormy expressions, and then went to the table and sat down. They looked away from each other. Mary turned their heads so that they were now facing each other. Mary said, "I know we have a problem here. Ralph is gay and had a boyfriend, and Steve doesn't accept gay people." "That's right! I hate gay people!" Steve screamed loudly. "They're bad and rotten people!" "My brother Charlie is gay", she said softly. "Uncle Charlie is gay?" Ralph asked amazed and shocked. "Yeah, my brother in law is one of the sisssiest wusses I have ever met." He is such a queer. No offense honey." Mary said, "He has a very big heart, and is one of the nicest people around", she said, giving Steve a bad look. "He's a *!" Steve said disgustedly. "That's not what you thought of him when he saved your life, honey", she said pointedly. "Dad, Uncle Charlie saved your life?" Ralph asked amazed and shocked again. "Yes", Steve admitted, and hung his head low, with a twisted and sorrowful expression on his face. "I once almost drowned, and he got in the water, got me, and put me on shore and gave me CPR. If it weren't for him, I would have died. I was grateful he was there that day." "Why do you hate gays then?" Ralph asked softly. "Ralph, I don't know why, but I just don't get along with them too well." But if gays are like Charlie, maybe they aren't so bad." "Dad, do you hate me?", Ralph asked, curious to know. "No", he said in a strained voice. "Dad, that's made me so happy. I'm glad you don't hate me", he said happy. "Ralph, it'll be hard, but I promise to try my best to accept you. You don't have to be perfect anymore, Ralph," he said giving Ralph a hug. "I love you and I'm sorry for the mean things I just said to you." "Apology accepted", Ralph said. "Thank you." "You're welcome." "That worked out fine", Mary said, happily. "You can unpack your things Ralph. "You're not going anywhere", Steve said with a big smile. Ralph smiled and he did. "Can I meet your boyfriend?" John asked. "Oh I did already and he seems like a wonderful person", Mary said. "You can meet him tomorrow", Ralph promised. "Okay son."
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10-22-2005, 01:42 PM	#36
BartSmith Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Dec 13, 2004 Posts: 65	Sad, very sad, J, you should never BEG people to reply to your messages. That is sad and pathetic. Quote "Why isn't anyone replying to this thread anymore "Quote.

08-04-2005, 11:06 AM	#31
Janice Johnson Commercial Lover Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: May 30, 2003 Location: Miami, Florida Posts: 4,738	Why am I being ignored? This thread used to have a lot of posts, and only ONE other person replied to this thread in a LONG time......... Where are all the replies that should be here?

08-08-2005, 11:53 AM	#32
Janice Johnson Commercial Lover Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: May 30, 2003 Location: Miami, Florida Posts: 4,738	No one is answering to my thread?

01-11-2006, 12:06 AM	#38
Janice Johnson Commercial Lover Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: May 30, 2003 Location: Miami, Florida Posts: 4,738	Did you guys like my continuation? The one with Ralph's dad, Steve?

01-11-2006, 08:34 AM	#39
MsOrange Bringin' Sexy Back Forum Veteran Join Date: Dec 27, 2004 Posts: 6,133	those two guys sound like they belong on that "queer eye" show. I can almost picture them snapping their wrists and stuff. Yea, but anyway, time to move on to a diff. story... you've been rewriting and reposting and begging people to read it for 6 months.