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Join Date: Mar 30, 2001
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Peter-Umm well, she didn't want me and I wanted her.
Magda-What the Hell!!!! Peter-Hey I asked u didn't want me, u knew I waould be good for you and Ben. Magda-Ok Peter I don't believe you. I told you that I care about you as a friend, not anymore, but I did. I just didn't luv u. Peter-Magda I'm I'm sorry there ya happy. Magda-Uh nope Peter-WHAT!!!!!!! Magda-Peter you raped me, that's a serious crime. So you got urself in this mess. Jinny-Yeah Peter, this is your fault. Peter-But But But Jinny-PETER SHUT-UP!!!! Now you know what happens on a rape case right... Peter-Yeah all in all the person is in jail for like a really long time. Magda-Well that's what's going to happen to you Peter. It's your fault you should've thought before you did this. Peter-Fine. Ok i don't know is that the end wait u finish it it's not done |
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Join Date: Mar 22, 2001
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okay!
Jinny: Any last comments peter before you leave the face of the living? Peter: Yes! Magda i didn't mean to hurt you. i am sorry. i wnet crazy! i deserve more than i get. i am soooooo sorry. that was no way to treat you. Magda: You did! Peter you WERE my best friend! Peter: (looks up and breaks down into tears) i ruined my life! everything i worked for! Magda: im sorry. u shoulda..(interupted) Peter: i know..thought about that before i....(cries harder) it's just i worked soooo hard! for nothing now! Jinny: Oh, well, times up. your coming w/ me! Magda: No! wait...i am not pressing charges! Your turn! |
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Jinny-MAGDA!!!!! I DON"T BELIEVE U!!!! okay lets take this in the hall.
Magda-fine. (hall) Jinny-OMG! magda are u serious he raped you. Magda-I'm serious. He didn't mean to. Jinny-Magda think here...uh he's a cop he knows what's against the law and what's not. Magda-Listen Jinny he's like me Best friend. Jinny-MAGDA I DON"T REALLY CARE RIGHT NOW!! Magda-Okay Jinny, he did rape me and sexually harrass me but still Jinny-Magda listen to urself he raped u and sexually harrassed u. You've got to press charges what he did is against the law. Magda-I geuss ur right i'll press charges. Jinny-Good cuz he'll get everything he deserves. oh and ur doin the right thing. Magda-Thanx for talking some sense into me. Jinny-no problem. ur turn! |
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Join Date: Mar 22, 2001
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okay,
*Back in the Questioning room* Jinny: Peter, you are coming with me! Peter: But, you heard Magda! Jinny: MAgda changed her mind! Peter: (looks at magda in the corner of the room) Magda...you know i didn't mean it! Magda: didn't mena to rape me? Peter: Magda, i know lots of people and they can get me out of this! Jinny:Ohhhh...we are sooo scared! Peter: Shut...up slut! Jinny: i leats i can get people rather than raping them to get them! Peter: (runs at Jinny to attck her) Magda: JINNY!!!! |
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#20 |
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Join Date: Mar 04, 2001
Location: Nancy Land, NJ.
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***reading while scrapeing remains of cupcake of liner with teeth... whle she gets to the good part starts eating wrapper*** You see its soo interesting you made me eat paper!
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This rules!!
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Okay great job. I'll just kinda continue...don't know what to put,
(Jinny hit's him and he falls down!!!!) Jinny: HAHAHA I got you, Now your under arrest. Peter: WHY I DIDN"T MEAN TO! Jinny: You still did, So this is what you get for it. Magda: Yeah Peter you brought this on yourself. Peter: Fine, but i still didn't mean to. Jinny: To late. (Later at Anchorside) Magda: Thanks Jinn, I probably wouldn't reported it if you didn't talk me into it. Jinny: Hey no problem, at least you did report it if you didn't he wouldn't be gettin what he deserves. Ok u decide Kerrin, over or not, |
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Join Date: Mar 22, 2001
Location: New Jersey, USA
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Kerrin says: Great ending and we hope you enjoyed it! Myabe another fan fic from us later! that sound good jo's girl?
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Please respond and tell us how you liked it! I hope you did.
~~~Kate~~~ [This message has been edited by Jo's Girl (edited 05-08-2001).] |
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Join Date: Nov 05, 2013
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We almost lost a member recently because they didnt think thier entries were good but they are sure are and im glad he is staying!! |
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