"The Brady Brides" 2-1 "Marcia's expecting" - Sitcoms Online Message Boards

Sitcomwriter · 09-14-2001, 04:03 PM

(The House)

Wally:Honey I'm home (kisses Marcia)

Marcia:I'm pregnant

Wally:Stop joking

Marcia:Wally I'm not joking

Wally:Yeah you are

Marcia:Wally I'm pregnant

Wally:So your not kidding?

Marcia:I'm not kidding

Wally:Are you sure your not kidding?

Jan:Hey guys

Marcia:Jan tell Wally I'm pregnant

Jan:Your pregnant?

Maria:Oh yeah I told Philip

Philip:Oh guys did you hear that Marcia is pregnant?

Wally:Grest Phil know before I do

Philip:Thats Philip

THE END

°Bubbly Blonde° · 12-20-2001, 11:59 PM

that was bad.

Blonde Hoochie Mama · 07-02-2002, 09:11 PM

what in the hell was that!!!!? Damn, I bet a four year old could've written thta.........no a four year old would've done better! No one will ever read your stuff...my only hope for you, is that you dont want to grow up being a real sitcom writer, cuz no one would want you and you'd be a homeless guy bum on the streets begging for money and sex.

that''s right

Magical Duckling · 06-09-2003, 12:38 PM

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what in the hell was that!!!!? Damn, I bet a four year old could've written thta.........no a four year old would've done better! No one will ever read your stuff...my only hope for you, is that you dont want to grow up being a real sitcom writer, cuz no one would want you and you'd be a homeless guy bum on the streets begging for money and sex.

^captivating...it's like you read my mind...but some how incorpated sex into it...i like it

...I'm sry but that story was...well...odd...it kinda just states the same fact...over and over again...

Hedwig55 · 06-29-2003, 03:36 PM

That was the worst story i have ever read in my life!!! I'll give u a tip: Never take up writing.

Another tip: if anyone tells u ur a great writer they must be pretty drunk!

ThomasE · 03-23-2004, 08:29 PM

Don't listen to those past comments about writing. That was a good teaser scene just like they would have on the Brady Bunch series. It was just funny the way I visualized it.

Rebel Queen 1980 · 01-23-2005, 12:26 AM

That was some stupid ****!

mphs95 · 10-29-2008, 10:27 PM

Man, you guys are mean. Not bad, but I recommend using that as a teaser to the real thing someday.

ThomasE · 10-29-2008, 11:06 PM

Wow! I don't even remeber posting a response to this thread. LOL. That was like a little teaser sampler IMO.

Johnny be good! · 02-05-2015, 01:55 AM

Very nice.

09-14-2001, 04:03 PM	#1
Sitcomwriter Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Feb 27, 2001 Posts: 7,354	"The Brady Brides" 2-1 "Marcia's expecting" (The House) Wally:Honey I'm home (kisses Marcia) Marcia:I'm pregnant Wally:Stop joking Marcia:Wally I'm not joking Wally:Yeah you are Marcia:Wally I'm pregnant Wally:So your not kidding? Marcia:I'm not kidding Wally:Are you sure your not kidding? Jan:Hey guys Marcia:Jan tell Wally I'm pregnant Jan:Your pregnant? Maria:Oh yeah I told Philip Philip:Oh guys did you hear that Marcia is pregnant? Wally:Grest Phil know before I do Philip:Thats Philip THE END

06-29-2003, 03:36 PM	#5
Hedwig55 Member Occasional Poster Join Date: May 06, 2003 Location: With Daniel Radcliffe (Harry Potter) Posts: 40	That was the worst story i have ever read in my life!!! I'll give u a tip: Never take up writing. Another tip: if anyone tells u ur a great writer they must be pretty drunk!
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02-05-2015, 01:55 AM	#10
Johnny be good! Member Senior Member Join Date: Feb 18, 2007 Location: Westland, Michigan Posts: 1,629	Very nice.
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12-20-2001, 11:59 PM	#2
°Bubbly Blonde° <3 Forum Veteran Join Date: Nov 25, 2001 Location: Playboy Mansion Posts: 5,877	that was bad.

07-02-2002, 09:11 PM	#3
Blonde Hoochie Mama Banned Banned!! Frequent Poster Join Date: May 04, 2002 Location: at the Osbournes Posts: 206	what in the hell was that!!!!? Damn, I bet a four year old could've written thta.........no a four year old would've done better! No one will ever read your stuff...my only hope for you, is that you dont want to grow up being a real sitcom writer, cuz no one would want you and you'd be a homeless guy bum on the streets begging for money and sex. that''s right

03-23-2004, 08:29 PM	#6
ThomasE Member Moderator Forum Fanatic Join Date: Apr 04, 2000 Location: New York, New York, U.S.A. Posts: 10,857	Don't listen to those past comments about writing. That was a good teaser scene just like they would have on the Brady Bunch series. It was just funny the way I visualized it.

01-23-2005, 12:26 AM	#7
Rebel Queen 1980 Member Senior Member Join Date: Nov 05, 2002 Location: Watching Classic Sitcoms 24/7.... Posts: 1,509	That was some stupid ****!

10-29-2008, 10:27 PM	#8
mphs95 Remember me? Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 02, 2004 Location: Michigan Posts: 790	Man, you guys are mean. Not bad, but I recommend using that as a teaser to the real thing someday.

10-29-2008, 11:06 PM	#9
ThomasE Member Moderator Forum Fanatic Join Date: Apr 04, 2000 Location: New York, New York, U.S.A. Posts: 10,857	Wow! I don't even remeber posting a response to this thread. LOL. That was like a little teaser sampler IMO.