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sami dg · 05-06-2001, 01:05 AM

Im sorry its taken so long
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Ward: Take a seat boys.
The boys do as they are told and sit down
Ward:What were you two thinking?Did you not think of the repercussions?
Wally:Boy,did I dad.
Ward:What about you Eddie?
Eddie:yes, Mr. Cleaver(said softly)
Wally:We thought about the bad stuff that could happen dad, but I guess I was thinking more about twenty dollars.
Ward:Well, quite frankly I am dissapointed in the both of you,you are both old enough now to know that these sorts of situations lead to nothing but trouble.
Wally:We sure know now.
Ward:Thats the point Wally,you never think about these things until the aftermath.
Wally:yes,sir.
Eddie:Mr. Cleaver, for what its worth i am real sorry for getting Wally involved in all of this.
Ward:Well Eddie Im glad to hear that , but Wally is his own person and he should have known better also.
Eddie:Ill pay for the damages to your car.
Ward:Wally and you will both take care of that, I spoke to your father earlier and we came to an agreement that the fifty dollars it cost for the repairs will come out of you boys allowance until it is paid for.
Wally:yes,sir.
Eddie:yes,sir.
Ward:I hope this will teach you fellas that in the future that everything that looks like a sure bet may not be as it seems.
Eddie:yes sir Mr.Cleaver from now on I will be very weary of any business transactions I make.
Ward:Im sure you will Eddie(Ward says grinning)
Wally:Are we done now dad?
Ward:Yes I suppose you guys can go.
Eddie(getting up to go out the door)Thank you so much for the lecture Mr. Cleaver I will try to apply it in the future.
Ward:yes Eddie.

Wally and Eddie leave the den and June walks in shortly thereafter.

June:Ward,did you straighten things out with Wally and Eddie?
Ward:I believe I'll have them walking the straight and narrow for the time being.
June:You werent to harsh were you?
Ward:no, I simply informed them that things arent always as they seem, and I also told them that the damages to my car will come out of their allowances.
June:Ward,Do you suppose that Wally will ever get involved in another situation like this?
Ward

robably not,but if Eddie Haskell continues to be his best pal,Im almost certain that this wont be this last time we have to dock their allowances.

They both share a mutual smile and the screen fades to black. I hope everyone enjoys it Im sorry it took me so long to finish.

dw · 05-06-2001, 10:43 PM

Thanks for finishing the story. I've had fun reading it.

lukes42 · 05-07-2001, 12:18 AM

Yes, it truly was an excellent storyline. Thanks for putting so much time and effort into the story. It was just like reading an actual episode over!

tdr · 05-07-2001, 01:33 AM

Good story. Thanks alot!

Jack3 · 05-07-2001, 12:36 PM

GEE EDDIE, I DON't THINK MY DADS GONNA LIKE THIS!

lukes42 · 10-10-2001, 01:04 PM

I just thought I would bump this back up to the top so other people who haven't read it yet can get a chance to read it and post their thoughts on it. Although I haven't seen sami dg post on here in ages, I'm sure he'd be happy to hear what you think.

Frnk55 · 03-11-2002, 01:16 AM

That was good stuff!
I'm ready for another!

sami dg · 03-18-2002, 09:00 AM

If you would like to see a new fan-fic of mine I wrote one over in the general fanfiction board. Actually I have just started it I would enjoy any suggestions or feedback.

sami dg · 08-17-2002, 07:20 PM

I know this is an old post but I brought it up since everyone enjoyed my last fan- fic I thought some of you might not have read this one.

BBF · 08-17-2002, 11:26 PM

Thanks Sami dg! Another great story! I hope you write another one sometime!

BBF

scanman17 · 08-19-2002, 03:47 PM

great story
it flowed very nicely. interesting contrast to your post series beaver story from before. once again, excellent use of dialogue. i really think that's your strong point. i look forward to your first movie or tv show

BrandonS · 08-19-2002, 05:56 PM

You have real talent. 99.9% of your dialog sounded exactly like the characters, and it was also a clever idea for a story. It's a lot better than I could have done. Thanks. I enjoyed reading it.

wilson001 · 03-30-2009, 02:13 AM

That was really a good story. Thanks for sharing.

08-17-2002, 11:26 PM	#25
BBF Workin' those Scrubs Senior Member Join Date: Jun 12, 2002 Location: The "Natural" State Posts: 2,014	Thanks Sami dg! Another great story! I hope you write another one sometime! BBF
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08-19-2002, 05:56 PM	#27
BrandonS Member Forum Fanatic Join Date: Aug 18, 2002 Posts: 8,824	Excellent Story You have real talent. 99.9% of your dialog sounded exactly like the characters, and it was also a clever idea for a story. It's a lot better than I could have done. Thanks. I enjoyed reading it.

03-30-2009, 02:13 AM	#28
wilson001 Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Dec 20, 2008 Posts: 71	That was really a good story. Thanks for sharing.
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05-06-2001, 01:05 AM	#16
sami dg Mayfields pepsi man Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 13, 2000 Location: Alabama Posts: 433	Im sorry its taken so long ....................................................................................................................................... Ward: Take a seat boys. The boys do as they are told and sit down Ward:What were you two thinking?Did you not think of the repercussions? Wally:Boy,did I dad. Ward:What about you Eddie? Eddie:yes, Mr. Cleaver(said softly) Wally:We thought about the bad stuff that could happen dad, but I guess I was thinking more about twenty dollars. Ward:Well, quite frankly I am dissapointed in the both of you,you are both old enough now to know that these sorts of situations lead to nothing but trouble. Wally:We sure know now. Ward:Thats the point Wally,you never think about these things until the aftermath. Wally:yes,sir. Eddie:Mr. Cleaver, for what its worth i am real sorry for getting Wally involved in all of this. Ward:Well Eddie Im glad to hear that , but Wally is his own person and he should have known better also. Eddie:Ill pay for the damages to your car. Ward:Wally and you will both take care of that, I spoke to your father earlier and we came to an agreement that the fifty dollars it cost for the repairs will come out of you boys allowance until it is paid for. Wally:yes,sir. Eddie:yes,sir. Ward:I hope this will teach you fellas that in the future that everything that looks like a sure bet may not be as it seems. Eddie:yes sir Mr.Cleaver from now on I will be very weary of any business transactions I make. Ward:Im sure you will Eddie(Ward says grinning) Wally:Are we done now dad? Ward:Yes I suppose you guys can go. Eddie(getting up to go out the door)Thank you so much for the lecture Mr. Cleaver I will try to apply it in the future. Ward:yes Eddie. Wally and Eddie leave the den and June walks in shortly thereafter. June:Ward,did you straighten things out with Wally and Eddie? Ward:I believe I'll have them walking the straight and narrow for the time being. June:You werent to harsh were you? Ward:no, I simply informed them that things arent always as they seem, and I also told them that the damages to my car will come out of their allowances. June:Ward,Do you suppose that Wally will ever get involved in another situation like this? Ward robably not,but if Eddie Haskell continues to be his best pal,Im almost certain that this wont be this last time we have to dock their allowances. They both share a mutual smile and the screen fades to black. I hope everyone enjoys it Im sorry it took me so long to finish.

05-06-2001, 10:43 PM	#17
dw Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 19, 2001 Posts: 39	Thanks for finishing the story. I've had fun reading it.

05-07-2001, 12:18 AM	#18
lukes42 I've got nothing... Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 31, 2001 Location: Marquette, MI Posts: 416	Yes, it truly was an excellent storyline. Thanks for putting so much time and effort into the story. It was just like reading an actual episode over!

05-07-2001, 01:33 AM	#19
tdr Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 23, 2001 Posts: 1,454	Good story. Thanks alot!

05-07-2001, 12:36 PM	#20
Jack3 Member Occasional Poster Join Date: May 15, 2001 Location: Prescott Arizona USA Posts: 17	GEE EDDIE, I DON't THINK MY DADS GONNA LIKE THIS!

10-10-2001, 01:04 PM	#21
lukes42 I've got nothing... Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 31, 2001 Location: Marquette, MI Posts: 416	I just thought I would bump this back up to the top so other people who haven't read it yet can get a chance to read it and post their thoughts on it. Although I haven't seen sami dg post on here in ages, I'm sure he'd be happy to hear what you think.

03-11-2002, 01:16 AM	#22
Frnk55 Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Dec 31, 2001 Posts: 54	That was good stuff! I'm ready for another!

03-18-2002, 09:00 AM	#23
sami dg Mayfields pepsi man Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 13, 2000 Location: Alabama Posts: 433	If you would like to see a new fan-fic of mine I wrote one over in the general fanfiction board. Actually I have just started it I would enjoy any suggestions or feedback.

08-17-2002, 07:20 PM	#24
sami dg Mayfields pepsi man Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 13, 2000 Location: Alabama Posts: 433	I know this is an old post but I brought it up since everyone enjoyed my last fan- fic I thought some of you might not have read this one.

08-19-2002, 03:47 PM	#26
scanman17 Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 12, 2002 Location: the planet gallifrey Posts: 32	great story it flowed very nicely. interesting contrast to your post series beaver story from before. once again, excellent use of dialogue. i really think that's your strong point. i look forward to your first movie or tv show