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Chain Gang Member · 09-24-2005, 12:25 PM

(Jack is mad at Zack for stealing his girlfriend eventhough he didn't do it on purpose)

Zack:Good morning everyone

Jack:Hey Zack,we're just gonna have our breakfast named after you.Eggs Benedict Arnold

Janet:Jack,why are you so mad at Zack?

Jack:He stole my girlfriend!

Terri:What?

Zack:It's not like I wanted to do it.SHe kissed me

Jack:Well,you still did

Zack:Oh yeah.Well you stole every girlfriend I had in High School

Jack:Which makes me better than you.What have you done that I haven't done?

Zack:Well I've seen all of your roomates naked and have gone all the way with two of them!So ha!(leaves)

Janet:Weren't you a little hard on Zack?

Jack:No

Janet:Weren't you the one who stole all of Zack's girlfriends in high school?

Jack:Yeah,but not on pur-pose.Oh my God I have to go talk to him(exits)

Terri:Hey,what about our breakfast?

Janet:Terri!

(At the Regal Beagle)

Jack:Zack,I wanna talk to you

Zack:Listen Jack,you got mad at me just because your girlfriend showed more interested in me than you,and you stole all of my girlfriends in high school.Get over it!It was one girl!

Jack:You're right

Zack:What?

Jack:Yeah,I talked with Janet & Terri,and they showed me that I was wrong

Zack:What?Your caving?I expected more of a fight with you

Jack:I was a jerk.I was wrong

Zack:You bet you're ass you were a jerk,you jerk!

Jack:Ok I was wrong

Zack:Come on!Give me something!Anything!

Jack:You want a beer?

Zack:Yeah!Give me a beer!

END

Chain Gang Member · 04-26-2007, 12:26 PM

This is the real version.I made a version with Chrissy in it,but it didn't make sense for him to be in almost every season.So he would just be in seasons 6-8

Subspace · 05-24-2007, 01:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chain Gang Member

This is the real version.I made a version with Chrissy in it,but it didn't make sense for him to be in almost every season.So he would just be in seasons 6-8

Okay, umm, I try not to say anything bad about fanfictions, but I gotta say I really don't like the Zack series. Seems like Zack's the "Marty Sue" that stomps all over Jack and Jack just keeps taking it, happily even. I dunno, but I just can't appreciate it. Could just be me, though.

Chain Gang Member · 05-26-2007, 12:18 PM

1.I made Zack because I hated seeing Terri leave alone
2.If you didn't like my character,you didn't have to reply
3.It could be just you because I got alot of good complements on him
4.He doesn't stomp all over Jack because Jack's his favorite relative

Subspace · 06-16-2007, 01:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chain Gang Member

1.I made Zack because I hated seeing Terri leave alone
2.If you didn't like my character,you didn't have to reply
3.It could be just you because I got alot of good complements on him
4.He doesn't stomp all over Jack because Jack's his favorite relative

Well, I was under the impression authors appreciate feedback, even feedback that isn't all of the "wow, your work is so great!" variety. At least I know I appreciate feedback on my writing [in sci-fi]. If this bothers you so much, I will respect your desires and not post in future threads related to your Zack Tripper series.

09-24-2005, 12:25 PM	#1
Chain Gang Member 1st Female Triple Crown Champ Forum Fanatic Join Date: Sep 28, 2003 Location: Watching Three's Company & Wrestling Posts: 8,925	Tripper vs.Tripper (Jack is mad at Zack for stealing his girlfriend eventhough he didn't do it on purpose) Zack:Good morning everyone Jack:Hey Zack,we're just gonna have our breakfast named after you.Eggs Benedict Arnold Janet:Jack,why are you so mad at Zack? Jack:He stole my girlfriend! Terri:What? Zack:It's not like I wanted to do it.SHe kissed me Jack:Well,you still did Zack:Oh yeah.Well you stole every girlfriend I had in High School Jack:Which makes me better than you.What have you done that I haven't done? Zack:Well I've seen all of your roomates naked and have gone all the way with two of them!So ha!(leaves) Janet:Weren't you a little hard on Zack? Jack:No Janet:Weren't you the one who stole all of Zack's girlfriends in high school? Jack:Yeah,but not on pur-pose.Oh my God I have to go talk to him(exits) Terri:Hey,what about our breakfast? Janet:Terri! (At the Regal Beagle) Jack:Zack,I wanna talk to you Zack:Listen Jack,you got mad at me just because your girlfriend showed more interested in me than you,and you stole all of my girlfriends in high school.Get over it!It was one girl! Jack:You're right Zack:What? Jack:Yeah,I talked with Janet & Terri,and they showed me that I was wrong Zack:What?Your caving?I expected more of a fight with you Jack:I was a jerk.I was wrong Zack:You bet you're ass you were a jerk,you jerk! Jack:Ok I was wrong Zack:Come on!Give me something!Anything! Jack:You want a beer? Zack:Yeah!Give me a beer! END
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04-26-2007, 12:26 PM	#2
Chain Gang Member 1st Female Triple Crown Champ Forum Fanatic Join Date: Sep 28, 2003 Location: Watching Three's Company & Wrestling Posts: 8,925	This is the real version.I made a version with Chrissy in it,but it didn't make sense for him to be in almost every season.So he would just be in seasons 6-8

05-26-2007, 12:18 PM	#4
Chain Gang Member 1st Female Triple Crown Champ Forum Fanatic Join Date: Sep 28, 2003 Location: Watching Three's Company & Wrestling Posts: 8,925	1.I made Zack because I hated seeing Terri leave alone 2.If you didn't like my character,you didn't have to reply 3.It could be just you because I got alot of good complements on him 4.He doesn't stomp all over Jack because Jack's his favorite relative