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Old 02-24-2004, 03:36 AM   #46
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Yay! Wahoooo! Ty! lol, and we will post more asap.
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OMG! OMG! I can't believe it! It's happening! It's finally happening! it's freaking happening! I'm making the next post! OMG! I hope ppl are still reading! And that the wait was worth it for ya! Let us know if you're reading and what ya think! Here it is....

"Okay,I'll see you tomorrow."Jinny gave her captain a quick hug. Kate hope Jinny didn't notice her flinch from the small sharp pain that shot through her back,but She did. She also noticed what felt like a large bandage near the center of her back. Jinny didn't ask anything,She figured Her friend would talk about it when She was ready. She prayed it would be soon. She was worried.
"Bright and early. I'll notice if you're late." Kate winked.
"Oh,I know ya will." Jinny chuckled. Jinny watched as Kate slowly walked down the hall to the elevators. With a sigh,She went back into her apartment and shut the door once she was out of sight.

Kate sat in her car outside of Jinny's apartment building,with tears streaming down her face. She hated lying. Especially to Jinny.And She knew that Jinny buy her story. And that She'd felt the bandage through her shirt. She knew at some point Jinny would learn the truth.And She hated Louis for that. He didn't just hurt her. He hurt Jinny. Why then? Why on Jinny's wedding night? Why at all??? Those questions had run through Kate's mind ten billion times since it happened. She hated Louis for hurting her,and He continued to hurt her,because of him all She did lately was lie to her friends. She now had this huge dark secret. And She felt ashamed. She now understood how all those women could think that in some way it was their fault. Kate wasn't so much embarrassed that She'd had the hell beat out of her by her boyfriend,it was that She hadn't been able to defend herself. She was a cop...a police captain for God's sake! She'd seen hundreds of abuse cases and like all of those women,She'd been duped into forgiving him. Louis had even gotten her questioning her own abilities as a cop. I couldn't defend myself from one ass hole, how the hell can I protect an entire city?? She thought. She was so deep in thought that when a knock came at her car window It startled her. A terrible pain shot through her back when She jumped. Nearly out of her skin. She looked out the window ad saw a tall dark figure. She realized it was Teddy,when He spoke to her.
"Kate?" He knocked again.
"Hey." She quickly wiped her eyes,and forced a smile,as She rolled down her window. "How are ya?""
"I'm good. Sorry I startled you...." He suspected that She'd been crying " Hey,are you okay?"
"Yeah,I'm fine." She forced another smile.
'You sure? You look like you've been crying."
"Positive. No, My eyes were just watering really bad. thanks for asking though."
Teddy didn't buy it,but He left it alone. "Okay,well...ya coming up? Have dinner with us. I got Chinese."
" Maybe some other time,thanks. Actually I was just leaving."
"Oh,sorry I missed ya."
"Yeah,me too."
"Well,I won't hold you up anymore,See ya tomorrow."
"Yeah, good night." Kate rolled up her window,and started her car.

Get off of me!!" She screamed. She prepared herself for a very hard punch, and it didn't come. "Louis, No, please! Louis, Please!" Tears streamed down her face when she realized what he was going to do. She tried to push him off of her, and that's when she got the punch she'd been expecting. "Louis, please don't! Please!" She pleaded as she tried to stop him from ripping open her shirt. She took yet another punch, which caused her more pain in her back
"Louis please! No,Please don't! Please!" Kate pleaded.She sat up light a bolt of lightning.Her heart was pounding as She looked around the dark room,and realized She'd had the nightmare again. "Damn it!"She exclaimed. She got out of bed,and grabbed a pillow and blanket. It had almost become routine.Got to bed,have nightmare,go sleep or at least try to on the couch. She looked over at the clock on the bedside stand. 5:00 am. She knew by the time she was able to go back to sleep it would be time to get up. Rolling her eyes,She tossed the pillow and blanket on the bed,and went downstairs. She turned on the coffee pot,and after finding absolutely nothing on TV She decided to reread yesterday's paper.She still had two hours before She had to get ready for work.


Kate had just finished a lunch meeting at Anchorside when She walked into the bullpen,and saw Louis Parillo sitting in her office. 'What the hell is he doing here??"She said...not realizing She'd said it out loud.
"He said He hates to bother you at work,but He really needs to talk to you."Raina explained,with a somewhat confused expression.
"Something wrong,Cap?"Jinny noticed her hesitation to go into her office.
"Nope. Fine. Good."Kate sighed and went into her office,closing the door behind her.

"Kate."Louis smiled awkwardly as He stood,and decided to take a stab at hugging her. The attempt failed miserably."Louis what the hell do you want?"She refused the hug,and stepped back to further the distance between them.
"I wanna talk to you."He took a step closer.
"Well I don't want to talk to you."She snapped,as She stepped around him,and walked to the door.
"Kate,I'm sorry,I- -"
"I don't care!"
"Why wont you listen to me???"
"Because there is nothing you can say,that I'm willing to waste my time listening to."She reached for the knob,and He pulled her hand away.
"Please just hear me out- -"
"No."
"Kate,I'm sorry,please forgive me! I never- -"
"It would be a lot easier to forgive you if you'd stay away from me,and stop reminding me of what happened!" She reached for the door knob again,and He grabbed her wrist.
Louis decided to try playing the 'Amanda card' "Are you gonna tell Mandy about- -"
"Hell no!!"Kate exclaimed,"She'll never know if I can help it! It would crush her!"
"Well what happens when She comes to visit? She's gonna want to know why you wont have anything to do with me."
"When that time gets here, I'll grit my teeth,and force myself to be civil to you.But until then, I don't have to be anywhere near you,nor will I!"She glared at him scornfully as She jerked her hand loose,and reached for the knob again."Get out of my office!"
"Not till you hear me out!"He slapped her hand away. Kate could feel everyone looking in the he windows,and She was so very embarrassed.

When She glanced out everyone quickly looked back at their work,or the other way. Jinny did as well,but not immediately. She didn't care...in fact She wanted Kate to know She was watching.
So far Nate was the only one for the most part ignoring the goings on in his Captain's office...that is till He saw Louis stop her from opening the door yet again. Then his attention was glued to them.

"How dare you come here,and practically trap me in my office!! I have work to do! And you are making a scene!"Kate reached for the knob again,and this time,Louis took her by the shoulders and moved her away from the door. "I'm not trapping you anywhere! I just want you to hear me out!"
"I have Louis!"She tried to free herself from his grasp."I've hear you say you're sorry a thousand times! Let go of me!!"
Louis moved his grasp from her shoulders to her wrists. The harder she tried to free herself,the tighter his grip got.
"Ow! Louis, let go!" She tried to twist her wrists loose, but his grip was so tight she couldn't move them. "...please!"

Seeing this, Jinny decided it was time to but in,but before She could even get up,Nate was already in the office.

"Hey,Cap, have you heard anything about the warrant for..."Nate starred the shorter man directly in the eye,silently warning him."Oh sorry..Am I interrupting?"
"No. Not at all."Kate smiled. Secretly it was a smile of relief.
"I uh...was just leaving..."Louis sighed as He let go of her. "Bye..."He mumbled as He left.
"Nate...could I ask you for an odd favor?"Kate loathed having to ask...but She knew it was probably a good idea.
"Shoot."
"Could you uh...follow him...make sure He leaves,please?"
"Sure..."He said,His voice full of concern.
"Thanks a lot....and uh...be discrete about it..."
"No problem."


"Hey!"Nate called as He made his way over to Louis.
Louis ignored him and unlocked his car door.
"Hey!"Nate grabbed his shoulder.
"What do ya want?"Louis shook his hand off.
"Look I don't know what's going on with you and Cap but- -"
"And it's none of your damn business."
"You're right. What ever you were arguing about is none of my business. But I'll say this. No man should ever mistreat a woman. And whenever I see some ass whole mistreating his wife or girlfriend or whoever,I don't like it and I make it my business. Especially if that woman is someone I highly respect and admire."Nate explained calmly and started to walked away.
"What is that supposed to mean?"
Nate turned around and glared at him,"You know what it means."
"Is that a threat?"
"It's a very sincere promise."

Kate made her way through the bullpen trying desperately to ignore the curious and concerned stares from the officers and inspectors under her command. She went over to the coffee pot,and as She poured herself a cup She could feel everyone looking at her,and heard the whispers. Glancing out the window, She saw Nate walk up to Louis.He said something to him. She had a pretty good idea what it was about. She was both flattered and humiliated. She went back to her office. On the way,She heard a few more whispers,and caught a few more glances.
"People,there are far more important things to discuss. Your cases for example." She said calmly,and continued into her office,shutting the door behind her. She stayed there for nearly the rest of the day.

The day had come to an end,but it hadn't come soon enough for Kate. With a relieved sigh,she shut off the light and closed the door behind her.
"G' night." She said as she made her way through the bullpen. Once again dodging all of the curious stares from her inspectors and officers.

The second Casey saw the redhead that'd been on his mind ever since his partner Emma had told him what Raina told her,He excused himself from the conversation he was having a fellow officer,and rushed to her.
"Did He hurt you??" He asked.
"Hello,to you too." Kate replied.

"Well?"
"Keep your voice down." She took her self appointed bodyguard's hand and guided him to a more private area of the hallway.
"Did He hurt you?" He demanded again.
"I see word got around." She sighed.
"Yeah word got around. Word has it that Nate had to physically remove - -"

"That's an exaggeration." Kate interrupted. "Nate came in,and pretended to accidentally interrupt - -"
"Interrupt what exactly?"
"He didn't attack me or anything. He was in my office when I got back...He wanted me to hear him out."She rolled her eyes."He blocked the door,and wouldn't let me open it. Nate came in when He grabbed my wrists and wouldn't let go."
Casey quickly took her hand and pulled up her sleeve,to find a slight bruise around her wrist." He held you that tight?!"
"Shh! Lower your voice."She looked around to see if they'd caught anyone's attention."It's not as bad as it looks."

Three files in one hand,a can of Dr. Pepper in the other and a granola bar sticking out of her mouth, ,Jinny was more then ready to head home for the day. Now all She had to do was make it to her desk without dropping the files and spilling their contents all over the floor. This, at the moment,seemed to be a feat much more difficult then catching robbers ,murderers and rapists. Sighing,she sat down her Dr. Pepper and added the other four files laying on the table to her stack,and carefully made her way out of the break room, Files and Dr. Pepper in hand,and granola bar in mouth. She spotted an unusual sight. Her brother and her captain were talking . She paid it no mind, until She got to the break room door,and caught part of the conversation.
"Come stay at my place tonight." She heard Casey insist.
Highly intrigued She took a step back,hoping to remain unseen.
"No,I'm fine."Kate smiled slightly at his protectiveness. It was comforting. She didn't know what She would've done without him in all this mess. "I'll be okay."
"Then let me stay with you tonight."
"Casey,I'll be fine."
"The last time I listened to you,that bastard...."He looked to the ground,and finished the sentenced with a deep sigh.
"Damn it,Casey! Stop blaming yourself for that. It wasn't your fault."
"If I had insisted- -"
"It would have only delayed it and you know it. I had no idea that it was going to happen,how could you?"
"Fine. You're right,but I just can't help but think that..."
"We can't change it. Don't dwell on it. You were there when you were,and that's all that counts."
" Yeah..."Casey nodded slowly. "At least let me follow you home,and check the place out." He pleaded.
"Casey you're overreacting. I'll be okay. If He's there I'll call you." If He's there,She thought,What if He's there?
"Yeah,well..."He shrugged.

Kate sighed,and placed a hand on his cheek,"All right. If it'll put your mind at ease..."
"It will."
"Okay,then." She kissed his other cheek. "I still think you're overreacting,though." She thought she was overreacting herself. She was angry at herself for letting Louis get to her,and being afraid to go home alone. "Come on,lets go."
Casey put his arm around her,careful not to hurt her wounded back,as They made their way down the hall to the elevators.

What happened when !?!?! Jinny screamed in her mind. She wanted desperately to know,but she wasn't sure if She should confront one of them or when. She was worried sick about her captain.

"Are ya sure ya don't wanna stay with me?" Casey asked as He opened her car door for her.

"Casey,don't push it."Kate replied as She got in." I'm letting you check the place out aren't I?"
"All right." He sighed.
"But I do really appreciate your protectiveness a lot." She smiled.
"Nobody messes with my friends." He smiled back. "I'll see ya in a few."

"Okay."
Casey shut her car door for her,as She started the car. He watched her back out of the parking space,unaware that He,himself was being watched.

He watched as Casey made his way to his car,and got in. He saw Kate waiting to pull out onto the highway and thought about trying to talk to her again...till He caught sight of Nate who was glaring at him like a mad bull ready and more than willing to charge. Nate turned and walked to Kate's car.

"Hey.." She said as She rolled down the window.

"Hey...uh...listen..."Nate replied," I thought ya might wanna know that He's here."

"Who?" Kate asked,hoping he wasn't referring to Louis.
"Uh..that guy...in your office today..."
"Oh God..." Kate punched her dashboard in frustration.
"He was watching you and Casey talking."
"Thanks for telling me."She sighed.
"I can uh..talk to him,if ya want me to..."
"No,I'll handle it. Thank you though."

"No problem."
"And thanks for earlier too."
"That was no problem too." Nate flashed a quick smile. * I'll see ya tomorrow."
"Bye." Kate rolled up her window,and before pulling onto the street,she pulled her cell phone and dialed a number.

"Hello?"
"Hi." Kate snapped.
"Will you hear me out now?"
"Louis, I swear, if you don't stay the hell away from me, I will get a restraining order put out against you!!" She yelled. " And stop hanging around the division!"
'I didn't- -"
"Bull**** Louis! I'm looking at you in the rear view mirror!" She waved at him." I swear,for you're own good,you had better not show up tomorrow!" She stated and hang up the phone. He tried to call her back,but She'd already blocked his number.


"Casey,do you really think you need your gun?"Kate asked,as the handsome blond cop pulled his gun.
"Need it? No. I could beat his ass with one hand tied behind my back."
Kate grinned at that. It was a site She wouldn't mind seeing.
"But...' Casey continued,unlocking the door,with his free hand," If He's in here,I will arrest his ass. And When He makes bail,I will kick his ass."
Kate chuckled as they went inside.' He's basically a dead man walking. She thought. She tossed her keys on the table by the coat tree,and then hang her coat,and purse up. " Ya want something to drink, or eat?" She asked. First peaking into the kitchen, and looking around before going in.
"No,thanks."He called from the top of the stairs.
Kate grabbed a beer out of the refrigerator and headed upstairs as well.
"Kate!" Casey called from her bedroom.
Kate rushed in, "What?"
" I thought You threw this away." He pointed to a photo of Her and Louis together sitting on the dresser. Not the dresses Louis had shoved her against. She'd gotten tired of staring at it and the blood stain that refused to be washed away, and threw it away.
"I did." She mumbled. Louis had been there at some point that day. They both thought. And He had to have rescued that photo from a trip to the city dump. "That's not the same frame." She added.
"Son of a bitch!" Casey exclaimed. "Pack a bag. You're going home with me tonight!" He checked all the window and door locks. It turned out that the bastard was pretty good at covering his tracks.
With a sigh, Kate pulled her duffle bag from the closet. She tossed in her favorite pair of Pajamas. The ones with the leopard print top and black pants. An outfit for the next day and her make-up bag. She decided She'd just pile her hair into a clip. "Come on,lets go."
"I'm changing the locks again."Casey stated,carrying her duffle bag to the car.



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That was great!! I have one question though, in this story, is Casey
gay or straight?? Because it sure sounds like there is something going on there? Unless, you are going to hook Kate and Nate up in this story
Because I did love him coming to her rescue
Anyway, I love your story, keep it coming!!
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That was great!! I have one question though, in this story, is Casey
gay or straight?? Because it sure sounds like there is something going on there? Unless, you are going to hook Kate and Nate up in this story
Because I did love him coming to her rescue
Anyway, I love your story, keep it coming!!
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Tyvm! glad ya like! We're workin on it.
I'd say if anybody could turn him,it would be Katie.
Only one way to find out. Just keep reading. Who knows what could happen. Sometimes we shock ourselves with what pops into our heads.
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