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InspectorExstead · 04-21-2002, 12:59 AM

Here is a new fanfic by...me...on Mag's wedding day and all! Enjoy ppl.

Magda Ramirez stood in front of her mirror in her bedroom.
She thought back to last week when she asked Gabe to move out for a couple of days. She didn't know why she did, maybe to make the wedding more realistic. But it was done. Now, the hard part was coming ahead. The Wedding. The two words that made Magda start shaking whenever she thought about it. It wasn't just the flower arrangements and her dress and the fact that she couldn't seat all the people in the hall for the after wedding party. It wasn't even the vows. It was the fact that she was finally getting married. 9 years after Gabe ran off after he found out about Ben. Magda was just glad he came back.

All of a sudden her attention shifted to the flower arrangements for the wedding. She hadn't decided which flower she wanted. Lilys, orchids, roses or what. Gabe had told her he really did not care what the flowers looked like because Magda would always look beautiful.

So Magda decided to call her wedding planner-Jinny. Sure most people would hire professionals, people who knew what they were doing and what was going on. But Magda didn't care. She wanted Jinny to be her wedding planner and that was that. She knew it would be the last time she and Jin really bonded, because in a week she would be Mrs. Ramirez.

"Mrs.Ramirez" Magda thought to herself. "I like that. Mrs. Ramirez. Mrs. Ramirez, Hello, I'm Mrs. Ramirez. Nice to meet you *practicing in different tones of voices*".

Suddenly the phone rang.

Magda picked it up and without thinking answered "Hello, Mrs. Ramirez speaking."

Jinny:Magda?
Mag:Jinny? Oh, umm, hi.
Jin:Yeah, hi. Umm listen I was wondering if you could come meet me some place. *tells her where she is*
Mag:mm-hmm, mm-hmm, mm-hmm. Ok....wait, Jinny what are u doing there?!?!
Jin:Listen, just meet me here, ok?
Mag:*confused as to what is going on* Umm...ok. I have to drop Ben off first.
Jin: ok, but get here.
Mag:Fine.
Jin:Good.
Mag:Jin, tell me you know what you're doing.
Jin: Don't worry. I know exactly what I'm doing.

.....so how you like it so far?.....more later.....

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 04-21-2002, 01:06 AM

Yay, that's really good!!! I want to know where Jinny is. Get-a-posting!!!!!

Jeanie · 04-21-2002, 02:19 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by InspectorExstead
Here is a new fanfic by...me...on Mag's wedding day and all! Enjoy ppl.

.....so how you like it so far?.....more later.....

Okay it is later where it the more.

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 04-21-2002, 09:22 AM

This really good,keep going!

Esperanza · 04-21-2002, 12:51 PM

Great Start!!! Add more!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 04-21-2002, 01:41 PM

this is such an awesome fan fic! i gotta have more!

*Marilyn Monroe* · 04-21-2002, 03:19 PM

This is good! Now post more! lol

Ewan's My Man · 04-21-2002, 03:32 PM

This ROX!! Post more soon!!!

Swimfan85 · 04-21-2002, 06:04 PM

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee more?!??!?! this is great!

InspectorExstead · 04-21-2002, 09:48 PM

all for you ppl....i have so much h.w....but what the hell....more...here's more...

Magda: Ben! BEEEN!
Ben:What mom?
Mag:Sweetie, I have to drop you off early.
Ben:Why?
Mag:Well....Jinny needs me to meet her some place. You'll only be a few minutes early.
Ben:No mom, please.
Mag:Ben, what's wrong.
Ben:Nuhtin...i just don't wanna go early.
Mag:*sighs*Ben...has something been going on in school that you want to tell me maybe?
Ben:No..

Just then Gabe came in.

Gabe:Hey!
Mag: Oh hey....I didn't hear you knock.
Gabe:*waves keys in the air* remember you gave them to me a long while ago.
Mag: oh.
Ben: daddy will you stay with me?
Gabe:*looks confused* uhh..sure i guess. *gives mag a questioning look*
Mag:Gabe, uh could I see you in the hall for a second.
Gabe:Sure.

.....Ben leaves and goes into his room. Mag decides to talk in the kitchen....

...They reach the kitchen....

Gabe:What's up?
Mag:Nothing..umm...Jinny wants me to meet her somewhere and I have to drop Bem off early, and he says he doesn't want to go early.
Gabe:Are the kids giving him a hard time?
Mag:No, i dunno.
Gabe:well...hey I'll take him to school.
Mag:Really? Thanx gabe.
Gabe:No problem.
Mag:I gotta go.

...Goes to Ben's room....

Mag:ben, mommy has to go. Dad's gonna drop you off ok?
Ben: Ok...bye mom.
Mag:bye papi.

....Leaves Ben's room.......

Mag

k...umm..thanx again.
Gabe:Magda I'm the kid's father...don't worry about it. So where did you say you were meeting Jinny again?
Mag:I dunno...she just gave me directions and oh god. I gotta go.
Gabe: OK...*leans in and kisses her for a long time*
Mag:No, gabe i'm gonna late. Gabe no...*laughs* i'll see you tonight. Bye
Gabe:bye.

.....So Magda leaves and goes into her car....

Magda starts talking to herself.
Mag: Oh Jinny...where are you taking me? Ok...this better be worth it.

.....The address Jinny had given her was 30 minutes away.....

.........Magda finally arrives....

She steps out of the car wondering why Jiny was asking her to meet her here.

She goes in through the entrance.

Mag: oh my god.

Jinny notices Magda has finally come.

Jin:yay...you got here.
Mag:*nods*
Jin:So...
Mag:Jinny, what did you do?
Jin:*laughs* You like?
Mag: *too speechless to say anything....she was taking in the site in front of her slowly*
Jin:Magda?
Mag:I.....

more later!

Swimfan85 · 04-21-2002, 10:31 PM

WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE??!?!? I NEED MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!! WHT HAPPENED?!?!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 04-21-2002, 10:55 PM

What the hell is up with THAT?!?!?!?!?!!?! Come on... Add more before you go to bed.... Please

Jeanie · 04-21-2002, 11:23 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by InspectorExstead
all for you ppl....i have so much h.w....but what the hell....more...here's more...

Magda starts talking to herself.
Mag: Oh Jinny...where are you taking me? Ok...this better be worth it.

.....The address Jinny had given her was 30 minutes away.....

.........Magda finally arrives....

She steps out of the car wondering why Jiny was asking her to meet her here.

She goes in through the entrance.

Mag: oh my god.

Jinny notices Magda has finally come.

Jin:yay...you got here.
Mag:*nods*
Jin:So...
Mag:Jinny, what did you do?
Jin:*laughs* You like?
Mag: *too speechless to say anything....she was taking in the site in front of her slowly*
Jin:Magda?
Mag:I.....

more later!

Okay this is not right leaving us here like this. We all want to know where Jinny is. So come on post more. I know for a fact the Division isn't on ther yet, not for another 35 minutes so come on post more.

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 04-22-2002, 12:55 PM

How dare you stop there!! POST MORE!!!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 04-22-2002, 02:22 PM

we are gonna gang up on you and kick your ass! you can't just leave us hanging like that!!!!! it's just....not aloud!

04-21-2002, 12:59 AM	#1
InspectorExstead Member Forum Star Join Date: Oct 29, 2001 Location: The Golden State Posts: 12,902	Her Love Has Come....Magda's Wedding Story Here is a new fanfic by...me...on Mag's wedding day and all! Enjoy ppl. Magda Ramirez stood in front of her mirror in her bedroom. She thought back to last week when she asked Gabe to move out for a couple of days. She didn't know why she did, maybe to make the wedding more realistic. But it was done. Now, the hard part was coming ahead. The Wedding. The two words that made Magda start shaking whenever she thought about it. It wasn't just the flower arrangements and her dress and the fact that she couldn't seat all the people in the hall for the after wedding party. It wasn't even the vows. It was the fact that she was finally getting married. 9 years after Gabe ran off after he found out about Ben. Magda was just glad he came back. All of a sudden her attention shifted to the flower arrangements for the wedding. She hadn't decided which flower she wanted. Lilys, orchids, roses or what. Gabe had told her he really did not care what the flowers looked like because Magda would always look beautiful. So Magda decided to call her wedding planner-Jinny. Sure most people would hire professionals, people who knew what they were doing and what was going on. But Magda didn't care. She wanted Jinny to be her wedding planner and that was that. She knew it would be the last time she and Jin really bonded, because in a week she would be Mrs. Ramirez. "Mrs.Ramirez" Magda thought to herself. "I like that. Mrs. Ramirez. Mrs. Ramirez, Hello, I'm Mrs. Ramirez. Nice to meet you practicing in different tones of voices". Suddenly the phone rang. Magda picked it up and without thinking answered "Hello, Mrs. Ramirez speaking." Jinny:Magda? Mag:Jinny? Oh, umm, hi. Jin:Yeah, hi. Umm listen I was wondering if you could come meet me some place. tells her where she is Mag:mm-hmm, mm-hmm, mm-hmm. Ok....wait, Jinny what are u doing there?!?! Jin:Listen, just meet me here, ok? Mag:confused as to what is going on Umm...ok. I have to drop Ben off first. Jin: ok, but get here. Mag:Fine. Jin:Good. Mag:Jin, tell me you know what you're doing. Jin: Don't worry. I know exactly what I'm doing. .....so how you like it so far?.....more later.....
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04-21-2002, 01:06 AM	#2
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Yay, that's really good!!! I want to know where Jinny is. Get-a-posting!!!!!
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04-21-2002, 09:22 AM	#4
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04-21-2002, 01:41 PM	#6
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04-21-2002, 03:19 PM	#7
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04-21-2002, 09:48 PM	#10
InspectorExstead Member Forum Star Join Date: Oct 29, 2001 Location: The Golden State Posts: 12,902	all for you ppl....i have so much h.w....but what the hell....more...here's more... Magda: Ben! BEEEN! Ben:What mom? Mag:Sweetie, I have to drop you off early. Ben:Why? Mag:Well....Jinny needs me to meet her some place. You'll only be a few minutes early. Ben:No mom, please. Mag:Ben, what's wrong. Ben:Nuhtin...i just don't wanna go early. Mag:sighsBen...has something been going on in school that you want to tell me maybe? Ben:No.. Just then Gabe came in. Gabe:Hey! Mag: Oh hey....I didn't hear you knock. Gabe:waves keys in the air remember you gave them to me a long while ago. Mag: oh. Ben: daddy will you stay with me? Gabe:looks confused uhh..sure i guess. gives mag a questioning look Mag:Gabe, uh could I see you in the hall for a second. Gabe:Sure. .....Ben leaves and goes into his room. Mag decides to talk in the kitchen.... ...They reach the kitchen.... Gabe:What's up? Mag:Nothing..umm...Jinny wants me to meet her somewhere and I have to drop Bem off early, and he says he doesn't want to go early. Gabe:Are the kids giving him a hard time? Mag:No, i dunno. Gabe:well...hey I'll take him to school. Mag:Really? Thanx gabe. Gabe:No problem. Mag:I gotta go. ...Goes to Ben's room.... Mag:ben, mommy has to go. Dad's gonna drop you off ok? Ben: Ok...bye mom. Mag:bye papi. ....Leaves Ben's room....... Magk...umm..thanx again. Gabe:Magda I'm the kid's father...don't worry about it. So where did you say you were meeting Jinny again? Mag:I dunno...she just gave me directions and oh god. I gotta go. Gabe: OK...leans in and kisses her for a long time Mag:No, gabe i'm gonna late. Gabe no...laughs i'll see you tonight. Bye Gabe:bye. .....So Magda leaves and goes into her car.... Magda starts talking to herself. Mag: Oh Jinny...where are you taking me? Ok...this better be worth it. .....The address Jinny had given her was 30 minutes away..... .........Magda finally arrives.... She steps out of the car wondering why Jiny was asking her to meet her here. She goes in through the entrance. Mag: oh my god. Jinny notices Magda has finally come. Jin:yay...you got here. Mag:nods Jin:So... Mag:Jinny, what did you do? Jin:laughs You like? Mag: too speechless to say anything....she was taking in the site in front of her slowly Jin:Magda? Mag:I..... more later!

04-21-2002, 10:31 PM	#11
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE??!?!? I NEED MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!! WHT HAPPENED?!?!

04-21-2002, 10:55 PM	#12
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	What the hell is up with THAT?!?!?!?!?!!?! Come on... Add more before you go to bed.... Please

04-22-2002, 12:55 PM	#14
TeddyisMINE!!!! Crazed Nancy Fan!!!! Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 03, 2002 Location: Tennessee Posts: 496	How dare you stop there!! POST MORE!!!

04-22-2002, 02:22 PM	#15
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	we are gonna gang up on you and kick your ass! you can't just leave us hanging like that!!!!! it's just....not aloud!