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Ok so I was flipping through the channels and I was watching Lizzie McGuire then Beaver was on and I had this idea for fan fic so here it is. Enjoy
The scene is late 1957 on a saturday moring .Ward is on the living room couch reading the paper and June sits on the seat by the window and looks out the window. June: Ward, we're getting new neghbors! (Ward gets up and looks out the window with her) Ward : So we are (then sits down and continues with his paper) [outside are the new neghbors a man,a big man. walking beside him is a 13 yr old girl with glasses they have auburn hair and green eyes] June:don't you think the boys should go say hello? Ward: lets wait untill they're all moved in. [end of scene] [ scene 2] [ the boys are up stairs and beaver is looking out the window at the same thing.Wally is reading a book] Beaver shouting) Wally! Wally! Were get new neghibors!Wally: Cool it,Beaver. You act like you've never seen people before! [Beaver runs down the stairs shouting} Beaver: Mom, Dad! Mom,Dad! Neghibors are here! [June quickly looks at beaver and walks to him] June: Beaver whats all this about? Beaver: ( out of breath) We- Have -new neighbors! June: well it looks as if there all loaded up. get you brother and get cleaned up and I'll bring a cake. {beaver charges up the stairs} Beaver:WALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [ End Of scene. {scene 3} { the boys and Ward are in suits, June in a very stylish hat.) (Beaver rings the bell) (The man opens the door. He is a least 6'4 and has a deep voice he is a plump man.) Man: Hello!!!!!!!!!! Ward: (shaking his hand) I'm Ward Cleaver, this is June, Theodore and Wally. Man: I am Hecor Gordon. Won' t you come in? ( They all follow Hecor into his home it is decoraded beautifully) June: Your wife does a beautiful job decorating! Hecor: (chuckles a little) My wife pased away 3 years ago. June slightly embarassed) Im so sorry.( the girl appears. Her hair is neatly put back into a curly ponytail.) Hecor: Elizibeth, come join us! ( Elisibeth walks over) Hecor: This is my wonderful daughter Eizibeth, Say hello, Elizibeth. Elizibeth: How do you do? June: ( Feeling a tad sorry for her) I'm Mrs. Cleaver, this is Mr. Cleaver. and this is Beaver and Wally. ( she gives a little wave to all of them) Hecor: Why don't you and Wally and uhhh Gopher go in the den? Elizibeth: Yes, sir. Come on, I'll show. ( The boys follow her) [ the adults still talk in the living room] Hecor: you'll have to excuse Elizibeth shes been very standoffish scence I told her we were moving. Ward: Thats very reasonable. June remembering she has a cake in her lap) I made this for you Mr. Gordon.Hecor: (In Hebrew) How wonderful! Ward: Do you mind repeting that? Hecor: Oh, I'm sorry. How wonderful thank you Mrs Cleaver! { Scene changes to the children in the den} Wally trying to break the acward scilence)Sooooo...( Beaver notices her necklace.It is the Star of David) Beaver: I like your neclace Elizibeth:Thanks I got it for Chanaika last year. Beaver: Whats that? Wally: Chanaika is like our christmas only chanaika is a jewish hoilday. Beaver: Oh. ( wally looks around at all the books in the den) ( the titles range from The Complete guide to Forensic Science to Ivanhoe.) Wally: Whats Forensic Science? Elizibeth: Its- Its like... Wow what is Forisic science. Its were people vestigate murders and junk buy looking at physical evidence like blood spater and how things are aranged. Wally imprested) Wow, Elizibeth, you know alota` stuff!Elizibeth: All my friends call me Gordo. Beaver: that makes sense. Elizibeth Gordon- Gordo. Gordo: yeah I guess so. {Hecor walks in and smiles a big smile} Hecor : you father wants you Wally and (in Hebrew) Beaver Gordo: Father, they don't understand hebrew like we do. Hecor: My appolgises. [ Wally, Beaver ,and Gordo walk into the living room] Beaver: ( to June) Mom! Mom! Gor-I mean Elizibeth know alota neat stuff can ( To Mr. Gordon) can we come over real soon? Ward: Well, boys we have invided Mr. Gordon and Elizibeth over to dinner on Wendsday. Wally and Beaver: Yay! {End } So what did ya think? should I write more or what? |
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sorry I did n't put the simlileys there puposly when I finesed they poped up.
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that was awesome
i have an idea for u but i'll tell u later
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