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Old 07-26-2004, 03:26 PM   #16
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Hay everone. I know that like nobody is reading this so to be honest, I didn't feel bad not updating while away for the week.
But I am hoping all you Louis haters will enjoy this next part.


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When Kate got home, she sat in her car for awhile dreading having to tell Louis the truth. She had told him the story of Sonny but, with one major lie right smack dab in the middle, Kate had said Sonny was a man. She had no idea how Louis would react to this revelation, but his personality and track record said he would not be forgiving or understanding.
She finally got out of the car and proceeded inside. He was standing at the dinning room table, he looked like he was already ready to pick a fight.
She was surprised when he spoke, " Hay honey long day?" He moved closer and kissed her sweetly. " Yes actually very long day." He pulled a chair out for her and when she looked down she saw their was dinner on the table, he never cooked. Louis," Well, I made dinner for you and was hoping we could have a talk."
Kate raised an eyebrow," About what? You look a little angry."
Louis," No not now lets eat befor it gets cold." Kate " Alright but I think I'm going to run upstairs and take a quik shower first."
When she got up from the table he stood up aswell, grabbing her by the arm,"I new it Kate, you want to run upstairs and wash away the smell of another man don't you! I new you were having
an afair, aren't you ?!" Kate pulled her arm away aggressively," No Louis I'm not!!! YET!" as she turned away from him, he again grabbed her arm " Tell me Kate who is it! You wouldn't take my calls all day and then when I went down to the division, Stacy said you had taken the rest of the day of and arranged for someone to cover for you tomarrow! Who were you with?" Kate did not take kindly to him man handleing her, she shoved him in the chest to get him to back off saying,"Sonny Louis, I was with Sonny all day and it killed me to walk out the door and come home to you! Do you remember that name Louis?" "of corse I do, I thought he was dead. What the hell are you talking about?" Kate," Sit down Louis! I'm going to teach you a little something about me that you have obviously forgotten. You put your damn hands on me like that again and I'll break you damn nose, I think you remember what happened when you threw me up against that wall and I broke you jaw! You do not push me around or man haddle me!! In regards to Sonny I thought SHE was dead to,
that's right Louis I lied to you. Theres a shocker! Sonny is and has always been a woman, THE woman that I love!"
Louis stood looking her right in the eye," YOU Bi!@&!!! How dare you! I gotta say one thing Kate, and that's that you sure dont screw like a dyke!!" Without thinking, she hit him. Right across the face, with an open hand. Louis was seeing red, he wasn't thinking either. He pushed her up against the wall and started kissing and bitting her neck, Kate in turn pushed herself up and pulled his hair while scratching at his chest and moaning in his ear. He then went to her mouth with his and kissed her aggresively, she was bitting now to, pulling at his lips with her teeth.
He picked her up and slamed her down onto the dinning room table, pushing aside the dinner. As she yanked at his pants, he bit down on her ear and she responded by sqeezing his behind and saying," Do it Louis, f*#@ me. Hard, I want it hard and rough." He didn't take notice of the fact that she already had tears in her eyes. He pulled her pants off and plunged inside of her, both of them let out a scream as each got more and more aggresive. Hair pulling, bitting, a little slap here and there. They were beating each other up and both screamed out in pleasure together. When it was over, she kissed him on the lips sweetly saying," I'm so sorry Louis, but you know that was goodbye. We're done and we have been for a long time." She gently pushed him off of her and got up, putting her clothes back on.
Louis did the same and finally said, " You really are a cold hearted bi!@& you know that Kate."
He walked out the door slaming it behind him.
Kate spent the rest of the night in the shower, trying to process her day. First the shock of Sonny showing up and then what had taken place with Louis.
She did not sleep most of the night she finally fell into a dreamland around 3 a.m.

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Sorry about the smut, I had it in my head and could'n shake it.
Louis a jerk or what???????
Let me know if anyone is still reading this, please.
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Old 07-26-2004, 04:44 PM   #17
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That was....interesting. post more soon.



Hey,Twinny, they had "violent sex"!! Hahahaha!

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Hey,Twinny, they had "violent sex"!! Hahahaha!

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BAHAHAHA. Violence comma sex does NOT equal violent sex guys.

Anyways....I can't believe I thought my sex scenes were graphic.
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This may be a little short, sorry.


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When Kate woke up the next morning her eyes were still red and puffy from crying the night befor. She was still in a state of shock. She slowly took a hot shower and got dressed for the day.
She had told Sonny they could meet at 11 for lunch at her place.
Kate had no idea what to expect, but using her power within the department she would find out.
Kate sat down at the dinning room table with a phone number in her hand, she would get her answers. She called an FBI agent named Don Page, when they had worked together he had taken quiet a liking to her and told her to call if she ever needed anything.
Kate wanted information on where Sonny had been all this time.
She didn't expect to hear what Sonny had been through.
Don faxed a report to Kate that was ment to help her understand. 5 years ago when Carlos was released from prison he wasted no time at all finding Sonny. She was missing for 11
months, and only lived to tell her tail because when she got the chance, Sonny killed Carlos. The report had graphic detail about what Sonny had been through, and Kate found herself again crying wondering how Sonny had survived.On the final page of the report, Kate read how Sonny got the upper hand on Carlos.
He had untied her to take her with him on a road trip, he told Sonny that they were going to San Fransisco to kill Kate. He said he new that would be the ultimate punishment for Sonny, after all these years to still have to watch him kill Kate. When he tried to put Sonny in the trunk of a car, she got away, and picked up the knife he had on her and turned it on him.
Kate didn't know what to do with all this information. She couldn't belive that after all these years the thought of Sonny in danger made her so scared. Also after all the years the thought of being with Sonny still gave her butterflies in her stomach.
She somehow felt 25 again, in one minute she was back in love with Sonny. She felt like she was in a time warp. It was strange,
but exciting and romantic at the same time.After re-aplying her make up, Kate left, on her way to see Sonny.

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OK I know that was boring. And I seem to be having a problem with violence this week. I don't know why that is.
Anyway, no more violent sex, or scary bad guy/Sonny stuff.
I'm done with that stuff.
Softer stuff next time!
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It may not be much but here's some more.

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Kate arrived at Sonny's at 10 till 11 and was greeted by a flower covered Sonny at the door," What happened to you Sonny?" Sonny used a hand towel to get the flower off of her face and replied,"Well, I was trying to make that chicken dinner
you used to love and when I opened the bag of flower, the crap went everywhere!! Long story short, I made the chicken parma
you love but now have to take a shower befor I can sit and eat."
Kate was laughing at this and covered her mouth with her hand, Sonny then took a flower covered hand and moved Kates hand saying,"Katie, I love your laugh don't cover it up." "Even if I'm laughing AT you?" Sonny moved closer and replied," Espiecialy if your laughing at me, then your mouth turns up with a smirk."
Kate smiled and inched closer to Sonny, placing a small kiss on her lips. " You should go get cleaned up" And Sonny dissapeard into the bathroom. Kate took this oportunity to go back into the room that had all of Sonny's piantings in it.
She still couldn't belive it. It was like a shrine to her, each picture differant but with the same love in it. Kate was standing next to a painting that she particularly enjoyed. In this painting , Kate was
sitting on the beach with a bright pink sunset behind her, what she liked the most was that Sonny had made her hair long, very long and Kate found herself thinking she would let her hair grow
until it was long like that, she loved the way it looked in the painting. Just then Sonny appeard behind Kate, and wraped her arms around her. Sonny," This is one of my favorites to, I finally got the sun right on your face, it doesn't look as natural in other ones." Kate turned in Sonny's arms to face her and said," I want you Sonny, I want you so badly, and I'm affraid that if we move to fast we'll lose each other again." Sonny kissed Kate and replied," We don't need to rush into anything Katie, I'm not going anywhere and I no that your still seeing your ex so I won't push you either, just know that I'm here. If you want to spend the night, we don't have to make love, I would be just as satisfaied if we just held each other all night long. You know that." Kate smiled and replied," I do know that, but I'm not seeing Louis my ex anymore, I ended it last night, so that I'd be free for you to sweep me off my feet again, like when we were young."
The two women kissed for a few minutes and then went on to eat lunch. They spent the afternoon talking and drinking wine. They cought up with everything. Sonny was very interested in the fact that Kate had a daughter, she wanted to know everything about her pregnancy and labor, everything.


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Super short and boring I know!!
I don't have much time this week, sorry!!
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