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lonelinesshurts · 06-03-2004, 06:09 PM

Title: A Sobering Experience

Disclaimer: These characters aren't mine. I'm just borrowing them for a while!

Author's Note: This is a re-write if a I did for ER.

Spoilers: I’m not sure of the episode but before Magda had the affair

Summary: Magda wakes up and finds that she‘s not alone.

Rating: PG-13

Magda shifted in her sleep causing her leg to brush up against the person sleeping next to her. Since Gabe’s been away for the last two months so feeling somebody next her sent warning bell’s off in her head and she immediately woke up herself. Discovering someone sleeping next to her wasn’t the only surprise she endured. Her biggest surprise came when she looked over to her sleeping companion to find it was…

“Nate!?” Magda gasped loudly.

Hearing his name he groaned and rolled over, blinking several times trying to will the pain in his head to go away. His head felt like it was ready to break off from his neck, his eyes burned and he was pretty sure he would never be able to produce saliva again but nothing could compare to what he felt when he finally look at the person who said his name.

“Magda?” he questioned confused why he was waking up to Magda next to him, a very NAKED Magda next to him. Magda slowly sat up with one hand rubbing her temple the other holding the sheet tightly to her chest. “What happened?” she asked trying to calm herself down as she nervously running her fingers through her hair.

Magda was still silent still trying to comprehend what was going on.

“Nate?” Magda asked again a little more forceful, losing her patience’s

“I…I don’t know…” he whispered when he was finally able to respond. “We didn’t… did we?

“We’re both naked in your bed what do you think?” Magda said protectively wrapping her arms around herself.

“Oh god.” he groaned closing his eyes tightly hoping he could wish everything away.

Deciding leaving as fast as she could, would be the best way to end the uncomfortable encounter, Magda pulled the light comforter around her body and got out of bed in search for her clothes. Finding everything but her shirt and bra Magda wandered into the living in look for the missing items.

“This isn’t happening. This isn’t happening.” Was Magda’s mantra as she found the rest of her clothes near the front door. After she got dress in the living room she was prepared to run home and never look back when she heard Nate’s voice

“Magda don’t you think we need to talk.” His voice sounded almost frightened, it caught her attention right away

“No we don’t. It was a mistake, it’s over, no big deal.” Magda replied plainly. She was lying to him, lying to herself. She got drunk and cheated on her husband that was a very big deal and she knew it.

“No big deal!? We slept together, that might not be a big deal for you but…”

“ We were drunk, we don’t remember what happen so what is there to talk about?” She said cutting him off. If only Jinny heard her say that.

“How about the fact we have to work together on a daily basis and we can hardly look each other in the face!”

“I can’t do this right now.” Magda said in an almost child like voice. “I…I’ll see you at work.” she said then hurried out the door.
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To Be Continued…Maybe

Irish_Rose_Kate · 06-04-2004, 05:30 PM

Very interesting, I think you should keep on going!

Swimgirl587 · 06-04-2004, 06:27 PM

Wow great fic. Keep the good stuff comin'

lonelinesshurts · 06-05-2004, 04:52 PM

Later that morning at work…

“Magda, we need to talk.” Nate said, cornering her by the vending machines when she walked in almost an hour late.

“Like I said before, there is nothing to talk about. It was a mistake.” She said trying to walk past him, without luck because every move she made he was right in front of her.

“It might have been a mistake but it’s a mistake we have to deal with.” He wasn’t going to let her walk away from this conversation a second time.

“Nate why can’t we just forget about it?”

“Because I have to tell CD.”

“What?!” She screeched in horror.

“I have to. Paul cheated on her and lied about it. I made a mistake. If I don’t tell her, I might lose her.” He explained

“No, if you tell her you will lose her, there is no might. ” she snapped

“I can’t lie to her Magda.” He said, keeping his cool tone not wanting to attract more attention than Magda already called to them by her outburst.

“If you tell her you will be losing more than just a girlfriend.” She said regaining her composure.

“I know I’ll be losing a partner, a best friend, and the best thing that ever happen to me.”

“And are you willing to risk that?”

“She doesn’t deserve to be lied to.”

“She doesn’t deserve to be hurt either. Nate, you have to think before you do something like this, you’re affecting more than just your life.”

“You think I don’t know that?” He was starting to lose his temper but he managed to hold on to it by a thread.

“You’re acting like you don’t, if this gets back to Gabe my marriage is over, and I have son to worry about Nate. You tell CD and he’ll lose his father for a second time. Think about that before you decide to ruin his life.” She growled before storming off.

To be continued...

lonelinesshurts · 06-10-2004, 05:15 PM

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Nate spent the whole day thinking about what Magda said. If he told CD and she told Gabe, Magda’s marriage would be over and Ben would be left without a father for the second time in his life. He always hated the ‘cause and effect’ part of life. With this particular problem there was no way he could win. If he told CD he could lose her and Ben might lose his dad and Magda; her marriage. If he didn’t tell her it was a defiant lost for every person involved.
******
Magda couldn’t believe she had actually gotten drunk and cheated on her husband. She never thought she would do a thing like that. One minute she’s in a bar with Nate after working a case together since both of there partners had court dates. The next thing she knows she’s waking up in his bed. She didn’t even know why she accepted the invitation to go out for drinks with him. It wasn’t like her to try to cloud her memory with alcohol, but this case was too much for even her to handle with out something to erase the images from her head for awhile. She and Nate had both witnessed a mother kill her two kids right in front of their eyes.

Earlier that day, they had gotten a call from a school for a possible child abuse case. When they went to the child’s home to check out the report, they walked in on the mom holding a gun on the two younger kids. They spent over an hour trying to talk her out of shooting them but at the last minute she pulled trigger.

Even now thinking about it made tears come to her eyes.

“Magda, are you alright?”

“What?” she questioned as Jinny’s voice broke her out of her thoughts.

“Are you ok?” she asked concerned, she knew what Magda and Nate had seen the day before and couldn’t understand why neither of them took the day off.

“Yeah, I just need a minute. I’ll be back.” Magda replied quickly and walked out the squad room. Not believing her, Jinny got up and followed her.

To be continued...

lonelinesshurts · 08-04-2004, 03:55 PM

“Maybe you should go home early.” Jinny said walking in the locker room seeing Magda leaning over the sink. Jinny’s voice made jump.

“God, Jin you scared me.” Magda screeched walking away from the sink.

“Sorry. Magda, go home. You and Nate really don’t need to be here today.” Jinny took as step towards Magda but stopped. She wanted to comfort her but she didn’t know exactly how to go about doing so. She was usually on the other side of the situation. Magda was always the comforter she was usually the one usually getting comforted. Now that the tables were turned she didn’t know what to do.

“I’ll be fine Jin. I just need minute.” Magda said setting down on the bench in front of the lockers.

“Are you sure?” Jinny asked not really believing what Magda said.

“No.” she admitted

“Well I‘m here, Mag.” Jinny walked the rest of the distance between them and sat down on the bench next to her.

“I know...”

“You want to talk about it?” Magda took a long pause before answering Jinny. When she did she was completely honest…

“I made a big mistake Jin…I slept with Nate.” she admitted in barley a whisper.

“You what!?” Jinny squealed

“It was after everything happened yesterday. We went out for a drink after we left here, the next thing I know I’m waking up in his bed.” she explained.

“God Mag." Jinny said still not getting over her shock.

“You know what Jinny that really doesn’t help.” Magda said almost snapping.

“Sorry it’s just a surprise.”

“What’s a surprise.” CD asked walking into the locker room.

To be continued...

06-03-2004, 06:09 PM	#1
lonelinesshurts Princess Of Darkness Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 12, 2003 Location: Total Darkness Posts: 97	A Sobering Experience Title: A Sobering Experience Disclaimer: These characters aren't mine. I'm just borrowing them for a while! Author's Note: This is a re-write if a I did for ER. Spoilers: I’m not sure of the episode but before Magda had the affair Summary: Magda wakes up and finds that she‘s not alone. Rating: PG-13 Magda shifted in her sleep causing her leg to brush up against the person sleeping next to her. Since Gabe’s been away for the last two months so feeling somebody next her sent warning bell’s off in her head and she immediately woke up herself. Discovering someone sleeping next to her wasn’t the only surprise she endured. Her biggest surprise came when she looked over to her sleeping companion to find it was… “Nate!?” Magda gasped loudly. Hearing his name he groaned and rolled over, blinking several times trying to will the pain in his head to go away. His head felt like it was ready to break off from his neck, his eyes burned and he was pretty sure he would never be able to produce saliva again but nothing could compare to what he felt when he finally look at the person who said his name. “Magda?” he questioned confused why he was waking up to Magda next to him, a very NAKED Magda next to him. Magda slowly sat up with one hand rubbing her temple the other holding the sheet tightly to her chest. “What happened?” she asked trying to calm herself down as she nervously running her fingers through her hair. Magda was still silent still trying to comprehend what was going on. “Nate?” Magda asked again a little more forceful, losing her patience’s “I…I don’t know…” he whispered when he was finally able to respond. “We didn’t… did we? “We’re both naked in your bed what do you think?” Magda said protectively wrapping her arms around herself. “Oh god.” he groaned closing his eyes tightly hoping he could wish everything away. Deciding leaving as fast as she could, would be the best way to end the uncomfortable encounter, Magda pulled the light comforter around her body and got out of bed in search for her clothes. Finding everything but her shirt and bra Magda wandered into the living in look for the missing items. “This isn’t happening. This isn’t happening.” Was Magda’s mantra as she found the rest of her clothes near the front door. After she got dress in the living room she was prepared to run home and never look back when she heard Nate’s voice “Magda don’t you think we need to talk.” His voice sounded almost frightened, it caught her attention right away “No we don’t. It was a mistake, it’s over, no big deal.” Magda replied plainly. She was lying to him, lying to herself. She got drunk and cheated on her husband that was a very big deal and she knew it. “No big deal!? We slept together, that might not be a big deal for you but…” “ We were drunk, we don’t remember what happen so what is there to talk about?” She said cutting him off. If only Jinny heard her say that. “How about the fact we have to work together on a daily basis and we can hardly look each other in the face!” “I can’t do this right now.” Magda said in an almost child like voice. “I…I’ll see you at work.” she said then hurried out the door. ****** To Be Continued…Maybe
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06-04-2004, 05:30 PM	#2
Irish_Rose_Kate Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 23, 2004 Location: Lost? I was looking for my way, but took a wrong turn, and will be forever lost. Posts: 248	Very interesting, I think you should keep on going!
	__________________ Val: Hey Karen, Guess who’s pregnant? Karen: (smiles): NOT ME! Val: Kate is! (that’s Brian’s fiancé. Val looks at Brian and Kate). Their getting married. Both Mac and Karen: Congratulations ( they both hug Brian and Kate.) Karen: (looks at Brian).: So I take it your mother doesn’t know? Brain: No. Val: (smiles excitedly). : Ohhhhh, let me tell her!! (everyone starts cracking up). Then Karen’s son and Mac’s stepson Michael and his wife pull up, and get out of the car. Karen: Michael what a surprise. What are you doing here? (Abby walks out side from Karen’s house, and she sees her nephew and. Michael: Aunt Abby. (He waits a beat then says) we’re going to have a baby! (Karen and Mac just stand there stunned for a minute. Abby: (Hugs Michael) Congratulations. A baby. (She starts walking past Karen.) Karen: (Still in shock) A baby? Abby: (does a double take). And... Karen....that means your going to be a...(starts laughing but trying to stop herself...but she just keeps laughing. Kate: Abby I don’t think you want to be laughing right now. Abby: (still trying to keep herself from laughing, but can’t help herself from laughing). : I can’t help it....(laughs) It’s just kind of struck me funny. (still laughing). Karen: Brian, why don’t you share your wonder full news with your mother. Brian: (trying to keep a striate face as well Gary, and Val give each other a high five. And everyone is laughing at this point. Brian clears his throat ) Ahemmm... ( the camera goes back to Karen and Abby. Abby realizes what’s going on now, and isn’t happy at all while Karen and everyone else is cracking up! Gary: (Camera shot back really quick to Gary, Val, Brain, and Kate. Jokingly Gary says) Grandma!(camera goes back to Karen and Abby, and once again everyone is laughing, and the picture freeze on the two of them and end of show).

06-04-2004, 06:27 PM	#3
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06-05-2004, 04:52 PM	#4
lonelinesshurts Princess Of Darkness Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 12, 2003 Location: Total Darkness Posts: 97	Later that morning at work… “Magda, we need to talk.” Nate said, cornering her by the vending machines when she walked in almost an hour late. “Like I said before, there is nothing to talk about. It was a mistake.” She said trying to walk past him, without luck because every move she made he was right in front of her. “It might have been a mistake but it’s a mistake we have to deal with.” He wasn’t going to let her walk away from this conversation a second time. “Nate why can’t we just forget about it?” “Because I have to tell CD.” “What?!” She screeched in horror. “I have to. Paul cheated on her and lied about it. I made a mistake. If I don’t tell her, I might lose her.” He explained “No, if you tell her you will lose her, there is no might. ” she snapped “I can’t lie to her Magda.” He said, keeping his cool tone not wanting to attract more attention than Magda already called to them by her outburst. “If you tell her you will be losing more than just a girlfriend.” She said regaining her composure. “I know I’ll be losing a partner, a best friend, and the best thing that ever happen to me.” “And are you willing to risk that?” “She doesn’t deserve to be lied to.” “She doesn’t deserve to be hurt either. Nate, you have to think before you do something like this, you’re affecting more than just your life.” “You think I don’t know that?” He was starting to lose his temper but he managed to hold on to it by a thread. “You’re acting like you don’t, if this gets back to Gabe my marriage is over, and I have son to worry about Nate. You tell CD and he’ll lose his father for a second time. Think about that before you decide to ruin his life.” She growled before storming off. To be continued...
	Last edited by lonelinesshurts; 08-04-2004 at 03:58 PM.

06-10-2004, 05:15 PM	#5
lonelinesshurts Princess Of Darkness Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 12, 2003 Location: Total Darkness Posts: 97	**** Nate spent the whole day thinking about what Magda said. If he told CD and she told Gabe, Magda’s marriage would be over and Ben would be left without a father for the second time in his life. He always hated the ‘cause and effect’ part of life. With this particular problem there was no way he could win. If he told CD he could lose her and Ben might lose his dad and Magda; her marriage. If he didn’t tell her it was a defiant lost for every person involved. **** Magda couldn’t believe she had actually gotten drunk and cheated on her husband. She never thought she would do a thing like that. One minute she’s in a bar with Nate after working a case together since both of there partners had court dates. The next thing she knows she’s waking up in his bed. She didn’t even know why she accepted the invitation to go out for drinks with him. It wasn’t like her to try to cloud her memory with alcohol, but this case was too much for even her to handle with out something to erase the images from her head for awhile. She and Nate had both witnessed a mother kill her two kids right in front of their eyes. Earlier that day, they had gotten a call from a school for a possible child abuse case. When they went to the child’s home to check out the report, they walked in on the mom holding a gun on the two younger kids. They spent over an hour trying to talk her out of shooting them but at the last minute she pulled trigger. Even now thinking about it made tears come to her eyes. “Magda, are you alright?” “What?” she questioned as Jinny’s voice broke her out of her thoughts. “Are you ok?” she asked concerned, she knew what Magda and Nate had seen the day before and couldn’t understand why neither of them took the day off. “Yeah, I just need a minute. I’ll be back.” Magda replied quickly and walked out the squad room. Not believing her, Jinny got up and followed her. To be continued...
	Last edited by lonelinesshurts; 08-04-2004 at 03:57 PM.

08-04-2004, 03:55 PM	#6
lonelinesshurts Princess Of Darkness Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 12, 2003 Location: Total Darkness Posts: 97	“Maybe you should go home early.” Jinny said walking in the locker room seeing Magda leaning over the sink. Jinny’s voice made jump. “God, Jin you scared me.” Magda screeched walking away from the sink. “Sorry. Magda, go home. You and Nate really don’t need to be here today.” Jinny took as step towards Magda but stopped. She wanted to comfort her but she didn’t know exactly how to go about doing so. She was usually on the other side of the situation. Magda was always the comforter she was usually the one usually getting comforted. Now that the tables were turned she didn’t know what to do. “I’ll be fine Jin. I just need minute.” Magda said setting down on the bench in front of the lockers. “Are you sure?” Jinny asked not really believing what Magda said. “No.” she admitted “Well I‘m here, Mag.” Jinny walked the rest of the distance between them and sat down on the bench next to her. “I know...” “You want to talk about it?” Magda took a long pause before answering Jinny. When she did she was completely honest… “I made a big mistake Jin…I slept with Nate.” she admitted in barley a whisper. “You what!?” Jinny squealed “It was after everything happened yesterday. We went out for a drink after we left here, the next thing I know I’m waking up in his bed.” she explained. “God Mag." Jinny said still not getting over her shock. “You know what Jinny that really doesn’t help.” Magda said almost snapping. “Sorry it’s just a surprise.” “What’s a surprise.” CD asked walking into the locker room. To be continued...