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desilu #1 · 06-19-2004, 07:27 PM

Beaver has left for school.
Ward(upstairs to check on June) Honey? You ok?
June(sobbing on the bed)
Ward(goes to her and comforts her) Come on honey,everything will be ok.
June(sobbing) Oh Ward, he's not himself at all.
Ward(holding her) I know babe. (sighs) Honey I have a very important meeting this morning so I need to go. Are you going to be ok?
June(nods) Yes, I will. You can't just stay with me all day.
Ward(caresses her face gently) Walk me out?
June(getting up) Yes.

Walking downstairs hand and hand.
Ward(grabs briefcase) Ok honey I gotta go(kisses her)
June(holding onto him tightly)
Ward: If you need me just call me...ok?
June: Ok.
Ward: Can I see a smile?
June(smiles)
Ward: That's my girl.(kisses her and leaves) I love you.
June: I love you too.

*Later*
Phone rings
June: Hello?
Mrs. Rayburn: Hello Mrs. Cleaver. I'm sorry to call you but Theodore never showed up this morning and I found out he skipped most of yesterday as well.
June(sighs) I'm not suprised we have been having some trouble with him lately. I'll need to call my husband.
Mrs. Rayburn: Well, I'm so sorry to hear about this,if there is anything I can do please call me.
June: Thank You I will. (hangs up and calls Ward)
Ward: Hi honey, everything ok?
June(sighs) No Ward, Mrs. Rayburn called and said Beaver never showed up for school this morning and he skipped most of yesterday.
Ward(sighs) That boy is pushing it.
June: What are we going to do?
Ward: Honey all I can suggest is that we wait until he comes home and then confront him.
June: Maybe I should go out and look for him.
Ward: No sweetheart don't do that. We don't know who he is hanging out with and what they would do. I mean it honey,don't go looking for him,at least not without me.
June: Ok I won't.

*Later*
Doorbell rings

June(opens door) Can I help you?
Thug: Where's Beaver?
June(nervous) He's not here, who are you?
Thug: I'll ask the questions!
June: Excuse me but you are at my home and you can't talk to me like this! Now who are you?
Thug(pushes his way in and grabs June and pushes her against the wall) Don't you know enough not to talk to a man like that?!
June(frieghtned) I'm sorry but I'm just worried about my son.
Thug(chuckles) Yeah, me too. He owes me some money.
June: If you just leave I will tell him to contact you.(tears streaming down)
Thug: I'm not going anywhere until I get my money and see him!
(grabs June and takes her to the couch) Now, hotstuff you can keep me company(says in a creepy way)
More later!

desilu #1 · 06-20-2004, 01:45 AM

June(squirming) Get your dirty hands off me!
Thug(aggrivated....slaps her) Shut up and don't tell me what to do!
Ward(walks in) Who are you!? Get your hands off my wife!(grabs him and punches him)
Thug(knocked out)
June(runs to Ward) Oh Ward thank god you came in when you did!
Ward(holds her) It's ok honey, it's all over. We need to get the police on the phone.
Beaver(walks in) What's going on?
June(upset) Your friend came here looking for you! You better fess up to everything because the police are on the way!
Ward(grabs beaver by the shirt) This creep you have brought into our lives could have hurt your mother! I walked in just in time! What in god's name is going on with you? He told your mother you owe him money!
Beaver(spaced out) I don't know him!
Ward(getting rough) Quit your lying boy!
June(screams) Ward! Please don't hit him!
Ward(backs off) You are lucky that your mother wasn't hurt!
*doorbell rings*
Ward(opens door) Oh hi guys,come on in please.
Police(walks in) So what happened here today?
June(in tears...explains)
Thug(wakes up)
Police(cuffs him) Come on Celerno!
Ward: So that's who that is!
Police: Well from what you tell us about your son and from the looks of him we will need to take him to the hospital to be tested for any narcotics.
June: And if he had any?
Police: Then we will need to take him to a rehab center to clean up for 30 days.
June(starts to cry) He's just a baby. We can handle him here at home.
Police: I'm sorry Mrs. Cleaver but we gotta do this. It's best for him.
Ward(puts arm around June) He's right sweetheart. We need help with this. Besides look what happened to you today.
Police: Your husband is right, Celerno is very dangerous. You sure he didn't hurt you?
June: I'm fine. He did slap me and shove me up against the wall but it could have been so much worse.
Wally(walks in) What's going on?
Ward(explains)
Wally(glares at Beaver) You little creep. Your lucky the cops are here...
June: Wally, please.
Wally(hugs her) I'm sorry mom.

Beaver tested positive and was locked in a rehab for 30 days and recovered. I had to end this since I was running out of ideas. Hope you all enjoed it!

Michael [hXc] · 06-20-2004, 09:58 AM

That's really good. Can you write more of it? But that was really scary when that guy came in and pushed June. I can't wait to hear more

desilu #1 · 06-20-2004, 10:39 AM

I'm really glad you liked it but I'm out of ideas. Like I mentioned this sort of thing happened in my family but I did add somethings and left some out because I figured that it might be too much for this board. That's why I basically did a quick ending and just explained what happened in the end. I made June and Ward close because my aunt and uncle drifted apart and I believe that is how Ward and June would have handled it.

Mrs. Ducky · 06-20-2004, 12:21 PM

That was really good! I didn't expect it to end that way.

comet97 · 06-21-2004, 11:02 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by desilu #1
Beaver has left for school.
Ward(upstairs to check on June) Honey? You ok?
June(sobbing on the bed)
Ward(goes to her and comforts her) Come on honey,everything will be ok.
June(sobbing) Oh Ward, he's not himself at all.
Ward(holding her) I know babe. (sighs) Honey I have a very important meeting this morning so I need to go. Are you going to be ok?
June(nods) Yes, I will. You can't just stay with me all day.
Ward(caresses her face gently) Walk me out?
June(getting up) Yes.

Walking downstairs hand and hand.
Ward(grabs briefcase) Ok honey I gotta go(kisses her)
June(holding onto him tightly)
Ward: If you need me just call me...ok?
June: Ok.
Ward: Can I see a smile?
June(smiles)
Ward: That's my girl.(kisses her and leaves) I love you.
June: I love you too.

*Later*
Phone rings
June: Hello?
Mrs. Rayburn: Hello Mrs. Cleaver. I'm sorry to call you but Theodore never showed up this morning and I found out he skipped most of yesterday as well.
June(sighs) I'm not suprised we have been having some trouble with him lately. I'll need to call my husband.
Mrs. Rayburn: Well, I'm so sorry to hear about this,if there is anything I can do please call me.
June: Thank You I will. (hangs up and calls Ward)
Ward: Hi honey, everything ok?
June(sighs) No Ward, Mrs. Rayburn called and said Beaver never showed up for school this morning and he skipped most of yesterday.
Ward(sighs) That boy is pushing it.
June: What are we going to do?
Ward: Honey all I can suggest is that we wait until he comes home and then confront him.
June: Maybe I should go out and look for him.
Ward: No sweetheart don't do that. We don't know who he is hanging out with and what they would do. I mean it honey,don't go looking for him,at least not without me.
June: Ok I won't.

*Later*
Doorbell rings

June(opens door) Can I help you?
Thug: Where's Beaver?
June(nervous) He's not here, who are you?
Thug: I'll ask the questions!
June: Excuse me but you are at my home and you can't talk to me like this! Now who are you?
Thug(pushes his way in and grabs June and pushes her against the wall) Don't you know enough not to talk to a man like that?!
June(frieghtned) I'm sorry but I'm just worried about my son.
Thug(chuckles) Yeah, me too. He owes me some money.
June: If you just leave I will tell him to contact you.(tears streaming down)
Thug: I'm not going anywhere until I get my money and see him!
(grabs June and takes her to the couch) Now, hotstuff you can keep me company(says in a creepy way)
More later!

Whoa!... Where do you come up with this stuff desilou?
You should be a writer,you know that?
I don't know about everyone else,but I like it so far.
Bring it on. It's pretty good writing. Has imagination.

comet97

06-20-2004, 09:58 AM	#3
Michael [hXc] dying. Forum Fanatic Join Date: Feb 29, 2004 Posts: 8,532	That's really good. Can you write more of it? But that was really scary when that guy came in and pushed June. I can't wait to hear more
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06-20-2004, 12:21 PM	#5
Mrs. Ducky Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 01, 2003 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 1,461	That was really good! I didn't expect it to end that way.
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06-19-2004, 07:27 PM	#1
desilu #1 Lucy/Desi 4-EVER Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 23, 2000 Location: Battle Creek, Michigan USA Posts: 724	Beaver's Self-distuction part 10! Beaver has left for school. Ward(upstairs to check on June) Honey? You ok? June(sobbing on the bed) Ward(goes to her and comforts her) Come on honey,everything will be ok. June(sobbing) Oh Ward, he's not himself at all. Ward(holding her) I know babe. (sighs) Honey I have a very important meeting this morning so I need to go. Are you going to be ok? June(nods) Yes, I will. You can't just stay with me all day. Ward(caresses her face gently) Walk me out? June(getting up) Yes. Walking downstairs hand and hand. Ward(grabs briefcase) Ok honey I gotta go(kisses her) June(holding onto him tightly) Ward: If you need me just call me...ok? June: Ok. Ward: Can I see a smile? June(smiles) Ward: That's my girl.(kisses her and leaves) I love you. June: I love you too. Later Phone rings June: Hello? Mrs. Rayburn: Hello Mrs. Cleaver. I'm sorry to call you but Theodore never showed up this morning and I found out he skipped most of yesterday as well. June(sighs) I'm not suprised we have been having some trouble with him lately. I'll need to call my husband. Mrs. Rayburn: Well, I'm so sorry to hear about this,if there is anything I can do please call me. June: Thank You I will. (hangs up and calls Ward) Ward: Hi honey, everything ok? June(sighs) No Ward, Mrs. Rayburn called and said Beaver never showed up for school this morning and he skipped most of yesterday. Ward(sighs) That boy is pushing it. June: What are we going to do? Ward: Honey all I can suggest is that we wait until he comes home and then confront him. June: Maybe I should go out and look for him. Ward: No sweetheart don't do that. We don't know who he is hanging out with and what they would do. I mean it honey,don't go looking for him,at least not without me. June: Ok I won't. Later Doorbell rings June(opens door) Can I help you? Thug: Where's Beaver? June(nervous) He's not here, who are you? Thug: I'll ask the questions! June: Excuse me but you are at my home and you can't talk to me like this! Now who are you? Thug(pushes his way in and grabs June and pushes her against the wall) Don't you know enough not to talk to a man like that?! June(frieghtned) I'm sorry but I'm just worried about my son. Thug(chuckles) Yeah, me too. He owes me some money. June: If you just leave I will tell him to contact you.(tears streaming down) Thug: I'm not going anywhere until I get my money and see him! (grabs June and takes her to the couch) Now, hotstuff you can keep me company(says in a creepy way) More later!

06-20-2004, 01:45 AM	#2
desilu #1 Lucy/Desi 4-EVER Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 23, 2000 Location: Battle Creek, Michigan USA Posts: 724	June(squirming) Get your dirty hands off me! Thug(aggrivated....slaps her) Shut up and don't tell me what to do! Ward(walks in) Who are you!? Get your hands off my wife!(grabs him and punches him) Thug(knocked out) June(runs to Ward) Oh Ward thank god you came in when you did! Ward(holds her) It's ok honey, it's all over. We need to get the police on the phone. Beaver(walks in) What's going on? June(upset) Your friend came here looking for you! You better fess up to everything because the police are on the way! Ward(grabs beaver by the shirt) This creep you have brought into our lives could have hurt your mother! I walked in just in time! What in god's name is going on with you? He told your mother you owe him money! Beaver(spaced out) I don't know him! Ward(getting rough) Quit your lying boy! June(screams) Ward! Please don't hit him! Ward(backs off) You are lucky that your mother wasn't hurt! doorbell rings Ward(opens door) Oh hi guys,come on in please. Police(walks in) So what happened here today? June(in tears...explains) Thug(wakes up) Police(cuffs him) Come on Celerno! Ward: So that's who that is! Police: Well from what you tell us about your son and from the looks of him we will need to take him to the hospital to be tested for any narcotics. June: And if he had any? Police: Then we will need to take him to a rehab center to clean up for 30 days. June(starts to cry) He's just a baby. We can handle him here at home. Police: I'm sorry Mrs. Cleaver but we gotta do this. It's best for him. Ward(puts arm around June) He's right sweetheart. We need help with this. Besides look what happened to you today. Police: Your husband is right, Celerno is very dangerous. You sure he didn't hurt you? June: I'm fine. He did slap me and shove me up against the wall but it could have been so much worse. Wally(walks in) What's going on? Ward(explains) Wally(glares at Beaver) You little creep. Your lucky the cops are here... June: Wally, please. Wally(hugs her) I'm sorry mom. Beaver tested positive and was locked in a rehab for 30 days and recovered. I had to end this since I was running out of ideas. Hope you all enjoed it!

06-20-2004, 10:39 AM	#4
desilu #1 Lucy/Desi 4-EVER Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 23, 2000 Location: Battle Creek, Michigan USA Posts: 724	I'm really glad you liked it but I'm out of ideas. Like I mentioned this sort of thing happened in my family but I did add somethings and left some out because I figured that it might be too much for this board. That's why I basically did a quick ending and just explained what happened in the end. I made June and Ward close because my aunt and uncle drifted apart and I believe that is how Ward and June would have handled it.