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FOLN@NFan
02-12-2004, 07:08 PM
im writing a seinfeld story (long story there), and i need 2 fill in 3 blanks.

[Kramer and george are walking down the street, and george is tired]
Kramer: Aww, quit complaining. Look, there's a pie stand. I'll buy one for us.
George[mutters an insult]: ___________________________


[Kramer just burst into Jerry's apartment]
George: Who was that on the phone, Jerry?
Jerry: Elaine...she's going back to school.
Kramer: Who cares about that! Guess what I heard?
George[insults]: _____________________________


and at the ending, the entire gang is arguing about something stupid. the ending credit scene has newman doing that something stupid. so should i just end the actual ep w/ the gang arguing, or should i make one line just before the actual ep. ends?

thanks

Brian Damage
02-12-2004, 08:44 PM
I,m a little to alot confused. I guess I would have to read the actual story to get a feel to it.

Maestro
02-12-2004, 08:55 PM
In the woven together sein-style it's kind of hard to compose decent dialog when it's taken out of context, without the layers of the rest of the ep.

sinatrastar
02-13-2004, 01:09 PM
1. George muttering "you buy me something ... that would be a first"
or "a pie stand in the city, I wouldnt touch them, what flavor are they, smogberry?"

2. "That it was impolite to interupt when someone else is SPEAKING!?" He gets progressively louder until he is shouting.

3. I have no idea ;)