This is just a poem I wrote yesturday.I was REALLY bored.I wrote it as if I was a good friend of Jo's and I was remembering things of her...I don't know.Just read it and tell me what you think....please.
~*~JO~*~
That girl I knew
So long ago
I remember now
Her name was Jo
*
She taught me things
I never knew
She always there
When I was blue
*
She was herself
When she was with me
But with all the others
She was who they wanted her to be
*
She did what they did
Some good;mostly bad
She didn't feel free
That's why she got so mad
*
The world we lived in
Was extremely rough
So even when she didn't feel it
She had to be and act tough
*
But then she got a scholorship
And the day she'd leave came
She rode off to the fancy girls school
I knew thing wouldn't be the same
*
I was mad that she had to go
But I'm happy for her now
She learned new things and made new friends
And managed to get through somehow
*
She stayed in Peeksville
And only visited here
But in my heart
She was always near
*
She got through college
And married a great guy
To say she was unhappy
Would be a big lie
*
She was a great friend to me
She helped me as I grew
I couldn't have made it without her
That's what I wish she knew
*By:Me!(Megan)
I know,I know-It's corny!But I figured I'd share it with you guys anyhow.Well,please tell me what you think(even if you hated it).


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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

excellent poem, can I use it on my website?

Sure!Go ahead! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif I'm glad that you liked it.

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

I loved ur poem! It wasnt corny at all. Its great!

I loved it! You'd have to be CRAZY if you think it's corny.

That was actually really good!

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Thank you guys so much! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!